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1619.2 Draft 15 is available at: This draft addresses the following comments sent by Robert Elliot
(thanks!): page
2: "XCB-AES
and EME2-AES" s/b
"EME2-AES and XCB-AES" to preserve the common order page
2: "extended
codebook mode of operation
(XCB), encrypt-mix-encrypt-v2 mode of operation (EME2)" s/b
"encrypt-mix-encrypt-v2
mode of operation (EME2), extended codebook mode of operation (XCB)" to
preserve the common order page
11 "referred as" s/b "referred to as" page
12: AES-enc s/b AES-Enc page
12: mult-by-alpha, bitlength, bytelength, and msbt use different
terms for their arguments: value X, argument S, input x, and string S.
They
should be the same. AES-Enc and AES-Dec use "value". page
12: delete extra space before ", defined in Section
5.3.3" page
17: bytelength(Pm) = 16 s/b bytelength(Pm) ==
16 to match pages 26 and 22 page
19: Not clear which figure is current with the change
bars. To match the text, the figure should use AES-Enc not AES-ENC and
use 0x80|0x00| for concatenation. page
27: comput s/b compute
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