Copyright 1984-1999 FileMaker, Inc. HBAM2016AUG95HPro 5.0)@0inding@cthenormativereferencesectionisblank@@00allowedtheconcatenationoftheseparat@@0coincide@entity@inserttheworddownlinkbeforemodeaandotherplacesint@eneedtomentionthatipphswillinsteadbestandardsbased@cremovethetableentryscrambleron/off@thetx/rxtransitiongapisagapbetweenthedownlinkburst@cbaudrateispoorlanguageifbaudissymbolratethenbaud@defines@itonlywastesbandwidthifweneedtoaddafielditcanbe@&naturalthefigurecontainedinthissectionisfigure79@AImport Group ResolutionsE NALL OTABS# ` ABCdD^EvFwGxHyIJKLMNOP_Q`RaSbTcUgViWjXkYmZn[p\{]^_`abc d e fghijkQ?AExport Editor's InputEOFMPR$@` ABCdD{EpFnGQ@AImport Editor's InputENALL # ` ABCdD{EpFnGHIJ>@ Cj%7.hal e-iJ.hj -Ek. l`l -mFxrogermarkspQmarksprogermarksBRmarksBrogermarksTmarksrogermarks@Umarks@roger marksmarksroger marks( i marks!(!roger  marks"0#q#marks$"0$ marks( i marks!(!roger  marks"0#q#marks$"0$DTDT €Editor's NotesEditor's Questions and Concerns€AEditor's Action Items€A€A€A Starting Line #€A Clause €A  Fig/Table# BA1BAj  !"#$%&'()*+,-./0234567j^_ `2a4bc d ijkmn.p+v"wx#y'{)€%€0€€€€1€€66leiOwang' *  wang * leiP wang wang ' leiQ wang VYwang VleiRwangwang YleiSwang wang leiTwang@nh&`wanghleiUwangC1.55€A1.55: Added "Fig/Table Number" field Deleted XML file output option. 1.54: Added "Technical, Satisfied (was Binding)" to value list Comment Type/Group. 1.53: in Reply Comment layout, reduced display to three replies 1.52: *Changed instruction on saving files to specify .USR instead of .fp5 *Fixed bug that wouldn't allow exporting a ballot with no comments. *Fixed "Show All Records in Order" script so that it goes to "Comment List" layout (otherwise, "Show All Records" button in Create andRecords" button in Create ands" button in Create andte andplit "Cn" Split "Cosals" 1.5: Added "Reply Comment Layout" and Relationship to reply.fp5 1.4: Added "Comment List for Projection" Split "Cd grammar in email subject. *Made all fields in Comment List layout read/write (except the global fields Doc Number and Ballot Number). *Added Editor's Layout 1.1: Many changes, including addition of use as a balloting tool. S2002-01-04 (or later)802.16-01/53r1VersionK 9@AOKA/A0@@A-A.@A,A-Cancel@A*A+@@A* ;X( `Before importing, Find the records eligible for proposals by this Clause Editor. Only these records will be affected by the import. ABCdD^EiFmGjHkIJKLMNO_P`QaRbScTgUnVpWvXwYxZy[{\]^_`abc d e fghijklmnoQ:ASort by RecommenderE'` iDT_DT`DTDTDTQÃY0?ÃY@@ÃYPAÃY`BÃYpCÃYDÃYEÃYFÃZGÃZ HÃZ0IÃZ@JÃZPKÃZ`LÃZpMÃZNÃZOÃZPÃaQÃa RÃa0SÃa@TÃaPUÃa`ZBUUX  w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMf  HelveticaGenevaVerdanaTimesMonacoTimes New RomanArialCourierSymbol Courier New@ A PICT,alisNAMEMSPCFPTHA9Macintosh HD:Desktop Folder:Ballot#2:802.16.2 Ballot Data9MSPCAQnNAMEA802.16.2 Ballot DataRPTHA802.16.2 Ballot DataalisC-`@@XA Comment List@@*AAbout Commentary@@PACreate Comment@@fACreate and Submit Ballot@@AGlobal Field Setup@@ AEditor's Layout@@AComment List for Printing@@ AComment List for Projection@@ACommentary Version@@@AReply Comment Layout@@ ASubmit Reply Comments   A Comment ListB   vor/ 11 against wRejected{l) none needed 2001/10/24»ETG3/4 MAC group^Technical, Bindinga6.2.XbFAdd new ARQ text found in document 80216abc_01/75 to the WG document. d339g2541wAccepted{k) done 2001/10/24 2001/09/11¼E TG3/4 MAC^Technical, Bindinga6.2.xb'Add a standalone NACK feedback message.d340g2542vneed accepted textwDeferred{l) none needed 2001/10/24 2001/09/13½E TG3/4 MAC^Technical, Bindinga6.2.xb Add RNR feedback message for ARQd341g2543vneed accepted text 2001/09/13D$aGlobal Field Setupo Email SubjectqEmail TosEmail ccuBallot #{ Document #Report # B A € € € €€ €   G!MKe!MKG*fQjugD€QASDocument under Review€XAYLetter Balllot Number€^A_VoteaGlobal Field Setpb // etpb // etpb // etpb // tpb // b // b // d Setpb // Setpb // tpb // Setpb // b // ld Setpb // d(2) Save Data to Filee(3) Email Data Fileail Data File54 RB 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMC 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMD  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PME 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMF 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMnD a w n w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMo  w p w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMq  w r w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMs  w t w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMu  w z w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM{  w  D^"M1,,./: AM PMYyTtNnFfNALL OFMPRP^SundayMondayTuesday WednesdayThursdayFridaySaturdayJanuaryFebruaryMarchAprilMayJuneJulyAugust SeptemberOctoberNovemberDecemberQ1Q2Q3Q4 1st Quarter 2nd Quarter 3rd Quarter 4th Quarter,  , AXLS Sheet1X5CMY m]oApFfWyHCB-wang., .lei]} A1FPTH=RPTH NAME MSPCMSPCA NAMEA 80216Ballot RPTHA 80216Ballot A9NFPTH=RPTH alisNAME MSPCMSPCA NAMEA 80216Ballot RPTHA 80216Ballot A9OFPTH=RPTH alisNAME MSPCMSPCA NAMEA 80216Ballot RPTHA 80216Ballot A10FPTHXRPTHNAMEMSPCMSPCA2NAMEANumberLastFirst.USRRPTHANumberLastFirst.USRA19uFPTH^RPTHNAMEMSPCMSPCA2NAMEANumber_Lastname_FirstnameRPTHANumber_Lastname_Firstname ot RPTHA 80216Ballot alisA NAMEA 80216Ballot RPTHA 80216Ballot alisA NAMEA 80216Ballot RPTHA 80216Ballot alisVDEF(LISTLISTVDEF(LISTLIST(:K?@MRS Y!^"CAStartup scriptEQADelete Empty RecordsE@ @b*QA Show VotesE@@H-Already voted; submitting additional commentsQASort by Page/LineE'` _DT`DTDTDTQASort by Comment OriginatorE'` DTDT_DT`DTQADelete All RecordsE@ @b*QADelete Abstain CommentsE@ @HAbstain for other reasonsQAShow Editor's ProblemsE @'`@n* _DT`DTDTDTQASort by Comment #E '` dDTQ8 €Bied in recommending rejection on grounds of incompleteness or lack of a specific change request. (3) When you are finished entering replies, look under Scripts and choose "Find Marked Records". This will find the records for which you checked the "Marked" box. (4) Put your name in the "Recommendation by" field of each reply {for a quick method, see Appendix below.} (5) Under Scripts, choose "Export Clause Editor's Proposals". Choose the file type "FileMaker Pro Runtime Files". Enter a Cfile name of the form "BallotNumber_LastName_Firstname.USR", where "Name" is your name. (6) Email the exported file as an attachment to: --------------- Appendix: Using "Replace" in Commentary You can replace everything in a particular field over a batch of records. For example, clause editors might not want to type their name in the the "Recommendation by" field each time. Here is a solution to the problem illustrating the use of "Replace": *Finish entering your data. *Find the bacAEditor's LayoutB   S w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMT w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMU 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMW 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMYesNo/,  , : AM PM Dp=u Av 2 72w27+-f3%:EAFAGA' Submitted by:€QASDocument under Review:UFirst (Given) NameVLast (Family) NameWBallot Group Membership Status:€XAY#Letter Ballot Number or Ballot Code€ZA[ email address€\A] telephone€^A_Vote:`(1) Create Comments€aAHCreate and Submit Working Group Ballot or IEEE Balloting Center CommentsH@AR  33& * Rg2*t {EQFAImport CommentsENALL OTABS# ` ABCDEFGdH^I_J`KaLbMcNOPQRgSiTjUkVmWnXpYvZw[x\y]{^_`abcde f g hijklmnoQGA Email fileE)?@ @A owner-stds-802-16@majordomo.ieee.org The comment file name should include the Letter Ballot Number and ? ABCDEFGHIJK^L_M`NaObPcQRSTUdVgWiXjYkZm[n\p]v^w_x`ya{bcd e f ghijklmno ABCDEFGHIJK^L_M`NaObPcQ STUVWXYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~րցւփքօֆևֈ։֊֋֌֍֎֏֐ְֱֲֳִֵֶַָֹֺֻּֽ֑֖֛֢֣֤֥֦֧֪֚֭֮֒֓֔֕֗֘֙֜֝֞֟֠֡֨֩֫֬֯־ֿƒÃăŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃σЃу҃ӃσЃу҃ӃЃу҃ӃЃу҃ӃЃу҃Ӄ'f€aA Create and Submit Reply Comments @A*  33*€APLEASE FOLLOW THESE INSTRUCTIONS EXACTLY OR EXPECT TO HAVE YOUR INPUT IGNORED. (1) Read the comments. You will probably find this easiest if you use the "Comment List" layout. You can choose it from the upper left corner of this window, or you can use this push button: (2) When you want to respond to a comment, check the "Marked" box at the top of that record. Then fill out the following fields: Recommendation: Proposed Resolution: Reason for Recommendation: You are fully justifing the buttons:€gng the buttons:€gng the buttons:€gg the buttons:€gicking the buttons:€gicking the buttons:€gowing steps by clicking the buttons:€ging the buttons:€gg the buttons:€ging the buttons:€ge buttons:€gbmit Ballot Filef9Proceed with the following steps by clicking the buttons:€gO+ A#K dK# ##; #;# # ^#0  _l0#{  `l{# #k  alk# cBl#[  bl[##KK##;;# Bmv#+  @iv+# >j# Dkv# 8w5 €\]Page€^A_Line€`A aClause €bA cComment€dAe Comment #f Comment by:€gAhResolution of GroupiDecision of Group:€jAk&Reason for Group's Decision/Resolution€lAmGroup's Action Items€pA€sAtProposed Resolution€uAvRecommendation by€wAxRecommendation:€yAzReason for Recommendation€A Group's Notes-Note: Group may also edit Comment Type above.€A€A &'()+ €A €A €A€ARecommendation@@ByProposed ResolutionReasonSee reply details€A Fig/Table# BNA^  !"#$%*,-./0123^^_`u EDE^ "Technical, Binding"^Technical, BindingEOKA/A0@ @A-A.@A,A-Cancel@A*A+@@A*" \ !"A "Disapprove" vote must include at least one "Technical, Binding" comment. Please correct and try again.FC^="Technical, Binding"^Technical, BindingG OKA/A0@ @A-A.@A,A-Cancel@A*A+@@A*" \ !""Technical, Binding" comments are permitted only with the vote "Disapprove". You may submit comments of type "Technical, Non-binding". Please correct and try again.H) W()=0 W ABCDEFGHIJK^L_M`NaObPcQ3lEz\iP{jT|nP}T~TyP!1"#0!1FJ#L53C$1F7VUHU2 3IC dd5BDe5Bf7# w  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMx   y 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMz    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM     w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMw w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMf"$  w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMf w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMf3IC dd5BDe5Bf#= q w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM     w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM          w  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM   {cTZbo|h[++ \_l)]l+ ^`l$)g_.?nAEditor's QuestionB GpA Editor's NoteB GvAResolution of GroupB GH vwADecision of GroupB GxAReason for Group DecisionB GyA Group's NotesB G{AEditor's ActionsB G€AGroup's Action ItemsB G€AEditor's Action ItemsB G€AVoterFirstNameB G€A VoterLastNameB G€A VoterEmailB G€A VoterPhoneB G€A VoterStatusG€A VoterStatus3m  ^ 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM_   `3 a d3 e3 f  3 g  3 t  3 u   $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMu   $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMu   $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM#39 XX+ASubmit Reply CommentsB  a   w   w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMf w w Aa#8 F mM5ft GM5ftM5ftGOC`E 7OC`EOC`E7 W   W   W    ÑÒÓÔÕÖ×ØÙÚÛÜÝÞßàáâãäåæçèéêëìíîïðñòóôõö÷{xBKA Enter commentEQMAImport Global DataENALL # @ A B C DEFGHIJ^K_L`MaNbOcPdQgRiSjTkUmVnWpXvYwZx[y\{]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqQNAExport CommentsE:NALL OFMPR$@` ABCDEFGdH^I_J`KaLbMcNQkUmVnWpXvYwZx[y\{]^_`abcdefgh`DTDTDT A B C DEFGHIJ^K_L`MaNbOcPdQgRiSjTkUmVnWpXvYwZx[y\{]^_`abcde0Aa@Mb10@adjustthestatementregardingbinaryadditiontoreference@Schangeannexf2tof2@wchangemytopoinfotoringinfoseealsocommentsonpages149@equations@includerelevanttextsosomethingsurviveswhenourmemorie@removedsidofdswrapdefinition@signal@}verify@cbehavior@fidonotseeanyattempttoresolvecomment245fromthepre@missingafterringlet0andringlet1@`replacedependingontheconfiguredreversionmodethestate@rtheclauseismissingwhatshouldastationassumeifthest@6thisispartoftheintro@vmedia@|tofitclanguagesyntax@nguagesyntax@eparameterrcvphyarenot@|tofitclanguagesyntax@phyarenot@|tofitclanguagesyntax@arenot@|tofitclanguagesyntax@onthislineshouldread@typosubscriptyinformulanyky@ geunnecessa@o@;u@QAAExport Full RecordsEOFMPR$@` ABCDEFGHdIJ^K_L`MaNbOcPgQiRmSjTkUvVwWxXyYZ{[p\n]^QCAAbout CommentaryEDQEAExport Vote & CommentsE6NALL OFMPRV D@]W@gFD@ @D@  ] W@ g F E@D@]W@gFFD@F$@`V0\ ӠpThe vote of type "Disapprove with binding comments" is permitted only by Members. Please correct and try again.Ca)&) = "Disapprove with binding comments" Disapprove with binding commentsical, Bindinghh' Cw# ,v # 0x #  2y # s 2 @BBA0 0^_`ab c dijkmvwxy€€€             XXXX$XXXX2 X  X  X X& X'X(X)XXXXXXXX!X jv   3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM     3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM   h stanwood# >S w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMT w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMU 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMW 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMW 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM(s%jAResolution ProposedB GkAReason ProposedB GmARecommendationB Gnndation 1B Gn1O RR 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMU  w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMW w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM)@B@2@Iֿ@;@!@t9~@j@@ @c @@9P;9P;9P;;P;bleisnotreferencedinthetextnorhasitanymeani@dthetermburstprofileisdefinedinthestandardasdefinit@toclarifydocument@d@B@2A@@@cJ@c@M @ @3P;@3P; @3P; @3P;7WNWWWYWbWdWeWhWWWWWWWWWWWWWW)W/W5W8W=W>WBWDW`WhWmWWWWWW?WgapWWWW WW#W$W%WgenerateWgenerated4W6WWWWgeneratingWgenericWgetOWWWgetridofdashthisisaproblemallthroughoutsection6.2OV4/ RM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMN  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMO 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMP 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMQ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMBkS-X bWmkwj,AvCgE3@!Sl€`zrAPFQKRPSUTZUBN@VhA~@M@LZ<>C @@@FIH@JQ3^&vmBD€QdnaD@Xbm{ACEe@EJoQTYB@X|CE@€ JOTYAC@XbmwBD@a@EJOU[B@|J& JQ 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMS   U   V   W   X 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMY   Z 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM[   \ 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM]   ]   No/,  , : AM PM]   1 RG 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMH 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMI 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMJ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMK 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMw+#,v# 0x#  2 Ma bc dijkmvwxy!€€$€2'&()% @@@B s@A 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM77777777 7 7  7  7  7 7 7777777777771xy{€€€€€j77777777 7 7  7  7  7 7 7777777777771        Y7 ^ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM_   ` 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMa   b 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMc   d  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMe   f   g 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMh   6" i   j 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMk   l 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMm   p  w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMs 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMt   u 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMv    €Dtch of records in which you want to replace a field. *In browse mode, and put the cursor in the "Recommendation by" field. *Under "Records", choose "Replace". *Choose "Replace with calculated result". *In the box, write, in quotation marks, your name. Click "OK". *Click "Replace". @Af  ww    ww  ww  wwfSet up an email message for meGo to "Comment List" layout BnA€ (SEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_148`23a 6.6.3.7.4bIn column 1 of the table, join rows 11->18 so all are the LENGTH state. In column 5 of the table, join rows 11->17 so all are the START state.cNRows 11->18 of table 6.20 are missing state names in the start and end states.d80 2003/10/236.20TEMichaelFAllen^ Editorial_83`30a5.4.1.2MarkedSTind the ba; @.g@@b@b.PI3Import Full RecordsExport Full Records Enter commentExport Vote & Comments Email file Startup script Delete Empty RecordsDelete Abstain CommentsDelete All Records Show VotesShow All Records in OrderSort by Comment #Sort by Page/LineSort by Comment OriginatorSort by RecommenderShow Editor's Problems Assign Editors#Mark Found Records%Unmark Found Records'Find Marked Records)Import Ballot Comments+Export Comments-Import Comments/ Export Clause Editor's Proposals1 Import Clause Editor's Proposals3Export Group Resolutions5Import Group Resolutions7Export Editor's Input9Import Editor's Input:Import Global Data< Help WebLink>WirelessMAN WebLink@Export IEEE XMLCOpen Reply Comment FileEAbout Commentary<AKEG  7   :UVWQNF89=>>9=>9gP:@K79@<E Q@ Q*E@uD QFGB{K@(MNxS@W@ZC[E\G]I^K_M`OaQbScUeW  A} !LISTAqVDEFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEfterW=WcWWWallWalleviatebWallocationbWalphaWalsoWWWalternativeWalternativesWalthoughWbWalwaysbWanWareadWasWWcWWatW(WOWattributesWbandWbandsdWbandwidth(WbaseWbeWWW(WbWcWWbelowbWcWWerL> `Z   [w \ ]  ^ w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMew h 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMi   j 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMk   l 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMm   ,  , : AM PMd   $ ANU#OV#V+X^5)SY{cTZbo|h[ +' \_l) ]D+b ^`l$)C_B+``al)a,maTbc -6cI dd De ]f)aTgvhYi< A_.^ -^; Pbj0=bi.  _l -d @/Tcj4A6XZB% K%[%K% %\%0E>]^% 7%e%D€B G€ AEmail ToB G€ A Email SubjectB G€ AEmail ccB G€A BallotNumberB G€A DocNumberB G€ACommentary VersionB G€A ExportDateB AbG€A Comment DateB G€ACommentary Version NotesB G€ACommentary Version DateB G€AMarkB G€A XML OutputB  B  " 0000000 87654321 "& & &""&""& ""&b&"" F€A Comment Type€ASuggested Remedy€ A Starting Page Number€ACommentXCreate CommentZDocument[Create another Comment\Create/Submit Ballot]In WG Ballot, "Binding" comnents are those which form the basis of a "Disapprove" vote. IEEE Balloting Center processes all Technical comments identically.€^AeShow All Comments€hAiClause €jAk Fig/Table#€lAmStarting Line # B?A6 6^_`abc€` a b cdX)*+,-.X()*+,-.X,-.XXolutionARecommendation byCRecommendation:EReason for RecommendationHEditor's QuestionsKEditor's Action ItemsN Group's Notes @B=AMjason@johnleon@mrobert@fanllemon״3^editorial׿non-binding@G֖1B؏.technical@20ױtechnicalbinding@technicalnon-binding@g-_Ã1&Ã1p@DÃ: @ÃA@@ÃB@ÃEp@ÃUp@ÃY @LÃa0@Ãup֢?Ãzp@<`‚'@n‚D@L‚V@cr@don'tcountfairnessandcontrolframesinrxmcastclassafram@figure@frtt@implementation@9includes@ machine@missing@must@mytopoinfo@)on@0processing@remove@replaceifastationitshallnotrespondatall@8replacerow7with@replacetopodbmyinfoconservativemodebymytopoinfoconserv@ri@ringlet0@*rxframe@Esignal@sublayers@theclausenumberofsequencenumbershouldbe9.3.2.1@#towards@2 BD VOTEREMAILpDs`jA.nA%€B?€A€BC@==========6_BdD`@4AFF*KL)QaA0@./////./////qq@@jAqcA%jBDkBZq@<jUq@q@qcMq@qcjqHBq@l_qkCq@qbAjBqjAfkAgq@vqcqboq@Pq@Giq@qPqjA q@qbq@abAqcr@Or=^6r@GprB@jA|rE@N^HrHPqrR@rSbjrT@jSril1rt@'r@Irl4r@bAjB[kA\€B Submit Ballot layout doesn't work. 1.51: slight changes, mainly in "Import Clause Editor's Proposals" 1.5: Added "Reply Comment Layout" and Relationship to reply.fp5 1.4: Added "Comment List for Projection" Split "Commentary Version" from "Global Field Setup" layout Added "Report Number" field and set up layouts for its use 1.3: *Added XML export for IEEE Balloting Center comments *Added "Marked" field 1.2: *Fixed "Import Comments" script. It had not been updated in 1.1 to match the new Ccomment format. *Corrected grammar in email subject. *Made all fields in Comment List layout read/write (except the global fields Doc Number and Ballot Number). *Added Editor's Layout 1.1: Many changes, including addition of use as a balloting tool.  2002-04-151  w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM  w AaBSn DyRoxp zqr srtyuB+zy*{QbSzaq@Hg@@PB s@A 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMB 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PME 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMF 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMH 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMXY!€aACommentary Version@A* ww  ww*}Commentary Version # Version NotesCommentary Version Date B A€€€888r ysrtyuB+zw*{EV|GIU}n~pI~YjR[7iaGlobal Field Setupo Email SubjectqEmail TosEmail ccuBallot #fFJ I 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMJ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMK w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMA%x  Yx% ^%  _l%@ l`l@% j%0  al0% cl%  bl@GY^6i7w"#$A=CEw€\€a@5BG4M1R/YOAC+'@€BD8, consequtive in time, of a preamble and data subchannels. --------------------------------------------- 8.3.6.3.5.2.3 should be handed to a clause-editor to be entirely rewritten. ItC needs substantial additional information on how to do this type of rotation in TDD, and it shouldn't use the word frame for allocations. How it will fit under the MAC etc.. (i.e. it needs definition on how this shifted superframe structure fits in with TX/RX boundaries)cH3  @BBA^_`abc€XXXXXXXXACreate and Submit BallotB    E 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMF 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMG 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM'   ^AAssign EditorsE 5 4 3 2 1 0 / . -  ,  *  )  (  ' & % $ "    !Q7AShow All Records in OrderE '` dDTQ8A Export Clause Editor's ProposalsE OFMPR$@` ABCdD^EiFmGjHkQ9A Import Clause Editor's ProposalsE NALL OTABSW@# `BBXXXXYYYYZZYYZZp` "Guillemette" GuillemetteQAAssign Editor 11E@[@!r@a11.@a11.@!r@a11.@802.16.1/D1-2000Q`"11"^52_ 8.2.1.2.5n'tuWdownstreamuWexistuW6M<?ACreate CommentB    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM     3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM   X , : AM PM      ~LA+Commentary: The IEEE 802.16 Comment ManagerA*by Roger Marks *@A> ww ) ww> AICreate and Submit Working Group Ballot or IEEE Balloting Center CommentsI@AR  33& + RN#Version: <<ACIABB>> (<<ACIABG>>)OView Comment ListA5For help, see 5@A> ww 4 ww>Xhttp://WirelessMAN.org B A   €€A>  ww    ww>AGo To Create Vote Page@A> ww  ww>UV sBl# #M  alM# cl#=  bl=# Bmv#  @iv# sj{# Dkv#1 8w1#,Cjv#! 0x!#  2y# 2# 6{# In#y qpy# LF 8w#/,v/# 0/ Y w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMZ w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM[ w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMabcd€€€€€€€€€€€€rQ RA 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMB 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMC 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMD  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PME 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMPR RF 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMG 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMH 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMI 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMJ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMx+!  2y! 4z! 6QS RK 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PML  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMM 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMN  3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMO 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMRT RP 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMQ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMR 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMS 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMT 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMSU RU  w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMW 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMY 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMTN OZ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM[  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMA#  #  #A dA#J #J# ## ## # ^#  _l#  `Nh R @BBA6 6^_` a b c dijkmnpvwxy{€€€€€€           -5#,/,1&### -3 $ $  %  -6% &$*$)") *&(''+,(()+)++-*,6{7TypeReason k b 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMc   d  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMe   f   g 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMh   i   j 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMk   l 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM-dG | w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM}  w ~ w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM  w  w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM  w A^a):|+=9}R~T=b=NR?+M^ance'd303 2001/08/28G6AReply Comment LayoutB U 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMY   Z 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM[   \ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM]     [A, HH HH*<*G!!!!!!!!1111111111 11 11 11 9999 99999999BBBBBBBBJJJJJJJJJJJJRRRRRRRRRRZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZ!cccc"cc#cc$cc%kkkk&kkkk'kk(kk)kk*kk+ssss,ssss-ss.ss/ssB0{{{{1{{{{2{{3{{456789:;<=>?@ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmZ\ Cnopqr!!s11tBBuRRvccwssxyz{|}~D[] Ek0>nk&8n]n]n!=700UnUnUfa&fH!1fQ!H,bH,Hn\X8FU7=nXnH7%fQH 7k=8HnX10kHbHHgfn=\HX7X8HHf\]?no`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`B]n` [    `    `    `n&0n4WUfZ _ZZZ._ Z)$')d)$')d\^ G)')$h#`` ) )B)y}_ Z ' ' Dyy3sy~[_  )  ) B|uv7~qu|t_Z ( ( Brz}rs9|pr}up|_ ` ) ) Bzprypq~<yppy~pps`_ ' ' @rpp{upp|?vppuvpzZ[ ) ) Ezpt}rppyAsppr}~pr_ _ ' 'Bqp|ypvB~qpyxpz[ ` ) ) BHxpvups@|ptqpr_ Z # #@qp~}rpq~Iypq|ypz_ _E BEB`E BEBmE 'BEBmxpvyp|SX&&Xvpqpr` [  A Z Zqpy8=SHHspzZ _  @  `  `xpv,5^kn~qpr_ [[  _Z`l[  __Yo[ 6__[oqpqrpsbfS=X|pvzpy_ _ ' ) Bxpq}wpq}=]_ IXU7Uyp{zqppq`_ ) ' Bqppq}~p{=TW\fvpr}qppxZ [ ' ) DwppsspxfgT0spw}qpq`  _  '  'A~ppszpu08]n%7~qpp~}qpxZ _ BBEBm BBEBm 'BBEBmvpsppsHQH|ps}qq` [ `  ` _~psvq}Dyz~sx_ _  Z  Z [Jvu|{9to_Z_o__[Z__[^o__[Z__[^o_[^Z_`Z^o~v }~o_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`_`m`                                                                             @lBB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB^` K@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@BB?BB@AB@BA@B_ fXX]XfkJ78H7k=aXH 007U!,7kX8HXU7TT8X7TX77XXXf77`QHU8bk1TnaXfgWU77L7%7XX\ n17&7nbT] Xb!78=HUUXWUTX7 X7TY07=\7Xk Q%QX777b]1n=5n7H8Q!8nn_a M7!Qn=!H% 7TX,XfUXn,7,a bHb7jn &HU\TX$WT878gnn8H W8L7AUXHn8nH,H88N 7X&78=;XT%X7=7&0&0n, n!7HX00T(TXfnn777 H8& X7T7778n XTX778Tbkb H=X!`b O=T TXM*HU7T7&Q= 7Tn7%UW& XTX.7,n7&H%H8,X7gn7 TXT7A78nXH&=TXf7&Q7 PXTX 8n7]&]n7TX8jUQ TXU=n7\gn3n7XHUk=7,+U XTWUH87nn3X8WU77f78 TXUn= 7ac QU7U78&QQ XUX bfb7==nX17!8717W177&7nUT TWTH8fX&k8UUn7771 XUX77j&W7 WX bR8nH7 TXT\7&XUkH8U U77TX XTXn%88=&gC!\7 WX 77nXTUnfXTagWUTgWUTi)())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())())(be S))())RZ                                                    B'S66SmB3BmK63BmVEBBPE.R8|o" *e VK S) i )}=}t<  K o  e   '~tFxy}qx ZV V)Pe2 6V R `vs|zWX!Q{ps}qq  <JR 3` )  A~psuTq}84n]H5}qpp}}qpx  ) _e Z ' o xpsppr5dngspw}qpqm  l <. Vqps~yptk]gX=upqzpy  I: . i J  B )3Sxppq}spwU7fU7xp{zpr V _  Z` l  ;   6qppq}}p{W=ef]{puzpz o  oZ  `2  "  `xpX $%       !ACommentary VersionB ( a w hh h h h h  h hhhhhhhhh!hh$XX,XXXX)X+X5X3c Uq}wpq}nf]1&}qpr 6  <`  ' _m N  */B 6qpqqpsH7Q78spz  lZZ ) `6   ' @_ xpuUQFupqpr V  `_  Z F  ) B qpxLxpr}zpz B ') Io  `P  " B xpwzqp{Q{puqpr BB' B e39 *@ qp~}spq}S}qppqyxpz@;)Bm e 'B  VzpvvpsQspps}qpsE '' R) Zi m   B; rp}zqppuUuppvvp|S  _6IN3_ )`EBmO '_ zpt}sppxQxpqz~ppt `R V)*NO @BYm  B 6rpp|vpp{P{ps}vp|6  ;  oB  E@` 3_zpszqq}L}qv|t oV NEBBZ m <rz}ssCtz~oI)"Ie6)6_cBB@@B@__@BlBB@l<)-V|vui [ w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMA#K dK# ##; #;# # ^#0  _l0#{  `l{# #k  alk# c^_#  _l#  `l#m  av3 CgTgvh ivTjxivPk#TlPm&3Tn{&h3Po pDw6YTqp&3`Pr nTsj{tTuivcPvXTwmvPxTykvq~l6V~%AAbout CommentaryB\   A wB w I N w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMO W  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMPMPMPMPMPMPM   $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM  w ` D .orgl>.;tf ZU  w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMk, w  3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMx   y 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMz   {   | 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM}   ~ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM     rksa_2Wj m   n 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMo   p  w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMq 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMr   s 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMt   u 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMv   '   B@\[)!r S // €TA€UA€VA€WA€XA YType€ZA[Suggested Remedy€\A ]Starting Page #€^A _Starting Line #€`AaClause €bAcComment€dAe Comment #fComment submitted by:€gAhResolution of GroupiDecision of Group:€jAk&Reason for Group's Decision/Resolution€lAmGroup's Action Items€nAoEditor's Actions€pA€qArEditor's Notes€sAtProposed Resolution€uAvRecommendation by€wAxRecommendation:€yA=AB=AB[Ab  !"#$%&'()*+,-./012345b& v   $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMww   3 A0@*E0:@F {G0Z=' QkS%26U%92VLWiyl XU%92VLWiyl XXXXXX T BcAJ  !"#$J €€€ € €€ €      AGlobal Field SetupB   €€€ € €€ €           " # J  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMK 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PML  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMs; VOTEREMAILVOTERFIRSTNAME VOTERLASTNAME VOTERMEMBERID VOTERPHONE VOTERSTATUS XML OUTPUT^abcgijkmnpvwxy{_`d    d  ^_`abcgimjkvwxy{p n!"#$%&'()*+ , - ./AMembership TypeB GAVoteB GAVoterDocNumberB GAVoterBallotNumberB G^A Comment TypeB G_AStarting Page NumberB G`AStarting Line Number E !LISTAa) awaiting resolution b) awaiting missing input c) instructions unclear d) confer with resolution group e) editor disagrees f) pass off to other editor g) didn't have time h) defer to next round i) to do j) in progress - k) done l) none neededVDEFA((A!1>VDEF(LISTLISTAEditorial Technical, Non-binding Technical, Binding Technical (was Editorial) Editorial (was Technical) Technical, Satisfied (was Binding)VDEFA((A!VDEF(LISTLISTAMarkedVDEFA((A Comment TypeBMembership TypeCVoteDRecommendationFEditor's ActionsGComment Type/GroupHMarked`AFMRLFMRLAbb7AFMRLFMRLAdBFind DuplicatesC ReplyComments`lP <zReason for Recommendation{Editor's Questions and Concerns€|A}Editor's Action Items€~A€A Group's Notes8Note: Group may also edit and export Comment Type above.€ADocument under Review:€ABallot Number:€A  Comment Date€A€A  Fig/Table# @BA5BAj  !"#$%&'()*+,-./0123467j^_ ` a bcdi"j k&m$n)pvwxy,{€€+€1€/€3€5€€6@@XB s@p.D/A First NameB GA Last NameB GAMembership TypeB GAVoteB GAVoterDocNumberB GAVoterBallotNumberB G^A Comment TypeB G_AStarting Page NumberB G`AStarting Line NumberB GaAClause B GbAChangeB GcAReasonB GdAComment NumberB GM9999gACounterB GL2215iA Resolution byB GH ijyi O 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMP 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMQ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMR 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMS 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM* E@^"Technical, Binding"@A>4> = "Disapprove with binding comments"   "Member" Disapprove with binding commentsMemberBOKA/A0@Ҡ@A-A.@A,A-Cancel@A*A+@@A*B0\ ӠpThe vote of type "Disapprove with binding comments" is permitted only by Members. Please correct and try again.Ca)&) = "Disapprove with binding comments" Disapprove with binding commentsl, Binding"^Technical, BindingEOKA/A0@ @A-A.@A,A-Cancel@A*A+@@A*" \ !"A "Disapprove" vote must include at least one "Technical, Binding" comment. Please correct and try again.FC^="Technical, Binding"^Technical, Binding, Binding"^Technical, Binding ABCDEFGHIJK^L_M`NaObPcct and try again. ,g AS T3C|U#3}C<V#3ACWDFdVX^H7UaY TZbh[FXVt \_BlHUS]FV ^`lHoU_FV`alHPUaWTbcKX6c3IC dd5BDe5Bf Ec %bR %d %Zt jH @JHHF@J+f* (€UA€VA€XAYType€ZA [Suggested Remedy€\ADe ]f)aTgvhYi(NQAImport Ballot CommentsENALL OTABS# ` ABCDEFGHIJK^L_M`NaObPcQRSTUdVgWiXjYkZm[n\p]v^w_x`ya{bcd e f ghijklmnoQRA Help WebLinkEo@ @A :%http://ieee802.org/16/docs/Commentary.htmlQSAWirelessMAN WebLinkEo@ zt J 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMK 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMN  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMN  3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMy RE 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMF 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMG 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMH 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMI 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM( HGB Left("Manufacturing", 4) Copyright 1994 - 1999 FileMaker, Inc. All Rights Reserved.1{Balloter: Attach your comment file before sending this email message. The comment file name should include the Ballot Number and your full naC:me in the format " DraftNumber_Lastname_Firstname.fp5".