Hi Vinod,
Thanks for the feedback. I think your comments makes sense. Since I am not sure if we can still deal with them with editorial change, I reassign
the CIDs to proper comment subgroup. Let me know if it works. Detailed responses are provided below.
Best,
Po-Kai
Hi Po-Kai,
Thanks for preparing the comment resolutions. Please find my comments below:
For the CIDs 3326 and 3327: The description about ‘non-HT duplicate PPDU’ is a copy paste form the revmd document and they are not applicable to WUR PPDU formats.
[Po-Kai]: I see. We probably want to remove the sentence. Not sure if this is editorial anymore. I will reassign these two CIDs to legacy portion comment group.
For the CID 3021: the comment suggests to remove the repetition of T_{WUR-Sync} definition. As proposed resolution, I suggest to replace the sentence “TWUR-Sync
is the duration of WUR-Sync field,
TWUR-Sync=TWUR-sync-LDR
if low data rate is used to transmit the WUR-Data field of a WUR Basic PPDU, and
TWUR-Sync=TWUR-sync-HDR
if high data rate is used to transmit the WUR-Data field of a WUR Basic PPDU” with the following
“TWUR-Sync
is the duration of WUR-Sync field, as defined in Table 30-3 (Timing-related constants)”
[Po-Kai]: Let me reassign this CID to Mathematical description of signals, and you can probably help us remove them with your suggestion.
J
For the CID 3024: To address the concern of the commenter, I suggest to update the equation (31-11), using the TXTIME in equation (31-16). You can replace equation
(31-11) with the one below
[Po-Kai]: Let me reassign this CID to Mathematical description of signals, and you can probably help us remove them with your suggestion.
J
Thanks,
Vinod
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Dear all,
I have prepared the CR documents for the 130 editorial comments. Please see the link below and let me know if you have further feedback.
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/19/11-19-1025-00-00ba-cr-for-editorial-comments.xlsx
Best,
Po-Kai
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