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Re: Style Review today



Roger -- I had no idea there was a style review today (I thought they were 
now Thursdays), so I cannot attend today; apologies.

One nit I noticed in the latest (Aug 12) draft: in the recent change in 
section 5.5 on page 21, bullet (a),  the word 'to' before 'distinguish' is 
missing.

Mike

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Style Review today






Following Dan's suggestion:

                 Tuesday, August 15, 2006 11:00 AM US Pacific Time 
                 Where: 916-356-2663, Bridge: 4, Passcode: 9765468

I'll take notes and fed-ex the marked-up hardcopy to Dan.
If I remember correctly we were going to start on page 30 today.
Regards,
Roger

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From: "Roger Golliver" <golliver@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
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Subject: [Stds-754r] Dan can you confirm time and phone number for
style review tomorrow?
Date: Mon, 14 Aug 2006 15:59:03 -0700

Thanks,
Roger

                 I cannot.  Neither can I participate.  I am hosting a 
biotech
                 conference at Stanford all this week.  (This is why we 
had the
                 meeting a week early this month.)  Steve is also out of 
town.
                 But please feel free to organize one & record the 
results.  I
                 believe there are a number of small changes that have 
already
                 been mentioned.  Later.  - Dan
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