}umQ ¦ w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMæ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM   Ŧ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM   Ǧ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    @  A1%KFPTHPRPTH NAME MSPCMSPCA2NAMEA 80216Ballot RPTHA 80216Ballot A1!FPTH9RPTHNAME MSPCMSPCAiNAMEA XMLExport RPTHA::XML Export:XMLExportA9kFPTHTRPTH alis(NAMEMSPCFPTHATTiDrive:Documents:802:802.16:Ballots:Commentary:1.55:Commentary Folder:ReplyData.USRTMSPCA NAMEA ReplyData.USRRPTHA ReplyData.USR alisA((TiDriveXBD ReplyData.USR mcFMP5UFSRCommentary Folder 2000. UTTiDrive:Documents:802:802.16:Ballots:Commentary:1.55:Commentary Folder:ReplyData.USR(fp500. UATiDrive:Documents:802:802.16:Ballots:Commentary:1.5:ReplyData.fp5TG3/4:CommentaryDataReplyRhM 9A/%-g>9t 9t 9tJ[F8(t4 8(t48(t4a;z RB2a;za;zRj SjjS$u R   3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM           w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM      3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM   p *AImport Group ResolutionsE NALL OTABS# ` ABCdD^EvFwGxHyIJKLMNOP_Q`RaSbTcUgViWjXkYmZn[p\{]^_`abc d e fghijklmnopqQ?AExport Editor's InputEOFMPR$@` ABCdD{EpFnGQ@AImport Editor's InputENALL # ` ABCdD{EpFnGHIJKLMN^O_P`QaRbScTgUiVjWkXmYvZw[x\y]^_`abc d e fghijklmnopqfd Bl#[  bl[# Bmv#K  @ivK# >j#; Dkv;# 8w#+,v+# 0x#  2y# 2C  @BBA( (^_`ab c di j km vwxy€€€          hm Bk xYCSZGjT[Vf\Zvg] ^_* *`*Ca! E!d!E_ G_e_G-f"^g2*t Cjvf# 0x# V In V#  2y # F 2 F# 6{ # 6 qp 6# LF @BBA6 6^ _`a b c dijkmnpvwxy{€€€€€€ 00000000 0 0  0  0  0 0 0000000000000#f,u EBl#.  .#  al# bl# 8w#,v#  2y# 2#v 6{v# In#f qC>pf# L WE@@MarkedQYAExport IEEE XMLEOTABS D[@!d$@`@A14[p 0 h[[ [[ /0 h[p / AQ^AOpen Reply Comment FileE ! FMPRQ'`QdDTQAzHHddE(HH(d'`zA'dE7*`'`+ dDTQ] w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM  UU? €Ad?2     _` a ^@"7 c>gt;Z<lt;Z b>gt;Z<lt;Zd W2&&Zgt;>Zlt;<Z:GC€A VoterMemberIDB G€A ReportNumberB G€A FigTabNumberB GP P802.17/D2.6Q4 tom@veriwave.com )IEEE 802.17 Draft 2.6 Ballot and Comments tak@cisco.com4 P802.17 D2.6: AM PMmAComment List for PrintingB   S w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMT w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMU 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMW 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM X 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMY   \ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM]   ^ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM_   ` 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMa   $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMa   a   b 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMc   d  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMe   f   g 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMh   i   l 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMl 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM Hm   n 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMo   p  3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMq 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMr   s 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMt   u 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMv   H{   | 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM}   ~ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM     esNo/,  , : AM PM       esNo/,  , : AM PM         3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM     3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    C iTkTlGTPmn{Tn{ng{Po pw~Tqpn{_PrP{T|DnP}T~5ETy(5P#3"$1"2$L63C#0 AS T3C|U#3}C<V#3ACWDGW#X^H_UYGpW \_lHUn]GW ^`BlHU_GW`alHWUaWTbblIVhc4ID dd5BDe5Bf$Tgvhz@@ B s@A 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMB 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMC 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMD  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMD  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM xe Comment #fComment submitted by:€gAhResolution of GroupiDecision of Group:€lAmGroup's Action Items€nAoEditor's Actions€pA€qArEditor's Notes{Editor's Questions and Concerns€|A}Editor's Action Items€~A€A Group's Notes€ADocument under Review:€ABallot Number:€A Comment Date€A€A  Fig/Table# BA(B$AP  !"#$%&')*P^_` a b dnpvwy {€€€$€"€&€(€€))f1234f01234f1234f1234f/@@ B s@A 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMB 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMC 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMD  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM$,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMo RE 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMF 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMG 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMH 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMI 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM MaClause €bA cComment€dAe Comment #f Comment by:€gAhResolution of GroupiDecision of Group:€jAk&Reason for Group's Decision/Resolution€lAmGroup's Action Items€pA€sAtProposed Resolution€uA vRecommendation by€wA xRecommendation:€yAzReason for Recommendation€A Group's Notes-Note: Group may also edit Comment Type above.€A€A Fig/Table# BAN  !"#$%&N^_`a bc dijkmvwxy!€€$€%%f1234f1234f1234f1234f1234f-./01234fo ZQ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMS 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMS 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMS 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMS 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM T 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMU  3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMW 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM OY 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMZ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMA#x  x#  #h #h# ##X #X# # d# ^ #k  _lk#  `  @BBA* *^_` a b dnpvw y{€€€€€€           XX(X$X"XXXX& X X X X  X)X X XXX XXXXXIn # u L u#  @BBA( ( DmvkPx QdTykv zX{cTyKXPTwbk_+j)€UA€VA€XAYType€ZA [Suggested Remedy€\A]Page€^A_Line€`A ~PmRbapwcTsjtbTuiv4PvCTw A#x x#  #; d;# ##+ #+# ## #9  _l9#  `l# B#t  alt# ^# cl#  bl# Bmv#  @iv# >j#v Dkvv# 8w#f, EJG?W]IV<fS // €TA€UA€VA€WA€XA YType€\A ] Starting Page€^A _ Starting Line€`AaClause €bAcSuggested Remedy€dA  ^`BlHU_GW`alHWUaWTbblIVhc4ID dd5BDe5Bf$Tgvh| AS T3C|U#3}C<V#3ACWDFoVX^HBUlY=TZbe[EmU \_BlHUh]WTbcHU3c3IC dd5BDe5Bf 0""/1"L1 B+``al)a,aTbc -6cI dd De ]fccTgvUbhT[biCHcTjxPkcTl~PmRbapwcTsjtbTuiv4PvCTw X 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMY   Z 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM[   \ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM]   b 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMc   d  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMe   f   g w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM   ANU#OV#V+X^5)SYcTZbh[ +( \_l) ]I+g ^`l*)I_|  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM       3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM C3C#0aTjR_R_TivR]_PR_XTmvRz_P#D$wTkvTvTxP_<TR_P*OT   3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM     3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    QEy*PGTT{GiTPW^TpGT]PanPodTnn{P|/TFJEU `lHUEUalHdUEKUiHUF _<TR_P*OT  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM       3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM3C S // €TA€UA€VA€WA€XAYType€ZA[Suggested Remedy€\A ]Starting Page #€bAcComment€dAe Comment #fComment submitted by:€ADocument under Review:€ABallot Number:€A  Comment Date€AProposed Resolution€ARecommendation by€ARecommendation:Resolution of GroupDecision of Group:€A€AReason for Recommendation8Note: Group may also edit and export Comment Type above.€A€A&Reason for Group's Decision/Resolution€AGroup's Action Items€A Group's Notes€AEditor's Actions€A Line #€`A aClause €bA cChange€dA ^w  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMx   y 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMz    3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM      esNo/,  , : AM PM       esNo/,  , : AM PM     @@B s@A 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMB 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMC 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMD  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM$,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM RE 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMF 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMG 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMH 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMI 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM RJ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMK 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PML  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMM 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMN  3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM RO 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMP 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMQ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMR 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMS 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM RT 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMU  w $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMW 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMX 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM Y 3 $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMZ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM[  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM #=# ##- #-#_ ^_#  _l#  `l#m  a Hm   p  w  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMs 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMt   u 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMv   $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMv   v   $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMv   v   X1XXXX XXX X X  X2 X6 X4XX XXXXXXX"X#X'X%X)X+X.X0AComment List for ProjectionB   U 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMV 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMSUAMark Found RecordsE[@!@A0"1jP l+  jP l_ jP m0*@ @@A lAABB l*"Marked"MarkedQVAUnmark Found RecordsE[@!@A$1jP l+  jP l_ jP m0*@ @@A lAABB l*""keQWAFind Marked RecordsAzHHHV E(HH(d'`zA'd b 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMc   d  3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMe   f   g 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMh   i   j 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMk   l 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMx(S@A :http://WirelessMAN.orgdocs/Commentary.htmlQ X 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMY   Z 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM[   \ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM]   ^ 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PM_   ` 3  $,.YesNo/,  , : AM PMa   e W y}zy kUa55nn!b,!n]bfHX7X8T=\=ngfGH\H\&&Tn=78f8QQ!f,8Qnbn=7X7U]nH&7]HQg0Hn,!]k&!XnbnXX88 7=n\n ]n7&fn7%g, @! %K 0Ձ9uNOOkA9O FPTH9RPTHalisNAMEMSPCMSPCAQnNAMEA802.16.2 Ballot DataRPTHA802.16.2 Ballot DataI;TbU@WaXcAYbAcAZbAd[@^bAcB`cAc`fcAvAh@jbkblbAmbo@pvArvubAcBvBD=Fv@wy_{@}bACEd~@ց@9ւ@Kb|և`֊bA֋@cA֏`$֐c'֓j֕vA>֖@m֘@v@4֙@֛vA֞^֟@7c;֣bACcA@CAB֤cBF֥@F֦_H֨bJ֩d֪d֫@N֭bAO֯bAQCRֱdֳFVִ@ֵYָcAZC\[ֺcB:ּ@bAm`ֽw־@dbA bcn rd(2) Save Data to Filee(3) Submit Ballot Filef9Proceed with the following steps by clicking the buttons:€gAFile name must follow format: DraftNumber_Lastname_Firstname.USR (Extension is .USR) File format choice must be: FileMakerPro or FileMakerPro Runtime@AR  33  V  33r  R€tAWORKING GROUP BALLOT: Send email to: using the subject line: Make sure to: Attach file created in (2) Send manually if this button does not work.@Az    33%  &  33M  h  33z€uA €vA wShow All Comments€A@IEEE SPONSOR BALLOT: Upload using IEEE Balloting Center web form@@A*    33* not work.@work.@   337  R  33fxbcolumnSWbWoW֍WֺWWWWWWcolumnsֺWWWUWcombinationvWcombinations<WcombineGWPWQW?WcombinebaddatafcsframesandbaddatafcsframesintobadfcsfraQVcombinecompletelyorpartiallybycalling11.4from11.6?VcombinethetworowsifspeedandifhighspeedGVcomentVWcomma׃WמWWWVWcomment^WֈW֩WPWrWsWwWxWyWcommenterטWcommentsWWWWWcommunicateWcomparedWcomparisonWcompatibility֥WcomplementrWcompletedcWcompletely?Wcompleteness WcompletingWWWWcontrolescapeVcontrolsWcontroltype}WconventionWconvertWcopiedWcopyYWcorrectVW^WeWִWֵWֻWcorrectthenoteandtextonlines34/35ofthesamepageas^Vcorrectthenumberofbytesshownforthe3checksumvalueseV/cofSWUWWWXWYWZW]W^W`WbWeWfWgWhWjWkWoWpWrWuWxWyWzW}W~WWրWփW։W֊W֋W֔W֕W֛W֣W֤W֫WָWֺWֻWֽWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W%W&W'W(W*W+W,W-W.W/W0W1W5W9W:W=W>W@WBWCWDWFWGWHWIWJWKWMWOWPWQWSWTWUWVWWWXWYWsWׂW׃W׆W׎WהWטWסWפWשW׭WׯWײW׸W׽WWWWWWWWWWWW"W5W6WAWJWQW[W_WoWrWsWtWvWwWxW}W؀W؄W؅W؇W؊W؏WؐWؑWؓWؔWؖWؘWoffWoftentWQW1@Markeddefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}րֻּֽ֖֛֚֒֓֔֕֗֘֙֜֝֞־ֿƒÃăŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃σЃ()12345678STUVWXYa׶׷׸׹׺׻׼׽׾׿ƒÃăŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃σЃу҃ӃԃՃփ׃؃كڃۃ߃  !"#$z؏ؘؐؑؒؓؔؕؖؗ editorialtechnicalbindingtechnicalnon-bindingÃ2`׸Ã2p׶Ã2׷Ã2׹Ã3׺Ã30׻Ã3WÃ3׾Ã4 ׿Ã4PYÃ4Ã4Ã5Ã508TbRAdd the missing "d" to the end of the variable name to be source_address_extended.cMSpelling mistake for variable source_address_extende. Missing a trailing "d".d26 2003/10/23chaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_160`12a 6.6.3.11.4bGThe simplest change would be to table 6.19. Simply switch rows 3 and 4.cANeighbor TP frames with incorrect RI get dropped by Row 4 of Table 6.24 when they should progress to the TP control packet reception logic where a defect will be triggered. This is only a problem when the defect first occurs (infact this will block the defect from occuring) since once there is a defect, an edge will be declared and the TP packets will be received through Table 6.19, Row 4. 2003/10/216.24VEMichaelFAllen^ Editorial_167`28a6.6.4.4b*Correct typo error as described in coment.c>Typo on Row 6.27-7 description..."worst-cast" -> "worst-case". 2003/10/216.27WEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_166`35)qcstartSW֜WֺW%W׃WׄW_WstartingZW֏WstartsuWWstatPWQWnW{W֜W֣W֦W֨W֩WֺW־WWWWWWW#W$W(W)W5WIWstatedrWstatement֨WWWWWBWstatesSWYWZWfWstation^WցW֏W֓W֘W֛W֝W֟W֡W֣W֦W֩WָWWWWW+W;WMWstations]WuW֋WָWWWW%W:WstatisticsCWKWstatsBWLWstatus֤WHWOWstatuscurrentHVstead֕WsteeredWsteeringW1Wstem}Wstill}Wstop֚WstopsjWstoring}WstqW&W'W/WstqsWWstrange~WօWstrangecharacterinrfe0andrfe1օVstrangegreyboxoverlappingtopportionoftable~VstrictֳWִWֵWֶWstrippedֲWstructureֺWstructures}Wstyle֤WWWW4ectheyUW`W֣WְWWW%WBWLWOWSW׃WץWצWWthicknessWWWthinggW0WthingsIWthink9W;WXWWthisUWXWZW^WgWjWlWuW{W}W։W֊W֋W֏W֙W֛W֠W֣W֤WָWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W#W%W+W.W:W;W>WHWIWKWLWMWOWPWQWSWTWUWVWXWYW׍W׎WבWזWשW׭W׮W׺W׻W׽W׾WWWWWWWWWWW,W.WAW^WrWsWwW}W؀W؄WؔWofsupportablecVthishelpsfilloutthepagecurrentlybutsuchmanualmeansVthisnotationistooverboseandinconsistentwithotherusaVVVthisnoteinunclearVthisnoteisinsufficientVWcdefectUWuWdefectsYWdeferredWdefinerWW֋W֏W֛W֝WIWdefined`WjWpWWW:W<WBWIW׬WW>WZWhWiWkWtW؁WdefinesVWdefiningתWdefinitionֻWW6WVWaWbWؘWdefinitionsנW"WdegradeWdegraded%WdelayשWdelayed֔Wdelaying%WdeleteWdeletetwoblankpagesVdeletedWWdependsUWdeploying^WdeprecatedWdeprecatednotationVdepthWWdepths&W'Wderived.WdescribedXWYW^WW=WSWVWYWdescribesjW.WdescriptionVWmWnWֆWևW֕W֞W֭W֮WֻWWW/W0W1WBWHOWPWVWנWdescriptions.W׉WdescriptiveWWJWKWdescriptivetextforrprifstatscontroltabstatesthatitcanJVdesignWWWdesignsWdesiredרWW9)cvariableTWkW|WWOWPWQW׫W׮WWWWW#WXWZW\WgWqWtWvariablehaschangedinclause6gVvariablenamesitalicizedqVvariablesּWW׭W"WjWvariables/valuesWvarietyYWvariouskWvegas؏WverboseWWWWWWW W W WWversionPWQWversionszWvery։W֊W*W/WWviaYWؒWviolationQWvisible^WWvisual#Wwait֏Wwanted؄Wwants؇WwarrantsׯWwasWWZWkW֝W֤WָWֿW:W׾WWZW؏Wway%W׭Wways*WweWWBWLWUWXW׍WWW\W؆WweneedastandardconventionforfootnoteboundariesunderVVweneedtoknowifthereareanyusersontheringnotifweV*WweirdWwereZWW9WPWwestFWJWWa6.6.4.4bAdd short text indicating the state table 6.27 is stand-alone, but that outputs affect the data path context containment logic. Text may either be at 6.6.4 or 6.6.4.4.cA^I was left wondering for a while with state table 6.27 how it fitted into the "big picture" since a lot of the other state machines are sequentially linked through the queue mechanism. II feel it would be useful to include a short comment in the preamble to the table that indicates it is a standalone table running in parallel with the data-path.^d91 2003/10/23XEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_168`20a6.7bWRemove the "or an echo response frame (described in 11.5.1.5)" since it is unnecessary.cbmissingTW֘WWmixingWmlmeDWmode[W1WSWYWW~WmodificationSWmodifyֻW׎W_WfWmodifyrprdocumentasrequiredbasedonieeeracguidance_Vmodifysentencetoindicatesendingoffairnessframesacros׎VmorefWW/WבWשW׿WWmoveֆWևW֋W֏WWW׃WזWנWתW׺WWW9W:W;WAW^movebeginbracetonewfollowinglinewithsameindentationVble6.7rowsdescriptiontoappearafterthetableֆVmovetable6.9rowsdescriptiontoappearafterthetableևVmovethebubbleandtextframetothefronttohidetheendVmovethefigure-cell1.24-creferencetotheendofthephra׃VmovethetickmarkstothefrontVmoved֋WmsֿWmsb֬Wmsec֝WmuׇWmuch/WmultiWmulticell֤WmultichokeuserWWmultiplyWuWfigure9.3isanopens]VregardingrW wXcAI do not understand why the following text needs to explicitly specify echo response frame since an echo response frame is just a form of MA_CONTROL.request. "The transmit operation is initiated upon receipt of a MA_DATA.request (described in 5.4.1), a MA_CONTROL.request (described in 5.4.3), or an echo response frame (described in 11.5.1.5)." If the echo response frame really is needed, an explanation is needed as to why this is so different to the control frame that it needs specificBally breaking out.d93 2003/10/23YEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_116`13a6.4.4.4b ^YbABoth clause 9 and 6 need to agree on what is done to fairness, and clause 6 needs to additionally indicate what happens to TP frames under an edge wrap situation. I believe the intention of edge wrap is the following: 1) Fairness frames are transmitted towards the failed span and duplicated around the edge wrap--i.e. one copy is sent across the failed span, and the other copy is wrapped back to the other ringlet and received by the other fairness instance. 2) Fairness frames received acrBUoss an edge are processed for the purposes of keepalive satisfaction, but are not propagated to the fairness instance. 3) TP packets transmitted towards the edge are NOT wrapped. They are forwarded onto the failed span. Updates need to be made to both clause 6.4.4.4 and 9.1 (p248) to acurately describe edge-wrap forwarding functionality.Cc YcAI am not too happy with the resolution of comment #192 from D2.5 instrumented in D2.6. Specifically, the text in 6.4.4.4 now seems to directly conflict with the text in Clause 9 on Page 248 (line 34/35). Based on what I am hearing about how the edge-wrap works, I believe that currently, clause 6 and 9 are currently incorrect. Clause 9 states: Neither fairness instance attempts to send fairness frames to, or to receive fairness frames from, the inactive span. Instead, the fairness instanBmce receiving fairness frames from the ring, sends fairness frames to the opposing fairness instance via the edge multiplexor described in 6.4.4. Clause 6.4.4.4 states: Edge wrapping has no effect on the local transmission of topology and protection frames and fairness frames, which continue to be sent out both PHYs even when one PHY is transmitting into an edge.[d62 2003/10/23ZEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_213`48a7.1.1bbwouldUWrWW<W؆WwrapYW֣W֦W֧W1WXWwrap--iYWwrappedYW֋W֨W1W׻WwrappinglWWVW,Wwraps֛WxW1Wx-ref|WxxWxxxvaliddataOWxxxx:WBWfWyes/noWyetfWsWwWxWyWyield/Wyou<WLW7W@Wyyy:WzeroWc0eWfWhWuWքW4W05W1_WeWfWhWiWpWsWuWxWzWWքW֣W֧WַWֺWWWW3W4W@WCWIWPWQWSWZWׂWW6W7W@WsWwWؒWؓWlistin11.4.2page417@V10xWրWְWֺW1WOW_W[WhWjWkWtW10.1VW10.1.10YW10.1.6TW10.1.6.1׾W10.10rW10.12kWּW10.13kWlWmW10.1310.18and10.21kV10.14WW10.14.3:W10.18kWnWoWּW־W10.19rW10.20rWDWTbbothclause9and6needtoagreeonwhatisdonetofairnesYVbottom׎WBWboundֿW/WboundsׯWbox~WTWbraceWbracesWbridge֯WbroadcastWbroadcastingTWןWbroken@WbubbleWangeUW_WhWmWnWsWփW֍W֖W֗W֙Wchangedefinitionofbyteinter-arrivalto8linerate_VchangeloopterminatorforringlettobeconsistentwiththehVchangesemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveformattotitleofփVchangetexttoallowingthisinformationtobereported֙Vchangethenextstateendintable10.13row16toreturnmVchangethenextstateendintable10.18row32/33toreturnnVchangethesecmacaddressvaluestobeuniquesVchecklW֣W֩Wcheck3֜WcheckinguWvWchecksumeWclassa֏Wclassc֏WclauseYW^WhWրWփW֋W֎W֏Wclauses^WclearedwWclearer֋WclearsecmacwWclient֥W*wbbeTWUWWWYWZW[W]WcWhWkWrWsWuW֋W֎W֙W֤W֭W֮WֹWֻWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W W W WWWWWWWWWWWWW W"W)W1W4W;W<W@WCWFWKWOWPWTWYWאWעWשWׯW׻WW WAWEWeWrWsWvWwWxWyW؈Wbecause֋WbecominguWbeen^W֏WWPWsWwWxWyWbeforeWWWWW<W=W׃W׈WלWׯWWWWW+WLWVW؅WWbothYW^WrW|WW+W;Wboth10.14andmibx-reftableneedupdatingtoreflectthis|VbacuratelyYWaddTWWW[WcWoWքW֌W֐W֚W֛W֣W֥W֩WֽWֿWWW W"W/W1W<WGWIWsWׅWכWמWשWײW׽W׾WWWWWWWW W W WWWW"W%W,W-WFWJWRWVWjW؀W؅WaddalegendtoexplainooptionalcconditionalmandatoryiVaddanew4thlevelheadingatthispointwithatitleofst׾Vdfullstopafterinthetopology֚Vaddshorttextindicatingthestatetable6.27isstand-alonWVaddtextspecifyingthatifthetransitpathfailsthenthe֛VaddthemissingdtotheendofthevariablenametobesourTVaddtimestampsfieldtofigure֌Vaddtotheendofthesentencepage250line41thatstartsVadditionrWָWadditionallyYWaddressTWuW֭W֮WWWaddresscontrolsapifcsVaddressesxWadjustrWWW^cincludeWWZWlWsW/WSWXWYWincluded^WրW.WWincludesZWրWVWincludingjW}WWIWyWؑWincompatible֥Wincomplete W.W W5WDWincompleteheading VincompletenameDVincompletetable VinconsistenciesfWinconsistencyW:WYWinconsistenthW֨W֫W֬WWWWWWWWWWW W W WW#W׆W׈WטWסWWEWSWtWinconsistentandoverlyverboseVVV V V VVinconsistentitalicsVVinconsistentnotationonlines8and4.2VinconsistentperiodSVWWWWWW/WrWuW~WׁW׆WׇWincorrectandinconsistentabbreviationofunitoftime׆VincorrectcodeVincorrectfigurereferencefor]VincorrectfontsizeVincorrectletterintimeunitׇVWW֤Wissue֣W ZbARemove the sentence "A compliant RPR MAC implementation requires at least one of the reconciliation sublayers specified in this standard." since it is already stated that one of the specific PHYs must be implemented, and there is no need to specify that an RS MUST be implemented.cAAt the D2.5 resolution meeting, I was assured that reconciliation sublayers were totally optional, allowing an RPR MAC implementation to incorporate SONET or PacketPHY framers as specified in clause 7, and that only external PHY behaviour were mandatorily specified. The paragraph starting line 48, page 213: "A compliant RPR MAC implementation requires at least one of the reconciliation sublayers specified in this standard. Implementations may include more than one reconciliation sublayer.B" seems to conflict with that assurance and states that AT LEAST ONE must exist to be compliant. If an RPR MAC includes the framers/PHYs, there is no reconciliation layer needed. 2003/10/21abremoveXWZWbWdWgWoW~WրWօW֑W֟W֠W֣W֯WּWWWW@WLWRWׂW׍W׎WלWסWׯW׵W׽WWWWWWWWW#W+WAWQWSWTW\WkWlWyWremovedefinitionofconservativemodefromclause9kVmoveextraindentfromlines3through11repeatforallfVremoveextraindentfromlines41through49Vremovefromrfe0andrfe1օVremovegreybox~VremoveitalicsfromallbutvariablesdosameforjpVremoveitemffrom10.6.2.1.2gVremovelastsentenceofparagraph׍Vremovelines3through17addasentenceaboutprotectionhi׽Vremoveoccurrencesof48-bitfromthispointthroughtheendׂVremovepages227and228RVremoveperiodVVVVremoverprspanerrorstatserrrprspanerrorstatssevandrprspaneLVremovespacefromconservativerateadjuandlrttframereceived#VV)XcwhatYWbWtWxW֋W֔W֘WWWSWUWVWקWרWשW׷W8WdWؔWwhatisechoresponseframedoing8VwhatisthebfbitusedforؔVwhateverָWwhenUWYW^W}WָWֺWּWWWW+W,WBWLWVWWWYWץWצWקWWWsWvWwW؁WؔWwhenusingfalseandtrueasvaluestheyshouldbecapitalizץVצVwhenweaddedtheessesanduasfunctionality/attribitseeLVwhereUWkWuWvW}W֣WָW>WWwhether9WZWW/W=WIWSWWW׃WאWW,WwhileWWָWֺWSWwhiteWWWwhitespacemissingVwhoseWwhyXW:WW0W?Wwhyaretable11.4and11.6separate?Vwhyareyouscreaming0VwidthsWwillUWkWuW։W֊W֝WָW;WFWHWJWPWwillclearallcurrentandpreviousintervalsJVWW%cspecifiedZW_W֣W-W=WMWXWzWWspecifierWspecifyXW֣W0W׷Wspecifying֥W׷WyWspeedGWUWspellWspelledWspellingTW֢W׳W<؉W،WspellingmistakeforvariablesourceaddressextendemissingTVspellingsourceaddressextended؉Vspellingtresholdshouldbethreshold،VsplitvWrWsWwW؈Wsplittable10.28into2tablesoneforconfigurationrequesvVspuriousWsrc؅WstabilitySWstablefWrWstackFWstacksFWstageWWstamp֌WstandaloneWWstandardZW֋W֏W֛WWWWWQWstandard'sUWstandardizationWstandpoint֣W![EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_219`42a7.4b_Add a table row indicating WIS mode SONET/SDH C2 signal label should be 0x1A. (Please verify #)c)C2 value should be supplied for WIS mode.d106 2003/10/237.1\EMichaelFAllen^ Editorial_227a7b As above.c'Remove unnecessary extra 2 empty pages.d112 2003/10/23]EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_248`24a9.1bHReference should be Figure 9.2 since figure 9.3 is an open steered ring.cIncorrect figure reference for: "The identification and behavior of fairness instances in stations that are not edge stations is identical to stations on a closed ring, as illustrated in Figure 9.3." d120 2003/10/23^EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_248`46a9.1bbverify[WversionPWsWwWxWyWveryWWWWWWWviaIWvirtualWvoid}WvrrpWwaiting0WwasWWwayW<Wwe֖W֗W<WweightWWwellWwestFWJWwhatYW^WֻW-W<W8Wwhen֯WWWWW+W.WאWWwhenastationiscongesteddependsonthestationdesignasVwis[Wwith`WfWhWlWyWzWցWւWֈW֏W֒W֓W֔W֕W֜W֝W֠W֡W֢W֤W֧W֫W֬W֭W֮֯WֱWֲWֳWִWֵWֶWַWּWֽW־WWWWWWWWwithagranularitynolargerthan1tickVwithhandlingofthenexttpframe֔Vwithperiodicallythereafter֒VwithsourcestationdidnotstriptheframeasexpectedֈVwiththestationsthendirect֓Vwithin֋W֏WWWwiyh֋WworkWWmTcc2valueshouldbesuppliedforwismode[Vcalculated{WDWLWcalculations}WcallIWWcalledjWWpWcalledstatetableshouldreturntocallerpVcallerpWcallingjWcan}WWWWWW!W&W'W*W+W9WBWJWLWSWUWVWYWWWsWvWwWxWcanbedeferredVcannotkWWcapׄW4IKOcapable֣WcapacityNWcapitalפWcapitalization Wcapitalized`WץWצWcapitals`Wcaps:W !PUcase^WlW֋W֛WWWW+W;W>WIWؑWcasesWcast!WcasualֳWִWֵWֶWcausekWxWCW؈WcausedWcauses^Wcell֡WֺWWWcenter֣W֦WcertainؔWQWchangesWWWVWcharacterօWWcharactersWcheck֣W֩WIWcheck3֜WcheckingvWWchecksYWq$cremoveunnecessaryextra2emptypages\VrenameduWreorderingSWrepaireduWrepeatוWrepetitive׸Wreplace֤WֱWWWWWWWWWWWWMWreplaceasinglelinkmaydetectsignalfailureorsignaldeVlywithcaninphrasemayoptionallybeVreplacemaywithcaninthephraseanychangeinthetopologVreplacemaywithcouldandstatewithstageinthesentenceVreplacemaywithcouldinphrasetrafficmaybewrappedtheVreplacenot-floodedwithnon-floodedֱVreplacestatemachinewithstatemachinesinthesentenceVreplacestationnameattwithstationmanagementaddressattVreplacedaWiWpWreported֙Wrepresentation֫W֬Wreq}WrequestXWfWxW}W֖W֝WrequestsvWrequire֭W֮Wrequired֥WrequiresZWresetWresettingkWresolutionYWZWresolvecWresonֺWop}WbsublayersZWWsubmittedPWsubscriptWsubscriptsטWsubsequentWsuccess--theWsuccess--therequestwassuccessfulVsuccessfulWsuccessfullyWsuch֦W֨W֬WWWAWsuggest9Wsuggested֩WWyWWsummary֯Wsupport֯WW+WSWWsupportedWsupporting֯WsupposedֻWsureLWsurvives.Wswap֐WWswaptheadjustedlrttvaluebetweenrows9.14-2and9.14-3֐VswaptheorderofregularandjumboVswitchUWswitchedXWswitchingSWUWsymbolWsyntaxPW7W@Wt֫WW׵WWt1.105.01-2000XWt10.13jWt10.18jWtabWtableSWUWWW[WeWkWmWnWoWuWvW|WֆWևW֖W֗W֞W֣W֯WּWWWW#W$W4W9W:W<W=W@WDWIWPWWWW W W!W5WBWoWpWsW12Wcillustrated]W֠WWillustrationsWimmediatelyTWW}WWimpactingWimplement֝W%WimplementationZWWBWimplementationsZWimpliesWWWWimply֒W,WimproperWimproperlyWimprove%WinSWWWXWYWZW]W^W_W`WbWdWjWkWmWnWoWpWqWrWtWuWvWzW}WւWօW։W֊W֋W֌W֐W֑W֓W֕W֛W֜W֠W֡W֤W֦W֩W֫W֬W֯WַWָWֺWֻWּWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW%W*W.W1W2W4W5W6W7W8W:W;W=W@WBWDWEWGWHWIWLWPWQWSWinbulletashallnottcframetransmitoverfailurespan8Vinbulleteitshalladdadditionconditionthatlocaltopol7V ;^bA2Correct the NOTE and text on lines 34/35 of the same page as indicated above. A separate comment has also been placed against clause 6.4.4.4. The goal is to have both clauses accurately indicate what happens to fairness packets on an edge-wrapped MAC without conflicting each other (as current achieved).2cAThe note included at the bottom of page 248: "NOTEThe fairness frames transmitted across a span are used by the protection protocol (see 10.7) in order to maintain a keepalive function on the span. The use of fairness frames for this purpose is not visible to the fairness algorithm and is not described within this clause. In the case of an edge station deploying an edge-wrapped datapath, fairness frames are not sent towards or received from the inactive span. Support for the keepalive ^cB function when fairness frames are not sent on an inactive span is beyond the scope of this clause." is incorrect and causes conflict with clause 6.4.4.4. Keepalives on an edge wrapped system must be transmitted both across the failed span (if possible), and duplicated through the edge wrap back to the fairness instance on the opposite ring. Fairness frames received across an edge span are not received by the fairness instance, but are processed by the data path in order to satisfy the kCeep-alive function.d124 2003/10/23_EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_261`5a9.1.3.15b9Change definition of byte inter-arrival to (8 / lineRate)cbyte inter-arrival is specified as (1 / lineRate). Since lineRate is in bits per second, byte inter-arrival should be (8 / lineRate).d153 2003/10/239.1`EMichaelFAllen^ Editorial_269`49a9.3.3.1b@Replace "false" and "true" with "FALSE" and "TRUE" respectively.cbcorrecttypoerrorasdescribedincomentVVcorrect/simplifyxWcorrectly!WyWcorresponding֏W WWMWשWcorrespondingrprtopoimageinetaddrobjectMVcotrol֊WcouldWcoulmn֍Wcount։W֊W9W؆W؈WcountedPWcounter9W>W?WKWUWcounter64BWcountersCWIWKWcountingXWcountsPW؆WcoveredUWYWeach^WcWwWechoXWedgeYWlWedge-wrapYWedge-wrapped^WedgechangelWeitherWWւWeitherreplacehigh-preferencewithhighpreferenceւVendTWmWnWwWensurewWensureclearsecmacisinitializedtofalseandisclearedatwVequationsrWerrorVWerrors}WexamplefWkW}WexcessivedWexpectedֈWexplaintWexplaintheuseofindextVextendedTWextrauWextraneousbWfgWfailedYWfairnessYW^Wfalse`WkWwWfddcWWbaccurately^Wachieved^WacronymWacrossYW֨W׎WאWWactVWactionyWzW֣WּW7W@WactionsVWactiveuW W׏WactivelyאWactivitiesשW>cwrappingYW֋W֛W֣WW1WTWVWXWwriteup,Wwrong֎W֙W֟W֠W֡W֢WWWWEWIWכWWWWWXWYW؃WwrongcharacterstyleVwrongclauseenumeration֎Vwrongcross-referenceformatכVwrongframetypeVwrongnameforvariableXVwrongreferenceVYVwrongspellings6neversee֢Vwrongstationnameincellbtitle֡Vwrongtextallowingthisinformationisreported֙Vwrongtextframestransmittedfromtheoneendstation֟Vwrongtextinsentenceframesthatdestinedtoandinsetenc֠VwtrWxxxvaliddataOWxxxxBWyes+W?GUSER.UPRcechoXWW;W>W?WIWechoresponseframe8WedgeUWYW]W^WgW֋W֣W֦W֨W֩WWWWWhW؄WWexampleeWfWexcessivedWexcessiveitalisizationin10.4.1.5and10.4.1.6dVexchangecWexistZWexpectedcWexplanationXWexplicitlyXWextendeTWexternalZWextra\WfgWfactfWfailed^WfairnessYW]W^Wfalse`WfaultyfWfdd`Wfe`WfeelWWfigure]WfirstUWbWfittedWWfollowingXWforTWWW[W]W^WcWeWfWformXWfoureWframeXW`WframersZWframers/physZWframesUWYW^W`WfromUWYW^WcWgWfrttcWfunction^WgetUWhappyYWhasYWhavefWhaving`WhearingYWhowWWYWiWWXWYWZWbWcWiamnottoohappywiththeresolutionofcomment192fromdYV.0^technicalSWUWWWXWYWZW[W]W^W_WaWbWcWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWpWqWrWsWtWuWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WWրWցWփWֈW։W֊W֋W֌W֍W֏W֐W֑W֒W֓W֔W֕W֖W֗W֘W֛W֜W֝W֞W֣W֤W֥W֦W֧W֨W֩W֫W֬W֭W֮W֯WֱWֲWֳWִWֵWֶWַWָWֹWֺWֻWּWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W#W$W%W&W'W(W)W*W+W,W-W.W/W0W1W5W6W7W8W9W;W<W=W>W?W@WBWDWIWJWKWLWOWPWQWSWTWUWVWXW׊W׍W׎WאWדWןWשW׫W׬W׮WׯW?cclinkedWWlinksTWWWlistW:W@WזWW9W:W;Wlistisnotsortedalphabetically9V:V;Vlisted}W"WliteralױWlitleրWlocalYW֣WָWW7WVWlocalize!WlocationּWWWWlofWlogicUWIWlong֏W)WבWlongerrWָW־W-WhWlW؂W؍WlooksWW@WWWloophWiWqWzWWloopinghWloopshWqW{Wlose։W֊WlossVWlost։W֊WWlotWWWlotsVWXWlotsofwordingchangesVVlowւW*WlowercaseפWlrttbW}W֐W֖W֗W֝W%WSWzWWؑWlrttrequestframesmustbewrapeligiblesee9.5֖Vlrttresponseframesmustbewrapeligiblesee9.5֗Vlrttdefect:W։W֊WֺWWmanage&W'WmanagementWmandatorilyZWmannerkWmanualWmanyWW,W9Wcbyteinter-arrivalisspecifiedas1linerate_VbyteseWָWשWؑWc`WgW}WW:WVW}Wc2[Wecbehavior]WbehaviourZWbehevior1WbehindWbeing֣W֤W֨WֺWWWIW׍W׭WWbelieveYWWbeliveZWbelow}WWWbelownLWbestW%WbeteenNWbetter%WeWbetweenkWֳWִWֵWֶWWNWVWWbeyond^WֲWWWbfؔWbidirectionalXWbigWWbinWbinisbothunnecessaryandnotnecessarilyobviousVbinaryrW֫W֬Wbinaryrepresentationofgroupbitinconsistentwithiso158֫VbitgW֫WWWKW؀WؔWbits_WWGWblankWWWRWblockUWWblockingWblsrXWbodyWWFWPWQWRWSWTWbottom^Wbound*WboundariesWWBWboundaryBWbox~WWWWAWbracketesWbreak{WWbreakingXWbridges֥Wbridging֥WbroadcastTWbroadcastingTWW8W:W@W `cAWithin the paragraph: "FDD frames are sent in pairs, with one frame in the pair having an sc value of CLASS_A0 and fe value of false, and the other having an sc value of CLASS_C and an fe value of true. An FDD frame is invalid if it is received but its associated FDD frame of the other service class is not received." the "false" and "true" should be capitalized since they are defined constants.d16603/10/21aEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_292`35a9.5bFReplace topoDB.myInfo.conservativeMode by myTopoInfo.conservativeMode.cNtopoDB.myInfo.conservativeMode is now replaced by myTopoInfo.conservativeMode. 2003/10/21bEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_293`28a9.5.2bPRemove the extraneous letter "2" from the "adjusted LRTT" column of Row 2 and 3.cwIn Row 2 and 3 of table 9.14, I do not understand what the "2" is before the first LRTT on each "adjusted LRTT" column. 2003/10/219.14cEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_292bfigure]W}W֌W֤W֬WWWWWWWAWךWWWEWfigure-cell֤W׃W1Wfigures֯W׉WfiguretexttickWfill WWfillinringlet0Vfillintherowcorrespondingto0002 Vfiltered-W֪Vfixthetransmitstatemachinesuchthatframesthatarenot֦VflagWflagsequenceVfloodedֲWfollowingYW֣W֯WWWW Wfollows}W֬WfontWforYWeWhWjWkWqWvWxW}W֘W֞W֥W֯WֺWWWWWWWWWW Wforallstatetablesinthetwostatecolumnscolumn1and5ֺVforthestage2databaseupdatet10.13andprotectionstatejVformatփW֯Wformats֯WforwardedYWforwardingYWfourWfourtimesonthispageVframeXW}WֈW֔W֣W֯WַWֹWֻWWWWWWWWWWc`16a9.5bAdd a variables definition section to 9.5 that includes FRTT and FDD. The definition should include the units/granularity of each variable and any default values to be used in the absense of any completed computation.cI do not see any attempt to resolve comment # 245 from the previous draft D2.5. At a minimum, after an e-mail exchange with the editors, I expected to see a default initial value for FRTT (=1ms). d19403/10/21dEMichaelFAllen^ Editorial_321`43a10.4.1.5b5Remove excessive italics in 2 paragraphs noted above.c1Excessive italisization in 10.4.1.5 and 10.4.1.6. 2003/10/21eEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_334`23a10.6.1bKCorrect the number of bytes shown for the 3 checksum values in table 10.10.cThe example values for checksum, neighborChecksum[0] and neighborChecksum[1] should only contain 4 (four) bytes of checksum data, not 6. 2003/10/2110.10fEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_334`8a10.6.1 calgorithm^WWW=Walign^WalignedeWallgW֋W֝WְWֺWWWW,W9W:WBWCWHWIWJWKWOWPWQWWWW5W6Wallofresponsecontrolisnotsetto16Vallread-writeattributesinthistablearenon-volatileHValltexthasbeenmadeboldwhichmakeitunclearwhataretVallthedescriptionsareincorrectoratleastincompleteth5Vallowed;WprobablyshouldnotisVandSWUWYWZW]W^W`WbWdWeWfWgWjWkWlWpWrWsWvWxWzW}WրWցWւWքWօW։W֊W֐W֒W֜W֞W֠W֣W֤W֥W֩WְWֳWִWֵWֶWָWֺWֻWּWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWannexրWannexkincludessolitleadditionalinformationandissosրVforebWuWXcidonotseeanyattempttoresolvecomment245fromtheprecVidonotunderstandwhythefollowingtextneedstoexplicitXVidon'tseehowitmakessensetousedefaultringletselect=Vidon'tseetheusefulnessofthisintroductiontothebasic׽Vidon'tthinkweshouldbereferringtohigherlayerprotocoVstsentenceneedstobecomeashallandd;Vithinkthatthemacshouldcountallbadfcsframesregardl9Viwasleftwonderingforawhilewithstatetable6.27howiWVi'dKWiamtail׬W׭Wiamtailisnotdefinedanywhereseealsopage292line34׬VidW:W=WidealײWidentical]WWWidentification]Widentifier=WidlefWieee֤WWieee/racWifXWZW^W`WxW{W֏W֘W֝WָW*W+W9W=W>W?WIWLWOWSWTWקW׮Wifastationisnotabletoresponditshallnotrespondat֝V֝WiiWW>a5.4.1.2T֭֮ڃ؉5.4.4.1փ؊5.6.5.4\6HWJWKWLWMWNWOWPW6.1֪6.1.5WoW6.1.5.1.2pW6.1.5.3.2qW6.2،6.2.1؋6.2.1.1ׅ֫׈6.2.1.2քt6.2.26.4׉6.4.4֨6.4.4.3ֳ؂10.14|W10.18kWnWoW10.19rW10.20rW10.21kW10.28vWwW10.6.2.1.2gW11SW11.5.1.5XW14/15oW15yW16mW17SW18SW2YWbWdWjWqWvW}W25zW26zW3UWYWbWeW31kW32/33nW34/35^W385rW386rW4UW5SW51rW6YW6.19UW6.27WW6.4.4.4YW^W6.6.4WW6.6.4.4WW7lW8_W9YW9.1YW9.2]W9.3]W9.5cWaZW[W^WcWfWjWrWuW}WasecondarymacaddresstableshouldbestoredoutsidethetuVabove\W^WdWabsensecW|bsignal[WWWWWW WTWsignaledWWWsignalfailWsignalingXWsimilar}WWXWWWcWsimilarly׎WvWsimplestUWsimplicity(WsimplyUW-Wsimplyspecifywhatisthefilteredvalueaccuracyrequireme-VsimulationsWwWxWyWsinceXWZW]W/WsingleWsingle-queueWsinglechokeindoWsituationYWsixWsizeWWWoWsizesWslewWslowUWsmallerW/Wsmoothed}WsnippetסWsnumױWsoSWWW&W'W.WזWףW؀W؆Wsolution׆WkWmWnWuWwW{W֣W֦W֨W֩WֺW־Wstatefinal֣Vstatetable10.21shouldbetheonlyplacethatsetsthevarkVstatedZWstatementrWWstatementsrWstates־WstationֈW֋W֘W֛W֝W֞W֦WWstations֓WָWWWWWQhEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_319`7a10.3.7bQChange loop terminator for "ringlet" to be consistent with the rest of clause 10.cWithin the MismatchedProtection(), the ringlet loop seems inconsistent with the latest ringlet looping. New loops seem to be of the form: for (ringlet = 0; ringlet < 2; ringlet += 1) rather than the "ringlet <= 1" form.d278jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23iEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_344`8a10.6.3.2b!Replace "r+= 1" by "ringlet += 1"cQIncorrect ringlet loop incrementor. "r+= 1" should be replaced by "ringlet += 1"d337jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23jEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_345`42a10.6.3.3jbFor the Stage 2 database update (T10.13) and protection state machines (T10.18), include the "RETURN" state as the terminal next-state which allows a natural return to the calling state machine.cAClause 3.4 describes a "state" called "RETURN" used for state machines that terminate and return to the calling state machine or function. By including a "RETURN" end state, the following text would be more compatible with the state machine rules defined in clause 3.4. "Upon reaching the FINISH state, execution of this state machine stops until it is next called by the protection state machine."d343jdup 342mAccepted-DuplicatevCRG: Duplicate of #342.wAccepted-Duplicate 2003/10/23kEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_346`42a10.6.3.3ate (T10.13) and protection state machines (T10.18), include the "RETURN" state as the terminal next-state which allows a natural return to the calling state machine.cchnical, Non-binding_345`42a10.6.3.3/BconlyUWZWeW֋W֦WּWWW&W'W,WLWTWWWW)W.WWWvW~Wonlythedestinationstationmaydothis.Vonto֣W֦W;WAWooopsdWooopswhathappendtofigure12.2whyisitpartiallyontabdVopcode>W?W)W>WopengWuW{Wopen/closed{Woperands?WoperationXWsWwWoperationalGWoperations֣WoperatorַWYWopinion[W,W.W9WCWIWKWMWOWTWVWorder^W}Worganization>W?WorientationWotherWW`WfWkWqW{W֣W֤WWWWWWWSWUWWWotherripW֐WotherwiseָW&W'WouiWoutXWYWuW֤WWWoutsideWover8Woverlapping~WoverlyWWWW W W WW$WoverlyverboseandinconsistentnotationVoverridingxWp510DW >cedge-wrapYWedge-wrapped^Wedge-wrapping֋WfWeditorscWeffectYWeitherւWempty\WendSWjWmWnW{WentriesgWrWentryvWxWequationrWerrorxWevenYWeverythinguWexampleeWfWsW}WexceedsmaxsecmactWuW{WexceptionsgWexcessivedWexcessiveitalisizationin10.4.1.5and10.4.1.6dVexchangecWexecutionjWexistZWexpectedcWexplanationXWexplicitlyXWextendeTWexternalZWextra\WfgWfactfWfailed^WfairnessYW]W^W։W֊W֋Wfalse`WkWwWyWfast։W֊WfaultuWfaultyfWfdd`Wfe`WfeelWWfigure]W}WfigureduWfinishjWfirstUWbW֋WfittedWWfollow}WfollowingXWjWrWforTWWW[W]W^WcWeWfWhWjWrWsWtWvWxW}WWփW։W֊W lbAReplace Row 7 with: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- CHECK_ : myTopoInfo.protConfig == WRAPPING && : 7 : containmentActive = TRUE : UPDATE_VALIDITY EDGE_CC : edgeChange && : : : : ! myTopoInfo.spanEdgeStatus [ri] : : : -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------@A* 33  33*cTable 10.13 Row 7 should include the "action test" within the Row 7 condition. Since Row 8 is a default case that does nothing but move to the UPDATE_VALIDITY state, this is clearer, and achieves the same result.d349jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/2310.13mEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_350`14a10.6.3.3e; )csbmachinejWuWwW{W֦W֩W־WIWVWWWWWWWWWWWmadeYWPW׎Wmaintain֥WmakefWqW֋W֥WW4W:W<W=WmakeexamplevaluesmoreconsistentwithafunctionalringfVmakeloopterminatorringlet2forconsistencyqVmakingאWmanageableבWmandateWmandatory=WmanualWmanyYWmapped֯Wmapping Wmappings֯WmarkWWmarksWmatch9WPW׈WדWmaxָWֽWmax-accessPWmaximumֿWmayWWkWWעW׻WmeansWWmeasurementSWmedia׼WmeetsXWmemories.WmergeֺW׸Wmergethetwosetsofprotocoldescriptionsintoonesetof׸VmessageWmessages֐WWmessagessֹWmethodxWmib|W9WKWmight1WmillisecondSWUWmillisecondsUWmin*Wminimum<WminusOWmiscablingYWmissed1W5cgetUWzW9WBW؇WgetswW+Wgive%WIW׿WgivenVW؄WglobalWgo?Wgoing+WgoneTWgoodWgotLWSWgrammarי׹߃ (=؎granularitiesWgranularityWgreateruWgrey~WTWgreyboxTVgroup֫Wgrouped*WgroupsrWsWwWguaranteesWguesses%Wguidance_WhvWhandleUWWW@WAWIWKWPWQWTWhavefW֧WWWWWIWUWhaving`WֺWhcperfcurrentcountBWhcperfintervalcountBWPWhcperftotalcountBWheadWhead-of-lineWheadingWWWWWhearingYWhelp}WhelpsWhere.WhexWhiddenWhigh-preferenceւWhighestW!Whistory%Whold֤WhopָWhopssW}W4WhopstocongestionָWhowWWYW֏W֛W֣W.W9W=WSWTWmb>Change the next state "END" in table 10.13 Row 16 to "RETURN".ctChange the next state "END" in table 10.13 Row 16 to "RETURN" consistent with clause 3.4.1 state table description.d350jsup 342m SupersededvCRG: Superceded by #342.w Superseded 2003/10/2310.13nEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_364`48a10.7.2.4bAChange the next state "END" in table 10.18 Row 32/33 to "RETURN".cwChange the next state "END" in table 10.18 Row 32/33 to "RETURN" consistent with clause 3.4.1 state table description.d363jsup 342m SupersededvCRG: Superceded by #342.w Superseded 2003/10/2310.18default case that does nothing but move to the UPDATE_VALIDITY state, this is clearer, and achieves the same result.d349jAccept suggested remedy.mAccepted 2003/10/2210.13mEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_350`14a10.6.3.3b>Change the next state "END" in table 10.13 Row 16 to "RETURN".TcrecognisingkWreconciliationZW֣Wrecord9WredundantWWWW#W$WrefDWreferְWWDWrefered֐Wreference]WfW|WրW֤WW:WEWGWZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWrWtWuWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}W~WW׀W׃WחWתWWW2WHWYWaWbWreferencetoannexbdoesnotuseframemakercross-reference|Vreferencetoannexcdoesnotuseframemakercross-reference}Vreferencetoannexedoesnotuseframemakercross-referencezV{Vreferencetoannexfdoesnotuseframemakercross-referenceV׀Vreferencetoannexhdoesnotuseframemakercross-referencevVreferencetoannexjdoesnotuseframemakercross-referencewVreferencetoannexldoesnotuseframemakercross-referencexVyV}d402vWG: Accept suggested remedy. The editors will determine a sufficiently clear way to clarify which fields in the topology database will be updated, which may be a descriptive figure.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23 int txRinglet; Frame txFrame; txFrame.controlType = CT_LRTT_RSP; txFrame.da = rxFrame.sa; txFrame.tailLatencyIn = rxframe.tailLatencyIn; txFrame.tailLatencyOut = GetTimeStamp(); txRinglet = (rxFrame.ri == RINGLET_0B) ? RINGLET_1:RINGLET0; SendFrame(txRinglet, txFrame); } void LrttRequestTransmit(new_request) { int ringlet, txRinglet, hop; Frame frame; for(ringlet = 0, ringlet < 2; ringlet += 1) { for (hop = 1; hop <= totalHopsRx[ringlet]; hop += 1) { if(topoStability == UNSTABLE) return; if(new_request || topoEntry[ringlet][hop].lrtt == NULL) { (vwgtuvwxyz{|}ֻֽ֖֛֕֗֘֜֝֞Ѓ()5678"$ؘؔwhenuWwhere֘WwhetheruWwhichuW}W֛WUWwillfWuWxW}W֘W֝W֞WּW1W2W7WTWUWW"W$W؏WؔWwithuW֕W֘W֝WּW1WSW"WwithdrawnyW4W6WWwithdrawnbycommenteryV4V6VVwithinuWwordsrWwrap֖W֗W֛WwrittenuWmDcchecksumeWrWSWchecksums--ifWchecksumvalidfWchoice=WVWchokeָWןWchoose9Wchose9Wchoses9WchunkשWclarificationWclarify}WW;Wclarifythepurposeofrows21and22Vclass`WW=WWWWclassa֏WW]WclassaisaserviceclassnotapriorityVclassa1Wclassa1/classb&W'WclassbWWclassc֏W]WclassesWclauseYWZW^WjWmWnWpWrWրWփW֋W֎W֏W֘W֫W֬W֯WWW0W1WBWPWQWUWVWZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWׂWהWתWWEW[WgWhWjWkWtWclause10variablesreferencedbyclause9havechangedjVwVclearwestJWclient֥WָW9W;W=W>WPWclientsָWocuntiljWֲWunusuallyWunwrapped)Wup׉WWWupdatelWְWWWWWupdateallfigureandtablereferencesְVupdatedzWWupdatingkW؀WuponXWjW؏Wupper*Wupper-casemWnWupstreamָW!W+WusageWWWWuse^WfWpW{WւWWW=WBWIWXWZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀WטWסWWWWAWuseofringlet1andr1shouldbereplacedbyotherriamacpVused^WjWkWtW}W֑W֤WָWּWWWWW,WBWIWJWSW׃WתW׭WWWEWtWؔWW=WWusersWusesW#W=WטW׭WusinguWWVWץWצWusually׃WWWW8breplacerow7withlVreplaces0withs1incellbtitle֡Vreplaceseewithsees֢VreplacesomesensiblecommentֈVreplacesource-stations3withsource-stations1ցVreplacetable9.10withaversionthatconformstotheindicwVreplacetable9.13withaversionthatconformstotheindicxVreplacetable9.9withversioncontainedind26clause9raspdsVreplacetextthatreferstoreactstateonpages365and366־Vreplacethedestinationaddressextendedparameterisrequir֭Vreplacethenexttpframe֔Vreplacethesourceaddressextendedparameterisrequiredto֮Vreplacethetopologydatabasethendirect֓Vreplacethisillustratedwiththisisillustrated֠Vecmacaddress1zWsecmacaddress2zWsecondaryuWxWsectioncWsendframe}WsentYWsentenceZWseparate^WsetkWsetskWshortWWshould[W]WcWkWuWshowneW ubAA "secondary MAC address" table should be stored outside the topoEntries which is built upon the topoDB becoming valid. The defect checking should be done as part of that state table, and the extra table should be populated from that state machine. Then, the ATD reception should just store the info in the topoEntry table until processed later. Active configurations should reference the new secondary MAC address table rather than the topoDB.cAI see a problem with the ExceedsMaxSecMac function related to an open ring. Assume an open ring, with 17 (or more) of the stations using a single secondary [unique] MAC address. Everything is OK, since ri=0 secMacs + ri=1 secMacs == 17. Now assume the fault is repaired. At this point, each node on the ring starts receiving TP & ATD frames from its distant neighbors before the ring is determined to be closed. During this window where the ring is closed, but TP has not yet figured that out,croutinekWmWnWrWsWwWroutinenamesareupper-casenVroutinenamesshouldbeupper-casemVrowUWVWbWlWmWnWoWvWxWyW֜W֣WָWֺWWWW$W4W5W6W>W?WDWW7W@WCWGW[WsWvWwWxW؈Wrow1doesnotmakesense7V@Vrow10oftable10.28doesnotreallymakesenseifsecmac1cxVrow23oftable10.28doesnotneedtoclearduplicatesecmacyVrow29[VrowbordersCVGVWsensexWsentYW^W`WsequencekWsequentiallyWWservice`WsetkWwWxWsettingkWshortWWshouldUW[W_W`WeWfWiWlWpWqWsWxWshouldn'tfWshowfWshowingsWsinceUWWWXW_W`WlWuWyWsingleuWsoXWfWsomefWgWkWsonetZWsourceTWspanYW^WspecificallyXWYW Dc10.21kWּWֽW10.28vWxWyWzW10.28-9֜W10.29֞W10.3.1.2EW10.3.1.2crossreferenceiswronginquiteafewrowstheseEV10.4.1.4W10.4.1.5dW10.4.1.6dW10.4.4ؑW10.5.1.6:W10.6.2.1.2gW10.6.3.3W10.7^WVW10.7.1.1WVW10.7.1.3VW10.7.3.2W10.8YW10.8.1:W10.8.2:W10.8.3:W10.9.2.1:W100}W100msec֝W11SWְWW0WbWcW11.2-3?W11.2-4?W11.2-5?W11.2-6?W11.4IW?W11.4.2@W֣W16xW17uW18SW192YW1mscW2\WbWhWsWvWxWzW}W֣WָWW204W21W213ZW22W23yW23:16֬W245cW248YW^W25zW252W253W256W26zW27W3bWkW֣W֯W3-10ֺW3-8ֺW3.2a֤W3.4jW֬WW3.4.1mWnW32/33nW33:24֬W34uWָW= uvBtion, at least 32 secondary MAC addresses shall be supported. 4. Validation of maximum secondary MAC addresses shall continue to be supported (assuming use of secondary MAC addresses is supported by a station) based on the maximum number of secondary MAC addresses substituted by a station. 5. In Clause 6, ringlet selection at a station will utilize the maximum number of secondary MAC addresses allowed by a station. 6. Each station shall be able to report the secondary MAC addresses that arCe recognized by that station. A bit shall be provided in the topology database that indicates each secondary MAC address that is being used. In addition, the editors will ensure that D2.7 is consistent with these rules: 7. Ringlet selection, on a given ringlet, uses secondary MAC information that is contained in a valid topology entry, and that is marked in use. 8. If new secondary MAC address information is received and topology is valid, or when topology becomes valid: a. The new info<nB_`ֺ֤ԃ0Rפ ր֥֯у2HOcׇׁט̓΃σЃу҃ӃԃLR0ֱ M]b|}ȃe@ֿ%&(,-pq׽&CUa؋Pցֲ =gmvz׊ڃ1Trswxؔ`_~[׳WgeneratingָWgenerationrW[cneighborsuW֛WneitherYW+WneverwW֢WWؘWnewhWWփWWnewly֣W֦WnextjWmWnW֜WֺW5WAWW5WؘWnicefWnoYWZWfWrW֒W֦WָW־WWWWW)W6W?WUWׂW׍WוWױW׷WWWWWWWWWWAWWWaWbWhWlW؂W؍WؔWؘWnofloodisnolongervalid؂VnoneedforafunctionthatreturnsthevalueofaglobalvaVnoneedtocalloutonepieceofatdprocessingVnoneedtolistdetailsofrfc3418VnoneedtopointtosuchadepthVnoneedtospecifythattheatdframesaredistinctanddoin׷Vnoneedtousefigure-rowimmediatelybelowafigureVnopointinsayingetcwhenonlyonemoreremainsWVnoreferencetomacontrolindicationdefinitionaVbVnosuchliteralfddsnumalsoaliteralwouldnotmakesenseױVWy_397`40a 10.13.1.4b Replace row 15 action with "--".cwRow 23 of table 10.28 does not need to clear duplicateSecMacAddressDefect to FALSE since it is already done on row 15.d392vWG: Withdrawn by commenter.w Withdrawn 2003/10/2310.28zEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_397`46a 10.13.1.4bReplace row 25 action with: myTopoInfo.secMacAddress1 = secMac1Config; Replace row 26 action with: myTopoInfo.secMacAddress2 = secMac2Config;cThe actions of rows 25 and 26 in table 10.28 seem incorrect. It sems like it should be myTopoInfo versions of the secMacAddress[1|2] that get updated, not the topoEntry versions.d393vWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/2310.28bprocessingvW<WשWWWWWWproducingWproductנWpropagateWpropagatedYWproperWpropose9W=Wproposetochangethedefinitionandassociatestatetablee9Vproposetomakeringletidmandatoryforflushrequest=VprotchangedּWprotconfiglWprotect,Wprotected/protection<WprotectionjW־W1W=WSWUWVWXW׽W׾WWW,W5W<Wprotectionmode6WWprotocols%W(W/W׶WprovideWWprovideanillustrationthatshowstheseinterfacesastheyVprovided֭W֮W֯W)Wprovidedwheneverthedestinationaddressextendedparameter֮Vprs-10WprspanerrorxxxxxbaddPWprspanerrorxxxxxbaddandrprspanerrorxxxxxbadallversionofPVpse4Wpsw4WpurposeWpurposesYW֯Wput.Wq֣WWIWqrxadjustthequeueVqrxadjust--thequeueVquantified/WDcclosed]WuW{WcodeWֺWWؓWؖWcolonפWcolumnbWW@WWsWwWxWcolumnsֺWcombinePWQWcomingWcomma׋WcommentWWYWcWֈW֣WָWWW<WPW_Wcomments֤WcommitCWcommon֤Wcommonality+Wcommunicated-WcompanyWcomparingWWWcomplex(WcompliantZWWcomponentנWcomprehendvWcomputation-Wcomputations-WcomputedrWcomputingָWןWconcept}Wconcern?WconditionkWlWoWֺWW"W%W+W7WTWconditionskWW$W%WconfigxWconfigurationvW:WconfiguredWXWconflictYWZW^WconflictsgWconfusing֞Wconfusion/errors}Wcongested+Wcongested-uncongeste%WcongestionָWWcongestionmayalsocreateun-fairnessforbesteffortb-eirVconnectionfWconsequencesBWIvbfؔWbinaryrWbituWbitsWؔWboth֛WTWbroadcastTWbymWnWrWuWyW֖W֗W֘W֛W1W4W6W8WTWUWVW׼WWbytesؑWcuWcanuW֛WּWcase֘W֛WchangepW֘W1WWWWchangebeforereachinganedgetobeforereachingoneselforVchanged֖W֗WchecksumfWWchecksumvalidfWclarify}W֞W1WclausepWuWؔWclear}WcleareduWcoؔWcommentWWWWW5WؒWpbareSWYWrW֦W֨W֯WֲWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW&W'W,W-W:WBWLWPW׶WWWAWEW\W؆WaroundYWWWarriving׋WarrowWarrowedWWarrowsWasVW\W^WjWuW}WֈW֋W֘W֬WֹWWWWWWWWWWW!W%W'W(W1W9W:W=WBWLWPWVWWWXWאWםWנWעWקWׯWWWWWWWWWW WWW(WAW_WaWbWiWyWneedtodefineexaminecontrolframeandselectco<VatduWSWattvW֘Wattribute W WWKWSWattributesOWavoiduWawaitingWawayTWb֡WWWW1WVWאWזWכWbreceivesignalVbackYWkWֿWWכWbad9WPW!cpacketUW؄WpacketphyZWpacketsUW[W\W؀W؈WpageYWZW^WWְWֺWWWWWWWW0W7W@WAWGWדWטW׬W׭W׸W5WؑWpage252line36shouldbes1tos4ands5tos6Vpage253line4shouldbeies1s4ands5s6Vpage253line5shouldberatesofstationss5ands6Vpage331line260Vpage644line1throughpage645line47Vpage9line11Vpages\WWWWWRWטWpages227and228arebothblankRVpair`W֏W}W~Wpairs`WparaSWparagraphZW`WrWWcWparallelWWIWparameter=WparametersBWWparensWparity؀Wpart}W֋WWWYW׎WWWpartiallydWpartlyfWpartsWpassa0؃Wpassa1؃WpassedאWpassing%WpassseqؗWpassthroughUW׼W؏WWSWWWW!crowsSWzWֆWևW֐W֞WֺWWWEWsWwW؅Wrows1118oftable6.20aremissingstatenamesinthestarSVrows4and5؅VrowsdescriptionshouldappearaftertableֆVևVrprZW֥WFWHWJWKWSWrprgeneralHWrprgeneral4HVrprifstationsonringDWrprifstatscontrolcomCWrprifstatscontrolcouJWrprifstatscontrolcoutoclearwestforexampleJVrprifstatscontrolperJWrprifstatscontroltabCWrprifstatscontroltabstatesJWrprspancountersinterOWrprspanerrorcountersLWPWrprspanerrorintervalPWrprspanerrorstatsbadQWWrunonsentence֪VrunningWWJWLWrunsIWrx}W։W֊W֣W֩WrxframeIWrxtpframe4Wrxtpframeese4Vrxtpframeesw4Vrxtpframepse4Vrxtpframepsw4Vs1ցWWs3ցWs4Ws5Ws6֢WWs7ցWs9ցWsa֭W֮WֹWsacompactָWWYWU{EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_395`25a 10.13.1.3bJRework this function...possibly integrating into validation state machine.cThe function ExceedsMaxSecMac should not be recalculating OPEN/CLOSED ring. This is done by the topo validation state machines. This function should use that calculated value. Also, if one end is temporarily open & the other closed, these loops may break.d387vWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23|EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_399`51a10.14.1b=Both 10.14 and MIB X-ref Table need updating to reflect this.ciThe variable conservativeMode seems to be the preferred reference rather than conservativeRateAdjustment.d399vWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23}EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_400`26a10.14.2breference rather than conservativeRateAdjustment.d399 2003/10/22}EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_400`26a10.14.2b7֞^Technical, Non-binding_402`9a10.14.3bDivide the table into two tables, one for the station generating the LRTT request and receiving the response, and another for the station receiving the LRTT request and generating the response.cATable 10.29 is confusing, and the rows description is not enough.d404vAWG: The row descriptions will be expanded to clarify Table 10.29.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/2310.29t = GetTimeStamp(); txRinglet = (rxFrame.ri == RINGLET_0B) ? RINGLET_1:RINGLET0; SendFrame(txRinglet, txFrame); } void LrttRequestTransmit(new_request) { int ringlet, txRinglet, hop; Frame frame; for(ringlet = 0, ringlet < 2; ringlet += 1) { for (hop = 1; hop <= totalHopsRx[ringlet]; hop += 1) { if(topoStability == UNSTABLE) return; if(new_request || topoEntry[ringlet][hop].lrtt == NULL) {  }bAInclude a descriptive example similar to Example Figure in "LRTT Example.pdf". Update LrttRequestHandle (), LrttRequestTransmit () and LrttResponseHandle () as follows to fix errors: void LrttRequestHandle(frame) { int txRinglet; Frame txFrame; txFrame.controlType = CT_LRTT_RSP; txFrame.da = rxFrame.sa; txFrame.tailLatencyIn = rxframe.tailLatencyIn; txFrame.tailLatencyOut = GetTimeStamp(); txRinglet = (rxFrame.ri == RINGLET_0B) ? RINGLET_1:RINGLET0; SendFrame(txRinglet, txFrame); } void LrttRequestTransmit(new_request) { int ringlet, txRinglet, hop; Frame frame; for(ringlet = 0, ringlet < 2; ringlet += 1) { for (hop = 1; hop <= totalHopsRx[ringlet]; hop += 1) { if(topoStability == UNSTABLE) return; if(new_request || topoEntry[ringlet][hop].lrtt == NULL) {  }bC frame.controlType = CT_LRTT_REQ; frame.da = topoEntry[ringlet][hop].macAddress; frame.latencyTimestamp = getTimeStamp(); frame.tailLatencyIn = 0; frame.tailLatencyOut = 0;. if(new_request) topoEntry[ringlet][hop].lrtt = NULL; txRinglet = (ringlet == RINGLET_0) ? RINGLET_1 : RINGLET_0; SendFrame (txRinglet, frame); D } } } return; } void LrttResponseHandle(frame) { int hop, index, ringlet; index = FindIndex(frame); ringlet = frame.ri; topoEntry[ringlet][index].lrtt = (currentTime - frame.latencyTimestamp) + (index * advertisementInterval) - (frame.tailLatencyOut - frame.tailLatencyIn); for (ringlet = 0; ringlet < 2; ringlet += 1) { for (hop = 1; hop <= totalHopsRx[ringl9`~EMichaelFAllen^ Editorial_444`5a12.3.3.1bRemove grey box.c2Strange grey box overlapping top portion of table.d494 2003/10/2312.3EMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_696`30aHcI cannot see any need for the code block within "#define NEW_CODE 1" on page 696 through to (including the large number of blank pages, page 708.d577 2003/10/23րEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_741`1aKb=Include the content of Annex K in clause 10 & remove annex K.cAnnex K includes so litle additional information and is so small, that it should be included at the reference point of Clause 10.d581jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvuCRG: Remove annex K. Also remove the sentence "This scenario (also described in K.1) ..." on lines 53-54 on page 351.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23fied 2003/10/22TThe source station is S1 (and not S3) and the destination station is S7 (and not S9)d12 2003/10/21A@bincludescW9WincludingSWinconsistencyYWeasethemaximumkeepalivetimeoutbackto50msaddclaֿVindWindependentW9WindependentlyֿWindextW}W֘WindexingWindicateYW^WֿWindicated^WindicatesWW W W W WW=WOWindicatesaninterfaceerrorforthecurrentdatarequest VindicatingWW[WWindication֯WWWWWWWindications֛WWWinfouWinformation֙Winformative֯WinitialWinitializedwWinlcude1WinsertW>Winsertarowbetween5and6torejecttheinvalidoamreque>VinsideWinsignificantWinstabilityYWinstanceYWinstancesWinstead֤Wint}Wintegrating{WintentionYWinter-arrival_Winterface֘WWWW WFWKWinterfaces֯WWinternal֯W<WintervalCWKWLWOWWcformXWhWֺWWIWformalWWformatֺWMWVWכWformulaטWנWforward>WהWתWZW[W֤WfoureWfragmentפWfragmentedWframeXW`W֔W֥W֩WַWָWֹWW&W'W8W;W=W>W?WIWTWUWVWWWW>WZWframemakerZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀WframersZWframers/physZWframesUWYW^W`WuW։W֊W֏W֖W֗W֟W֠W֣W֦W֧W֨W֩WֲWWW9W?WIWPWSWTWWW׍W׎WאW׷WWWWWWWWZWframesarenotinaclassbuthaveaclassvalueVVframesinitiallytransmittedwithps1appeartohavebeens֧VfreeJW-W)csupplied[W֭W֮Wsupport^W+WLWWQWsupportcolumnisnotexplainedandnotfullycorrectVsupportableWsupportedW&W'W>WWsupposed֣WקWWsure؄WsurroundingWWswapped֐WswitchXWswitchedXWswitchingֳWִWֵWֶWSWUWVWsymbol$WWsyntaxHWOWPWםמ״$WsyntaxsequenceofrprspanprotectionentHVsysnameWsysnameisupto255charactersandthereisnoneedtodescVWoWsWvWxWyWzW~WֆWևW֐W֑W֞WְWֺWּWֽW־WWWWWWW WWW:W<W=W>W@WDWHWIWLWPWQWtable10.13row7shouldincludetheactiontestwithinthelVtable10.29isconfusingandtherowsdescriptionisnoteno֞Vtable11.9.3.1Vtable11.9.3.2Vtable12.1hasafewproblems@Vpped֐V2UcadditionalրWWWSWadditionalblankpagesareunnecessaryVaddmacWaddressTWuWWWMWWWW؅W؉WؕWaddressedؔWaddressesfWsWׂWadequately֣WadjacentWWadjustedbW֐WadmindownLWadverseWadvertiseؒWaffectsָWaftercWքWֆWևW֋W֧WWafterallitiscalledthefairnessalgorithmVagainst֤W<WPWagecoef-W}Waggressive+W,Wagreed؏Walarma`Walarmashouldnotbeincapitals`Valarms:WcanotherxWWWansiOWXWanycWW֤WָWWWWWW+W=WBWXW׍WאWWWsWwWxW؋Wanywhere<W׬WappearֆWևW֋W֧Wappears֕WW@WדWWapplicableUWapplied֋Wapplies֋WWappropriate֣WareSWWWYW]W^W`WfWgWsW}W֍W֣W֥W֦W֨W֩WְWֲWָWֺWֻWּWֽWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW$W%W(W)W*W+W,W:W<W?WBWHWLWOWPWRWSWVWYW׃W׎WאW׭W׷W׸WWWWWWWWWW)W0W5W>W?WEW[WgWlWnW}W؃W؅W؈W؏WarithmeticWaround׈Warrives֝Warrow׉WWarrowedWarrowsWSWVWXWYWץWצW׾WWWbreplacetopodbmyinfoconservativemodebymytopoinfoconservaVreplaceuint64t140withuint64t147֫Vreplacewithtable9.14fromdvjcontribution$Vreplacewithtable9.8fromdvjcontribution#VreplacewithtextfromdvjcontributionVreplacedvWreplacementsWwWxWreplicateWreportVWWWreported֙W1WKWVWreportingSWVWWreports+WYWrepresentWWsWwWxWyWrepresentsFWreq}W=Wrequest}W֞W֯WW WWW;W=W>WIWDWrequestsVWrequired֭W֮W,W9WIWײW_Wrequirements֥W-WXWrequiresZWWreservedWrnjWmWnW}WֻW>WreturnsֻWreviewxWreviewmethodforconfiguringsecondarymacaddressesandcoxVrevise֨W%W&W'W(Wrevisetransmitstatemachinessuchthatonlyfairnessandt֨Vreword;WBWeW!csamegWlWsWxWւWֺWWW0W7WWsamethingistrueforclause110Vsampling%Wsatisfy^WsayOWSWUWsayingWWsaysgWsc`Wscope^WWscreaming0WsdWsea։W֊Wsec5WؘWseemsYWZWhW|W}WselffW}WsemanticsփWsemszWsendYWsendsYWsensexWsensibleֈWsentYW^W`WsentenceւWփWsequencekWsequentiallyWWservice`WփWsetkWwWxWsettingkWshortWWshouldUW[W_W`WeWfWiWlWpWqWsWxWzW{W}WրWփWֆWևWshouldn'tfWshowfWshowingsWsinceUWWWXW_W`WlWuWyW}WsingleuWsmallրWsoXWfWրWsomefWgWkW}WֈWsomesensiblecommentismissingֈVsonetZWsourceTWցWspanYW^WspecificallyXWYWK|ւbiEither replace "high-preference" with "high preference" or Replace "low preference" with "low-preference"cpIn the same sentence "high-preference" and "low preference". Either use a "-" in both or don't use it in either.d17003/10/21փELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_87`44a5.4.4.1bJChange "Semantics of the service primitive" format to title of new clause.cbThe sentence "Semantics of the service primitive" should be a title for a new clause (see 5.4.3.2) 2003/10/21քELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_103`30a6.2.1.2b%Add "-" after RINGLET_0 and RINGLET_1c)Missing "-" after RINGLET_0 and RINGLET_1 2003/10/21օELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_116`25a6.4.4.5bRemove " from "rfe0 and "rfe1c%Strange character in "rfe0 and "rfe1 2003/10/21ֆELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_121`50a6.5.3.4b:Move Table 6.7 rows description to appear after the table.c*Rows description should appear after table 2003/10/21ևELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_124a6.4.4.4Y6.4.4.5օ6.5.1׊6.5.3.4ֆ6.5.5.4և؃6.6.2ֈ֧׋6.6.3؄6.6.3.10.4ַ؀6.6.3.11.299.1.3.15_9.3.3.1`9.5ac9.5.2bhkրb0}WքW0x1a[W1SWYWiWpW}WքW10hWrWրW10.10eW10.13mW10.14|W10.18kWnWoW10.19rW10.20rW10.21kW10.28vWwW10.6.2.1.2gW11SW11.5.1.5XW14/15oW15yW16mW17SW18SW2YWbWdWjWqWvW}W25zW26zW3UWYWbWeW31kW32/33nW34/35^W385rW386rW4UW5SW51rW6YW6.19UW6.27WW6.4.4.4YW^W6.6.4WW6.6.4.4WW7lW8_W9YW9.1YW9.2]W9.3]W9.5cWaZW[W^WcWfWjWrWuW}WasecondarymacaddresstableshouldbestoredoutsidethetuVabove\W^WdWabsensecW*nbrilW}WּWW4W=W2WhWjWrid0WrightWring]WfWWW;WVWXWWringroundtriptimerrttVringinfoDWWWWWhWjWringletYWhWiWpWqW}WքW֐WWWW=WTW,W-W2W4W5WPWringletid=Vlassbcirfram֊Wrxmcastclassbeirbyte֊Wrxmcastclassbeirfram֊Wrxmcastclasscbytess֊Wrxmcastclasscframes֊Ws1ցWs3ցWs7ցWs9ցWsa}Wsame^W֏WsatisfactionYWscff֋Wsecmac1configzWsecmac2configzWsecmacaddresssWsecmacaddress1zWsecmacaddress2zWsecond֍WsecondaryuWxWsectioncWsemanticsփWsendframe}WsensibleֈWsentYW֋WsentenceZW֏Wseparate^Wsequence֏Wsequencenumber֎WserviceփWsetkWsetskWshortWWshould[W]WcWkWuW֎WshowneWa6.6.3.11.4U؁؈6.6.3.2ֱֲ6.6.3.6.4։֩؅6.6.3.7.2Z\6.6.3.7.4Sރ[؆؇6.6.3.8.4֊3.3.1`9.5ac9.5.2bhkրb0}WքW0x1a[W1SWYWiWpW}WքW10hWrWրW10.10eW10.13mW10.14|W10.18kWnWoW10.19rW10.20rW10.21kW10.28vWwW10.6.2.1.2gW11SW11.5.1.5XW14/15oW15yW16mW17SW18SW2YWbWdWjWqWvW}W25zW26zW3UWYWbWeW31kW32/33nW34/35^W385rW386rW4UW5SW51rW6YW6.19UW6.27WW6.4.4.4YW^W6.6.4WW6.6.4.4WW6.7ֆW6.9ևW7lW8_W9YW9.1YW9.2]W9.3]W9.5cWaZW[W^WcWfWjWrWuW}WasecondarymacaddresstableshouldbestoredoutsidethetuVabove\W^WdWabsensecW)bmustZW֋WYWmy֩WmyedgeringletֳWֶWmyedgestate֣WmyinfoaW׮WjWmymacaddressֵWmyprotectmethod֣WmyritWmyringletid֐WW׌W׭W׮WtWmyringletidmyritVnewuW}WփWnextmWnWnext-statejWnoZWnotYWֈW֏Wnote^W֋WnoteddWnull}WnumbereW֎W֏WofSWTWYWZW^W_WbWcWeWhWoWtWuWwWրWփW֋W֎WonYW^WrWoneYWZWvWone'srWonlykWontoYWopen]WorWWXWւotherYW^WkWotherripWoutputsWWoutsideuWp248YWpacketsYW^Wpage^WrW֋Wparagraph֋WparagraphsdWparallel֋WpartuW֋WpathWW֋Wpdf}WphysZWplacekWplaced^WplaceskWplease[WpopulateduWpossibly{WpreferenceւWprimitiveփWprocessedYWuW|uև`46a6.5.5.4b:Move Table 6.9 rows description to appear after the table.c*Rows description should appear after tabled66 2003/10/23ֈELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_138`34a6.6.2b[Replace: "Some sensible comment" With: "Source station did not strip the frame as expected"c""Some sensible comment" is missingd70 2003/10/236.7։ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_144`22a 6.6.3.6.4bUDon't count Fairness and Control frames in rxMcastClassAFrames and rxMcastClassABytescCounting Fairness and Control frames in the Rx Multicast frames counter makes this counter lose its value for the user. It will just increase very fast, and the actual multicast data frames will be "lost" in the "sea" of fairness framesd75 2003/10/236.19֊ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_153`6a 6.6.3.8.4bbcroWcrc32[WcreateWcreditsWcriticalWcross:W@WEWGWcross-referenceZW[W\W]W^W_WaWbWcWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWoWqWtWvWwWxWyW{W|W}W׀W׽W׿WYWcross-references`WdWnWpWzWWכWct}Wcurrent^W WJWPW[W^WyWcurrentlyֻWWcurrenttime}WWdTWPWVWצWd26clause9rassWyWda}W֬Wda47:40da39:32da33:24da23:16da15:8da7:0֬Vda-specifiedֲWdarkWdashWWW"WdataWW֋WW W W WW9W=WOWPWSW[Wismissingfo֘Vdefined֯WWdefinition_WcW֑WWdefinitionsֻWdegradationWdegradeWWdegradeconditionsdegradeVdeleteWWWdeletethesetwoblankpagesVdependenciesWqbannexրW֥W.W~WכWצWanother֞WWansiXWanycWְW=WIW׃WאWsWwWxW؆Wanyway؆Wapparent@WappearֆWևWapplicableLWappliesWapplyWWWWW׆Wapplynameitalictothefirstcolumnentriesoftable7.3VapplynameitalictothefollowingVapplytheheading4styletoVapplythenameitaliccharacterstyletodestinationmacaddresVapplyingWappropriateoW֥W־WW!WIWײWfWappropriatelyxWapproriateaWbWgWarbitraryW )֊bADon't count Fairness and Control frames in rxMcastClassAFrames and rxMcastClassABytes, and don't count Cotrol frames in rxMcastClassBCirFrames, rxMcastClassBCirBytes, rxMcastClassBEirFrames, rxMcastClassBEirBytes, rxMcastClassCFrames and rxMcastClassCBytesscCounting Fairness and Control frames in the Rx Multicast frames counter makes this counter lose its value for the user. It will just increase very fast, and the actual multicast data frames will be "lost" in the "sea" of fairness framesd84 2003/10/236.21onFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_248`46a9.1bAThe first part of this note (The fairness...within this clause) must be moved to Page 247 line 39 because it will make reading of the paragraph clearer. Regarding the rest of the note replace it wiyh: "In the case of and edge station deploying edge-wrapped data path the SCFF is sent to the wrapped path and in parallel to the edge to be used as keep alive." and move it to line 36. cg^technicalnon-bindingSVUVWVXVYVZV[V]V^V_VaVbVcVeVfVgVhViVjVkVlVmVnVpVqVrVsVtVuVvVwVxVyVzV{V|V}VVրVցVփVֈV։V֊V֋V֌V֍V֏V֐V֑V֒V֓V֔V֕V֖V֗V֘V֛V֜V֝V֞V֧V֭V֮V֯VֱVֲVֳVִVֵVֶVַVָVֹVֺVֻVּVֽV־VֿVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV1V2V3V4V5V6V7V8V9V;V<V=V>V?V@VBVDVIVJVKVLVOVPVQVSVTVUVVVXV׊V׍V׎VאVדVןVשV׫V׬V׮VׯVױV׳V״V׼V׽VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV$V+V,V! a6.6.4.4VW6.7X&6.7.1.4ִֵ6.7.14.4֣6.7.2.4ֶ֦7\R}W7.1.1Z7.2.1.4כ7.4[7.5]7.5.4^9у'9.1]^֋!׌׍׎׏אבגדהו؎9.1.2זח9.1.3 9.1.3.19.1.3.14׫h9.1.3.15_9.1.3.2ט9.1.3.3Ӄיך9.1.3.5לם9.1.3.6מ9.1.3.7wן9.1.3.8נסע9.1.3.9ף9.2.2.2_jkl9.3.2֌֍֏ײ]9.3.3֎֎֎֎֎֎֎֎֎bWeW31kW32/33nW34/35^W36֋W385rW386rW39֋W4UW5SW51rW6YW6.19UW6.27WW6.4.4.4YW^W6.6.4WW6.6.4.4WW6.7ֆW6.9ևW7lW8_W9YW9.1YW9.2]W9.3]W9.5cWaZW[W^WcWfWjWrWuW}WasecondarymacaddresstableshouldbestoredoutsidethetuVabove\W^WdWabsensecW;bdon'tcountfairnessandcontrolframesinrxmcastclassafram։V֊VdoneYWuWWWWWsWwWxWdotWdownstream&W+WdownstreamcongestedָWdraft-ietf-adslmib-hBWfWdropW/WdroptheindexingonunreservedrateatleastmakeitrightVdropped\Wdsidofdswrap֑Wdual-queueWdueWW5WduplicatedYWduringWWWdvjWWWWW#W$W%W&W'W(W,W-W.W/Wdvjclauses01Wdvjractext0WlW֋W֣W֦W֨WWedge-wrapYWedge-wrapped^W֋WedgechangelWּWedgesWWWeditorsWWeffectWeiss֯WeitherWWւW֨WWWW+/eitherremovethenoteorimproveitsclarityitsuncleartoVeitherreplacehigh-preferencewithhighpreferenceւVelectricalWWeligible֦WeliminateWWWWWuccounting։W֊W؆Wcountingfairnessandcontrolframesintherxmulticastfra։V֊VcountsPWQWcoupleֽWcovered֯WcoversֺWcrc32[WcreateWcreatesתWcreditsָWcriteria֥WWcriticalW:WcrossDWEWGWcross-referenceZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀WכW׿WcrossingBWctIWcumulativeWcurrentkWxW֣W֥W֦WGWHWJWOWPWWW׮W׾WؘWcurrentlyYWfWW؁Wcut-past-modifyָWdTW:WPWVWd2.4ֳWִWֵWֶWd2.5YWZWcWֿW_W؍Wd2.6YWrW9W:W;W=W>W?WBWCWFWGWHWIWJWKWLWMWNWOWPWQWSWTWUWVWWXWYWWcsecmac1configxWsecmac2configxWsecmacaddresszWsecmacaddress1sWsecmacsuWsecond_W֋W֏WGWLW׃W؄Wseconddiamondofatransitingdoesnotconsiderprotection؄VsecondaryuWWsecondsBWOWsectionָWWOWPWQW^WyWؑWؔWsection9.4ismissingsubsectionsspecifyingthefddframeyVYWZWhW|W}W֒W,WLWSWTW[Wselectcontrolframe<WIWselectionWW=W>Wselects=Wselet֓WselffW}WsemanticsփWsemicolonסWsemszWsendYWָW;WWWyWsendcָW,Wsendcc,WsendingWsendsYWsensexW=WIWױW׻W7W@WsensibleֈWsentYW^W`W֝W֧WָW;WTW׎WןWsentenceւWփW֏W֒W֠W֪WָWWWWWWW;WׄW׍W׎WבWפWשW׺WW'WJW?W ֋cAThe Note has some problems: - The first part (The fairness...within this clause) applies to all the modes, so it should appear earlier in the clause - The second part (In the case...) applied only to edge wrapping stations, so it should appear right after the edge-wrapping discussion - Keep-alive is part of the standard, the standard shall define what to do in the case of edge-wrappingd12503/10/21֌ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_269`18a9.3.2bAdd time stamps field to figurec5Time stamp field is missing in the FDD payload figure 2003/10/219.16֍ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_269`35a9.3.2b^In the fe row change FALSE to TRUE in the second coulmn, and TRUE to FALSE in the third columncfe values are inverted 2003/10/219.5֎ELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_269`41a9.3.3b5The clause number of sequenceNumber should be 9.3.2.1cWrong clause enumeration 2003/10/21֏ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_269N4ctooYWWWWWWWW$W(WWWYWבW׭WoWtoomanywordsYVtoomanywordsremovesomeforeasierreadingWVtop~W$WFWtopo{WSWWtopodbaWhWuWtopodbmyinfoconservativemodeisnowreplacedbymytopoinfoaVtopodbringinfohopsisnolongerdefinedbyclause10topodhVtopodbringtopologytypehasbeenrenamedtopodbtopotypeuVtopoentryzW}W4WؖWtopoentryrihopsspanedgestate04Vtopoentryrihopsspanedgestate14VW!WtrailingTWtranmissionָWtransit֛W!Wtransitted֣WtransmissionYW֣W֥Wtransmissions֥WtransmitXWkW֣W֨Wtransmits֣Wtransmitted^W}W֟W֣W֦W֧W֨WWtransmittingYWtransmittpframeּWtried֤WtriggeredUWtriggersּWtrue`WfWkWּW0Wttl֕WֲWַWtwoָWWiscardedbyanedgesta֦Vb#cedgesfWeditorscW֤WeffectYW֦WWWeffortWeitherւW֤W֦W.WIWؒWelemenentsֺWelements:Weligible֖W֗WeliminateW%Weliminatethelrttdeterminationprotocols%VeliminatetheunnecessarywhitespacesVelseָWsWwWxWelsewhereW؏Wem"WemotionWempty\WenableSWenablesSWendSWjWmWnW{W֟WֺWHWTW׃WׄWבWJWendingWendssWenglishCWionjWexistZWָWexpectedcWexpiresֲWexplanationXWexplicitlyXWexpressionֳWֶWextendeTWextended֭W֮WexternalZWextra\WextractֺWfgWfactfWfailed^Wfailure֛WfairnessYW]W^W։W֊W֋WָWfairrateָWfalse`WkWwWyWָWfarmes֒Wfast։W֊W֒WfaultuWfaultyfWfdd`W֌W֏Wfe`W֍W$a9.3.3.1`ץ9.4#%*+y9.4.1,ש9.4.1.3ת9.4.1.4`m9.4.2.3q9.4.2.4"nr9.4.3.4op9.4.4.4s9.4.5.2u9.4.5.4-׬ivw9.4.7.39.4.8.4ָֹx9.5ac$׭׮ׯװױ}~9.7׆9.8.3ׁbeWfW|Wb2.1.6eVb3.1.6fVb4|Vc gWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqW}WWc1.4.3gVc3.1.5.2.2hVc3.1.5.3.2iVc4.1.5jVc4.1.5.2.2kVc4.1.5.3.2lVc5.1.4Vc5.1.5mVnVc6.1.5oVc6.1.5.1.2pVc6.1.5.3.2qVc7}VdCWDWEWFWGWHWJWKWLWMWNWOWPWQWrWsWtWצWgWd3CVd4.2DVEVQVgVd5.1.2FVd5.1.3GVrVsVצVd5.2tVd6HVJVKVLVMVNVOVPVWcfevaluesareinverted֍VfeaturesVWQWfeelWWfew@WEWSWתWfiִWfinoneisnotabooleanvaluethereforefinoneisincorrecִVfiberTWfield֌WW=WWؔWfifteenBWfig؄Wfigure]W}W֌W֤W֬WְWWWWWWדWטWWEWdWeW؍Wfigure1.13hasbeenchangedfromd2.5andthedestinations؍Vfigure12.2shouldbebetteralignedwithfigure6.3eVfigurelinesandbanksareimproperVfigurelinesarewrongthicknessVfigure-cell֤W1Wfigure-rowWfigureduWfiguresְWfileֺWfillWfinalֺWfindֺWfinishjW5WfirstUWbW֋W֩WWWW׃W׎WWfittedWWfive֥WfixCWfixtheenglishclearanceclearingCVflood؂WfloodedֲW؈Wflush=W>W?WWW%W0W1W6W7W9W=Wforce֛Wforcing*Wbtheclausenumberofsequencenumbershouldbe9.3.2.1֎Vthefirstpartofthisnotethefairnesswithinthisclause֋VtheformatofthisaddressisspecifiedbythevalueoftheMVtheparametersofthephylinkstatusindicationaredescribVtheparametersofthephyreadyindicationaredescribedbelVtheprotectionprotocoldefinesthefollowingVVtheshapershouldbedefinedinawaythatguaranteesthelaVthesimplestchangewouldbetotable6.19simplyswitchrowUVthestatusoftherequestVtheuserdatafieldiscopiedVtheirֲWWthemYWאWEWthenuW֏W֓W֘W֛WWWWTWכW؀WthereZWWthereisnodefaultvalueavalueistypicallychosenbytheVWWWtocWtopodbaWuWtopoentriesuWtopoentryuW}Wtopology֓W֚W֨Wtopostability}Wtotalhopsrx}W'֏`49a9.3.2bADefine that if a classC FDD is not received within 100msec then the corresponding classA FDD is discarded. Define that if a classC FDD is received and a classA FDD with the same sequence number has not been received, then the classC FDD is discarded. Move the sentence to clause 9.5cA.Some problems with the setence starting: "FDD frames..." - The standard should define how long a station has to wait for the second FDD. - The standard shall define that if the ClassC FDD is received before the ClassA FDD, the pair is invalid. - This sentence shall be moved to the FRTT clause (9.5) .d165 2003/10/23֐ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_293`26a9.5.2b- Swap the adjusted LRTT value between rows 9.14-2 and 9.14-3 - Add text explaining that MyRingletID refers to the ringlet in which the Head is transmitting its fairness messagescsomeproblemswiththesetencestartingfddframes֏VsomesensiblecommentismissingֈVsometimesstatemachineisincludedinthenameandsometiVsomethingQWsomewhatW׸WsonetZWXWsort+Wsorted9W:W;WsoundSWsourceTWցW;WW؉WspaceWWNWRWspacesW#Wspacesinvariablenames#Vspacing׈WspanYW^WW8WHWWW׎WאWؐWspanedgestate4Wspanprotstate4WspansFWspecificW>W?WBWVW׾WlWspecificallyXWYWWspecification֣Wspecifications֥WW|cmulticast։W֊W؅Wmultichoke؀WmultipleWrWsWwWmultipletpframesaretransmittedbythestatemachineandVmultiplexorYWmultipliedWmultiply$WmustZW^W֖W֗W֛W֣WBWmyTW[WmyedgeringletֳWֶWmyedgeringletisnotabooleanexpressionthereforetheexprֳVֶVmyinfoaWmymacaddressֵWָWmymacaddressisnotabooleanvaluethereforemymacaddressiֵVmyringletid֐WָWWtWmytopoinfoaWzWmytopolnfo2Wname֡WW:WWWWWDWXWtWؕWؗWothersVnature(WneedyWW֥WWW)WPWQW׋WוW׷Wneedcommaforproperpause׋VneededXWZW+W,W׏Wneeding׭WneedsXWoW֣W;WneighboorָWneighborUWTWWWneighbortpframeswithincorrectrigetdroppedbyrow4ofUVneighborchecksumeW$֐cSome problems with table 9.14: - The adjusted LRTT value in rows 9.14-2 and 9.14-3 is swapped - It is not clear which ringlet is refered to as "MyRingletID" and which as "otherRi"d206 2003/10/239.14֑ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_294`10a9.5.2bRemove dsidOfDsWrap definitionc&dsidOfDsWrap is not used in table 9.14d210 2003/10/23֒ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_303`26a10.1.2bTReplace : "periodically at a fast rate thereafter" with: "periodically thereafter"cjThe sentence "The TP farmes..., and periodically at a fast rate" seems to imply that there is no slow rated219jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23֓ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_305`24a10.1.6bRReplace: "The topology database then direct.." With: "The stations then direct.."cUThe topology database does not direct traffic, the ringlet selet in the station does.d230:badvertisementinterva}Wadvertisementratio'WtedWafterքWֆWևW֚W֧WֽWWW1W׈WמWׯWWafter100֝WagainWagainst^WPWaggressive+WWagreeYWalarmWalign׉Waligntextrepeatforfigures6.14and6.16׉Valigns֬Walive֋WallSWkW֝W֤WֺWWWWWCWIWJWKWOWPWכWפW׫WWWWWallowedשWallowedratecongestedמWallowing֙WallowsjWKWWalphabetic֤WalreadyZWalso^W֭W֮W'W<W@WTWuWWWWWWalternatively.WamongWamountWWanXWYWZW]W^WkW֦W֨W֩WWWWWWWWWWW W W WWW"W/W;W<WFWאWWWWanattributethattakesthevalueof V VVVVbmytopoinfoaWlWzWֽWWWmytopoinfosecmacaddress1secmac1configzVmytopoinfosecmacaddress2secmac2configzVnameTWֺWnameitalicWWWW3WnameplainWnamesWW W)W׫WWEWUWnaturaljWnecessaryWneedYWZW|W<WPWneededrWW7W@WneedsYWneighborWTWWWneverWnewuW}WփWWW׫W׾WWcWnextmWnW֔W֣WW$W'W6WpWsWwWxWyWnext-statejWnoZW֘WWWWWSWשWW؂W؄WnonWWWWoccurences֤WofSWTWYWZW^W_WbWcWeWhWoWtWuWwWրWփW֋W֎W֔W֕W֜W֣W֤W֯WֻWּWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWoffֿWokWokotherwiseVoldW nbringlet0}WWringletselect:WringtopologytypejWuWringtopologytypetopotypeuVouterWroutineֻW-WrWroutinesIW+Wrow[WbWkWlWmWnWoWyWzW֍W֜W֣WּWֽWWW WW)W9W>W$W5WCWGWrowsSWUWֆWևW֐W֣WֱWּWWWWGW״WpWrprZW֯WFWJWKW_WrprfairnessresetwateqWrprifstatscontrolcomCWrprifstatscontrolcouJWrprifstatscontrolcoutoclearwestforexampleJVrprifstatscontrolperJWrprifstatscontroltabCWrprspanerrorcountersLWPWrprspanerrorintervalPWrprspanerrorstatserrLWrprspanerrorstatssevLWrprspanerrorxxxxxbadPWrprtopoimageinetaddrMWrrWrrttW1WrsZWWW W WWrsp}WrulesVWׯWAWrunwW֪WWrunningKWrx֣W֩WWrxerror WWc9.14-3֐W9.2WהW9.3]WOW9.4yW9.5֏W֖W֗W9.8W900OW910OWaTWUWWWXWZW]W^WcWfWjWkWlWpWrWsWuWvWxW}WւWփW֏W֒W֘W֛W֝W֣W֤W֦WֳWִWֵWֶWָWֺWֻWֽWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW"W%W(W*W+W-W8W9W:W;W@WBWEWGWIWKWPWSWTWUWVWWWYW׃WׄW׍WאWטWפWקWרWתWׯWױW׼W׾W׿WWWWWWWWWWWWWW'WQWlWrWsWtWwWxW}W؃W؄W؊W؏WؒWؔWafairnessinstancedoesnotattempttoreceivefairnessfraאVafewissueswiththeparaSVfo2VaddedָWaddinguWxWadditionrWָW7WcitWWXW`WfWgWjWkWtWxWyWzWրWւW։W֊W֋W֐W֝W֣WָWֺWּWֿWWWWWW/W3W7W9W:W=WBWIWJWLWUWVWXWאWפWקWתW׭WײW׿WWWWWWWWW+WZW[WdWtWvW}W؄W؈W؏WؐWؑWؒWؔWؕWitisincorrecttosetvariablestransmittpframeandtpconteּVitisnotclearinthisclausewhichsetofdatapathvariablVitisnotclearwhatwhentrueisreferringtooriftrueisקVitisnotobviouswhatindexisorisusedforinexceedsmaxtVitisnotpossibletocompletethereturnstateVitlooksliketheprocessingtimeisbeingmultipliedduetoVitlooksweirdtospelloutminusandusethesymbolintheVitmaynotbecleartoallreadersthatthedbupdatesmstaVCXvcphyYWZW֣WPWphysYWpicsW;WpicsnotfullyupdatedVpictureWWWpictureasystemsendingonlyclassctrafficVpieceWplace֣WIW؃Wplaced֤WplaceskWתWplainWplayWplugWplug-and-playSWplural׶W&pluralizedWplusOWpointuWրWָW:W׍WWWWpointingؘWpokekWpoor֤WpopulatesxWportion~Wpossible^WWBWWpostedָWpreambleWWprecedenceWWpreclude֨WprecludingֳWִWֵWֶWpreferWWstions֤WqueueWW֣WriWpWr1shouldbereplacedbyringlet1iVr0}Wr1}WracekWrate֒WratherhW|WreachingjW֣WreadoWreallyXWfWxWrecalculating{WreceiptXWreceiveYW֣W֩WreceivedUW^W`WvW֏W֣Wreceiver֦WreceivingYWuWreceptionUW:g^_`abcd€€€€€jupgradedؑWؒWupgradedfromeditorialVupgradedtotechnical֕VV2V3VؑVؒVusepWtWWvariablepWwhichUWwillfWtWּW4W6W؏Wwith֕WּWwithdraw4W6Wwrap)Wmacceptedeghilqrswրֻֽ֖֒֓֔֗־ֿÃăŃ̃΃σЃS׽Ճzؓؖaccepted-duplicatejkؘaccepted-modifiedfptּ֕ǃȃʃ˃)35U؏ؑؒsupersededmnV׼withdrawn46v0fW֘W00-10-a4-97-a8-bdfW1fWpWuWfWpWpWpWpWրWּW7W1changertoringletinmarkreachableorinvalpV10pW10.1.8؏W10.1.91W10.10fW10.12ּW10.18ּW10.21ּW10.3.32W10.3.5ؔW10.4.1.4ؔW100UW12ؑW14ּWؑW18ּW2fWpWּW7W224׼WpbonYW^WrW֩W֪W֯W־WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWBWCWFWTWUWVWZW_W`WdWnWpWsWzWWןW׿WWWWWWWWW2W6W_WvW؆WW֣WWothers֨WoutWoutputsWWoutsideuWp248YWpacketsYW^Wpage^WrW֋W֯WWWWWpages־WWparagraph֋WparagraphsdWparallel֋Wparameter֭W֮Wparameters֯WpartuW֋WparticularWpassseqֻWpathWW֋W֛Wpdf}Wperiodically֒Wpg֩Wphy֣WphysZWpics֥WWplacekWplaced^WplaceskWplainWplease[Wplug-and-playWpopulateduWportionsWpossibly{WprefereWpreferenceւWprimitiveփWWprocessedYWuWGB\^non-binding֖W֗W֘W֛W֜W֝W֞W֧W֭W֮W֯WֱWֲWֳWִWֵWֶWַWָWֹWֺWֻWּWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW1W2W3W4W5W6W7W8W9W;W<W=W>W?W@WBWDWIWJWKWLWOWPWQWSWTWUWVWXW׊W׍W׎WאWדWןWשW׫W׬W׮WׯWױW׳W״W׼W׽WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW$W+W,W-W.W5W6W7W8W>W?W@WAWQWXWYWZW[W\W]W^W_WaWbWcWeWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWpWrWsWtWuWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}W~WW؀W؁W؂W؃W؄W؅W؆W؇W؈Wzb10hWrWրWֿWWOW_W׫WWWW WWjW10.1.10YW10.1.13W0.13mW10.14|W10.18kWnWoWּW10.19rW10.2W10.20rW10.21kW10.28vWwW10.28-9֜W10.4֖W10.5֗W10.6.2.1.2gW10.7VW10.7.1.1VW10.7.1.3VW׽W10.8YW100UW100msec֏W11SWְW<W11-14֯W11.3.2@W11.4.2@W11.5.1.5XW11.5.5.1.4<W11.6<WIW12ְW12.2.3@W12.2.3.3@W12.3.1rW14ּW14/15oW15yWZW15-54֯W15/16֣W15:8֬W16mWPWZW16a֣16b֣W17SWW׽W18SWּW19nWsW1stSW2YWbWdWjWqWvW}W֣W֤W֥W֯WֻWּWֽWֿWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWW%W+W/W1WIWPW~WW״W׿WV^binding֣W֤W֥W֦W֨W֩W֫W֬WWWWWWWWWWWW!W#W$W%W&W'W(W)W*W+W,W-W.W/W0WeditorialTV\`do~ւքօֆև֎ְ֢֪֚֙֟֠֡ƒƃɃ̓Ӄԃ׃كڃۃ܃݃ރ߃  ":ACEFGHMNRWYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~׀ׁׂ׃ׅׄ׆ׇ׈׉׋׌׏בגהוזחטיךכלםמנסעףפץצקרת׭װײ׵׶׷׸׹׺׻׾׾׾׾׾W{֘vAWG: If the station interface index ATT is missing from the ATD frame sent by a given source station, then it is reported with a default value of 0. For all other ATTs where this behavior is not currently defined, then a similar statement will be added. In the case of station name, the default value is an empty string. Change the sentence beginning "If a station name ATT is not included ..." on lines 47-48 of page 329 appropriately. The MIB editors will modify the definition of rprTopoImagBKeStationIfIndex to InterfaceIndexOrZero to match the underlying definition.9wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23tions in the other side.cIn the case of a station transit path failure the station must "force" one of its neighbors to wrap (the one in the side that the station is not wrapping). The standard shall define how this is done 2003/10/21֜ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_398`27a 10.13.1.4b;In the description of row 10.28-9 replace CHECK3 with STARTj`ctheclauseismissingwhatshouldastationassumeifthest֘Vthecomputationofcommunicatedvaluessuchasfairrateisd-VthecriticalseveritytextismergedwiththedescriptiveteVthecurrentrprmacallowstransmissionsontheringwhicha֥VthedarklinebelowtherowheadingisdistractingVthedescriptionofclassbisinappropriatesincethelevelsVthedescriptionofplugandplayisinappropriatesincesteeVthedescriptionofprotectiontimeforsteeringandwrapping1Vthedescriptionofstqsizeisincorrect/Vthedescriptionoftheeui-64shouldmoreclearlyspecifyis0Vthedescriptionsofqueuesizesetcisincompletewithoutth.Vthedownstreamshapershouldlimitratesbasedonindication&V'Vtheexaminecontrolframeandselectcontrolframefunctionsare<Vrctheclauseismissingwhatshouldastationassumeifthest@5theexamplevaluesforchecksumneighborchecksum0andneigh@thefollowingtextisspecifictosteeringandshouldhavea@/themaximumkeepalivetimeoutshouldbeincreasedbackto50@thenextstateinrow10.28-9isstartandnotcheck3@theratiobeteenthelinkcapacityreservedforfairness@jthestandardizationoffunctionalitycolumnisredundantwit@thestatementframesarenottransmittedacrossanedgeisi@Kthetermmfrttisanacronymthatshouldbespelledoutonf@thereareacoupleoferrorsintable10.21@4they@thisclauseshouldtalkaboutwhatitdoesnotwhatitavoid@etime@title@ZtokNtoc@Mtoo@topoentryrihopsspanprotstate0@tx@]unnecessaryword@until@useful@v4@9variable@what@window@wondering@wrapping@yet@>;F֟ELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_643`43aE.1.4.1b Remove "the"Divide the table into two tables, one for the station generating the LRTT request and receiving the response, and another for the station receiving the LRTT request and generating the response.cATable 10.29 is confusing, and the rows description is not enough.d404 2003/10/2210.29֟ELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_643`43aE.1.4.1b Remove "the" sent.d398 2003/10/22֞ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_402`9a10.14.3bDivide the table into two tables, one for the station generating the LRTT request and receiving the response, and another for the station receiving the LRTT request and generating the response.cATable 10.29 is confusing, and the rows description is not enough.d404 2003/10/2210.29֟ELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_643`43aE.1.4.1b Remove "the"/2210.29֟ELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_643`43aE.1.4.1b Remove "the"PNbreplaceifastationitshallnotrespondatall֝Vreplacelowpreferencewithlow-preferenceւVreplacemyedgeringletwithanon-booleanexpressionֳVֶVreplacemymacaddresswiththecorrectexpressionֵVreplacenot-floodedwithnon-floodedinrows6.16-2and6.16ֱVreplaceperiodicallyatafastratethereafter֒Vreplacer1byringlet1iVreplacerelatedgroupsofstatementswitharoutinerVreplaceringlet1andr1byotherripVreplacerow15actionwithyVreplacerow25actionwithzVreplacerow26actionwithzVbimplementationZWimplementedZWimplementing~WimplicationsWimplyאWimproveW0WinSWVWXWZWcWdWeWkWmWnWuW}WրW։W֊W֋W֍W֐W֕W֖W֗W֚W֛W֜W֡W֤W֥W֯WֱWָWֺWּWֽW־WWWWWWWWWWW WW)W.W4W:W;W<W=W@WBWTWVWYWאWכWלWנWץWרW״W׵WWWWWWWWWWWWW W3W7W8W@WAWLWUWaWbWcWgWjWoWsWuWwWxWyWzW}WW؆W؍W3withstart֜Vintheferowchangefalsetotrueinthesecondcoulmnand֍Vinthelastelseline34sethopstocongestiontomaxstationָVincludecWjW}WրWW.WYWincludeadescriptiveexamplesimilartoexamplefigureinl}V{ctabledescriptionnVtableskWvWֺWּWWWWtail׮W}W~WtakeֺWWW؀WtakenVWtalkUWtarget;WtcrW֕W7W8WSWtcsBWtegWtechnical֤Wtemplate֤Wtemporarily{WtendSWtermWW/WterminatejWterminologyW{W|WtermsWtestlWMWtest/verify/implemenֺWtestsxWtextXWYWjW֙W֟W֠WֺWWWWWWWWWW.W9W:W;W=W>W?WBWCWFWGWHWIWJWKWLWMWNWOWPWQWSWTWUWVWXWYWׁW׉WבWדWוWטWפW׾WWW؋WtextfollowingacolonthatconsistsofoneormoresentenceפVtextinarrowdescriptionsnotlinedup׉VtextualBWWָWֺWֻWּW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWV7C֟c:Wrong text: ""Frames transmitted from the one end station"d560 2003/10/23֠ELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_644`45a E.1.4.1.2boRemove "that" from "..frames that destined to.." Replace : "This illustrated.." with: "This is illustrated.."c[Wrong text in sentence: "..frames that destined to.." and in setence : "This illustrated.."d562 2003/10/23֡ELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_645`7a E.1.4.1.2b#Replace S0 with S1 in cell B title.c#Wrong station name in cell b) titled563 2003/10/23E.4֢ELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_646`35a E.1.4.2.1bReplace "see" with "sees"c Wrong spelling: "S6 never see.."d566 2003/10/23֣ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding_206`42a 6.7.14.4 b?:_ÃzpÃ@Ã`Ã0{à րÃp8csettingkWָW*WCWJWUWsettingrprifstatscontrolpertoclearallintervalsandJVseveral"WseverityW:WsfWTWshadedWAWshall֋W֏W֛W֝WWW3W5W7W8W;WshaperָW&W'Wshapers,Wshapers/policingָWshortWW)WshouldUW[W_W`WeWfWiWlWpWqWsWxWzW{W}WրWփWֆWևW֋W֏W֘W֣W֤W֩W֭W֮WְWָWּWֿWWWWWWWW!W"W&W'W+W-W.W0W9WDWFWTWUWזWפWץWצW׭W׾WWWWWWWW*WZW[W`WeWmWpWsWwWxW؃W؄W؆W؇W؈W؊W،WؐWؒWؓWؕWؖWؗWshouldbecomparingnotassigningVVshouldbesendapassa0passa1sendd؃VWslight;WslippedAWtable9.14֐VcyetuWyield*WyouLW0Wyourself;WzeroBWWd ֺ0֤@P`0pפZ‚!v‚"ק‚#ց‚$؍‚%ׂ‚&|‚'[‚(ւ‚)׃‚*‚1ׄ‚2ר‚3‚4֬‚5‚6֭‚7T‚8‚9؉‚:֮‚A‚B‚Cփ‚D؊‚E‚F‚G‚H‚I‚J\‚Q֪‚R؋‚S֫‚T׈‚U‚Vׅ‚W‚X‚Yt‚Z‚aք‚b،‚c‚d‚e‚f‚g‚h׉‚i‚j֨‚q؂‚rֳ‚sY‚tօ‚u׊‚vֆ‚wև‚x؃‚y֧‚z׋‚ֈ‚ֱ‚ֲ‚؄‚؅‚։‚֩‚\‚Z‚؆‚S‚[‚؇‚‚֊‚ַ‚؀‚9‚؁‚U‚؈‚W‚V‚X‚ִ‚ֵ‚֦‚ֶ‚&‚֣Ã!ZÃ! Ã!0כÃ!@Ã!PÃ!`Ã!p[Ã!Ã!Ã!Ã"]Ã" ^Ã"0\Ã"@RÃ"P< j_Ãup֢ÃuÃv ֯Ãv0ְ~Ãv@Ãx Ãx0׀Ãx`/ÃxpׇÃy.CA ֣cADatapath transmit state machine must specify how frames are wrapped by the 802.17 MAC. The current transmit state machine for an edge station transmits these frames to the local PHY instead of wrapping these frames to the appropriate place. The MAC must perform and specify the following wrapping operations: 1. Frames that are received by the into_edge receive state machine are transitted to the PTQ/STQ where they are supposed to be enqueued for transmission onto the wBrapped datapath. 2. Newly transmitted frames by a wrap capable edge station are supposed to be enqueued into the wrapped datapath by the transmit state machine. 3. An edge wrap station should wrap these frames into the rx_check queue of the other ringlet. 4. A center wrap station should wrap these frames into the TX_PHY queue of the other ringlet. The comment for row 16 indicating that frames are wrapped before reaching the PHY does not adequately specify @B -֣cChow wrapped frames are handled. This is a datapath issue and needs to be specified within the datapath layer. It is incorrect to suggest (both from a layering and current specification standpoint) this is being handled by the reconciliation sublayer. d99 2003/10/23g wrapping operations: 1. Frames that are received by the into_edge receive state machine are transitted to the PTQ/STQ where they are supposed to be enqueued for transmission onto the wBrapped datapath. 2. Newly transmitted frames by a wrap capable edge station are supposed to be enqueued into the wrapped datapath by the transmit state machine. 3. An edge wrap station should wrap these frames into the rx_check queue of the other ringlet. 4. A center wrap station should wrap these frames into the TX_PHY queue of the other ringlet. The comment for row 16 indicating that frames are wrapped before reaching the PHY does not adequately specify AFc֣֤ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding_0`0a0bA Replace all occurences of "Figure-cell" with "Figure" 1. Replace "Figure-Cell" with "Figure" 2. Alphabetic identifier of a multicell figure should be in "()" (quotations excluded). 3. Figure designators should be labeled "Figure 9-4" instead of "Figure 9.4"  cAReplace Figure-cell with Figure. Figure-Cell is a non-standard convention being used in 802.17 to reference subfigures. The common convention in technical publications is to reference a subfigure alphabetically e.g. Figure 3.2a. There is a proposal for the "figure-cell" convention to be used in the IEEE style template. I tried submitting comments against the template regarding this convention, but found out the IEEE template work was placed on hold and since the proposed template w;@ ֣bA1. Add the following rows between row 15/16 of Table 6.36. 16a State:FINAL Condition: if myEdgeState == INTO_EDGE && myProtectMethod == Center_Wrap Action: Enqueue(Q_TX_PHY, frame, otherRI) Next State: START 16b State:FINAL Condition: if myEdgeState == INTO_EDGE && myProtectMethod == Edge_Wrap Action: Enqueue(Q_RX_CHECK, frame, otherRI) Next State: START 2. Remove 2nd sentence of row note 6.36-16. c=_Ã1p֣Ã2@ZÃ2`כÃ2pÃ2Ã2[Ã3 Ã30Ã3@Ã3P]Ã3`^Ã3\RÃ5@Ã5p׌Ã5!׍Ã5]^֋׎׏אÃ5בגדהו؎Ã6҃זחÃ6  טÃ60ӃיךÃ6`wלםמןÃ6pנסעףhÃ7׫Ã7 _Ã7@kÃ7p_jlÃ7'Ã7`֌֍֎֏ץײ]Ã8שÃ8 תÃ80,mÃ8@`Ã8PqÃ8`"nrÃ8#opÃ9sÃ9 %*+Ã9@uÃ9P׬iwÃ9`-vÃ9ÃH`qÃIֽÃI0ÃI@ֻÃI`rÃIpÃJ0sÃJPtuÃJ`{ÃJpvwxÃJyzÃJ֜ÃJ|֝ÃQ}ÃQ0֞ÃQ@ÃR0ÃR`ÃRpÃRÃS@ÃTPÃTÃUÃU0ÃU@ÃUP~ÃVPÃV`ÃWÃW0ÃW@ÃXÃYÃY ÃYp ÃYÃY ÃZ ÃZP ÃZÃZÃZÃabrxframe}W2W9W;Wrxmcastclassabytes։W֊Wrxmcastclassaframes։W֊Wrxmcastclassbcirbyte֊Wrxmcastclassbcirfram֊Wrxmcastclassbeirbyte֊Wrxmcastclassbeirfram֊Wrxmcastclasscbytess֊Wrxmcastclasscframes֊Wrxtpframe4Ws0֡Ws1ցW֡WWs3ցWs4Ws5Ws6Ws7ցW؍Ws9ցWsa}WֹWsacompactֹWsame^W֏WֺWWWWW׆WWWWWWWsapiWsatisfactionYWsavedּWsayWscff֋Wscope^WsearchWsecmac1configzWsecmac2configzWsecmacaddresssWsecmacaddress1zWsecmacaddress2zWsecond֍WWWWAW؈WsecondaryuWxWWWWWsecondsOWXWsectioncWW<WyWsectionsyWsee֢W֩WWW,W-W.W/W=WWWWWWW؀W֏W֣WWWeWside֛WBF G֤cBas not IEEE property, IEEE editors could not respond to any questions or comments pertaining to the template. Regardless of IEEE project template status, the "Figure-cell" convention is a poor convention and should not be used in either 802.17 or any other IEEE documents. d2 2003/10/23bertF Castellano^Technical, Binding_639`1aE.1b1. Add normative specifications in Annex E for client transmission requirements to maintain 802.1D and 802.1Q compatibility. 2. Make Annex E Normative 3. Add appropriate PICS.cAtThe current RPR MAC allows transmissions on the ring which are incompatible with 802.1D and 802.1Q bridging as required by the 802.17 Five Criteria. The RPR MAC allows the client to control frame transmission on the ring without specifying the client rules which ensure compatibility with 802.1D and 802.1Q bridges. These rules need to be normative specifications. t 2003/10/21֦ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding(b31kWּW315/317WWWW316W317WWWW318W32vW32/33nW329WWWW33sW331W33:24֬W34ָWpW34/35^W354W36֋WWsWhW365־W366־W38dW׵WvW385rW386rW39֋WsWzW390/392WWW391W39:32֬W4UW֯WWWIWzWuWvW؅W40֫WvW41W׵WW42֩WW43WFW440-20FW441-27FW442W443WW444W45nWףWWW47֫W47:40֬W48-bitׂW49W4th׾W5SW֯WֺWW9W>WWW5.2=W5.4.4aWbW5.8W5.9؀W[W^WcWfWjWrWuW}W֏W֒W֘W֝W֤W֨W֯WֳWֶWֹWWWWasecondarymacaddresstableshouldbestoredoutsidethetuVabove\W^WdWabsensecWFJ֦_176`25a6.7.2.4bFix the transmit state machine such that frames that are not wrap eligible are discarded by an edge station if transmitted into edge.cAUnprotected frames are not properly discarded by an edge station. These frames are incorrectly transmitted onto the wrapped datapath by either a center wrap or edge wrap edge station. The current state machine only handles wrap ineligible frames in the into_edge receiver which has no effect on newly inserted frames transmitted into edge by either an edge wrap or center wrap station. d96 2003/10/236.29֧ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_137`53a6.6.2b(replace "before-wrap" with "after wrap".c}Frames initially transmitted with PS=1 appear to have been sent on the "after wrap" datapath, not the "before-wrap" datapath.d68 2003/10/23֨ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding_114`11a6.4.4Pcincrease։W֊WָWincreasedֿWincrementoriWindןWindefinitelyWindentWWindentedWWWW׭WindicatesWWfWgW=W>WOWindicating֣Windication?Windications&W'Wineligible֦WinetMWinfactUWinferWinformationրW֙WֺWSWVW׿WinformativeWinitialcW%WIWinitially֧WinitiatedXWinserted֦Winstability:WYWinstanceYW^WWאWדWinstances]WW׍WinsteadYWrW֣W!W5WinstrumentedYWinsufficientWׯWintegerֳWִWֵWֶWinter-arrival_Winteresting*Winterface֘WFWHWintermediate,Winteroperability+WinteroperateWinterpolation#WintervalWBWCWLWOWintervalsJWintoWWYWkWvW֣W֦WֺW?WPWQWבWintroWintroducedֳWִWֵWֶWH֨bRevise transmit state machines such that only fairness and topology frames are transmitted across an edge and others are either transmitted onto a wrapped datapath or discarded.cThe statement "Frames are not transmitted across an edge" is inconsistent with transmit state machines. Transmit state machines do not preclude frames from being transmitted across an edge. d59 2003/10/23֩ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding_144`31a 6.6.3.6.4biAdd an explicit enqueue to RX_CHECK state machine. See suggested remedy to my comment on pg 206 line 42.cA(The first function in the frame receive process is the receive from edge state machine. Frames which are wrapped by an edge wrap station are incorrectly discarded by the wrapped datapath. Wrapped frames should bypass the RFE state machine and be directly enqueued in the RX_CHECK state machine.( 2003/10/216.19֪ERobertF Castellano^ Editorial_100`20a6.1bFix the run on.cRun on sentence1Ycthestatementframesarenottransmittedacrossanedgeisi֨Vthestatementthevalueisrecalculatedevery100ms19}Vthestyleoftheseitemsdiffersfromothervariables/valuesVthesubfieldsshouldbedescribedintheordertheyoccurinVthesubtractionoperatorinframettl1ishardtoreadַVthetableisimproperlyfragmentedacrosspagesVthetableismorelikenormativeorinformativetextnotadVthetablelinewidthsareincorrectVthetablelinesarethewrongthicknessVthetablerequiresthatclassafddhasfetrue]Vefe|VtheirֲWWthenxWthereUWZWfWkWxW}W֒W֤WָWֻWֽWWthereareacoupleoferrorsintable10.21ֽVthereareanumberoferrorsinthedescriptionanddefinitiֻVtherestillseemstobesomeconfusion/errorsinthelrttca}VthereforeֳWִWֵWֶWthesefW{W֣W֥W֦WּWWWWn`‚D֖֛֮׉׎6_‚Eֈ֬ƃ΃Tׂמ׭Q{ؕ‚FWa֍֢P׍ה׮]n‚GӃו׫߃8Wk‚HpȃՃH‚IŃruׯ׵փ‚JlX*‚Qy҃tX‚R֎֔ЃB^׏װ܃Y‚S[jk֣֘֝/8:\אקױ׃0‚Td֟Uרƃ:`‚Uփֳك;ƒf؊14֝10.14.1|10.14.2}10.14.3֞10.1510.2֔10.3.7h10.4.1.5/6d10.4.2֕10.4.3֖10.4.4֗10.5.510.5.6֘10.5.8֙10.6ּ10.6.1ef֚10.6.2.1.2g10.6.3.2i10.6.3.3jklmǃȃɃ10.7.110.7.1.210.7.1.3ֿ10.7.1.4֛10.7.2.4no־10.7.310.8.5.2pq10.9.1.4ֽ10.9.2.210.9.2.4ֻ12.3.3.1~3֯W3.1ְW3.11֬Aa10.3.7@10.6.2.1.2@11.4.2@5.4.1.2@6.4.4.4@6.6.3.11.4@6.6.4.4@9.3.3.1@!9.5.1@$e@{b1changethecharactersafterttononitalics@1notethatthemixingofsteeringandwrappingstationsreq@changesemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveformattotitleof@~cleared@xcolumn@correcttypoerrorasdescribedincoment@cr@don'tcountfairnessandcontrolframesinrxmcastclassafram@explain@Ufigure@frtt@implementation@9includes@ into@Smachine@missing@must@mytopoinfo@)on@0processing@remove@replacealloccurencesoffigure-cellwithfigure@Preplaceifastationitshallnotrespondatall@8replacerow7with@replacetopodbmyinfoconservativemodebymytopoinfoconserv@ri@ringlet0@*rxframe@Eseparate@|umbershouldbe9.3.2.1@#towards@O*֫ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding_101`12a6.2.1.1b>replace "(((uint64_t)1) << 40)" with "(((uint64_t)1) << 47)" cBinary representation of group bit inconsistent with ISO 15802-1:1995, clause 12.2.1.4 Group bit is the left most bit "MSB" in binary representation.d42 2003/10/23֬ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding_71`34a3.11b}Reorder figure such that da{47:40} aligns with MSB as follows: da{47:40}, da{39:32}, da{33:24}, da{23:16}, da{15:8}, da{7:0}cDa representation in figure 3.4 is inconsistent with ISO 15802-1:1995, clause 12.2.1.4. Binary representation from left to right is da{47:40}, da{39:32}, da{33:24}, da{23:16}, da{15:8}, da{7:0},d23 2003/10/233.4֭ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_83`28a5.4.1.2bNQ ֭bAReplace "The destination_address_extended parameter is required to be provided whenever the source_address_extended parameter is provided." with "Whenever the destination_address_extended parameter is provided, the source_address_extended parameter is also required to be provided".cUReword. The description for extended DA should require extended SA to be supplied. d25 2003/10/23֮ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_83`33a5.4.1.2bAReplace "The source_address_extended parameter is required to be provided whenever the destination_address_extended parameter is provided." with "Whenever the source_address_extended parameter is provided, the destination_address_extended parameter is also required to be provided".cUReword. The description for extended SA should require extended DA to be supplied. d29 2003/10/23֯ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_651`1aE.3b8breplacealloccurencesoffigure-cellwithfigure֤Vreplacebefore-wrapwithafterwrap֧Vreplacedestination-stations9withdestination-stations7ցVreplacefalseandtruewithfalseandtruerespectively`VreplacefinonewiththecorrectexpressionִVreplacefigure9.2thecorrespondingfigurefromdvjcontribVreplacefloodedframescontinuebeyondtheirda-specifieddeֲVreplaceframettl1withַVreplacegettimestampdefinitionwithreferencetocurrenttimVOR ֯bA1. replace "The ISS and EISS service interfaces are provided by the RPR MAC entity when supporting a bridge relay entity. The RPR MAC support of the ISS is defined in IEEE Std 802.1w-2001. The RPR MAC support of the EISS is defined in IEEE Std 802.1Q-1998. A summary of the RPR MAC support of ISS and EISS and associated frame format mappings is included here for informative purposes." with "The ISS and EISS service interfaces are provided by the RPR MAC entity when supporting a bridge reBlay entity. The ISS is defined in clause 6.4 of IEEE Std 802.1w-2001. The EISS is defined in clause 7.1 of IEEE Std 802.1Q-1998." 2. replace lines 11-14 on page 651 with "RPR MAC support of the Internal Sublayer Service is specified in clause 6.5.8 of IEEE Std 802.1w-2001. The following figures illustrate how the M_UNITDATA.request and M_UNITDATA.indication parameters are mapped to the basic and extended RPR frame formats." 3. Remove lines 15-54 on page 651 and lines 1-12 on page 652Q ֯bCC. 4. Remove Table E.1 and Table E.2 5. lines 8-14 on page 656 c3Remove material covered in 802.17a from clause E.3.d568 2003/10/23ְERobertF Castellano^ Editorial_652`14aE.3.1b;Fix references E.11 and E.12 and any other stale referencescUpdate all figure and table references. References to Figures E.11 and E.12 on page 652 are incorrect. They should refer to figures E.9 and E.10d570 2003/10/23ֱERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_140`2a6.6.3.2bDReplace "Not-flooded" with "Non-flooded" in rows 6.16-2 and 6.16-3 c(Replace "Not-flooded" with "Non-flooded" Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_140`4a6.6.3.2breplace "flooded frames continue beyond their da-specified destination" with "Flooded frames are not stripped until their TTL expires."cReword "flooded frames continue beyond their da-specified destination" with "Flooded frames are not stripped until their TTL expires." 2003/10/21ֳERobert$bintovW{W֞W֣W֦WֿW<WPW׸W^W؈Winvalid>WinvocationsWinvolve؆WipMWipgWisWWXWYWZW]W^WrWuWwW֋W֏W֐W֘W֝W֠W֭W֮W֯WֻWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWW W WWWW-W/W1W<WMWOWTWUWנWסWקWשWײWWWWWW W'W,W5W8WAWLWZWeWiWyW}W~W؀WisneverableisnotableVisneverlearnedisnotlearnedViss֯WitXWZWrW֋W֘W֝WֻWW W1W4W<WIWKWOWTWאWזWסWףWקWשWWW,W5WLWYWeWsWwWxWyWitalicizeqWitalicizerprfairnessresetwateqVtemgWזWits֐WWWWןWW*Witself;WjoinSWjpWWbbuiltuWbullet@WbutWWYW/WאWשWײWWbyYWaWiWpW֦W֯WWWWWWWMWTWUWVW-W7W?W@WAWEWjWsWvWwWxWyWbyte_WbyteseWשWbytes/sec׆Wbytes/second׆WcWVWכW׳WW7W@Wc6.1.5c6.2Vc6.1.5.3.2c6.2.3.2Vc2[Wcalculation}WcalculationsWcallIWcallingjW?WcanWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W W W WWWWWWWWWWWWW W"W)W<WWrWsWwWxWyWW֙WWW׃ڃۃ܃WWWWWWWWWWbexplaintWW5WexplaintheuseofindextVexplaining֐WexplanationWexplicit֩Wexplicitly;WexpressionֳWִWֵWֶW4WexpressionsWextendeWextendedTW֭W֮W֯WWexternal+WextrauWךWWWWextraneousbWWfgW~Wfade.WfailWWWTWfailotherwiseVfailedYW1Wfails֛WfailureֿWWWfailures׼WfairnessYW^W։W֊W֋W֐W֨WֹWWW%W'W/WSWׁW׎WאW؀WfairnesseligibleתWfairrateןWvWkWwW֍WָWּWֽWץWצWW]WiWfame1WfashionWfast֒W1WfaultWWfcsW9WPW[W\WfddcW֏WׯWױW]Wfe֍W]Wfeofclassafddtofalseand]Vfeofclasscfddtotrue]VfeltײWfiִWfield֌WֹWWW=WWWfigeWtֳF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_115`44a6.4.4.3b:Replace !MyEdgeRinglet(); with a non-boolean expression. cMyEdgeRinglet is not a boolean expression, therefore the expression !MyEdgeRinglet() is incorrect Draft D2.4 introduced more strict typing nomenclature precluding casual switching between boolean and integer values.d61 2003/10/23bertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_172`17a6.7.1.4b,Replace !FI_NONE with the correct expressioncFI_NONE is not a boolean value therefore !FI_NONE is incorrect Draft D2.4 introduced more strict typing nomenclature precluding casual switching between boolean and integer values. 2003/10/216.28ֵERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_172`17a6.7.1.4b1Replace !myMacAddress with the correct expressioncmyMacAddress is not a boolean value therefore !myMacAddress is incorrect Draft D2.4 introduced more strict typing nomenclature precluding casual switching between boolean and integer values..28_&cmost֫WWהWטWmovelWmoved֏WmsֿWUW}Wmsb֫WmuchWW%W(W)W-WבWWmultiןWmultichokeindisnotsentoncomputingfairrateןV-cpreferenceւWpreferred|W)WprefsWpresenceֺWWpresentW9WpresumablyרWpreventSWVWWWproblems֋W֏W֐Wprocess֩Wprocessed^WWprocessingvWWprogressUWproject֤Wproperly֦Wproperty֤Wproposal֤Wproposed֤WprotectionYW^WfWjWprotocol^WprovideWprovidesWps֧Wptq/stq֣Wpublications֤Wpurpose^WWquestionWquestionableWquestions֤WqueueWW֣WriWpWr1shouldbereplacedbyringlet1iVr0}Wr1}WracekWrate֒WָWratesWratherhW|WrcvdsaֹWrcvdsaissettoframesaֹVreachingjW֣Wreact־WreadoWַWֺWreallyXWfWxWrecalculating{WreceiptXWreceiveYW֣W֩WreceivedUW^W`WvW֏W֣Wreceiver֦WreceivingYWuWָWreceptionUWreclaimedZEֵ 2003/10/236.28ֶERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_176`31a6.7.2.4b:Replace !MyEdgeRinglet(); with a non-boolean expression. cMyEdgeRinglet is not a boolean expression, therefore the expression !MyEdgeRinglet() is incorrect Draft D2.4 introduced more strict typing nomenclature precluding casual switching between boolean and integer values.d97 2003/10/23ַERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_158`13a 6.6.3.10.4b:Replace "frame.ttl -=1" with "frame.ttl = frame.ttl - 1"cWBWIWtypicalWtypingֳWִWֵWֶWtypoVWNWtypobeteenbetweenNVtypoonrow6.27-7descriptionworst-castworst-caseVVuasLWun-fairnessWunacceptableWunambiguous2WunavailableBWunclearWWWWWWWׯWunclearandinsufficientdetailalsotheimportanceofquickׯVunderWWSWunderstandXWbWkWWundesirable*WunfriendlyMWunfriendlytextsuggestreworktoreplaceinetwithipv4orMVuniqueuWunit׆WׇWunknown?Wunknownoamframesarenotcountedtheconcernisthatframe?Vunless!Wunnecessary\WoWWWתWWWWunnecessaryhyphenationinconditionofrow14/15table10.1oVunnecessarytouseequalVed֦Wunprotectedframesarenotproperlydiscardedbyanedgesta֦VunreservedrateW.cmaxָWmax-accessHWOWPWmax-accessnot-accessibleHVmaximumֿW:WYWmayZW{W}W֝WWWWWWWWWWBWCWXW׷WWW.W}WؒWmaybeSWt!WmechanismWWmechanismsWmeetingZW}WmergedֺWWmessageָWWmessagesָWNWmethodkWrWmfrttWmibDWmidnightBWmillionsGWminimumcWminmal&W'WminusOWminutesBWmisleading!Wmismatch:WmismatchedprotectionhWmissedWmissingSWTWքWֈW֌W֘W֚WֺWW W$Wmissingafterringlet0andringlet1քVmissingcharacterVmissingfullstop֚Vmissingperiod VmistakeTWLWmistakenlyWWmode[WWmodes֋WmodifiedkWmonitorWmonitoring!WmoreZWjWuWֳWִWֵWֶWWWW!W0WIWKWc34/35YW3418W35GW36WטW׸W38׸W3867W39:32֬W4UWeW֣WWHWIWOW؅W4.2W415_W417@W441W47W7W47:40֬W48ZW497W5ֺWWW5WEW؅WؑW5.2=W5.4.1XW5.4.3XW5.4.3.2փW5.5W5.6W50ֿWSWUW517GW6YWeWPWQWaWhWiWkWlWnWpWqWתWgW6.19UW6.20SWֺW6.24UW6.27WW6.27-7VW6.3eW6.4.4YW6.4.4.4YW^W6.6.1SW6.6.3.11.2PWQW6.7.1=W644W645W652ְW696W7ZWlW6W]W^WeWfWgWjWmWoWtWEW708W7:0֬W8_WlWֺWW8.6.1=W802W802.17֣W֤W֥W802.17a֯W802.1d֥W802.1q֥W890OW8b/10bW9YWְWW[W\W`WjWtWW֑W9.14-2֐WwּmAccepted-ModifiedvACRG: 1. Remove tpContentChange = FALSE in rows 14 and 18 of Table 10.12. 2. Rewrite the lines beginning with transmitTpFrame and tpContentChange in the action of row 31 in Table 10.18 to: transmitTpFrame ||= (edgeChange || ProtChanged(ri, saved)); tpContentChange ||= transmitTpFrame; 3. The editors will ensure that Table 10.21 is the only place that transmitTpFrame or tpContentChange can be modified to FALSE.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23ֽEJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_380`32a10.9.1.4bA1. In row 1, add tpContentChange = FALSE after the line if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber ... 2. In row 8, replace if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNum += 1 with: if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber = ((myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber += 1) % MAX_SEQNUM);c,There are a couple of errors in Table 10.21.d371jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23screspond֝W֤WTWresponder-WresponseXW}W֗W֝W+W/W;W?WؑWresponse-to-congesti+Wresponsecontrol6WrestVWrestartsףWrestateWnedHWreturnjWmWnWreturnsIWreversionWreversionmode2Wreword֭W֮WֲWrewordfloodedframescontinuebeyondtheirda-specifieddesֲVrewordthedescriptionforextendeddashouldrequireextend֭Vrewordthedescriptionforextendedsashouldrequireextend֮Vrework;WMWrfcBWrfe֩Wrfe0օWrfe1օWriUWuWָWW4W=Wright֋W֬Wrigidly-WringYW]W^WgWuW{W}W֥WָWWWW;WIWSWVWWWXWYWringinfoDWringlethWiWpWqW}WքW֐W֓W֣WָWWWWW3W:W=W>Wringlet/hop}Wringlet0hopsDWringlet1hopsDWringletsTWroundSW ^cenough֞Wenqueued֣W֩Wensure֥WPWYWenteredؘWentriesgWrWWentryvWxWW;WenumeratedWenumeratedvaluesshouldbeindentedVenumeration֎WequalWؒWequationrWWequations׈WטWequivalent[WerrorxWLW؅WؔWerrorsֻWֽW9WPWQW؅W؆Werrors/unpleasantIWesLWese4WessentialYWesw4WetטWetc.WBWWWethernetWeui-640WevaluatevWevenYWeventW@W؏WeventsUWeverySW}WonֳWֶWextendeTWextended֭W֮WextentWexternalZWextra\WextractֺWfgWfactfWfailed^Wfailure֛WWfairnessYW]W^W։W֊W֋WָWWWWfairrateָWfalse`WkWwWyWָWּWfarmes֒Wfast։W֊W֒WfaultuWfaultyfWfdd`W֌W֏Wfe`W֍WcdestinationցWֲW.WZW؍Wdestined֠WdetailVWבWׯWdetailed؄WdetailsWdetectWTWdetectedֺWWYWdetectingWW؏WdetectionUWYW؏Wdetermination%WYWdetermine=WDWsonlytothetpframebeingVdiscussion֋WdistantuWdistractingWdoXWbWcW֋W֨WָWWWWdocumentֺWWdocuments֤WdoeslWxWyW֓W֣WָWWWdomainָW!Wdon'tւWdoneyW{W֛WW!WdownstreamָWdownstreamcongestedָWdraftcWֳWִWֵWֶWֺWdroppedUWdsidofdswrap֑Wdsidofdswrapisnotusedintable9.14֑Vdual-queueWduefWduplicatesWWduplicated^WduplicatesecmacaddreyWduringuWefW֤W֯WְWָWWe-mailcWeachbWkWuWvWWearlierpW֋Weasier֝WֺWeasilyֺWwg}־EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_365`29a10.7.2.4bReplace text that refers to REACT state on pages 365 and 366 with the appropriate text referring to states that exist in the protection state machine.c0The REACT state no longer exists in Table 10.18.d365jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accepted suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23in Table 10.18.d365jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accepted suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/22 the only location that these variables are set back to FALSE. 2003/10/21ֽEJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_380`32a10.9.1.4bA1. In row 1, add tpContentChange = FALSE after the line if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber ... 2. In row 8, replace if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNum += 1 with: if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber = ((myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber += 1) % MAX_SEQNUM);c,There are a couple of errors in Table 10.21.cbeen֧WWWWKWPWWuW؍WbeforebWuW֏W֣WW=WhWbefore-wrap֧WbeginפWWbeginbraceisinwronglocationVbeginningWbegs׷Wcbehavior@bodyoffunctionisindentedoneextraindent@bubble@bulletpointlistishardtoreadwhyallcapsitthiswasc@byteinter-arrivalisspecifiedas1linerate@c2valueshouldbesuppliedforwismode@cetera@mchecksum@clause3.4describesastatecalledreturnusedforstatema@Dclosed@compatibility@conservative@contained@convention@ucounting@d2.6isnolongerabinaryadditionasstatedbytheparagra@decision@defect@demux@destination@cdetermined@different@"doesn't@Ydownstreamcongested@echo@edge-wrap@edges@ enough@beverything@expected@falseisn'tjustnotconservative@fevaluesareinverted@"flushing@form@ found@frequency@from@get@handled@5higher@how׿however@unnecessaryextra2emptypages@doֿEJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_355`3a10.7.1.3bAIncrease the maximum keepalive timeout back to 50 ms. Add clarification into the text to indicate that the upper bound of the configurable keepalive timeout range is greater than 10 ms to enable failure detection at layer 2 to be held off independently of failure detection at layer 1.cSThe maximum keepalive timeout should be increased back to 50 ms, as it was in D2.5.d356jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_347`25a10.6.3.3er 2 to be held off independently of failure detection at layer 1.cSThe maximum keepalive timeout should be increased back to 50 ms, as it was in D2.5.d356jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/22EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_347`25a10.6.3.3st{^Technical, Non-binding_382`41a10.9.2.2b%Give editors license to clarify this.cDiscarding of the TP frame refers only to the TP frame being processed by the MAC control sublayer, and has no impact on processing of TP frames in the MAC datapath sublayer.d372jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23 (BbthatWWZWcWkWuW֏W֐W֘W֛W֠W֦W֨W֬W־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWW W WWW&W'W<WPWאWזWףWײW׻WW,W5WZW\WcWeWsWwWxWyW؅W؆WrWsWtWuWwWրWփWֆWևWֈW֋W֍W֎W֏W֐W֓W֔W֘W֚W֛W֜W֝W֞W֟W֣W֦W֪W֭W֮W֯WִWֵWָWֺWֻWּWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W W W WWWWWWWWWW W%W&W'W)W-W/W0W1W9W;W<W=W>WAWBWCWEWFWGWz5ctheactionsofrows25and26intable10.28seemincorrectzVtheadjustedlrttvalueinrows9.14-2and9.14-3isswapped֐VthearrowcomingfromwtrsmshouldnotoverwritethebubbleVthechangefromsubscripttoadjacentnumbersisokbutnotVVEJasonFFan^ Editorial_399`18a10.14c-Remove spurious period in Clause 10.14 title.d395 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_303`52a10.1.2cqReplace "may" with "could" in phrase "traffic may be wrapped". The "may" statement to this effect is in 10.7.1.1.d221jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_309`28a10.1.12cReplace "may optionally" with "can" in phrase "may optionally be done at a slow periodic interval." The "may" statement to this effect is in 10.14.d241jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept comment.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_309`38a10.2cvReplace "Depending on the configured reversion mode, the state machine may provide" with "The state machine provides".d243jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAcceptednding fanÃăŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃σgjessingу҃jamesԃՃփ׃؃كڃۃ܃݃ރ߃  !"#$%&'()*+,-./0jones9:;<=>?@ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYkao12345678lemonZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~׀ׁׂ׃ׅׄ׆ׇ׈׉׊׋׌׍׎׏אבגדהוזחטיךכלםמןנסעףפץצקרשת׫׬׭׮ׯװױײ׳leonցւփքօֆևֈ։֊֋֌֍֎֏֐֑֖֛֢֚֒֓֔֕֗֘֙֜֝֞֟֠֡michaelSTUVWXYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~ր؀؁؂؃؄؅؆؇؈؉؊؋،peter9:;<=>?@ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYTUVWXYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~րbruckmanցւփքօֆևֈ։֊֋֌֍֎֏֐֑֖֛֢֚֒֓֔֕֗֘֙֜֝֞֟֠֡castellanoְֱֲֳִֵֶַ֣֤֥֦֧֪֭֮֨֩֫֬֯davikָֹֺfanֻּֽ־ֿVp~EJasonFFan^ Editorial_330`34a10.5.5cAReplace "station name ATT" with "station management address ATT".d318 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_345`25a10.6.3.3cReplace "may" with "can" in the phrase "any change in the topology database that may impact the contents of transmitted TP frames".d341jAccept comment.mAccepted-ModifiedvCRG: Accept comment.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_350`37a10.6.3.3cReplace "may" with "could" and "state" with "stage" in the sentence: "The containmentActive variable is not reset as context containment may have been activated by the first state of the topology database update".d351jAccept comment.mAccepted-ModifiedvCRG: Accept comment.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^ Editorial_345`21a10.6.3.3a10.6.3.3acassignedָWassigningWWassociated`WWlWassociation׳WassumegWuW}W֘Wassumed!WassumingW%WTWassuranceZWassuredZWatZW^WcWfWuW}WրW֒W֝WWWWWW9WBWHWVWXWsW׃W׍WבWW5WWfW}WattemptsYWavailable}Wb֡WWWWb-eirWback^W}WּWֿWbadWWW9WbadcommentcharactersVbadlinebreakVbadtablelinethicknessVbandwidths&W'WbanksWbar'dWbasedYWW!W%W&W'WbeUWWWYWZW[W^W_W`WfWgWhWiWjWkWpWqWuWxWzW{W|W}WրWփW։W֊W֏W֖W֗W֝W֣W֤W֥W֩W֭W֮WָWּWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W"W&W'WnfcReplace "state machine" with "state machines" in the sentence: "In the case of any ambiguity with the text and the state machine, the state machine shall take precedence."d340 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_351`29a10.7.1cRemove the sentence "In case of any ambiguity ..." This sentence is redundant with the identical sentence that appears before each state machine.d352j%upgraded to technical Accept comment.mAccepted-ModifiedvCRG: Accept comment.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_352`16a10.7.1.2cReplace "A single link may detect SIGNAL_FAILURE or SIGNAL_DEGRADE conditions" with "SIGNAL_FAILURE or SIGNAL_DEGRADE conditions can be detected on a span."d354jAccept comment.mAccepted-ModifiedvCRG: Accept comment.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23EJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_365`23a10.7.2.4re may be a pending SF or SD condition that is now visible."9creplacedependingontheconfiguredreversionmodethestateVreplacefigure-cellwithfigurefigure-cellisanon-standar֤VreplacemayoptionallywithcaninphrasemayoptionallybeVreplacemaywithcaninthephraseanychangeinthetopologVreplacemaywithcouldandstatewithstageinthesentenceVreplacemaywithcouldinphrasetrafficmaybewrappedtheVreplacemaywithcouldinthesentenceVVreplacenot-floodedwithnon-floodedֱVreplacestatemachinewithstatemachinesinthesentenceVreplacestationnameattwithstationmanagementaddressattVreplacetitleof10.6.3.3topologydatabaseupdatestatemacVreplacedaWiWpWsWvWwWؒWreplacingrWreportWWreported֙WSWVWYW}W֖W֝WrequestsvWrequire֭W֮Wrequired֥WWrequiresZW#WresetWresettingkWresolutionYWZWresolvecWresonֺW`6creplacedependingontheconfiguredreversionmodethestate@qreporting@respond@arestoration@sringlet0@routine@rows@rprspanerrorstatserr@!same@secmac1config@sections@sentence-like@uservices@8setting@=shouldbesingularstacksstack@slow@someproblemswiththesetencestartingfddframes@%specified@start@state@)statemachinesshouldconformtotheconventionthattheact@stq@W?WBWEWGWIWMWOWSWTWUWVWXWYWׂW׃W׎WאWבWוWןWנWקWרWשWתW׬W׮W׺W׼W׾WWWWWWWWWWWW*j ctheWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W$W%W&W'W*W+W,W-W.W/W0W1W5W7W9W:W;W<W=W>W?WAWBWCWDWFWGWHWIWJWKWLWMWNWOWPWSWTWUWVWWWXWYWׂW׃WׄW׎WאWבWדWהWטWנWרWשW׭W׮WׯWײW׷W׽W׾WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW)W-W.W5WEWQWZW[W]W^WhWrWsWtWvWwWxWyW}W~W؀W؁W؅W؇W؈W؊W؍W؏WؐWؑWؒWؓWؔWؖWؗWؘW:*cthanZWhWoW|W֝WָWWW%W-WׯWWthatWWXWYWZW]WjWkWlWuWxWzW{W}WրW֏W֒W֛W֝W֠W֣WָWֺWּWWWWWWWWWW%W-W.W7W9W;W?WBWJWLWOWPWSWTWUWVWWWYWאWפWרWשW׭W׷WWWWWQWZW[W]W^WtWvWxW}W؄W؅W؇W؏WUWWWXWYWZW]W^W`WbWcWeWfWgWhWjWkWlWmWnWpWrWsWuWvWxWzW{W|W}WWրWցWւWփW։W֊W֋W֌W֏W֐W֒W֓W֔W֕W֘W֛W֜W֝W֞W֟W֣W֤W֥W֦W֧W֨W֩W֫W֭W֮WֳWֶWַWָWֺWֻWּW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWbseparate^WWPWWseparatorsWseqnumֽWsequence֏WWsequencenumֽWsequencenumber֎WֽWױWserviceփW֯WW=Wserviceclass=VsetkWָWֹWWW9WCW׸WWsetskW׸W,WsettingָWJWUWײWsettingrprifstatscontrolpertoclearallintervalsandJVseverely(WseverityW@WsfTWshadedWWshall֝W;WשWׯWsWwWxWyWshaperW&WshortWWWshorter)Wshould[W]WcWkWuW֎W֤WֹWֻWWW W W W WWW W@WTWׯWeWvWshowneWנWshowsWsicWside֛WJWbsignal@some@something@specific@statefinal@std@string@sublayers@sum@tableutable-row@taillatencyin@than@ that@ithatn@(theItheclausenumberofsequencenumbershouldbe9.3.2.1@#thereafter@thiscanbedeferred@timeout@>totomakeitbeconsistentwithotherexpressioninstatetabl@towards@try@updatebasedondvjcontribution@useaseparatecolumnforcriticalseveritywithayes/noro@Juseframemakercross-referencesonlines2and17@Xutilize@@abchangesemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveformattotitleofփVchangesentatclassaprioritytosentassubclassa0repeatVchangesentinsubclassa0tosentassubclassa0VVchangespanringletidtospanringletidorspanringletidPVchangestartsagaintostartsagainatstage2orstartsagaVchangestationtostations&Vchangestationsarrivingtostationsarriving׋Vchangesteer-protectiontosteeringprotectionrepeatforco<Vchangesumtoauint32tchangefirstlinetosumchecksumeVchangetakenasconservativetotakenasaconservativeםVchangetcframestatemachinestotpframeprocessingstateVaracterWWWcharacteristicsWcharactersWWW WchecklW֣W֩WֻWcheck3֜WcheckinguWvWchecksumeWSWchoice=WchokeWchosenW9WclarificationֿWclarifyWWclarifyingWclarityW(Wclass=WW5EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_26`8a1bA1) Add a note to classB traffic description (b.2) clarifying that the amount of classB that that can be supported is highly dependent on the number of other stations and the relative sizes of their STQs, which means that only insignificant (.001%) levels of classB traffic can be ensured in a configuration independent fashion. 2) Fix clause 6 to utilize queue-depth controls, as suggested in DVJ contribution.cThe description of classB is inappropriate, since the levels of classB supported by a dual-queue design with a small STQ is vanishingly small in the presence of many dual-queue designs with large STQs. d7t fashion. 2) Fix clause 6 to utilize queue-depth controls, as suggested in DVJ contribution.cThe description of classB is inappropriate, since the levels of classB supported by a dual-queue design with a small STQ is vanishingly small in the presence of many dual-queue designs with large STQs.  Ճփ׃؃كڃۃ܃݃ރ߃  !"#$%&'()*+,-./0123456789:;<=>?@ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~׀ׁׂ׃ׅׄ׆ׇ׈׉׊׋׌׍׎׏אבגדהוזחטיךכלםמןנסעףפץצקרשת׫׬׭׮ׯװױײ׳״׵׶׷׸׹׺׻׼׽׾׿ƒÃăŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃6I 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_26`24a1b1) Note that the mixing of STEERING and WRAPPING stations requires manual intervention to operate successfully. 2) Fix appropriate portions of Clause 6 (or Clause 10) so that plug-and-play is ensured.cmThe description of plug and play is inappropriate, since STEERING and WRAPPING stations do not interoperate. d8 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_47`47a1.14b;(can be deferred) Change DEGRADE conditions. ==> DEGRADE.cBad line break. d19 2003/10/23inding_71`52a3b^Provide an illustration that shows these interfaces as they are used throughout this standard.cVThe ringlet orientation conventions are hard to understand in their descriptive form.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_70`44a3bR(can be deferred) Apply the NameItalic character style to "destinationMacAddress".cKey value is not italics.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorialbstd֯Wsteer1Wsteer-protection<Wsteer/wrap<Wsteered]WsteeringW1WVW׾W<Wstop֚Wstops֛WMWstoreuWstoreduWstqWW'Wstqdepth*WstqsWWstrict1WSWYWstrikeוWךWןW׷W׻WWWWWWWWWWWstrikeazeroto127characterarbitraryprintableasciistrVstrikeasfollowsVstrikebinVstrikedistinct׷Vstrikeeventhoughthattrafficmaybewrapped׻VstrikeextrafigureךVstrikeextraperiodVstrikefigureforline43throughpage354line22VstrikeinformationperVstrikeonalargeringVstrikeoronbroadcastingitsownfairrateןVstrikesecondsentenceVstrikesuchasthevirtualrouterredundancyprotocolvrrpVstrikethelastsentenceVstrikethelastsentenceofthisnoteוVsubclausesWsublayer֯WWWWאW2b1notethatthemixingofsteeringandwrappingstationsreqV1onelesslevelofheadingforthisstuffinthatV1processalltheoamframetypesIV1refertofigure1.4V1removetpcontentchangefalseinrows14and18oftable10ּV1replacefigure-cellwithfigure֤V1replacetheissandeissserviceinterfacesareprovidedb֯V1revisethefairnessframesothatstqcongestioncondition'V1revisethetransmissionprotocolsothatthedownstreamsh&V1revisetheseprotocolsforsimplicityandclarityasperd(V1useshorterconcisenamesfulldescriptionscanbeprovide)V1usethefairnessmessagetocommunicatequeue-depthlevelsV1-12֯W1.24-c׃W1.4WW1.9uWMSb10@210.1.6@10.4@12@2changeto@3adoptthestyleoffigure1.4@(31@G50@802.1d@9-4@areceivesignal@accurately@acurately@addaperiodtotheendofthefollowing@adddefinitionsoflrttrequestlrttframeandlrttincompleted@addshorttextindicatingthestatetable6.27isstand-alon@R*be@before&after@bothclause9and6needtoagreeonwhatisdonetofairnes@built@Tcanbedeferred@changedefinitionofbyteinter-arrivalto8linerate@changesemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveformattotitleof@~classa@cleared@xcolumn@compliant@constants@correcttypoerrorasdescribedincoment@cr@database@day@;dependent@don'tcountfairnessandcontrolframesinrxmcastclassafram@e@eliminateextraneouswhite-spaceproducingparagraphs@em@separate@|bdependentWWdependsWUWdeploying֋Wdequeue<WIWdescribeYWWdescribedVWXWWWWWW=WAW}WdescriptionrWֆWևW֕W֜WWW0W1WOPWדWWWdescriptions)WדW׸W5Wdescriptive}WdesignWdesignators֤WdesignerWdestination֭W֮WֲWW.WWdestinationmacaddresWdestined֠WdetailedאWdetails,W-W.W/WdetectTWdetectedWdetectingWWdetectionֿWSWUWdetectsYWdidֈW9WPWdifferentWdirect֓WdirectionWdirection/instanceWdirectlyזWdisappear+Wdiscarded֏W֦W֨WֻWdiscoverySWdistinct׷WdistinctiveWdivide֞Wdividethetableintotwotablesoneforthestationgenerat֞VdokWֺWWWW+WWdoesֹWKWףWWdon't։W֊W<WX$butilizeWv4MWv6MWvaliduWOWvalidatedsWwWxWyWvalidation{WYWvaliditylWvaluekW֐W֖W֗WW W W WW-W/W9W=WMWPWקWWWW W'W,WIWiW}WvaluescWeWfWsWWWW9W@WBWKWנWWWWWW WvariableTWcWkWW WOW׫WWWWWWvariablescWWWjWvars+Wverbs<WL,`‚V֠݃.7Yjkכף׼jq‚W^zև֋‚X׃h‚YZnx֙ރץ׺J‚Z`֏σ?ׄ ,~‚aւֆן‚br|_׹ǃl‚cÃ؃׻‚d֧ehw׆ZׇW1.12.1[1.13ւ1.14.1׃1.14.2ׄ1.3uW1.4.1֟W1.4.1.2֠W֡W1.4.2.1֢W1.4.3gW1.5.3v1.7.1ק1.9.1ցׂ10()10.1.1S׶׷׸׹10.1.1110.1.12ă10.1.2֒Ã׺׻10.1.5TU׼10.1.6֓VW׽׾10.1.6.1X׿10.1.7Y10.1.810.1.9110.10r7810.11.1s10.13.1.3tu{10.13.1.4vwxyz֜10.14֝10.14.1|10.14.2}a10.14.3֞10.1510.2֔ŃŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃σЃу҃Ӄ10.3.1.1Ճփ10.3.210.3.3كڃۃ10.3.4߃10.3.5oEDavidFJames^ Editorial_87`45a5bU(can be deferred) Apply the Heading4 style to: "Semantics of the service primitive"c!Incorrect style for the heading. d34 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_88`48a5b(can be deferred) On "MULTI_CHOKE_IND", apply the default paragraph character style, to remove its smaller 9-point font characteristics. cIncorrect font size. d35 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_89`12a5b9(can be deferred) Remove the second column of table 5.8. ont size.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_89`12a5b9(can be deferred) Remove the second column of table 5.8. cteristics. cIncorrect font size.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_89`12a5b9(can be deferred) Remove the second column of table 5.8. ncorrect font size.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_89`12a5b9(can be deferred) Remove the second column of table 5.8. 0dboneYWZWvW֛W֞WWWWWWFWPW׸WW؈WoneofthefollowingVVone'srWoneselfWonlykW֨WWWWW W@WTWWontoYW֨W;WopcodeW>WopcodeitalicsopcodeplainVopen]WoperateWoperationדW׹WoperationsCWoperatorYWWoppositeֻWWoptimizingSWoption/W<Woptional=WWoptioncontrolfcsdele\WoptiondatafcsdeletioZWoptionsWorWWXWւ֨WWWWWWWWWW9WCWGIWKWMWOWPWVWדWטWןWסWWWWW+W2W5W?WHWPWQW[WiWorto[VorderWWorgWorganizationW=WotheW-playWpopulateduWportionsWpossibly{WprefereWpreferenceւWprimitiveփWWprocessedYWuWgcYThe "Standardization of functionality" column is redundant, with same entry in all rows. d36003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_90`36a5b{(can be deferred) One of the following: 1) Refer to Figure 1.4. 2) Replicate Figure 1.4. 3) Adopt the style of Figure 1.4. caThe location of the "ringlet selection" mistakenly implies this is part of the control sublayer.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_91`24a5be(can be deferred) Adopt the style of Figure 1.4, where ringlet selection of lower thatn MAC control. cThe location of the "ringlet selection" mistakenly implies this is part of the control sublayer. This applies to Figure 5.5 and 5.6.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_101`16a6.2.1.1b(can be deferred) Change: Q_RX_ADJUST: The queue... ==> Q_RX_ADJUST--The queue... Where the "--" characters represent an em dash. cWThe style of these items differs from other variables/values defined in this document.  2003/10/21EDavidGb50ֿWUWW51rW_W511W511512514V512W'W514W518sW519sW52W_W6YWWW<W>WPWתW7W@WpWuW6.1׈WW6.1.5W6.1.5.3.2W6.14׉W6.16׉W6.16-2ֱW6.16-3ֱW6.19UW6.19-5אW6.2W׈W6.2.3.2W6.249W6.27WW6.3eW6.30-7ײW6.36֣W6.36-16֣W6.4֯W6.4.2W6.4.4.4YW^W6.5.8֯W6.6.3.11.2QW6.6.3.6W6.6.3.6.4W6.6.4WW6.6.4.4WW6.7ֆW6.7.1=W6.9ևW648W651֯W652֯W656֯W7lWכW7.1֯W7.3W7:0֬WW8_WֽWpW؆W8-14֯W8-bitW8.3AW8.6.1=W}W֏W֒W֘W֝W֤W֨W֯WֳWֶWֹWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWW1W9W;W<WjKcthestandardizationoffunctionalitycolumnisredundantwitVthestatemachineascurrentlydefinedacceptsframeswheni؁Vthestatemachineconditionsareoverlyredundantthemultip$V/cthemaximumkeepalivetimeoutshouldbeincreasedbackto50ֿVthemeaningofadefaultticktimeissomewhatquestionableVthemeaningofeventvalueisunclearwhatdotheselettersVthemeasurementoftransittraffictolocalizethedomainsh!Vthemibcrossreftablereferstoringlet0hopsandringlet1hDVthenewnameisnotasdescriptiveasitcouldbeandslightV248^VtheoamspecifiershouldbedefinedintermsoftheouinotVthepagenumbersareitalicsforentriesendingwithitalicsVthereactstatenolongerexistsintable10.18־VtheringletorientationconventionsarehardtounderstandiVthesentencesemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveshouldbeaփVthesentencethetpfarmesandperiodicallyatafastrates֒VthesentenceuserspecificdataiscopiedistooabstractVtheshadedboxhashiddenthebittickmarksVthesourcestationiss1andnots3andthedestinationstatցV( badoptWRbadjustthestatementregardingbinaryadditiontoreferencerVadjust--theWadjustedbW֐WadmindownLWadoptWpVEDavidFJames^ Editorial_103`2a6.2bY(can be deferred) Change to something like: with a granularity no larger than 1 TICK". cThis statement is unclear, and actually implies indefinitely large granularities are OK. "with a granularity of at least 1 TICK." d47 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_109`24ames^ Editorial_103`2a6.2bY(can be deferred) Change to something like: with a granularity no larger than 1 TICK". cThis statement is unclear, and actually implies indefinitely large granularities are OK. "with a granularity of at least 1 TICK."  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_109`24ld."  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_103`2a6bY(can be deferred) Change to something like: with a granularity no larger than 1 TICK". cThis statement is unclear, and actually implies indefinitely large granularities are OK. "with a granularity of at least 1 TICK."  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_109`24#bthereafter֒WtheseWWW(W<WBWEW؅WtheyYWW-WLWyWthicknessWthinWWWWWWthird֍WthisZW{W|W֋W֙W֠WWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W W W WWWWWWWWWW"W.W/W0W9W<W>WKWMWOWPWSWׂW׎WאWגWדWוWלWץWרWײW׾WWWWW+W,W0W6W8WLWQWdWrWsWwWxWyW؆W؎WWָWֹWֻWּW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W WtocWtopodbaWuWtopoentriesuWtopoentryuW}Wtopology֓W֚W֨Wtopostability}Wtotalhopsrx}WUbequationsrWerrorVWWWW W؅Werroranactiveerrorsignalisreceivedonrxerror VerrorthephyorrsinterfacesignaledanerrorduringframeVerrors}W9WPW؆WescapeWese4WWesw4WWetcW WWWevenW W׻Wevent>WIWevery}WeverywhereWWexaminationsWwWxWyWexamine<Wexaminecontrolframe<WexamplefWkW}WWW=WJW W WexceptWexcessivedWWexcessivelyWexchangeSWexcluded֤Wexist־Wexistintheprotectionstatemachine־VexpandWexpectedֈW9WPWfWexpertsWexpired$WexpiresֲWbequations@explain@Ufalse@figure@final@font@forallstatetablesinthetwostatecolumnscolumn1and5@framettlframettl1@frtt@getting@herehide@high@ifthesenamesarenotdictatedbysomeotherstandardchang@implementation@9incolumn1ofthetablejoinrows1118soallaretheleng@n@non-null@oamflushreq@on@0one@other@passseq@please@processing@quantify@real@refer@remove@removethatfromframesthatdestinedto@ replacealloccurencesoffigure-cellwithfigure@Preplaceifastationitshallnotrespondatall@8replacerow7with@replacetopodbmyinfoconservativemodebymytopoinfoconserv@resetting@rewordlike@ri@ringlet0@*rxframe@Eseedvjcontributionfordetails@separate@|blastָW׍W׎WוW׺WW9W:W;W}W؍WlatencyWlatencytimestamp}WlateruW!W؅WlayerֿWlayeredFWlearnedWleastZWW<WleaveWlegendWeWlengthSW WWAWlessW7W@WletterbWlettersWlevelW׾WlevelsWWlicenseWWlikeWW9W;W<WBWFWJWKWMWOWSWTWUWXWYWרWirrate*Wlocalfairratemin*Vlocalfairrateupperbo*Wlocalfairrateupperbolpaddrate*VlofWlogicWWlongWloophWqWlotWlowւWlow-preferenceւWlowerWlpaddrate*WlrttbW}W֐W֝W֞W%Wlrttcomplete}Wlrttrequesthandle}Wlrttrequesttransmit}Wlrttresponsehandle}Wluck/Wm֯Wma=Wmacontrolrequest=VmacZW^WuWxW֯WWWW W WW;W=WZ*ctimekW֌W֝WW-W/W1WSWXW׆WׇWWzWWؔWtimestampfieldismissinginthefddpayloadfigure֌Vtime-criticalSWtime-synchronization%Wtime/eventBWtimeframeUWtimeoutֿWtimer7Wtimes%WׂWWeofcellbisincorrectlabeledVVtoUWWWXWYWZW]W^WcWfWgWhWjWkWlWmWnWoWuWvWwWyW|W}WW֋W֏W֐W֒W֛W֝W֠W֣W֤W֥W֧W֬W֭W֮WְWַWָWֹWֺWּWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W%W&W'W(W)W+W,W/W9W:W;W=W>W?W@WBWDWGWIWJWKWLWMWOWPWQWSWUWVWWWXWYWZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWa6bX(can be deferred) Describe this term better, so its implications are better understood. cEThe term MFRTT is an acronym that should be spelled out on first use.d53 2003/10/23vidFJames^Technical, Binding_109`24a6b1) Use the fairness message to communicate queue-depth levels, as per DVJ contribution. 2) Update this equation accordingly, eliminating the dependencies on number and size of others STQs. cA"This equation is unacceptable, as the levels of supportable classB traffic are unacceptable. 1) It implies a single-queue design has no levels of supportable classB traffic. 2) It implies that 256 stations with 16x larger STQs limit the cumulative (classA1+B) traffic to less than .05%" 2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_109`41a6b(can be deferred) 1) Expand the term on first usage, such as: "ring round trip time (RRTT)..." 2) Include the RRTT acronym in Clause 4. c$Expand the term RTT, on first usage. 2003/10/21>bsomeֈWW:WCWKWEWsomebody/Wsonet/sdh[WWsourceTWֈW֭W֮WWsourceaddressextendeVsourceaddressextendedVsource-stationցWspanYWspanedgestatuslWspecificZWspecificationWspecifications֥WspecifiedZW֯W WspecifyZW-W/Wspecifying֛WsplitvWsplittable10.28into2tablesoneforreceivedattprocessvVstagejWstaleְWstamps֌Wstand-aloneWWstandardZWWstartSW֜W֣WstartsWstateSWWWjWkWmWnWuWwW{W֣W֦W֨W֩WֺW־Wstatefinal֣Vstatetable10.21shouldbetheonlyplacethatsetsthevarkVstatedZWWstatementrWWstatementsrWstates־WstationֈW֋W֘W֛W֝W֞W֦WWWstations֓WָWWWWWstatusWWWWW W  Wq=EDavidFJames^ Editorial_110`46a6bc(can be deferred) EIther remove the note or improve its clarity. Its unclear to even some experts. cA4This note in unclear. NOTEAdditional traffic can be reclaimed outside of the fairness algorithm when a station can do so without impacting the service guarantees of the service classes whose traffic is being reclaimed. Any additional mechanisms for accomplishing this are beyond the scope of this standard.4d56 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_112`4a6.4bAThe shaper should be defined in a way that guarantees the latency of short control messages is not affected by long TP or othe messages. This means that one only sends when credits are positive by the amount of the frame size, before the frame is transmitted.lcinrow2and3oftable9.14idonotunderstandwhatthe2bVinrow204Vinrow5thenextstateshallbesecinsteadoffinish5Vinrow7nodefinitionformatchtosecmac6Vinthecaseofastationtransitpathfailurethestationmu֛Vinthedescriptionofttlappearstpinsteadoftc֕Vinthesamesentencehigh-preferenceandlowpreferenceeithւVinthesentenceifastationhasweightequalto1oneitherؒVinthesentenceindicatestheprotectionstateonthewestsؐVinthetoclofandlottheyshouldbeplainVinvaliditycheckringletloopshouldbeconsistentwithotheqVinabilityWinactiveYW^W׎WאWinappropriateWWcreclaimedWcwonderingWWwordגWךWעWװWWؒWwordingVWWwordsWWWXWYWWwordsareabittooextremeinvokingemotionratherthanknoVwork֤WWworksYWworst!W+Wworst-caseVW.Wworst-castVWwouldWWfWgWjWxW}WW:W?WIWױWWQWrWwrap^W֖W֗W֛W֣W֦W֧W֩W)WXWwrapped^W֣W֦W֩WWq/EDavidFJames^ Editorial_215`33a7b?(can be deferred) Consider perhaps" Not (null) ==> (non-null)c1The following notation is unclear: "Not (null)"d101 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_216`18a7b(can be deferred) An indication of whether the frame was received in error. ERRORThe PHY or RS interface signaled an error during frame transmission. OK(Otherwise.) c?This notation is too verbose and inconsistent with other usage.d103 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_216`51a7b. ERRORThe PHY or RS interface signaled an error during frame transmission. OK(Otherwise.) c?This notation is too verbose and inconsistent with other usage. 2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_216`51a7bbotherYW^WkW֛WְWWWW4W<W׃W׼WWWEWotherripW֣WW4Wothers֨WW׈WotherwiseWWWWWWWWW W W WWWWEWHWiWour.WoutW<WWWWoutputsWWoutsideuWWovaleWovalseWoverBW}Woverlap@Woverview^WownןW*Wp248YWpacketphyWpacketsYW^W\Wpage^WrW֋W֯WWWWWWWWWWWsW׆W׎WWWWWWWWWWhWuWaSWparagraph֋WWW׍WלW׺W׽WWWparagraphsdWWparallel֋Wparameter֭W֮WWparameters֯WWWWWWBWWparen׌WparensWpartuW֋Wpartially?WparticularWpassed9WאW7W@WpassivelyאWbframettlframettl1ַVframemakerZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀WYWframereceivedWframesYW։W֊W֠W֦W֨WֲWWWW9W?WPWSWWW׎WאWWWWAW؈WfrombWgWoWuWօW֠WWWWWWWW#W$W<WLWTWׂWאWכW׵WWWWWWWW#W'W?WkWrWsWvWwWxWyW؅W؎WfrontWWXdcpreviouscWָWJW׭WWWprevioususesofiamtaildidnotindicateneedingtoresolve׭Vprimarily(WprimitiveփWEW؊WpriorׂWpriorityW!WWprobablysWֺWWproblemUWuWproblems֋W֏W֐W@Wprocess֩Wprocessed^WWprocessingvWW9WIWLWשWWWprogressUWproject֤Wproper׋Wproperly֦WWproperty֤Wproposal֤Wproposed֤WprotectVWprotectionYW^WfWjW1W:W=WHWSWUWVWXW׽WW؄WؐWprotocol^W(W/WSWVWprotocols%WSWWprovideWprovided&W'W:WprovidesWVW׍WבWps֧Wpse4Wpsw4Wptq/stq֣Wpublications֤WpunctuationMWpurpose^WWYWpush׍Wacedbyringlet1iVr0}Wr1}WracekWramp-up+Wrate֒WָWratesW&W'W bA(can be deferred) The parameters of the PHY_LINK_STATUS.indication are described below. LINK_STATUS A parameter that indicates the status of the link as detected by the PHY: SIGNAL_FAILA link fault condition has been detected. SIGNAL_DEGRADEA link degradation condition has been detected. DEGRADE_FAILBoth the degrade and fail conditions have been detected. NO_DEFECT(Otherwise.) Not all reconciliation sublayers support SIGNAL_DEGRADE. SOBNET/SDH reconciliation sublayers support SIGNAL_DEGRADE, and PacketPHY reconciliation sublayers may not support SIGNAL_DEGRADE.mc?This notation is too verbose and inconsistent with other usage.d104 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_217`39a7b)Cbnon-booleanֳWֶWnon-floodedֱWnon-italics WneִWnormative֥Wnormative/informativWnotYWֈW֏W֝W֦WֲWֹWֺWWWWWWWW W W WWWnotnullnon-nullVnotreadyrsindicatesthatthemacshouldnotsenddata V Vnot-floodedֱWnotationWnote^W֋W֣WWWWWnoteddWnull}WW WnumbereW֎W֏WWWWWnumbersWoccupancyWoccurences֤WofSWTWYWZW^W_WbWcWeWhWoWtWuWwWրWփW֋W֎W֔W֕W֜W֣W֤W֯WֻWּWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W WWWWWWoffֿWokWWW WokotherwiseV VoldWbreferWDWQWreference]WrWuWW@WGW׃WW+WEWHWLWreferenceshouldbefigure9.2sincefigure9.3isanopens]VreferencedjWreferencesְW:WEWכW׫W1Wreferring־WײWrefers֐W־Wreflect|W׎WregardingrW֋WregularWWreject>WrelatedrWrelativeWWrelax1Wrelay֯Wrelevant.WremainderAWremedies؆Wremedy֩WremoteW bA8(can be deferred) The parameters of the PHY_READY.indication are described below. READY_STATUS An indication of whether the reconciliation sublayer is able to accept a frame from the MAC. NOT_READYThe reconciliation sublayer is unable to accept a frame READY(Otherwise.) 8c?This notation is too verbose and inconsistent with other usage.d105 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_221`42a7b(can be deferred) Apply "NameItalic" to the first column entries of Table 7.3: Flag sequence Control escape And, work on consistency throughout.cInconsistent italics.d107 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_222`31a7b{(can be deferred) Apply "NameItalic" to the following: address, control, SAPI, FCS And, work on consistency throughout.cInconsistent italics.d108 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_223`11a7bv(can be deferred) Change the dot notation for multiply, to use the 'x' symbol, which is preferred by the IEEE styles. cDeprecated notationd109 2003/10/23vidFJames^ Editorial_227`1a7b/(can be deferred) Delete these two blank pages.cDelete two blank pages. 2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_386`28a10.10b3(can be deferred) Move the tick marks to the front.c-The shaded box has hidden the bit tick marks. 2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_412`25a11.2.1.2bW(can be deferred) MOve the table to normative/informative specification text elsewhere.cVThe table is more like normative or informative text, not a definition of terminology. 2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_415`25a11.3bq(can be deferred) One of the following: 1) Delete the sentence or 2) Change to: The userData field is copied...c@The sentence "User specific data is copied..." is too abstract.  2003/10/21EDavidFJamesRbemWWW"WemdashVemptiedWenableֿWWenablesWencloseyWencodedWendTWmWnWwWW WׂW׃WׅW׌WWW W W%W-WFWJWending؍WendssWenqueue֣W֩W<WensurewWWPWensureclearsecmacisinitializedtofalseandisclearedatwVensuredWWenteredWenteringWentity֯WWentriesWUWpWentry9WDWשWenumeratedWequalWequationW/W׈WנWסWWW@bchangedefinitionofbyteinter-arrivalto8linerate_VchangedescriptiontotypeofprotectionconfigurationhereVchangedescriptionsorindicateadjacenttotabletoexplain5VchangedistinctivetypeattweightandlengthfieldvaluestVchangedroptodiscard/VchangeenabletoenablesVchangeequation10.15toequation10.17Vchangeequationtoequation10.16Vchangeetctoand45minutespastthehourWVchangeeventvaluetoeventvalueIVchangeexamplevaluetoexamplevaluethroughoutclause10 VsonVchangeistoareVchangeistoasVchangeistotobe VchangeloopterminatorforringlettobeconsistentwiththehVchangelrttframestatemachinesee10.14.3tolrttframeprVchangelrttframestatemachinetolrttframeprocessingstaVchangemaybeasfollowstomaybeusedasfollowsעVchangemytopoinfobadfcsusertonameitaliccharacterstyleV<lEDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_417`42a11b_1) Fix this text. 2) If alarm names are ALL_CAPS, then use the underscore as proper separators.c_All text has been made bold, which make it unclear what are the formal names and what is text. d428 2003/10/23vidFJames^Technical, Binding_423`23a 11.5.1.6.4bPChange: rc == RR_DEFAULT ==> rc.responseRinglet == RR_DEFAULT or (em dash)cIncorrect code.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_434`12a11.9b/Use very thin in the center, thin on the edges.c b) Receive signal...c(Title of cell (b) is incorrect labeled. d505 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_462`42aBbrred) Change: a) Receive signal... ==> b) Receive signal...c(Title of cell (b) is incorrect labeled.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_462`42aBbs^ Editorial_460`31aBbK(can be deferred) Change: a) Receive signal... ==> b) Receive signal...c(Title of cell (b) is incorrect labeled.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_462`42aBbW  bA4The parameters of the PHY_LINK_STATUS.indication are described below. LINK_STATUS An indication of link status. SIGNAL_FAILEither of: link_fault has the values Local Fault or Remote Fault, or signalFail is asserted. NO_DEFECT(Otherwise.)4c(Title of cell (b) is incorrect labeled. d507 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_463`13aBbAThe parameters of the PHY_READY.indication are described below. READY_STATUS An indication of when the PRS-10 is ready to accept another frame. NOT_READYthe PRS-10 is transmitting a preamble, or a frame, or the IPG. READY(Otherwise.)c*Overly verbose and inconsistent notation.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_479`9aCb(this can be deferred) 1) Change the characters after T to non italics: RDAT[7:0] 2) Search for italics '[', ']', 0-9, ':' italics characters, and convert to plain. Wyc4Values should be italics, not bracketes or numbers. d511 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_480`40aCbAX(this can be deferred) Change to: STATUS Identify frames that are received with error indications from the PHY, for example, due to assertion of a error signal on the PHY electrical interface. ERRORThe PHY signaled an error during frame transmission to the reconciliation sublayer. OK(Otherwise.) Xc!Inconsistent and overly verbose. d512 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_481`12a C.3.1.5.2.2b(this can be deferred) Change to: The parameters of the PHY_READY.indication are described below. READY_STATUS (provide a description here) NOT_READYRS indicates that the MAC should not send data READY(Otherwise.) c!Inconsistent and overly verbose. d514 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_487`16aC.4.1.5b{gb1changethecharactersafterttononitalicsV1changetoV1combineintoonebadfcsframespertablePV1correctthetrue/falsedefinitionsֻV1decideonauniformlineconventionVV1delaythelrtthereandelsewhere%V1deletethesentenceorV1deletetheshadedrectangleonpage444V1expandthetermonfirstusagesuchasV1figurelinesverythinbetweenrowsandcolumnsVV1fixthistextV1inrow1addtpcontentchangefalseafterthelineiftpconֽV1mandatethedelayofanechoresponseafterareceiptofaVbplease[W1Wpleaseinlcudethefollowings1Vpli Wplug-and-playWSWplusOWWpoint@WׂW׾WeWpointseWpopulateduWportionWportionsWposition9W:W;WpositiveWpossibleׯW؆Wpossibleremedies؆Vpossibly{WײWWWpracticeWpreambleWprecedeWprecedingWpreferablyuWprefereWpreferenceւWpreferencesWpreferredW/WײWprefersטWprefsWpreventVWpreventsWpreviousJWדWprimitiveփWWEWprintableWpriorityWproblem<WprocessIWprocessedYWuWyK EDavidFJames^ Editorial_486`15aC.4.1.5b(this can be deferred) Add a period to the end of the following. (Null)Indicates the value of the LENGTH should not be used for PLI mappingcMissing period. d517 2003/10/23 EDavidFJames^ Editorial_488`4aC.4.1.5b(this can be deferred) READY_STATUS An attribute that takes the value of: NOT_READYRS indicates that the MAC should not send data. READY(Otherwise.) c!Inconsistent and overly verbose. d520 2003/10/23 EDavidFJames^ Editorial_490`31aCuld not be used for PLI mappingcMissing period.  2003/10/21 EDavidFJames^ Editorial_488`4aCb(this can be deferred) READY_STATUS An attribute that takes the value of: NOT_READYRS indicates that the MAC should not send data. READY(Otherwise.) c!Inconsistent and overly verbose.  2003/10/21 EDavidFJames^ Editorial_490`31aCbrealWrecalculated}WreceiptWreceiveWW9WZW؅WreceivedYWvW֏W֝WWWW WPWW2WreceivesאWreceiving֞W1W,WreceptionuWreconciliationZWWWWWrectangleWredrawWreduceבWoWreducefontsizeofsinglechokeindtomatchrestoftablefioVredundancyW;`bdatabasejW֓WWdatapath֨WWWאWׯW7W@WdateWWcWWWdefaultsUWdefectuWWWdeferredWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W W W WWWWWWWWWWWWW W"Wdefine֏W֘WW<WIWVWdefinethatifaclasscfddisnotreceivedwithin100msect֏Vdefinethatisthestationinterfaceindexattismissingfo֘Vdefined֯WW:WBWdefinesVWdefinition_WcW֑WW9WdefinitionsֻWdegradationWdegradeWWdegradeconditionsdegradeVdelayW%W/W1WdelayedWdeleteWWWWdeletethesetwoblankpagesVdependenciesW b(this can be deferred) Fill in the row corresponding to 000(2). Even if this is illegal, it should be specified for completeness. cIncomplete table d522 2003/10/23 EDavidFJames^ Editorial_494`4aC.5.1.5b(this can be deferred) STATUS Indicates an interface error for the current data request: ERRORAn active error signal is received on RxError. OK(Otherwise.)c"Inconsistent and overly verbose. d525 2003/10/23 EDavidFJames^ Editorial_494`32aCb(this can be deferred) READY_STATUS An attribute that takes the value of: NOT_READYRS indicates that the MAC should not send data. READY(Otherwise.) c"Inconsistent and overly verbose. d527 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_497`10aCbV(this can be deferred) 1) Decide on a uniform line convention. 2) Do this everywhere. (b2changetoV2correctthetitleoftheroutinecurrentlypassseqֻV2dothiseverywhereVV2dothisforothersubclauseswithinthisclauseV2figurelinesthinontheoutsideV2finalcellshouldbeshadedat30V2includetherrttacronyminclause4V2redrawtheshadedrectanglemissingonpage443V2replicatefigure1.4V2thiscountsbothcontrolanddatawithbadfcserrorsPV2.9؆W206֩W21W217W22`WW227RW228RW23׆WW23:16֬W247֋W25zWdWW250W252WW253W255W256שW26zWW260hW28`WW2863LWNW29sWhW290uW291hW296׆W2lrtt״W2nd֣WW3UWYWbWeW֤W֥W֯WֻWWW/WIWPWpW״W׽WWW5WpW؆Weoffigure1.4V3sameappliestopage648line26V30WsWbfinal֣WWfindindex}WfinishWfirst֋WWW׺WW؈W؍W؎Wfix}W֦W֪WְWWWW:W@WAWDWEWHWJWNW`WdWoWfixcapitalization`Vfixcase:VfixquoteHVfixreferencese11ande12andanyotherstalereferencesְVfixtableentrytorefertoringinfonumstationsDVfixthecrossreferencesEVfixthefigureAVfixtherunon֪VfixthetextlikeJVfixthetransmitstatemachinesuchthatframesthatarenot֦VfixthisdVfixtypoNVflagWflagsequenceVflood؂WfloodedֲW؈Wflow/Wflush=WfollowנWפW׺WWfollowingYW֣W֯WWWW WWWVW׃W׌W׎WנWרWׯW׽WWWWJWjWfollowings1Wfollows}W֬WWPWזWעWWWiWWֻWWWWWWWWWbcompliantZWcomponentנWcomputationccomputed-Wconcise)WconditionoW֣WWTW7W@W[W؅WconditionalWWconditionsWWW'WconfigurableֿWconfigurationvWWW,WconfigurationsuWconfiguredXWWW,WconfiguringxWconflicting^WconformswWxWcongestedWcongestionW'W+WiWconservative%W+WSWםW~WconservativemodeaW׮WjWkWconservativerateadju#WconsiderW>W?Wconsideraddingacounterforunknownoamframes?VconsiderperhapsVconsistencyqWWW<W{W|WconsistentfWhW4W:W<WEWconsistentlyטWWconsistentlyleavestatemachineoutofthenamesinthelisVconsistentlyusesubscriptsornotthroughout9.1.3.29.1.3.טVfthesamepageas^Vcorrectthenumberofbytesshownforthe3checksumvalueseV>6bthiscanbedeferredVVVV V V V V VVVVVVVVV"Vthisobjectcontainsthevalueofofthestationipv4orv6MVthoseWthough׻WthreeנWthroughKWׂWףW׽WWWWWWW'W,W؆WthroughoutWWW׃WטWצW׫WWWW WW!W<WthusגW؎Wtic׊WtickWW׊Wtime֌WW/W1WSWXWWzW{W|WWtimelinefW֙W֠W֥W֩W֭W֮W֯WָWֹWֻWּW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W WWWWWWW W/W0W4W9W:W;W<W=W>W@WBWCWDWIWJWKWPWQWSWUWVWWWXWM~cWe need a standard convention for footnote boundaries under tables. I prefer to have no surrounding box, since this looks too much like another row. d528 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_499`45aC.6.1.5b(this can be deferred) Change to: An attribute that takes the value of: NOT_READYRS indicates that the MAC should not send a data request. READY(Otherwise.) c"Inconsistent and overly verbose. d532 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_500`5aCb5(this can be deferred) Eliminate the blank paragraph.cExtra white space d534 2003/10/23vidFJames^ Editorial_0`0a0bV(this can be deferred) 1) Decide on a uniform line convention. 2) Do this everywhere. cWe need a standard convention for footnote boundaries under tables. I prefer to have no surrounding box, since this looks too much like another row. Page 497, line 10d4 2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_498`22aCbanindicationofwhethertheframewasreceivedinerrorVanalogousWandUWYWZW^W`WbWcWjWpWrWuWvWwWxW|W}WքWօW։W֊W֋W֍W֏W֐W֛W֞W֥W֨W֯WְWֱWֺWּW־WWWWWWWWWWWW W!W%W(W+W,W/W9W;W<W>W@WBWFWGWJWPWQWRWSWTWUWVWWWXWYWZW_W`WdWnWpWsWzWW׃WׄW׈W׉W׎WאWבWטWכWלWףWץWצWרWײW׳W״W׵WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W"W#W'W+W,W5W6W7W<W>W@WAWEWFWMWRWUWVWWWYWZW\W]WgWhWuWWMR&b(this can be deferred) 1) One less level of heading for this stuff, in that: C.6.1.5 ==> C.6.2 (...) C.6.1.5.3.2 ==> C.6.2.3.2 2) Do this for other subclauses within this clause. cDExcessive heading depth; the IEEE convention is depth 5 (at most). d529 2003/10/23vidFJames^ Editorial_502`47aCb<(this can be deferred) Force a new page before this heading.c'Keep heading with the following table.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_504`31aCb<(this can be deferred) Force a new page before this heading.c-Keep heading the complete table on one page.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^ Editorial_512`3aD.4.2b(this can be deferred) Eliminate this dark underline below the Row heading, on pages: 511, 512, 514 This can be done by selecting before&after text, then applying very thin to Row inside Borders.c4The dark line below the Row heading is distracting.  2003/10/21EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_644`1aE.1.4.1;tRb@Rbz@Fcr@%cA'b*b+cA-b/bA1bAc5c9bA;bAW?WIWobjectMWobject-typeHWOWPWobjectiveXWobjectivesSWobjectsBWobvioustWWoccurW؅WoccuringUWoccursUWBWrEDavidFJames^ Editorial_250`33a9.1bA1) Change to: When a station is congested depends on the station design, as follows: a) Dual-queue. Occupancy of the secondary transit queue (STQ; see 6.4.2) is excessive. b) SIngle-queue. Either of two conditions are sensed. i) The rate of transmission is excessive relative to the capacity of the transmission link. ii) Traffic is delayed excessively while awaiting transmission. 2) Delete the following note.cThe list and note is unclear.d134 2003/10/23 EDavidFJames^ Editorial_251`2a9.1.3bx(can be deferred) Change to non-italics, the '(', ')', and 1 characters. Italics should only be used for variable names.cExcessive italics.d137 2003/10/23elete the following note.cThe list and note is unclear. 2003/10/21 EDavidFJames^ Editorial_251`2a9.1ffic is delayed excessively while awaiting transmission. 2) Delete the following note.bwithinfigure9.6nexttothearrowschangesubscriptnumberVwithout^Wwiyh֋Wword؎WwordingWworkWW<Wworst1W csubscriptWטWsubscriptsטWsubsectionsyWsubsetWsubtractionַWsuccessionׯWsuchW-WױW׷WWWsWwWxWsuggest֣WMWsuggested}Wv!EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_247`20a9.1b&Change as appropriate, here and later.cA8The measurement of transit traffic, to localize the domain, should not depend on monitoring of upstream priority levels, since these can be misleading unless accurately done. Instead, the worst cast highest priority should be assumed. This is simpler and more compatible with per-flow based fairness weightings.8d118 2003/10/23"EDavidFJames^ Editorial_275`13a9.4.2.4b&(this can be deferred) Add an em dash.c2A null condition should be listed with an em dash.d174 2003/10/23#EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_277`9a9.4b-Replace with Table 9.8 from DVJ contribution.caThis state machine is redundant, uses inconsistent font sizes, and requires visual interpolation.d176 2003/10/23$EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_293`23a9.5b.Replace with Table 9.14 from DVJ contribution. bfontWoWforYWeWhWjWkWqWvWxW}W֘W֞W֥W֯WֺWWWWWWWWWW W W WWW W(W,W-W.W/W0W1W9W=W>W?WFWJWKWOWSWXW_W`WׁW׃W׉WכW׿WWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWW$W0W5W<WFWHWUWZWpW{W|W؅W؆W؈Wt10.13andprotectionstatejVforceWWforceanewpagebeforethisheadingVVformatփW֯WMWכWformats֯WformulaסWforwardedYWforwardingYWfourWfourtimesonthispageVfragmentssWframeXW}WֈW֔W֣W֯WַWֹWֻWWWWWWWWW'W1W;W<W=WIWPWTWVWאWׯWWWWWWWWWbwhenever֭W֮WwhereWWW9W<WPWVWwherethecharactersrepresentanemdashVVwhetherWW9W,WiWwhichjWuW֐WֻWWW,W/W@WUWW,W2W؀WwhichispreferredbytheieeestylesVwhileW0W׏WwhiteWWwhite-spaceWwholeWwhy,WwiWwill֋W/W1WCWFWJWOWPWאWwis[Wwith`WfWhWlWyWzWցWւWֈW֏W֒W֓W֔W֕W֜W֝W֠W֡W֢W֤W֧W֫W֬W֭W֮֯WֱWֲWֳWִWֵWֶWַWּWֽW־WWWWWWWW#W$W0W4W9WPWSWuWנWװW׽W׾WWWWW W+W7W@WEW\WeWfWrWsWwWxW{W|WasexpectedֈVwiththestationsthendirect֓Vwithin֋W֏WWWׯWbnon-nullWnoneִW؂W؄Wnonenochange؄VnonstandardWnormative֥Wnormative/informativWnormcoefנWnormlpfwrateלWnormlpfwratecongesteלWnotYWֈW֏W֝W֦WֲWֹWֺWWWWWWWW W W WWW+W-W9WKWLWPWUWXWאWטWףWײWWWEWZWfWiWsWwWxWyW؈Wnotnullnon-nullVnotreadyrsindicatesthatthemacshouldnotsenddata V Vnot-floodedֱWnotablyeWnotablyitshouldbefig6.3withjusttheadditionoftheoeVnotationWnote^W֋W֣WWWWW׎WוWׯWWfWlWrWsWwWxWyWialrVnoteddWnotingײWeWnull}WW WnumbereW֎W֏WWWWWPWuWכWnumbersWnumstationsDWoWoam=W>W?WIW@WAWfWbhighւWhigh-preferenceւWhigher'WhighlyWholdoffXWhop}Whops4W WhWjWhopstocongestionָW׮WײWhourWWhow֯W-W׿Whyphen/space<WhyphenationoWiYWWWW.WVWiamtail׬W׭WiWvWiamtailframefairratercvdrateiamtailtruevVidW=WPWideaUWidentifier֤WW=WPWidentifiesWidentifyW,Widles؆Wieee֯WW_Wieee/rac0WifrW}W֏W֛W֝W֣W֦WֻWּWֽWW W*W;WOWTWסWקWײW׿WWW,W.W7W@WEWfWrWsWwWxWyW~W؀Wifdeemedusefulgiveacross-referencetol2formoreinfo׿Vifframeftftfairnessframefftypemultichokethen؀Vifstqdepth*VifthetpshouldonlybesentawayfromthesfthenupdatetTVLWD_Ã: ָֹxÃ:0ac׭׮ׯװױy}~Ã:@b֐$׳״׵Ã:P֑Ã:`׆Ã:ׁÃA SzÃA0׶׷׸׹WÃApXYÃA1ÃA֔ăÃBhÃC dÃC0֕ÃC@֖ÃCP֗ÃD֘ÃD ֙0ÃD@֚ÃDPef2ÃDgÃEPi3ÃE`jǃɃÃEpkּÃE4ÃEl)ÃFmÃF ÃF0ÃF`ֿÃFp֛ÃG0(ÃG@oÃGPnÃG`־ÃGÃGÃHPpÃH`qÃIֽÃI0ÃI@ֻÃIP56ÃI`r7ÃIp8ÃJ0sÃJPtuÃJ`{ÃJpvwxÃJyzÃJ֜ÃJ|֝ÃQ}aÃQ0֞ÃQ@ÃR0ÃR`ÃRpÃR:ÃRxÃR;ÃS@<ÃSPyÃS`=ÃS>ÃS?IÃT0bÃTPcÃTzÃU@ÃU {ÃU0ÃU@AÃUP~BÃUpdÃVPeÃV`ÃWÃW fÃW0ÃW@ÃW`|ÃX0gÃXÃYhbaddaperiodtotheendofthefollowing Vaddatablerowindicatingwismodesonet/sdhc2signallabe[Vaddavariablesdefinitionsectionto9.5thatincludesfrttcVaddafterringlet0andringlet1քVaddanemdash"Vaddanexplicitenqueuetorxcheckstatemachineseesugges֩VaddappropriatecrremovehyphenationfromconditioncolumnoVaddattcontentsinvariablecolumnVaddbadfcsuservariabletoringinfoinsamemannerasdonefVVaddbyusingthedefaultringletroutinewithinringletselec-VaddcommaafterallowedratecongestedמVaddcommabeforeanduptoVVaddcommabeforerespectivelyVgy֚Vaddmoreexplanationand/oraddlistofvalueshereandpageVaddperiodtoendofsentenceׅV V VaddperiodstoendsofsentencesandsentencefragmentsonlsVaddrespectivelytoendofsentenceVaddringinfobadfcsuservariablecalculationsinsamemannerVv%EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_281`3a9.4bm1) Delay the LRTT here and elsewhere. 2) Revise the conservative fairness protocols, as per DVJ contribution.cAEliminate the LRTT determination protocols. These are hard to implement. By passing through stations, their accuracy for time-synchronization is degraded, so they are not useful for this. The best way to improve the performance of conservative protocols is to maintain history, so that dithering congested-uncongested conditions don't start fresh on each iteration. This give much better performance than assuming a hard initial condition, based in funny guesses, and then delaying the samplingB times.d180 2003/10/23congested conditions don't start fresh on each iteration. This give much better performance than assuming a hard initial condition, based in funny guesses, and then delaying the samplingB times. 2003/10/21cthisstatemachineisredundantusesinconsistentfontsizes#Vthisstatetablehasanumberoferrors/unpleasantthingsinIVthisstatementisunclearVthisstatementisunclearandactuallyimpliesindefinitelyVthissubclauseisofnouseAVthistabledoesn'tdealwiththecasewheretheoamrequest>VthistextmayleadpeopletothinkweuseblsrsignalingandXVthisusesthesamevaluesasusedbytherifieldVthiswordingusuallyisusedforbooleanvaluesVthoseWthoughSWthreeָW:Wthreshold،WؔWthroughUWWW^WWWW%WXW׸WthsfWthus+WrWtickWWWx cannexրW.WvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀WannexkincludessolitleadditionalinformationandissosրV&EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_200`3a6.7bb1) Revise the transmission protocol, so that the downstream shaper rates are per DVJ contribution.cThe downstream shaper should limit rates based on indications of downstream STQ depths, as provided by the fairness frame. Otherwise, only minmal (and hard to manage) levels of classA1/classB bandwidths can be supported.d98 2003/10/23'EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_268`14a9nny guesses, and then delaying the samplingB times. 2003/10/21&EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_200`3a6.7bb1) Revise the transmission protocol, so that the downstream shaper rates are per DVJ contribution.cThe downstream shaper should limit rates based on indications of downstream STQ depths, as provided by the fairness frame. Otherwise, only minmal (and hard to manage) levels of classA1/classB bandwidths can be supported. 2003/10/21'EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_268`14a9c"ZcdetermineduWdiamond؄WdictatedVWdid9WPW׭Wdiffer}WdiffersWdifficultֺWdirect֓WdirectionhWdirectlyYW֩WdisablingQWdisagreeBWdiscarded֦W֩W?WdiscardingWdiscardingofthetpframerefersonlytothetpframebeingVdiscoverySWdiscussion֋WBWdistantuWdistinct׷WsWwWxWdistinctiveWdistractingWdistributed*Wdithering%WdoXWbWcW֋W֨WָWWWW9WLWSWTWטWW.W\WdocumentֺWWdocuments֤WdoeslWxWyW֓W֣WָWWW/W1W?WUWXWZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀WׄWאWהWטW׻WWW+W,W-W7W@W^W+WEcconservative%W*W+W,WSW׮WW~Wconservative/aggress+WconservativemodeaW|WkWconservativemodeisdefinedinclause10kVconservativerateadju|Wconsider؄WconsistVWconsistencyfW}WWconsistentfWmWnWqW{W|WؗWconsistentterminology{V|Vconsistently}WWWWconsistsפWconstant-Wconstants`Wcontact_Wcontactieeeracforguidanceifnothingreceivedbystarto_VcontaineWOWהWsWwWxWntactiveWcontainsMWcontentsWcontextWSWYW׭WcontinueYWֲWcontradictדWcontrolUWXW։W֊W֥WWWWW9W=W?WAWNWPWQWVWWW\WaWbWcontrolmessagesandthetotallinkcapacityNVcontrolframereceivedIWcontrolled+WXWcontrolsCWcontroltype?WIWcontroversialKWD _Ã1&dcratherhW|WW؍WratioNWrcvdratevWrcvdsaֹWrcvdsaissettoframesaֹVre-arranged^Wre-steer׿WreachingjW֣WhWreact־WreadoWַWֺW:Wread-onlyOWPWread-writeHWreadabilityrWtWreadersWWreadingWWלWreallyXWfWxW+WSWרWreasonBWWWWWrecalculated}Wrecalculating{WreceiptXW}WreceiveYW֣W֩W9W׍WאWyWؘWreceivedUW^W`WvW֏W֣WPWWWZW_WؔWreceiver֦WreceivesאWreceivingYWuWָWreceptionUWreclaimedY'bk1) Revise the fairness frame, so that STQ congestion conditions are also included, as per DVJ contribution.cThe downstream shaper should limit rates based on indications of downstream STQ depths, as provided by the fairness frame. Otherwise, only minmal (and hard to manage) levels of classA1/classB bandwidths can be supported.d15803/10/21(EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_362`3a10.7.2.4bN1) Revise these protocols for simplicity and clarity, as per DVJ contribution.cThese state machines are a _much_ too complex expression of a relatively simple protocol, primarily due to their change-driven (as opposed to state driven) nature. 2003/10/21)EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_349`23a10.6.3.3bY1) Use shorter concise names. Full descriptions can be provided in the row descriptions.cTThere is no need to wrap long state names; unwrapped short names are much preferred. 2003/10/21*EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_281`27a9.4us+EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_281`8a9.4bEither: 1) Both conservative and aggressive support ramp-up, when downstream congestion reports disappear. 2) Both conservative and aggressive do not support ramp-up, when downstream congestion reports disappear.crcing a _very_ low upper bound if weights are distributed in interesting ways. 2003/10/21+EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_281`8a9.4bEither: 1) Both conservative and aggressive support ramp-up, when downstream congestion reports disappear. 2) Both conservative and aggressive do not support ramp-up, when downstream congestion reports disappear.cs%,EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_272`3a9.4.1bNClearly identify which are required and why. See DVJ contribution for details.cMany of these intermediate values are only needed by aggressive, or only by conservative, or only when shapers are not used to limit sendC and sendCc. However, the writeup seems to imply all are required. d169 2003/10/23-EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_285`3a9.4.5.4bSimply specify what is the filtered value accuracy requirements, not how often they are computed. See DVJ contribution for details.cThe computation of communicated values (such as fairRate) is done with a time constant that is much longer than the ageCoef time. As such, the frequency of computations should not be rigidly specified. d187 2003/10/23ndCc. However, the writeup seems to imply all are required.  2003/10/21-EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_285`3a9cexpectedcW9WPWexperienceWexpiresֲWexplainedWexplainingWexplanationXWexplicitKWexplicitlyXW;WlWexpressionֳWֶW(WWvWextendeTWextended֭W֮W؉WextentWexternalZWextra\WWHWWWextraquoteatendofdescriptionHVextrawhitespaceVextractֺWBWextraneousWWWWextraneousperiodVVVVextremeWfgW:WW׀WfactfWfailWTWfailed^WWWfailsWWfailure֛WW8WTWUWWW׼WfairnessYW]W^W։W֊W֋WָWWWWW!W&W'W/WNWSW׍W׎WאWדW؀Wfairnessinstancesdon'tattempttoreceiveframesatanypo׍VfairnesseligibleתWfairrateָW-WןWvWfallsTWfalse`WkWwWyWָWּWץWצWW]W`W֍Wecbe+W-W.W3W5W7W:W;W?W@WFWHWJWKWLWPWQWSWTWVWYWזWץWצWקW׭WײW׷W׿WWWWWWWWWWWWWW*WQWZW^W`WeWmWrWsWvWwWxW؃W؆W؇W؈W؊W،W؏WؐWؑWؒWؓWؔWؕWؖWؗWؘWbecause9WBWKWPWbecausethishasbeencontroversiali'dliketomakethedesKVbecome;WYbcdownstreamcongestedָWdraftcWֳWִWֵWֶWֺWdraft-ietf-adslmib-hBWdraft-ietf-ops-mib-rBWdraw;Wdriven(W}Wdrop/WZW[W\Wdropisanoverloadedterm/VdroppedUWdropsבWdsidofdswrap֑Wdsidofdswrapisnotusedintable9.14֑Vdual-queueWduefW(WWduplicatesWW@WךWWduplicateperiodVduplicatewordךVduplicated^WduplicatesecmacaddreyWduplicationSWduplicative׸WWduplicativephrasesVduringuW؏WؔWdynamics+WefW֤W֯WְWָWW7W:WBWHWOWUWzW{WؘWe-mailcWeachbWkWuWvWW%WFWSWearlierpW֋WearthTWeasier֝WֺW:WWWeasilyֺWeastFWؐWqacreporting+WVWrepresentation֫W֬WWrepresentingsWwWxWrepresentsFWGWreq}W=WIWrequestXWfWxW}W֖W֝W;W=W>WIWؑWrequestsvWVWrequire֭W֮Wrequired֥WW,WLWSWWrequirementBWUWrequirementsVWrequiresZW#WVW]WreservedNWWresetWBWHWresettingkWresiliencySWresolutionYWZWresolvecW׭W_WresonֺWE|bseedvjcontributionfordetails,Vseems<Wsees֢Wselectcontrolframe<WIWselected5WselectingWselectionW-W5Wselects=WsemanticsփWWsemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveVsemicolonסWsendWW W WWIWWWsenda؃Wsendd؃Wsendframe}Wsending׎WsendsW;WsensedWsensibleֈWsentYW֋WWW;WTWׯWWWWsentenceZW֏W֣WWWsWuW׃WׅW׍W׎WבWוWנWץWקWרW׺W׽WWWW W W%W,W-WAWFWJWQW}W؍W؎WsentencessW^cmanyoftheseintermediatevaluesareonlyneededbyaggress,Vmapping0WmarksWmatch1W9WPWmatchtosecmac6Wmaterial֯W.EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_680`45aGbInclude relevant text, so something survives when our memories fade. Alternatively, put this in Annex I. See DVJ contribution for details.cThe descriptions of queue sizes, etc., is incomplete without the text that describes how the worst-case jitter is derived. This text should be included, either here or in Annex I. d576 2003/10/23/EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_675`42aGbn our memories fade. Alternatively, put this in Annex I. See DVJ contribution for details.cThe descriptions of queue sizes, etc., is incomplete without the text that describes how the worst-case jitter is derived. This text should be included, either here or in Annex I.  2003/10/21/EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_675`42aGb bincluderelevanttextsosomethingsurviveswhenourmemorie.Vincludethecontentofannexkinclause10removeannexkրVincluded֯W'WyW%cslow֒WWsmWWWsmallրWWsmoothed}WsnumױWsoXWfWրW֋WW%WSW׷WWsomefWgWkW}WֈW֋W֏W֐WWCWKWWWWWsomeproblemswithtable9.14֐Vchowever,WhyphenationoWiWWXWYWZWbWcWkWuWW֤WָWWWWW.W9W;W=WBWHWOWSWTWUW׽WWWZW؄WؘWiamnottoohappywiththeresolutionofcomment192fromdYVibelivethatoptiondatafcsdeletiovariablewasdefinedforZVicannotseeanyneedforthecodeblockwithindefinenewcVidisagreewiththestatementthewemustusethetcsbecausBVf`cidonotseeanyattempttoresolvecomment245fromthepre@iewillberetainedacrosssystemreset@ifoneofmylinkshasgonedownhowdoibroadcastonboth@1illustrated@impact@2in@ inadditiontonotreflectingthecurrenttopologyvariable@inbulletashallnottcframetransmitoverfailurespan@linrow2and3oftable9.14idonotunderstandwhatthe2@include@inconsistentspacingaroundequations@^incorrectreferencestyle@Pincrease@Iindex@intro@introduction@intuitively@yinverted@isisn't@it@,itmaynotbecleartoallreadersthattheprevioussmwas@italisization@itself@leads@?linked@ma@manyoftheseintermediatevaluesareonlyneededbyaggress@max@^me@.ferencetoclause9doesnotuseframemakercross-referenc@Hremoveunnecessaryextra2emptypages@A /bAEither: 1) Add the fairness response protocol delay time, but specify this is TBD. 2) Add the fairness response protocol delay time, and get somebody to specify this (good luck :>). 3) Accept DVJ upper-class protocols flow control, which bound this to an easily quantified much smaller value. See DVJ contribution for details. Option (3) is _strongly_ preferred, since the equation will yield much more classA1/classB bandwidths *and* is much easier to quantify.cThe description of STQ size is incorrect. It does not include the fairness protocol response time, which is (very) hard to quantify.d574 2003/10/23vidFJames^Technical, Binding_0`0a0bbUpgrade this description with dvjRacText.pdf, to improve the text while waiting for the IEEE/RAC. czThe description of the EUI-64 should more clearly specify is mapping. Same thing is true for Clause 11. Page 331, line 26d5 2003/10/211EJimFKao^Technical, Non-binding_307`32a10.1.9bbsomethingWW.W9WבWרWsonet/sdh[WWXWsoonׯWsourceTWֈW֭W֮WW;W؈WsourceaddressextendeVsourceaddressextendedVsource-stationցWspaceWW#WRWspacing׈WspanYW1WWW׏WWPWspanedgestate4WspanedgestatuslWspanprotstate4WspansFWablesoneforreceivedattprocessvVstagejWstaleְWstamps֌Wstand-aloneWWstandardZWWstartSW֜W֣WstartsWstateSWWWjWkWmWnWuWwW{W֣W֦W֨W֩WֺW־W4Wstatefinal֣Vstatetable10.21shouldbetheonlyplacethatsetsthevarkVstatedZWWstatementrWWstatementsrWstates־WstationֈW֋W֘W֛W֝W֞W֦WWW1Wstations֓WָWWWWWstatusWWWWW W  W~bquantify/WqueueWW<WIWqueue-depthWWqueuesWIWquotations֤WquoteHWriWpWrac_Wramp-up+WrangeֿW'WrapidSWrate֒WWratesW&WratheruWאWrcWrcresponseringletrrdefaultVrcrrdefaultVrcvdratevWrcvdsaֹWrcvdsashouldbesettoframesacompactasfairnessmessagesֹVrdatWrdat7:0Vre-steer׿WreachingWreact־Wread؍Wread-onlyPWreading֋WreadyWWW W WWreadyotherwise V Vreadystatus V VbeYW֥W֯WְWW@WIWPWVWזWףWeach^WcWwWFW*Weasier/Weasily/WeastFWechoXWW;WIW7WedgeYWlW֋W֣W֦W֨WW1W׎WאWWWedge-wrapYWedge-wrapped^W֋WedgechangelWּWedgesWWWeditor9W7W@WfWsWwWxWyWeditor'sfWeditorialrWsWwWxWyWeditorsWWyWeffectWeiss֯WeitherWWւW֨WWWW+/G؆WeitherremovethenoteorimproveitsclarityitsuncleartoVeitherreplacehigh-preferencewithhighpreferenceւVelectricalWWeligible֦WeliminateWWWWWA 1vACRG: The editors will modify 10.1.9 to clarify the difference in protection time for relaxed mode and strict mode traffic. In addition, the following sentence will be added to the first paragraph: If TP frames continue to be lost, the time for notification of topology change increases by additional multiples of the TP frame transmission period. In addition, starting with "Steering protection occurs ...", lines 32-36 will be removed. wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/232EJimFKao^Technical, Non-binding_334`1a10.6.1cAdd reversionMode in myTopolnfod328jupgraded to technicalv=CRG: The definition of reversionMode will be moved to 10.3.3.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/2310.103EJimFKao^Technical, Non-binding_344`8a10.6.3.2cIt shall be ringlet+=1d338j%upgraded to technical Accept comment.mAccepted-ModifiedvCRG: Duplicate of #337.wAccepted-Duplicate 2003/10/234EJimFKao^Technical, Non-binding_347vrelaxed1Winlcude the followings 1. Add the description the protection time for strict mode traffic. 2. As for relax traffic a. Steering station will steer traffic after receiving a TP frame reported a span failed. The protection time will be x * fast TP timer + RRTT at worst case assumed x copy of TP fame is missed. b. Wrap protection will wrap traffic at the edge station, it might add additional RRTT delay for wrapped traffic traveling at wrap span.^_ֺ֤ԃ0פ‚7Ճ‚8Z‚Cv‚Eק‚Hցׂ؍‚S|‚U[‚Vւ‚X׃׃ׄ‚wר‚‚֬‚T֭֮ڃ؉‚‚փ܃݃؊‚‚‚‚‚\Ã!֪Ã! ׅ֫׈؋Ã!@քtÃ!P،Ã!Ã!Ã"Ã" ׉Ã"0Ã"P֨Ã"`ֳ؂Ã"pYօÃ"׊Ã# ֆÃ#PևÃ#`؃Ã$֧Ã$ֈ׋Ã%ֱֲÃ%0؄Ã%P։֩؅Ã%pZ\Ã%S؆Ã%ރ[؇Ã&@֊Ã&ַ؀Ã&9Ã'U؁؈Ã'pWÃ'VÃ'XÃ(0ִֵÃ(pֶ֦Ã1a10.6.2.1.2g10.6.3.2i3ؖ10.6.3.3jklmּǃȃɃ̓)410.7.110.7.1.110.7.1.2˃10.7.1.3ֿ10.7.1.4֛10.7.2.210.7.2.4no־̃(10.7.310.8.5.2pq10.9.1.4ֽ10.9.2.210.9.2.4ֻؗ10.9.2.556ؘ1111.1%&^11.2.1.2'(11.2.2.1)11.2.2.29:11.2.2.3*11.2.3+11.311.3.1.2,11.3.1.3-11.3.3./11.3.3.1_11.4.1```11.9.3c1212.2.1.2z12.2.3.2@12.2.4.2{12.3.3A12.3.3.1~12.3.3.2B12.4.3d2.1.6eW3֯W؃CW3.1ְW~WW3.1.5.2.2hW3.1.5.3.2iW3.1.6fW3.11֬3.4.1ר4|WW4.1.5jW4.1.5.2.2kW4.1.5.3.2lW4.2DWEWQW4.3׀W5ڃۃ܃݃ރ߃5.1.2FW5.1.3GWrWsWצW5.1.4W5.1.5mWnW5.2tW^technicalbinding֣V֤V֥V֦V֨V֩V֫V֬VVVVVVVVVVVV!V#V$V%V&V'V(V)V*V+V,V-V.V/V0VSbconstantsWcontainedsWcontainmentWWSWYWcontainmentactivelWcontainsMWOWcontentրWyWcontentsWcontextWWSWYWcontinueֲWcontinuesףWcontributionWWWWW#W$W%W&W'W(W,W-W.W/Wcontrol։W֊WWWWW/W9W=WIWPW)WAW\WcontrolescapeVcontrolpacketswithbadfcsarealwaysdropped\VcontrolsWCWcontroltype}WװWWconventionWWWconventionsBWwWxWconvertW:Wconverttotable:Vcoordinate9Wcoordinating7W@WcopiedWcopyYW1Wcopybadfcs9WcorrectVW^WeWִWֵWֻW׎WדWףWפW7W@WBWCWGWLWYWepageas^Vcorrectthenumberofbytesshownforthe3checksumvalueseVcorrectthisphrasetomatchthecorrectoperationorcorrecדVbspecificZWWspecificallysWwWxWyWspecificationWspecifications֥WspecifiedZW֯W W=WMWspecifiesSWspecifyZW-W/W@WHWspecifying֛WsplitvW؈Wsplittable10.28into2tablesoneforreceivedattprocessvVsplituptherowintoasecondrowthefirstonechecksfor؈VstacksFWstagejWWWstaleְWstamps֌Wstand-aloneWWstandardZWWSWEWstartSW֜W֣W>WstartinguWstartsWWstatPWstateSWWWjWkWmWnWuWwW{W֣W֦W֨W֩WֺW־W4W9WIWVWWWWWWWWWW[WpWyW֞W֦WWW1W;WMWstations֓WָWWWWWSWTWVWWWYW׋WstatisticsCWJWKWstatsLWstatusWWWWW W  WPW&Jctopoentryrihopsspanprotstate04Vtopoentryrihopsspanprotstate14VtopologyYWfWrW֓WWWW7W:WSWYW׮WtopotypeuWtotalNWWtotalhopstxhWؓWtotallyZWtowards^W;WtpUWsWuW֒W֔W֕WWWTWUWVWWWW؏WؘWtpcontentchangekWּWtpcontentchangecannotbemodifiedandusedinthemanneritkVtraffic֓WWWWWW!WSWVWYWtrailingTWtranmissionָWtransit֛W!WZWtransmissionYW֣W֥WUWׯWtransmissions֥WtransmitXWkW֣W֨W8WhWtransmits֣Wtransmitted^W}W֟W֣W֦W֧W֨WW;W=WWtransmittingYWtransmittpframeּWtried֤Wtrigger7WtriggeredUWtriggersּWVWtripSWzWWtrue`WfWkWּW0WץWצWקWרW]WvWטW*WG9EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_159`17a 6.6.3.11.2bt a), Shall not TC frame transmit over failure span ?d381 2003/10/229EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_159`17a 6.6.3.11.2b 2003/10/228EJimFKao^Technical, Non-binding_386`42a10.10c=in bullet a), Shall not TC frame transmit over failure span ?d381 2003/10/229EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_159`17a 6.6.3.11.2bhall not TC frame transmit over failure span ?d381 2003/10/229EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_159`17a 6.6.3.11.2bn ?d381 2003/10/229EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_159`17a 6.6.3.11.2bP9:EPeterFJones^ Editorial_417`42a11.4.2bvFix case. Convert to table. Make cross references consistent (some are xxxx IN yyy, some are xxxx AS DEFINED IN yyy)cABullet point list is hard to read. Why all caps? It this was converted to a table it would be easier to read the three separate elements of "Name", "reference", "Severity". d2.6 text The alarms provided are as follows: a) RINGLET ID MISMATCH IN 10.9.2.1: CRITICAL SEVERITY. b) TOPOLOGY INSTABILITY IN 10.8.1: CRITICAL SEVERITY. c) TOPOLOGY INCONSISTENCY IN 10.8.2: CRITICAL SEVERITY. d) MAXIMUM NUMBER OF STATIONS EXCEEDED, IN 10.8.3: CRITICAL SEVERITY. e) PROTECTION CONFIGURATION MISMATCH AB?S DEFINED IN 10.5.1.6. f) THE LRTTDEFECT AS DEFINED IN 10.14.3.-d429 2003/10/23;EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_419`44a11.5.1.2bes that were not copied to the client or the MAC control sub layer because their FCS values did not match their expected FCS values. 9bAPropose to change the definition and associate state table entry (table 6.24 row 5) to count the FCS errors independent of whether the client has chosen to receive bad FCS frames. Suggest something like. badRxFcsFrames A counter for data or control frames where the FCS values did not match the expected FCS value. This includes data frames passed to the client as a result of copyBadFcs being set to true. coordinate with MIB editor to update as required.cAI think that the MAC should count all bad FCS frames regardless of whether the client choses to receive them. The MACs job is to do the FCS processing. The client can choose to get the frames regardless. As it, If I chose to get BAD FCS frames at the client, I don't get a record of how many FCS errors were present. D2.6 text badRxFcsFrames A counter for frames that were not copied to the client or the MAC control sub layer because their FCS values did not match their expected FCS values.d87 2003/10/23bpassthroughUWpassthru؁W؆WpastWWpathWW֋W֛WpathsMWpdf}WW0WsWyWpenultimate׎WperW%W&W'W(WPWVWXWWper-byteשWperformanceBWperhapsWperiodW WׅWW W WWWWW%WFWSWperiodically֒WperiodssWpermissibleשWpermitBWpg֩Wphrase׃WאWדW~Wphy֣WWWWWWWWWPWphysZWpics֥WWׁWשWplacekWWWרW3Wplaceheadingresponseringletinitalicsusingnameitalic3VplaceonemoretabbeforeVplaceperiodVplaced^WplaceskWplainWW׌WW׌W׌WebtryWttl֕WֲWַWײWW؀WtwiceuWtwo֞WֺWWWFWGW׸WWtx֣Wtxframe}Wtxringlet}WtypeWWWWtypesBWIWtypicallyWtypoVWNWuׇWuint32Wuint64֫Wun-fairnessWunableWunavailableXWunavailablesecondsXWunclearWunderYWunderlineWunderscoreWunderstoodWundesirableWuniformWWuniquesWunitdata֯Wunits/granularitycWunits/granularityofeachvariableandanydefaultvaluestocVunknown?WunlessLWTW5WunnecessarilyWunnecessaryXWWunreservedrateWunstable}WuntiluWֲWWsWwWxWyWupאWVW؈WupdatejWlW}WWWWW9WTWWTWWWoccatthed2.5resolutionmeetingiwasassuredthatreconciliaZVatduW֘WSW׷WWWWattvW֘WWؒWؕWattemptcWfW}W׍WאWesHWOWavailable}WavoidedUWavoidingSWawayTWb֡WWWW:WVW|Wb-eirWback^W}WּWֿWbadWWW9WPWQWbadcommentcharactersVbadlinebreakVbadtablelinethicknessVbaddatafcsframesQWbadfcsframesPWQWbadrxfcsframes9WPWQWbandwidths&W'WbanksWbar'dWbaseSWbasedYWW!W%W&W'W=WbeUWWWYWZW[W^W_W`WfWgWhWiWjWkWpWqWuWxWzW{W|W}WրWփW։W֊W֏W֖W֗W֝W֣W֤W֥W֩W֭W֮WָWּWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W"W&W'W<!csub9WPWVWsubclase؋Wsubclasemissinganytext؋VsubclauseׁWזW׾WAWsubfieldWsubfieldsWsubfigure֤Wsubfigures֤WsubheadingWsublayerZW֣WWWWsublayersZWsubmittedPWsubmitting֤Wcbulletpointlistishardtoreadwhyallcapsitthiswasc:VbundlesשWbut^W`WgWlWuW֤WWWWW+WIWWWWW}W؍WbyUW^WaWiWjWpWrW{W֣W֥W֦W֩WָWֺWּWWWWWW%W&W'W+W,WLWMWSWTWVWWW_WhWjWrWvWzW}WW؏WؒWbypass֩WֺWbyte_WָWcmaXW=W?WaWbWmacZWfWsWuW֣W֥WWWW9W;W=W?WAWFWJWKWPWׂWWmachinejWkW֣W֦W֩WֺWWWWWW#W$WIWVWWWWyW؁WmachinesWWjW{W֨WW(WsWwWxWmacropWmacs9WWmadeWPWmaintain^W%W׎WmakexWWW7WIWKWאWױW׻W7W@WmakesoW։W֊WֺWW=WmakingWmanage&W'WmanagementWHWؕWmandatorilyZWmannerkWmanualWmanyWW,W9WWWYW ;bAReword like: The echo request source station shall generate an echo request frame sent towards the target station in response to a MAC client request. If a station sends an echo request to itself, both the echo request and the echo response SHALL be explicitly transmitted onto the ringcAI think that the last sentence needs to become a "shall" and draw a PICS entry. Also a slight rework to the text to clarify that the ability to send echo to yourself is not optional. d2.6 text The echo request source station shall generate an echo request frame sent towards the target station in response to a MAC client request. A station is allowed to send an echo request to itself. In this case, both the echo request and the echo response will be explicitly transmitted onto the ring.d438 2003/10/23EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_428`25a11.5.4.4b{Insert a row between 5 and 6 to reject the invalid OAM request and return to START Consider adding a counter for this eventcAThis table doesn't deal with the case where the OAM request is not one of the supported types. D2.6 text Row 11.5-3: If opcode of client request indicates echo request generate echo request frame Row 11.5-4: If opcode of client request indicates flush generate flush frame. Row 11.5-5: If opcode of client request indicates organization specific generate organization specific frame. Row 11.5-6: Forward frame to the ringlet selectiond453 2003/10/2311.5?EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_429`49a 11.5.5.1.4b1Consider adding a counter for unknown OAM frames,cboamflushreq=VobjectMWobject-typePWobtuse7W@WoccupancyWoccur؆Woccurences֤WoccurrencesׂWofSWTWYWZW^W_WbWcWeWhWoWtWuWwWրWփW֋W֎W֔W֕W֜W֣W֤W֯WֻWּWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W WWWWWW1W9W=WBWCWFWJWKWMWPWSWUWVWWWsWׂW׃WׅW׈W׍W׎WוWטWנWרWשWׯW׸W׺W׾WWWWWWWWWWW W WW"W%W'W+W,W-W0W2W4W7W<W@WAWFWJW]WcWeWiWjWkWoWrWsWuWvWwWxWyW؍W؎WWWW WokotherwiseV VoldWyxbclassa֏W׳WW]Wclassa1/classb/WclassbWclassc֏WׯW׳W]Wclasues^WclauseYW^WhWրWփW֋W֎W֏W֯WWWWW<W@WPWSW_W`WrWuWׁWׂW׃WהWכWתW׫WWWW WW7W<W@WjWkWsWwWxWyWzWWclauses^WWclearWJWYWclearallintervalsJW5bmacprotectionoptional=Vmacaddress}Wb802.1d֥W802.1q֥W802.1q-1998֯W802.1w-2001֯W9YW_W`WׁW׫WjWkWsWwWxWyW؆W9-pointW9.1YWנWסW9.1.3.2טW9.1.3.3טW9.1.3.4טW9.10uWwW9.13xW9.14$WuW9.14-2֐W9.14-3֐W9.2]WW9.3]WחW9.3.1חW9.3.2.1֎W9.4֤W9.4.10yW9.4.9yW9.5cW֏WyW9.6W9.8#W9.9pWsW900OWaZW[W^WcWfWjWrWuW}W֏W֒W֘W֝W֤W֨W֯WֳWֶWֹWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWW1W9W;W<W>W?W@WIWPWTWVWWWuWאWםWסWקWװW׳W׽W׾W׿WWWWWWW WW(W+W.W7W=W@WDWEWHWYWcWeWiWrWvWwWxW;bbefore&afterWbefore-wrap֧WbeginWbeginningּW WcWbeing9WקWbelieveYWbelowWWWWWWbest-effortWbetterWbetween֐W֣WWW>W@WSWWRWbeyondֲWbfWbiיWbidirectionalXWbinWbinaryrWblankWWWblsrXWbold׵WbooleanקWiWborderBWbordersWCWGWbothYW^WrW|WW+W;WPWboth10.14andmibx-reftableneedupdatingtoreflectthis|V?7citself;Wj@WwWjitter.Wjob9WjustXWxW։W֊WTWׯWW؄WkրW׊WkeepWWkeepheadingthecompletetableononepageVkeepheadingwiththefollowingtableVkeep-alive^W֋Wkeepalive^WֿW׎Wkeepalives^WkeptזWkeyWkeyvalueisnotitalicsVknowWknowledgeWWWlxWyW׿Wl12DWlabeledWWlabelsטWlargeWWWWWoWlargerWlas؏WlastָW;WשW׺W׻WWWW^W}W؏Wlaststateissupposedtobereturnaccordingtoclause3VlastneighbormacaddrefWlater֝WlatesthWlatter؈WlayerZW֣W9WPWWlayeredFWlayering֣WleadXW&W'W,WlimitedָWlineYWZWָWWWWWWWW7WGWlinerate_WlinesWWWWlinkWNWSWcdecisionWZW[WdeclareuWdeclaredUWdecomposedsWwWdecreaseBWdecrementedָWdefaultcWlWW=W}W" cflushingWflushingasteeredringusinganechodoesnotworkasnotedVfollow}W׃WנWfollowingXWjWrW֣WWWVWטWפW׾WsWwW}W؏WؓWؔWؖWfollows:WPWQWהWvWfontW#WoWfontsizeofsinglechokeindtoolargeoVfootnoteWWforTWWW[W]W^WcWeWfWhWjWrWsWtWvWxW}WWփW։W֊W֏W֣W֤W֭W֮WָWֺWWWWWWWW%W0W1W6W7W9W=WBWFWIWJWKWNWOWSWUWVWWWXWYW׋WײW׾W׿WWWWWLWQWXWZW_W؀WؑWؓWؔWforhopnum1hopnumringinfototalhopstxringlet1ؓVforhopnum1hopnumringinfototalhopstxringlet1hopnum1ؓVforce֛Wforcing*Wa ?cAUnknown OAM frames are not counted. The concern is that frames would go into the MAC and be silently discarded. d2.6 text Row 11.2-3: An OAM echo response frame sets the MA_CONTROL.indication opcode and operands. Row 11.2-4: An OAM flush frame sets the MA_CONTROL.indication opcode and operands. Row 11.2-5: An OAM organization specific frame sets MA_CONTROL.indication opcode and operands. Row 11.2-6: No action if the controlType does not correspond to an OAM frame.d457 2003/10/2311.6terFJones^Technical, Non-binding_440`25a12.2.3.2bResolve apparent overlap between clause 11.4.2 and 12.2.3, e.g. only specify severity in 11.4.2 Fix values in table. remove bullet point list in 12.2.3.3 (which also has a broken cross reference to 11.3.2, should be 11.4.2).cTable 12.1 has a few problems: 1) appears to be duplicate of bullet list in 11.4.2 (page 417) 2) event value column looks bogus (values of A to J) 2003/10/2112.1AEPeterFJones>c11.5-3>W11.5-4>W11.5-5>W11.5-6>W11.5.1.5XW11.6<W?W11.7BW11.9.3.1W11.9.3.2W12ְWdWטWؑW12.1@WEW12.2dWeW12.2.1.4֫W֬W12.3dW12.3.3.1GW13DW׭W14ؑW14/15oW148ֺW15yW158QW15802-1:1995֫W֬W159QW15:8֬W16mW֣WPW16xW17uWPW18SW19}W192YW1997OW1mscW2\WbWhWsWvWxWzW}W֣WָWW@WIWPWQWSW׿WWsWwW2eventvaluecolumnlooksbogusvaluesofatoj@V204W21W213ZW22W׸W227RW228RW23yW23:16֬W245cW248YW^WדW25zW252WטW253W255WWIWPWSWׂW3-10ֺW3-8ֺW3.2a֤W3.4jW֬WW3.4.1mWnW3.7.1וW301׸W32/33nW33:24֬W34uWָW׬Wa A^ Editorial_443`6a12.3.3bFix the figure.c;The "MAC Control" shaded box has slipped onto the next paged490 2003/10/2312.2BEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_444`41a12.3.3.2bA'Reword text like: Performance parameters are of types HCPerfCurrentCount, HCPerfIntervalCount, and HCPerfTotalCount as defined in RFC xxxx (draft-ietf-adslmib-hc-tc). These textual conventions are based on Counter64 and are used to permit the resetting of the values as the intervals roll over.'c  BcAI disagree with the statement the we must use the TCs because the stats can decrease when crossing boundaries. That is a discussion of the consequences of one implementation. The reason to use HCPerfIntervalCount etc. is because the numbers get regularly reset to zero. See extract from draft-ietf-ops-mib-review-guidelines-02.txt - It is NOT OK to put in the DESCRIPTION clause of a Counter32/64 that there is a requirement that it MUST reset at any specific time/event (e.g., mBidnight). d2.6 text Performance parameters are of types HCPerfCurrentCount, HCPerfIntervalCount, and HCPerfTotalCount as defined in RFC xxxx (draft-ietf-adslmib-hc-tc). These textual conventions are all Counter64, and they are used because it is possible for these objects to decrease. Objects may decrease when Unavailable Seconds occurs across a fifteen minutes interval boundary. See 11.7.yd498 2003/10/23CEPeterFJones^ Editorial_508`17aD.3i"bthanuWֿWWשWbresettingBWresidesWresiliencySWresolve@Wresolveapparentoverlapbetweenclause11.4.2and12.2.3e@Vrespectively`WWWWrespond֝WTWresponseXW֝W֞WW/W;W4Wresponsecontrol6WresponseringletW3WresthW֋WVWoWrestartףWresult9WרWresults}WreturnjWmWnW}WֻW>WWWpWreturnsֻWrevampIWrevamptable11.6toIVreversed5WreviewxWreviewmethodforconfiguringsecondarymacaddressesandcoxVrevise֨W%W&W'W(Wrevisetransmitstatemachinessuchthatonlyfairnessandt֨Vreword;WBWCFWKWSWUWVXWYWreword1stparalikeSV+2canullconditionshouldbelistedwithanemdash"VatrueresultisaresultthatisreallyaresultpresumablyרVa-b-c-d-e-f-a}Wa0`WWabbreviation׆Wability;Wable֝W׭WaboutYWxWUWaboveWWabstractWabutWacceptedWaccepts؁WaccepttpframeֻWؗWaccomplishingWaccordingW[WؘWaccordingtothecurrentdefinitionofthereceivetpframeؘVronymWacross^WrW֨WWBWHWאWWrWsWwWactionlWֺW?WVWsWvWwWxWactionszWVWvWactivatedWactual։W֊Wactually֔WWadd2W7WGWOWaddacrossreferenceto12.3.3.1likethereisinifspeedpGVaddreversionmodeinmytopolnfo2VaddtexttothisandallsimilarxxxvaliddataattributestoOVaddedָWLWaddinguWxWadditionrWָW7WYW׍W׮W LCbreword: rprIfStatsControlTable controls the clearing of interval statistics counters. Set operations on rprIfStatsControlCommitClear will cause some or all of the interval counters to be cleared.cFix the English, "clearance" -> "clearing" d2.6 text rprIfStatsControlTable controls the clearance of interval statistics counters. Setting rprIfStatsControlCommitClear = commit(1), may cause clearance of some or all interval countersd53803/10/21DEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_510`12aD.4.2b1fix table entry to refer to ringInfo.numStations cThe MIB cross ref table refers to "ringlet0Hops" and "ringlet1Hops" to determine rprIfStationsOnRing (p510 l12). should refer to ringInfo.numStations as calculated in done in row 13 of Table 10.20.  2003/10/21D.2EEPeterFJones^ Editorial_510`32aD.4.2bFix the cross referencescM10.3.1.2 cross reference is wrong in quite a few rows. These isn't a 10.3.1.2 2003/10/21D.2FEPeterFJones^ Editorialjcthenextstateinrow10.28-9isstartandnotcheck3֜Vthenotehassomeproblems֋Vthenoteincludedatthebottomofpage248^VtheoamspecifiershouldbedefinedintermsoftheouinotVthepagenumbersareitalicsforentriesendingwithitalicsVtheparametersarenottlvparametersanymorethanethernetVthephraseiftheheadstationisimplementingconservative~VthephraseonefairnessinstanceopposingfairnessinstanceדVentationconventionsarehardtounderstandiVtherprinterfacespanprotectionmanagementtableHVthesentencedoesnotstartwithacaporendwithaperiodׄVthesentencesemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveshouldbeaփVthesentencethetpfarmesandperiodicallyatafastrates֒VthesentenceuserspecificdataiscopiedistooabstractVtheshadedboxhashiddenthebittickmarksVthesourcestationiss1andnots3andthedestinationstatցV${Bae֟W֠W֡W֢W֥W֯WְWWWW~WWe1֥Ve1.3uVe1.4.1֟Ve1.4.1.2֠V֡Ve1.4.2.1֢Ve3֯Ve3.1ְV~VVfW׀Wf4Vf4.3׀Vg./ׇWg1.1ׇVhi{Wi3.7{Vkրlb0}WքW$W0-9W0.000001'W000 W001W0x1a[W1SWYWiWpW}WքW֖W֗W֣W֤W֥W֫W֯WַWֺWֻWּWֽWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W%W&W'W(W)W+W/W1WIWPWׂW׃WW W'WvW؁W؆W1addanotetoclassbtrafficdescriptionb2clarifyingthV1addnormativespecificationsinannexeforclienttransmi֥V1addthefollowingrowsbetweenrow15/16oftable6.36֣V1changethecharacterstylenameplaintoassertaregularsVVLsF_517`14aD.5.1.2breword like Each RPR interface represents the "top" interface of an RPR MAC. Each RPR interface will be layered on top of two interface stacks, one for each of the east and west spans.cShould be singular: "stacks" -> "stack" d2.6 text Each RPR interface represents the "top" interface of an RPR MAC. Each RPR interface will be layered on top of an interface stacks for both east and west spans.d544 2003/10/23GEPeterFJones^ Editorial_519`8aD.5.1.3bZEither: Add the cross reference or combine the two rows (ifSpeed and ifHighSpeed).cAdd a cross reference to 12.3.3.1 like there is in ifSpeed (page 517, line 35) D2.6 text ifHighSpeed Represents the current operational speed in millions of bits per second.d547 2003/10/23D.3HEPeterFJones^ Editorial_533`1aD.6b fix quotecblikewiseWlinerW֋W֩WָWֻWֽWWWWWWWWXW_WsW׆WףWWWWWWWWWWWWW6WFWhWuWvW`WdWnWpWsWzWW׵W׽WWWWlinkWWWSWlist@WזWנWףWWWlittleWlocalWVWlocalfairrate*Wlocalfairratemin*Vlocalfairrateupperbo*Wlocalfairrateupperbolpaddrate*VlofWlogicWWlongWloophWqWlossVWlotWlowւWlow-preferenceւWlowerWlpaddrate*WlrttbW}W֐W֝W֞W%WSW״WWWlrttcomplete}Wlrttrequesthandle}Wlrttrequesttransmit}Wlrttresponsehandle}Wluck/Wm֯Wma=WIWmacontrolrequest=VmacZW^WuWxW֯WWWW W WW;W=WFWJWKWPWׯWW=cshouldbesingularstacksstackFVshouldn'tfW\WؑWshouldn'tthepayloadofthelrttrequestframebe14bytesؑVshouldn'twealwaysdropcontrolpacketswithbadfcs\VshowfWshowingsWside֛WJWWsignalָWWWTWsignalingXWsignalsָWsignedWsilently?WsimilarWOWsimilarchangesonpage441line27Vsimple(Wsimpler!WsimplyאWsinceUWWWXW_W`WlWuWyW}W֤WWWWWW!W+W=W׎WהWתW׭W~W؇Wsincefairnesseligibleisusedinafewplacesinclause6dתVsincemostoftheclausefollows9.2mostoftheclausedoesהVsingleuWָWWTWؔWsingle-queueWsinglechokeindoWsingularFWsizeW/WשWoWsizes#W.Wslight;Wslightly׍WW}WslippedAWcwindowuWwis[WwithUWWWYWZW^W`WcWgWhWjWmWnWqWuW֏W֐W֤W֥W֧W֨W֫W֬WֱWֲWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W"W-W>WBWIWMWPWQWSW׃WׄWפWWWWWWEW[W\W^WeWlWrWsWtWwWxW}W؇WؔWwithin^W`WhWlWW֋W֣WָW׭WwithinthemismatchedprotectiontheringletloopseemsinconhVwithintheparagraph`Vwithout֥WW.WWcd2.6isnolongerabinaryadditionasstatedbytheparagrarVd2.6testMVd2.6textCVFVHVJVNVVVXVYVda֬W֭W֮W=Wdarepresentationinfigure3.4isinconsistentwithiso158֬Vda-specifiedֲWdarkWdash"WdataXW^WeW}W։W֊WW=WOWPWQWSWؔWdata-pathWWdatabaserWsW֓WWWWdatapahWdatapath^W֣W֦W֧W֩WWWdatapathtransmitstatemachinemustspecifyhowframesare֣VdayJWdbWWWdeal>WdebatableUWdecide؄W HcA`Extra quote at end of description D2.6 text rprSpanProtectionTable OBJECT-TYPE SYNTAX SEQUENCE OF RprSpanProtectionEntry MAX-ACCESS not-accessible STATUS current DESCRIPTION The RPR interface Span protection management table. All read-write attributes in this table are non-volatile, i.e., will be retained across system reset. ::= { rprGeneral 4 }`d552 2003/10/23IEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_429`28a 11.5.5.1.4bArevamp table 11.6 to 1) process all the OAM frame types 2) call the echo request state machine or send it the frame via a queue 3) define any required routines and/or queues (e.g. SelectControlFrame() -> DeQueue(Q_MA_CONTROL) 4) add appropriate counterscml^robertְֱֲֳִֵֶַ֣֤֥֦֧֪֭֮֨֩֫֬֯steinу҃allenSTUVWXYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~րbruckmanցւփքօֆևֈ։֊֋֌֍֎֏֐֑֖֛֢֚֒֓֔֕֗֘֙֜֝֞֟֠֡castellanoְֱֲֳִֵֶַ֣֤֥֦֧֪֭֮֨֩֫֬֯davikָֹֺfanֻּֽ־ֿ IcAThis state table has a number of errors/unpleasant things including: 1) Wrong use of ControlFrameReceived which is define as boolean but being used as if it returns a frame. 2) Use SelectControlFrame() which is not defined 3) runs in parallel with table 11.4 - echo request processing 4) doesn't count invalid OAM types. It would make more sense to have this table check for CT_OAM_ECHO_REQ and either 1) call the state machine in 11.4 or 2) put the frame on a queue to the sBtate machine in 11.4. In either case 11.4 initial state logic would change. This would give all the demux of OAM frames form the ring being done in one place. D2.6 text ((rxFrame=ControlFrameReceived())!=NULL && rxFrame.controlType!=CT_OAM_ECHO_REQ rxFrame= SelectControlFrame(); d455 2003/10/2311.6JEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_529`21aD.6(# btheIWJWKWLWMWOWPWTWUWVWWWXWYWׂW׃WׄW׌W׎W׏WאWבWדWוWטWכWלWנWסWפWשW׫WׯW׵W׸W׽WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW'W)W+W,W-W0W5W6W7W8W@WAWEWJWUWWWZWcWeWiWjWsWvWwWxWyW{W|W}W~W؀W؆W؈W؍WJbFix the text like: Setting rprIfStatsControlPeriodClear to clearAllIntervals and rprIfStatsControlCountPointClear to clearWest (for example) will clear all current intervals, previous intervals and day statistics of the west side of the RPR MACcAaDescriptive text for rprIfStatsControlTablestates that it can be used to clear the free running counters d2.6 text Setting rprIfStatsControlPeriodClear to clearAllIntervals and rprIfStatsControlCountPointClear to clearWest (for example) will clear all current and previous intervals, day and free running counters of the west side of the RPR MAC.ad550 2003/10/23KEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_530`10aD.6breword like: This attribute allows for some or all of the interval statistics for this RPR MAC to be cleared. It does not affect the values of the running counters or the counter values reported through the interface MIB."Kcbecause this has been controversial, I'd like to make the descriptive text a bit more explicit. d2.6 text This attribute allows for some or all of the statistics for this RPR MAC to be cleared.d551 2003/10/23LEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_621`11aD.6bremove rprSpanErrorStatsErroredSeconds, rprSpanErrorStatsSeverelyErroredSeconds andrprSpanErrorStatsUnavailableSeconds from rprSpanErrorCountersStatsEntry as they are not applicable unless you implement the interval stats tables.c" -LcAWhen we added the ES, SES and UAS functionality/attributes it seems that they got added to the "running counters" error table (rprSpanErrorCountersStatsEntry) by mistake. It seems to me that this can only be calculated if you are doing the one second type processing required to support the interval stats, and these counters do not seem to belown in this table. d2.6 text rprSpanErrorStatsErroredSeconds Counter64, rprSpanErrorStatsSeverelyErroredSeconds Counter64, rprSpanErrorStatsUnavailaBbleSeconds Counter64d557 2003/10/23MEPeterFJones^ Editorial_539`2aD.6brework like This object contains the value of of the station IP (v4 or V6) address . The format of this address is specified by the value of the corresponding rprTopoImageInetAddressType object. c btaillatencyin}Wtaillatencyout}WtakenVWםWtakes W WWtarget;Wtbd/Wtc֕WSWWWWtechnicalrWsWwWxWyWtermWW{W|WterminaljWterminatorhWqWtestTWtextWW^W֐W֙W֛W־WֿWWWWW.W0WBWJW׉WכWפWײWWWyWtextualrWBW\bremovethatfromframesthatdestinedto֠Vremovethe֟VremovetheandthebeforenormlpfwratecongesteandnormlpfwrלVremovetheboldfromthetinlines38and41׵Vremovetheextraneousletter2fromtheadjustedlrttcolumnbVremovetheoranechoresponseframedescribedin11.5.1.5sXVremovetheparensaroundplusprocessingtimeandprecedewiVremovethesecondcolumnoftable5.8VremovethesentenceacompliantrprmacimplementationrequiZVremovethissubclause+VremovedvWremoving؆Wrename^Wrenameclasues^Vthmsbasfollows֬Vreordering/duplicatiSWrepeat׃W׉WכWWWWWWWW W$W<WFWUWreplace`WaWiWlWpWyWzWցWւWֈW֋W֒W֓W֔W֕W֜W֝W֠W֡W֢W֤W֧W֫W֭W֮W֯WֱWֲWֳWִWֵWֶWַWֽW־WWW#W$WW+WcrprspanerrorstatserrLWrprspanerrorstatssevLWrprspanerrorstatsunaLWrprspanerrorxxxxxbadPWQWrprspanintervalvalidOWrprspanprotectionentHWrprspanprotectiontabHWrprspanprotectiontabobject-typeHVrprtopoimageinetaddrMWrttWrulesjW֥WVWrun֪Wrunonsentence֪VrunningWWJWLWrunsIWrunts؅Wrx}W։W֊W֣W֩WrxframeIWrxtpframe4Wrxtpframeese4Vrxtpframeesw4Vrxtpframepse4Vrxtpframepsw4Vs1ցWWs3ցWs4Ws5Ws6֢WWs7ցW؍Ws9ցW؍Wsa֭W֮WֹWsacompactָW# +McAunfriendly text, suggest rework to replace INET with "IP (v4 or V6) address." d2.6 test This object contains the value of of the station INET address. The format of this address is specified by the value of the corresponding rprTopoImageInetAddressType object.d553 2003/10/23NEPeterFJones^ Editorial_544`22aD.6bfix typoctypo "beteen" -> "between" d2.6 text The ratio beteen the link capacity reserved for fairness control messages and the total link capacity.d554 2003/10/23OEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_561`1aD.6bRework like for all "xxxValidData" attributes DESCRIPTION This variable indicates if the data for this interval is valid. It will be valid if it contains data for 900 seconds plus or minus 10 seconds.c"% 5OcAAdd text to this (and all similar xxxValidData attributes" to say that they are set to valid if they contain 900 seconds of data plus or minus 10 seconds , i.e. from 890 to 910. This is as per ANSI T1.231 1997 section 9.3 and 9.1.2.2 d2.6 text rprSpanIntervalValidData OBJECT-TYPE SYNTAX TruthValue MAX-ACCESS read-only STATUS current DESCRIPTION This variable indicates if the data for this interval is valid. ::= { rprSpanCountersIntervalEntry 4 }d555 2003/10/23PEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_615`35aD.6bS/bintervalsBWJWinterventionW#& PbAprSpanErrorxxxxxBadDataFcsFrames and rprSpanErrorxxxxxBadCtrlFcsFrames(all version of this stat) need to be changed as follows: 1) combine into one BadFcsFrames (per table) 2) this counts both control and data with bad FCS errors. A separate comment has been submitted against clause 6 to ensure that all data frames with bad FCS are counted. A separate comment will be made against table D.3 e.g. rprSpanErrorIntervalBadFcsFrames OBJECT-TYPE SYNTAX HCPerfIntervalCount MAX-ACCESS reBad-only STATUS current DESCRIPTION The number of received (PHY to MAC) control or data frames where the frame FCS value did not match the expected FCS value. ::= { rprSpanErrorCountersIntervalEntry 16 }c%' PcAClause 6 has now changed to count both data and control FCS errors in one variable (badRxFcsFrames section 6.6.3.11.2) rprSpanErrorxxxxxBadDataFcsFrames and rprSpanErrorxxxxxBadCtrlFcsFrames(all version of this stat) need to be changed as follows: 1) combine into one BadFcsFrames (per table) 2) this counts both control and data with bad FCS errors. A separate comment has been submitted against clause 6 to ensure that all data frames with bad FCS are counted. A separate comment wilBl be made against table D.3 d2.6 text rprSpanErrorIntervalBadDataFcsFrames OBJECT-TYPE SYNTAX HCPerfIntervalCount MAX-ACCESS read-only STATUS current DESCRIPTION The number of received (PHY to MAC) frames that were not copied to the client because their FCS values did not match their expected FCS values. ::= { rprSpanErrorCountersIntervalEntry 16 } rprSpanErrorIntervalBadCtrlFcsFrames OBJECT-TYPE SYNTAX HCPerfIntervalCount MAX-ACCESS read-only STATUS current DESCRIPTION The number of &G PcCreceived (PHY to MAC) frames that were not copied to the MAC control sub layer because their FCS values did not match their expected FCS values. ::= { rprSpanErrorCountersIntervalEntry 17 }d556 2003/10/23QEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_516`20aD.4.2bfCombine badDataFcsFrames and badDataFcsFramesinto badFcsFrames and refer to 6.6.3.11.2 badRxFcsFramescAClause 6 has now changed to count both data and control FCS errors in one variable (badRxFcsFrames section 6.6.3.11.2) rprSpanErrorxxxxxBadDataFcsFrames and rprSpanErrorxxxxxBadCtrlFcsFrames(all version of this stat) need to be changed as follows: 1) combine into one BadFcsFrames (per table) 2) this counts both control and data with bad FCS errors. D2.6 text 6.6.3.11.2 158 badDataFcsFrames rprSpanErrorStatsBadDataFcsFrames 159 badDataFcsFrames rprSpanErrorStatsBadCtrlFcsFBramesd542 2003/10/23D.2ditorial_227`0a7bremove pages 227 and 228i!bthatnWtheSWTWUWWWXWYWZW^WbWcWeWhWjWkWmWnWrWsWtWuWwWրWփWֆWևWֈW֋W֍W֎W֏W֐W֓W֔W֘W֚W֛W֜W֝W֞W֟W֣W֦W֪W֭W֮W֯WִWֵWָWֺWֻWּWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W W W WWWWWWWWWW W%W&W'W)W-W/W0W1W9W;W<W=W>WAWBWCWEWFWGWcstateSWWWjWkWlWmWnW{W֜W֣W֦W֨W֩WֺW־WWWWWWW#W$W(W)W5WIWVWWWWWWpWsWwWxWyW؁WؐWؘWonformtotheconventionthattheactxVstatemachinesshouldconformtothefollowingconventionssVwVstatedrWׂWstatement֨WWWWWBWstatementsrWsWwWstatesSWYWZWfWstation^WցW֏W֓W֘W֛W֝W֟W֡W֣W֦W֩WָWWWWW+W;WMWSWVWWWטW׮WWW.WZWstations]WuW֋WָWWWW%W:WSWTWVWWWYWstatisticsCWKWstatsBWLWstatus֤WHWOWPWstatuscurrentHVstead֕WsteeredWsteeringW1WVW׾Wstem}Wstill}WWstop֚WstopsjWstoreWWpbbaddatafcsframesQWbaddatafcsframesintoQWbadfcsframesPWQWbadfcsuserWWWWW[؇Wbadrxfcsframes9WQWbandwidthWbandwidths/Wbasecontrol؀WbasedW=WBW_Wbasic֯WG,Rc pages 227 and 228 are both blankd113 2003/10/23SEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_301`29a10.1.1bAreword 1st para like: This clause specifies topology discovery and protection functions for this standard, including: topology discovery for plug-and-play topology modification protection switching for sub-50 millisecond resiliency, with no reordering/duplication of strict data frames attribute discovery (ATD) for reporting between stations topology checksum (TC) exchange to support rapid detection of topology changes context containment link round trip tBGime (LRTT) measurement to help optimizing conservative mode fairness. 5c+ ScAA few issues with the para: 1) topology checksum doesn't sound like a protocol. Maybe the topology checksum exchange protocol.? Seems this is really the topology stability validation. 2) I though that topo and protection got merged. If so, how are they separate protocols? 3) Other clauses tend to say what they do. d2.6 text The RPR topology discovery and protection functions include the topology discovery, protection, attribute discovery (ATD), topology checksum (TC), and link rBound trip time (LRTT) measurement protocols. The topology discovery and protection protocols enable fundamental RPR objectives for both topology discovery and protection switching. The topology discovery protocol enables plug-and-play topology modification. The protection switching protocol enables under 50 millisecond resiliency, while avoiding reordering and duplication of strict data frames, as described in 6.6.1. The ATD protocol enables additional, less time-critical information to be-O D؏vACRG: Editors will modify 10.1.8 to indicate that TP frames are triggered as a result of detecting a passthrough event elsewhere on the ring to facilitate fast rediscovery of topology after a passthrough event, and thus faster restoration of strict mode trafficwAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23hrough events in a 50 ms timeframe. This standards 50 ms protection switching and service restoration is applicable to other media failured224jA#Reword like: The speed of passthrough detection depends on the setting of the slow TP frame transmission period, which defaults to 100 milliseconds. Passthrough detection is not covered by the 50 ms protection switching and service restoration that is applicable to media failures, e.g. ...#mAccepted-Modifiedv^_&cme=WLWmeaningWWmeaninglessבWmeansWmeasureSWmeasurement!WSWmechanismWWVWmechanismsWmediaUW׼WmeetingZW}W_W؏WmergedֺWWSWmessageָWWmessagesָWNWmethodkWrWmfrttWmibDWmid-listףWmidnightBWmightײW׿WmillionsGWmillisecondSWminimumcWminmal&W'Wminor؈WminusOWWminutesBWmiscablingYWmisleading!WWmismatch:WmismatchedprotectionhWmissedWmissingSWTWքWֈW֌W֘W֚WֺWW W$WsWׅW׊WעWװWWWWWWW W WWW"W%WFWHWJWNWcWyW؋W[WWSWYWmodes֋WmodificationSWmodifiedkWmonitorWmonitoring!WmoreZWjWuWֳWִWֵWֶWWWW!W0WIWKWׂWqcoftentimesWoh+Wohyesitdoes+VokuWָWWWBWomitted=WonVWYW]W^WbWuWyW}WW֤W֥W֦W֧W֪WְWָWֺWWWWWWWWWW!W%W&W'WFWIWSWTWUWVWWWYWדWטWןW׿WWW5WdWhW}WؐWؑWؒWonceUWoneYWZW`WfWgWvWxW{W֛W֟WֺWWW>WBWIWLWPWQWTWדWפWWWWWWWWWvWoneselfW37 VcCang, exactly when it is reported, and exactly when action is taken at a station to protect traffic=d227jsup 226m SupersededvCRG: Superceded by #226.w Superseded 2003/10/23ugh detection depends on the setting of the TP frame transmission period and there is no requirement to handle passthrough events in a 50 ms timeframe. This standards 50 ms protection switching and service restoration is applicable to other media failured224jA#Reword like: The speed of passthrough detection depends on the setting of the slow TP frame transmission period, which defaults to 100 milliseconds. Passthrough detection is not covered by the 50 ms protection switching and service restoration that is applicable to media failures, e.g. ...#mAccepted-Modified 2003/10/22VEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_305`6a10.1.6b)cifoneofmylinkshasgonedownhowdoibroadcastonbothTVifthereisnoedgethetotalhopsarethehopstooneselfViftopoentryrihopvalidؖVifwe4aregoingtoexpectanysortofinteroperabilitycomm+VifhighspeedGWifspeedGWignore֝WiiWW ecimpactWWimpactingWimpairstWimplement֝W%WimplementationZWWBWimplementationsZWimplementing~WimplicationWimpliesWWWWאWשW׷WWimply֒W,WWimportanceׯWimportantשWimproperWimproperlyWimprove%WimprovedrW`WbWdWjWkWmWnWoWpWqWrWtWuWvWzW}WւWօW։W֊W֋W֌W֐W֑W֓W֕W֛W֜W֠W֡W֤W֦W֩W֫W֬W֯WַWָWֺWֻWּWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW%W*W.W1W2W4W5W6W7W8W:W;W=W@WBWDWEWGWHWIWLWPWQWSWUWVWXWYWׂWׇW׉W׍WוWזWטWתW׮WWWWWWWi0 VcAlots of wording changes d2.6 text A protection switching protocol that provides the services and features described in 10.1 defines the following: a) A hierarchy of protection requests that requires local action by a station and reporting of the protection state to the rest of the ring. 10.7.1.3 includes description of the protection hierarchy, and of the definition of triggers resulting in specific protection requests. b) The local actions that can be taken by stations on the ring to preBvent traffic loss. As described in the rest of this sub clause, these consist of steering or wrapping. The choice between steering and wrapping is dictated by the rules given in 10.7.1.1. c) A mechanism and control frame format for reporting local protection state to the rest of the ring. This is done using the TP frame. d) State machine and related requirements. These are given in 10.7. The state machine defines in detail what protection state information is reported to the rest of the ricthereareacoupleoferrorsintable10.21ֽVthereareanumberoferrorsinthedescriptionanddefinitiֻVthereisnoneedtorepeattextcontainedin3.7.1וVthereisnoneedtowraplongstatenamesunwrappedshortna)VthereisonlyoneprotectionstatemachineVtherestillseemstobesomeconfusion/errorsinthelrttca}VthereforeֳWִWֵWֶWWthesefW{W֣W֥W֦WּWWWW!W%W(W,WBWEWLWVWYWWWW)W*WEWthesearehardtoimplement%Vthesearenottheonlyopcodevalues)VthesecontrolframesarenotnecessarilyreceivedacrossanVthesecontrolframesarenotreceivedfromanedgebutfromVthesenamesareinconsistentwiththeprimitivenamesusediEVthesestatemachinesareamuchtoocomplexexpressionofa(Vthesetwofunctionsshouldnotbegrouped*Vchandled֣Whandles֦Whandling֔Whappend+WdWhappyYWhardvW֝WַWֺWW%W&W'W/W:WharderoWhasYWgWuW֋W֏W֦WWWWWW@WAWIWKWPWQWTWXW]WgWuW؍WؒWhavefW֧WWWWWIWUW׍W׾WWW-W^WjWhaving`WֺWׂWנWWhavingalreadystatedthelengthofthemacaddresses3timeׂVhavingtheformulafollowthedescriptionandthecomponentנVhcperfcurrentcountBWhcperfintervalcountBWPWhcperftotalcountBWheadW~Whead-of-lineWheadingWWWWWׁW W؊WhearingYWhec؅Whelp}WhelpsWhencevWhere.WרWתWױW׺W׻WWhexWhiddenWhierarchyVWhigh-preferenceւWWhowWWYW֏W֛W֣W.W9W=WSWTWdv226VW3fWuWּW7W31ּW316W32uW7W32-361W329֘W3373W342jWmWnW344kW351րW375ؘW3788W3857W3867W4uW427W47-48֘W487W497W5uWW50UW53-54րW6pWuWؔW6.7.1.5uW7uW8uW9uWo the rest of the ring using the TP frame. d) The state machine (10.7) to define local protection actions and reported protection state. cAlots of wording changes d2.6 text A protection switching protocol that provides the services and features described in 10.1 defines the following: a) A hierarchy of protection requests that requires local action by a station and reporting of the protection state to the rest of the ring. 10.7.1.3 includes description of the protection hierarchy, and of the definition of triggers resulting in specific protection requests. b) The local actions that can be taken by stations on the ring to pre0:WEPeterFJones^ Editorial_305`19a10.1.6bztry Stations detecting a span failure mark the neighbor address as out of date, and send TP frames to report the failure.cs given in 10.7.1.1. c) A mechanism and control frame format for reporting local protection state to the rest of the ring. This is done using the TP frame. d) State machine and related requirements. These are given in 10.7. The state machine defines in detail what protection state information is reported to the rest of the riCang, exactly when it is reported, and exactly when action is taken at a station to protect traffic=d227 2003/10/21WEPeterFJones^ Editorial_305`19a10.1.6bztry Stations detecting a span failure mark the neighbor address as out of date, and send TP frames to report the failure.cu=cservicesVWsesLWsetkWwWxWָWֹWּWWOWW6WؔWsetence֏W֠Wsets?Wcv4MWv6MWvalidgWvW7WOW}W؂WؔWؖWvalidation{WSWYWvaliditylWvaliditycheckqWvaluableWvalue[W`WcWkWxW{W։W֊W֐WִWֵWָWֺWWW=W@WMW׍WקWרWײWWWWW}WvalueseWfW֍WֳWִWֵWֶWWWW,W-W9W@WPWץWצWײWWW)WvaluesshouldbeitalicsnotbracketesornumbersVvanishinglyW7J WcAktoo many words, remove some for easier reading d2.6 When a span fails, the stations detecting the failure store the knowledge of their neighbor station address on the failed span and clear their current knowledge of their neighbor station address on that span. The stations send TP frames that report exactly which links failed to the other stations on the ring.kd228 2003/10/23XEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_306`39a10.1.6.1breword like Wrap protection uses signaling similar to SONET/SDH bidirectional line switched ring (BLSR) protection and meets the timing requirements for BLSR as per ANSI T1.105.01-2000, not counting configured holdoff time.cr{bdayJWdecideWWסWdecideifequation9.1isaformulaoracodesnippetifitסVdeemed׿WYWdeferredWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W W W WWWWWWWWWWWWW W"Wdefine֏W֘WW<WIWVWdefinethatifaclasscfddisnotreceivedwithin100msect֏Vdefinethatisthestationinterfaceindexattismissingfo֘Vdefined֯WW:WBWdefinesVWdefinition_WcW֑WW9WdefinitionsֻWdegradationWdegradeWWdegradeconditionsdegradeVdelayW%W/W1WdelayedWdeleteWWWWdeletethesetwoblankpagesVdependenciesWcstqW&W'W/WstqsWWstrange~WօWstrangecharacterinrfe0andrfe1օVstrangegreyboxoverlappingtopportionoftable~VstrictֳWִWֵWֶWSWYWstrippedֲWW؈Wstrippedself-sourcedpacketsarenotcounteditisminorth؈VstrippingWstructureֺWWstructures}W׮Wstyle֤WWWXWrWuW~WW1WW1W1WJ@{YEPeterFJones^ Editorial_306`45a10.1.7bA6reword like Topology validation detects defects in the topology and reports them to the operator. The defects (10.8), include: miscabling topology instability, topology inconsistency too many stations Topology must be validation to clear strict mode traffic context containment (10.1.10).6cf time.vd233 2003/10/21YEPeterFJones^ Editorial_306`45a10.1.7bA6reword like Topology validation detects defects in the topology and reports them to the operator. The defects (10.8), include: miscabling topology instability, topology inconsistency too many stations Topology must be validation to clear strict mode traffic context containment (10.1.10).6cbtimeoutֿWtimer1WUWtimesWׄWtimingXWtitleփW֡WֻWכW׾WtoTWUWYWZW^W_WcWhWjWkWmWnWrWsWwW|W}WփWֆWևW֋W֌W֍W֏W֐W֖W֗W֙W֠W֥W֩W֭W֮W֯WָWֹWֻWּW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W WWWWWWW W/W0W4W9W:W;W<W=W>W@WBWCWDWIWJWKWPWQWSWUWVWWWXWYWrWsWuW~WׁW׃WׄWׅW׆WׇW׈W׊W׋W׌W׎W׏WאWבWגWדWהWחWיWכWםWנWעWפWרWשWתW׫W׭W׮WׯWװWױWײW׳W״W׶W׹W׺W׼W׽W׿WW.cleadsֺWleastZWfWWXW5WleftWW֫W֬WWlengthֺWWׂWWlengthytWlessָWWWSWWlet؄WletterׇWפWletteringףWletteringrestartsmid-listףVlettersWlevelfWlevelsWW!W&W'WlieָWlight$WlikezWWWWGWKWSWTWWlimitW&W'W,WlimitationשWlimitedָWWlineYWZWָWWWWWWWWWW0W7WGWXWטW׬W׭WW؀WؑWؓWؖWlined׉Wlinerate_WlinesWWWW׸WWrWsWwWlines22through36aresomewhatduplicativeandrepetitive׸VlinkWNWSWzWW=h YcAtoo many words d2.6 text The purpose of topology validation is to ensure that a variety of defects in the topology can be detected and reported to the operator. These defects, as described in 10.8, include miscabling detection, topology instability, topology inconsistency, and maximum number of stations on the ring exceeded. In addition, the topology checks performed as part of topology validation are essential to the determination of when context containment for strict mode traffic can bB(e cleared. This is described in 10.1.10.d234 2003/10/23ZEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_27`15a1.1b2Use FrameMaker cross-reference on lines 15 and 16.c@Reference to "Clause 1" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d9 2003/10/23[EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_44`5a1.12.1bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 9" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.\EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_95`42a5.6.5.4bUse FrameMaker cross-reference. bincreaseֿWincreasethemaximumkeepalivetimeoutbackto50msaddclaֿVincremented؈Wincrements؆WindWindentWWindentationWindependentW9W׹WindependentlyֿW׹WindextW}W֘WindexingWindexmacmWindexmacindexmacmVindicateYW^WֿW׎W5WZWindicatethatoptiondatafcsdeletioisforthereceiveframeZVindicated^WwWxWindicatesWW W W W WW=WOWindicatesaninterfaceerrorforthecurrentdatarequest VindicatingWW[WWeWiWindication֯WWWWWWWindications֛WWWinfouW>Winformation֙W׿WWcesWinstead֤Wint}Wintegrating{WintelligibleבWintentionYWinter-arrival_Winterface֘WWWW WFWKWinterfaces֯WWinternal֯W<WintervalCWKWLWOW!Ccopposed(WopposingYWדWopposite^WWoptimizeSWoptionalZW;W=WoptionallyWoptioncontrolfcsdele\WoptiondatafcsdeletioZWorXWYWZW^WjWtWuWvWxWւW֤W֦WWWWW+W,W.W9WCWIWKWMWOWTWVWׄWאWפWקWW5WZW[WsWwWؔWorder^W}WזWWؗWorganization>W?WorientationWoriginal~WotherWW`WfWkWqW{W֣W֤WWWWWWWSWUWWW׭WW^WotherripW֐WtWothers׷WWWotherwiseָW&W'WפWQWouiWoutXWYWuW֤WWWWWWoutsideWover8W}Wed/WoverlyWWWW W W WW$WoverlyverboseandinconsistentnotationVoverridingxWoverwriteWp510DW-*cperformedYWvWperhapsfWxWperiodW WUWׄWׅWW W WWWWW%WFWSW}WؔWperiodicWperiodically֒WperiodssWpertaining֤WphraseWWW׃WאWדW׻W~WphrasesWcclause3.4describesastatecalledreturnusedforstatemajVclause6hasnowchangedtocountbothdataandcontrolfcsPVQVclausesSWclearyW֐WֺWWJWWWקWWWWclearallintervalsJWclearanceCWclearedgWWKWYWؔWclearerlWclearingCWclearly0WclearsecmacwWclearsecmacnevergetssettofalsewVclearwestJWclient֥WָW9W;W=W>WPWclientsָWhe\c@Reference to "Clause 9" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d39 2003/10/23hnFLemon^ Editorial_224`2a7.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21^EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_225`41a7.5.4bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21_EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_266`51a9.2.2.2bTUse FrameMaker cross-reference for "Clause 10" on line 51 and "Clause 9" on line 52.cAReference to "Clause 10" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21`EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_273`22a9.4.1.4bBUse FrameMaker cross-references for "Clause 9" on lines 22 and 28.c@Reference to "Clause 9" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21aEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_400`12a10.14.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21bVhcnotnullVnotunambiguousreferencetoringlet2Vnotusingfigure-cellstyle1VnotverydescriptiveVnot-accessibleHWnot-floodedֱWnotationWWWWWWWWnote^W֋WָWWWWWׯWײWlWnoteisnolongerreleventasreferencesarenowexplicitlylV1T^non-bindingSWUWWWXWYWZW[W]W^W_WaWbWcWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWpWqWrWsWtWuWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WWրWցWփWֈW։W֊W֋W֌W֍W֏W֐W֑W֒W֓W֔W֕WTcreferencetoclause9doesnotuseframemakercross-referenc[V\V`Vreferenced׃WjWreferencesְW׃WהW׫WlWreferencesusuallyfollowthephrasefromwhichtheyareref׃VreferredWreferringקWWrefersWWDWreflecting׮WreflectorָWregarding֤WؔWregardless֤W9W[Wregardlessofthedecisiontodroporforwardthem[VregularWregulardoesnotimplyaninabilityVregularlyBWreign-WreiterationׂWrelateduW<WVWrWsWwWrelative}Wrelatively(WrelavantkWreleventlWve\WgW֯WWWWWWremoveitemffrom10.6.2.1.2itconflictsandisincorrectgVremovematerialcoveredin802.17afromclausee3֯VremoveredundanttextinthecaseofanyambiguitybetweentVremovespuriousperiodinclause10.14titleVremovethesentenceincaseofanyambiguitythissentenceiV_bEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_432`2a11.9bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.cAReference to "Clause 11" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d459 2003/10/23hnFLemon^ Editorial_434`1a11.9.3bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.cAReference to "Clause 11" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21dEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_446`25a12.4.3b3Use FrameMaker cross-references on lines 25 and 38.cAReference to "Clause 12" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21eEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_454`53aB.2.1.6bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21fEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_461`24aB.3.1.6bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21gEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_472`4aC.1.4.3bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.Xbuseaseparatecolumnforcriticalseveritywithayes/noroVuseframemakercross-reference[V\V]V^VaVbVcVeVfVgVhViVjVkVlVmVoVqVtVvVwVxVyV{V|V}V׀Vuseframemakercross-referenceforclause10online51and_Vuseframemakercross-referenceonlines15and16ZVuseframemakercross-referencesforclause9onlines22and`Vuseframemakercross-referencesonlines19and45nVramemakercross-referencesonlines25and38dVuseframemakercross-referencesonlines3and34pVuseframemakercross-referencesonlines4and39zVuserealnamesorvaluesnotjustlettersVusesameitalicsconventionforpage442line52VuseverythininthecenterthinontheedgesVVVusedcW֋WWW W WBWuser=Wuserdataoptional=VuserdataWuses<WXWusing<WVW_Ug 2003/10/23hEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_480`53a C.3.1.5.2.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d513 2003/10/23iEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_481`23a C.3.1.5.3.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d515 2003/10/23jEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_485`45aC.4.1.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d516 2003/10/23kEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_487`45a C.4.1.5.2.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d519 2003/10/23hnFLemon^ Editorial_488`16a C.4.1.5.3.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21mEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_493`4aC.5.1.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference._ÃY iÃY`jÃYp ÃYkÃY lÃZ ÃZ0ÃZ@mÃZP nÃZÃZoÃZpÃaqÃa }}vdo֕W֖W֗WdoneuWdue(WduplicatejWkW3WؘWduplicateof3373Vduplicateof342jVduplicateof344kVduplicateof375ؘVduplicateduWduplicatesuWeUWeachuW"WeastfWedgeWedgechangeּWeditorsuWxW}W֘W֝WּW1WW"W؏WeffectuWeither֛Welsewhere؏Wempty֘WensureuWxWּW"Wensures֕WentryuWetc"Wevent؏WexceededuWexpanded֞Wexpiration$Wfacilitate؏WfailTWfailsuW֛Wfailure֛WfailuresUWfalseּWZctokWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀W׍W׎WאWדWהWוWקW׭W׮WײW׷W׽W׾W׿WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW2W6WZW[W_WaWbWdWpWsWvWwWxW؇W؈WؒWؓؔWؖؗWؘWtomyopinionbadfcsframescountershouldcountpacketswith[VtocWUS.mc@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d524 2003/10/23nEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_494`19aC.5.1.5b3Use FrameMaker cross-references on lines 19 and 45.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d526 2003/10/23hnFLemon^ Editorial_498`26aC.6.1.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21pEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_499`3a C.6.1.5.1.2b2Use FrameMaker cross-references on lines 3 and 34.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21qEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_500`3a C.6.1.5.3.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21rEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_517`38aD.5.1.3b#Change "Clause 12.3.1" to "12.3.1".cIncorrect reference style. 2003/10/21D.3sEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_517`29aD.5.1.3^I*cincorrectreferencestylerVuV~VincorrectringletloopincrementoriVincorrectstylefortheheadingVincorrectsubclauseheadingtextׁVincorrectuseofitalicsVincorrectvariablereferences׫VincorrectwordגVincorrectlyuW֦W֩W׮WSEsbAdd periods to ends of sentences (and sentence fragments) on lines 29, 36, 39; page 518, line 33; and page 519, lines 19, 30, 33.c%Missing periods at ends of sentences.d545 2003/10/23D.3tEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_519`40aD.5.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d549 2003/10/23hnFLemon^ Editorial_642`38aE.1.3b^Change "Clause 1.9" to "1.9". Preferably also rework sentence to avoid starting with a number.cIncorrect reference style. 2003/10/21vEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_32`4a1.5.3bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex H" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d10 2003/10/21wEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_255`53a9.1.3.7bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex J" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d146 2003/10/21xEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_418`26a11.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.baddshorttextindicatingthestatetable6.27isstand-alonWVaddspacebetweenaddaaddbandaddcRVaddtextspecifyingthatifthetransitpathfailsthenthe֛VaddthecrossreferenceGVaddthefollowingtotheendofthesentenceJVaddthemissingdtotheendofthevariablenametobesourTVaddtimestampsfieldtofigure֌Vaddtotheendofthesentencepage250line41thatstartsVaddtrueandfalsevaluestothisdefectandthefollowing3VaddwhitespacearoundelseportionofconditionaloperatorVadd/dropMWaddaRWaddbRWaddcRWaddedeWadding>W?W؆WadditionrWָWeWadditional1WW,WadditionallyYWaddressTWuW֭W֮WWWMWWWWWaddresscontrolsapifcsVaddressesxWadjacentW5WadjustrWW؆Wwbadjustthestatementregardingbinaryadditiontoreference@adoptadvertisementinterva@(affect@alternatively@ anattributethattakesthevalueof@anindicationofwhethertheframewasreceivedinerror@andvandthevariablecolumnofpage4432ndcolumnvariable@annex@are@asabove@pbaddatafcsframes@*be@before&after@bothclause9and6needtoagreeonwhatisdonetofairnes@built@Tcanbedeferred@caps@vcc@,change=change10.4.1.5to10.4.1.4.1makesimilarchangeforjp@change2lrttto2lrttinrows2and3@ared@xcolumn@compliant@constants@correcttypoerrorasdescribedincoment@cr@database@day@;default@rdependent@don'tcountfairnessandcontrolframesinrxmcastclassafram@e@eliminateextraneouswhite-spaceproducingparagraphs@em@Hcreferencetoclause1doesnotuseframemakercross-referencZVreferencetoclause10doesnotuseframemakercross-referen_Vreferencetoclause11doesnotuseframemakercross-referenbVcVreferencetoclause12doesnotuseframemakercross-referendVreferencetoclause6doesnotuseframemakercross-referencaVhViVkVlVnVpVqVreferencetoclause7doesnotuseframemakercross-referenc]V^VeVfVgVjVmVoVtVEkexc?Reference to "Annex L" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d432 2003/10/23hnFLemon^ Editorial_424`24a11.5.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex L" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21zEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_439`4a12.2.1.2b2Use FrameMaker cross-references on lines 4 and 39.c?Reference to "Annex E" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21{EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_441`25a12.2.4.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex E" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21|EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_465`2aB.4bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex B" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21}EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_501`2aC.7bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex C" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference. 2003/10/21~EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_652`12aE.3.1bChange "Annex F.2" to "F.2".[F cnotzW{W|W}WW׀WׄW׉W׎WאWהWטWןWקWשW׬W׭W׮WױW׷W׻W׼WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW'W)W*W,W-W1W2W6W7W9W:W;W>W@WZW^W`WiWsWwWxWzW}WW؀W؄W؆W؈W؏Wnotasentence'Vk\~cIncorrect reference style.d569 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_671`2aF.4b2Use FrameMaker cross-references on lines 2 and 17.c?Reference to "Annex F" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d572 2003/10/23׀EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_672`18aF.4.3bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex F" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d573 2003/10/23ׁEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_299`1a9.8.3b0Change "Fairness" to "PICS tables for Clause 9".c!Incorrect subclause heading text.d212 2003/10/23ׂEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_37`34a1.9.1bKRemove occurrences of "48-bit" from this point through the end of Clause 1.coHaving already stated the length of the MAC addresses 3 times prior in Clause 1, no more reiteration is useful.d14 2003/10/23׃EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_47`28a1.14.1Jbuseframemakercross-referencesonlines2and17Vuseframemakercross-referencesonlines25and38dVuseframemakercross-referencesonlines3and34pVuseframemakercross-referencesonlines4and39zVuserealnamesorvaluesnotjustlettersVusesameitalicsconventionforpage442line52VuseverythininthecenterthinontheedgesVVVusedcW֋WWW W WBWעWקWusefulײW׿Wuser=Wuserdataoptional=VuserdataWuses<WXW,W5Wusing<WVWW-W3WLWusingthefiguretexttickparagraphstylecreatealittlewhiV"cdoesn't>WIWSWdoingLW׷W8WdomainָW!Wdon'tւW%W9W=W׍W׽WWdoneyW{W֛WW!W-WDWIWUWVW׾WdownTWdownstreamָW&W'W+WNctitleփW֡WWWWWtitleofcellbisincorrectlabeledVVtlvWtoUWWWXWYWZW]W^WcWfWgWhWjWkWlWmWnWoWuWvWwWyW|W}WW֋W֏W֐W֒W֛W֝W֠W֣W֤W֥W֧W֬W֭W֮WְWַWָWֹWֺWּWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W%W&W'W(W)W+W,W/W9W:W;W=W>W?W@WBWDWGWIWJWKWLWMWOWPWQWSWUWVWWWXWYWZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWVcnodeuWnodesָWnomenclatureֳWִWֵWֶWnon-floodedֱWnon-standard֤Wnon-volatileHWnoneִW؅Wnormative֥WWnormlocalfairratevWnotXWYW]W^W`WbWcWeWsWtWuWxWyWzW{W}WցW֐W֑W֓W֔W֛W֜W֝W֞W֣W֤W֦W֧W֨WֲWֳWִWֵWֶWָWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W%W,W-W/W1W8W9W;W<W>W?WBWIWLWPWUWXWZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWW}A׃bMove the Figure-Cell 1.24-c reference to the end of the phrase (just before the the comma). Repeat for the following sentence, and any other case throughout Clause 1.cReferences usually follow the phrase from which they are referenced. Also, a mix is used, with the first reference at the start of the first phrase and the second reference at the end of the second phrase.d18 2003/10/23ׄEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_47`49a1.14.2b3Change "(the" to "(The" and "times)." to "times.)".c‚1X֪!Qגעgv؎‚2ɃJ׾$D‚3։N`׸˃݃9?ؒ‚4Set̃$)iם(‚5]g֓փfyă 'ؓ‚6{օ֦ǃ>@d{Iؖ‚7vw}֐֒ox׶E‚8֜*דשת״׿^t‚9Vbou֭֕ăI׃OS،‚:֗־ʃSs234@PV[؂؇‚ATքڃۃׅރ %Gmuz؉‚Bֶ֩ ׷Ń̃5‚Cֽ 1E׌ײ kqכbChange "Annex B" and "Annex C" cross-references from Title format to Number format (and then add back in the "Annex " text. Repeat for all Annex references in Clause 7.cWrong cross-reference format.d102 2003/10/23לEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_255`19a9.1.3.5bWRemove "the" and "The" before normLpFwRateCongested and normLpFwRate in this paragraph.cAwkward reading.d142 2003/10/23םEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_255`23a9.1.3.5bW@WiWdefinefunctionsinconditionandactioncorrectcsyntaxus7V@Vdefineiamtail׬VdefineiamtailasfollowsiVdefineinfoframeandopcode>Vdefinethatifaclasscfddisnotreceivedwithin100msect֏Vdefinethatisthestationinterfaceindexattismissingfo֘Vdefined֯WW:WBWLWaWbWdefinesVWdefinition_WcW֑WW9WתWW*W8WkWacrestorationUWresultlWuWרW؏WresultingVWresults*W}WretainedHWreturnjWmWnWWWpWreturnsIWWreversionWreversionmode2Wrevision^Wreword֭W֮WֲWrewordfloodedframescontinuebeyondtheirda-specifieddesֲVrewordthedescriptionforextendeddashouldrequireextend֭Vrewordthedescriptionforextendedsashouldrequireextend֮Vrework;WMWrewrittensWwWxWrfcBWWfWrfe֩Wrfe0օWrfe1օWriUWuWָWW4W=WhWؖWright֋W֬Wrigidly-WringYW]W^WgWuW{W}W֥WָWWWW;WIWSWVWWWXWYWW؏WringinfoDWhWؓWringlethWiWpWqW}WքW֐W֓W֣WָWWWWW3W:W=W>W׭W,W2W5WhWlWؒWؓWringlet/hop}WWroundSWqzפbEChange all colon-following text to follow the correct capitalization.cText following a colon that consists of one or more sentences or a sentence-like sentence fragment should begin with a capital letter. Otherwise, it should begin with a lowercase letter.d6 2003/10/23ץEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_269`48a9.3.3.1b+Capitalize false and true in this sentence.c@When using false and true as values, they should be capitalized.d164 2003/10/23צEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_519`13aD.5.1.3b-Capitalize false and true throughout Annex D.c@When using false and true as values, they should be capitalized.d548 2003/10/23D.3קEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_34`42a1.7.1bLClarify sentence. If "true" is being used as a boolean value, capitalize it.caIt is not clear what "When true" is referring to, or if "true" is supposed to be a boolean value.d11 2003/10/23רEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_66`43a3.4.18csentence-likeפWsentencessWפWseparate:WPWSW?WsequencekWHWsequentiallyWWservice`WփWW=WUWW؊W,ObcapsW0Wcase֋W1W:W׃WcauseCWcauses؈Wl֡WW1WcellsֺWcenter֣WWWWchangeUW_WhWmWnWsWփW֍W֖W֗W֙WWW׃ڃۃ܃WWWWWWWWWWWW W!W*9W=WrWuW~WׁWׄW׆WׇW׈W׊W׋W׌W׏WגWהWחWיWכWםWנWעWפWרWשW׫W׭W׮WׯWװWױW׳W״W׶W׹W׼WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W WWWWWWWWW W$W&W'W(W)W,W.W/W1W2W4W5W6W<WSbchangeannexf2tof2@ichangebetweentoadjacentto@changedefinitionofbyteinter-arrivalto8linerate@changefairnesstopicstablesforclause9@changeistoare@oesnothavetoifthestationhason@changesemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveformattotitleof@~changetexttoallowingthisinformationtobereported@achangethedotnotationformultiplytousethexsymbol@fchangethistothus@{changetictotick@clarifysentenceiftrueisbeingusedasabooleanvalueca@yclassa@cleared@xcolumn@compliant@constants@correcttypoerrorasdescribedincoment@cr@database@day@;default@rdefinitions@dependent@destination-station@don'tcountfairnessandcontrolframesinrxmcastclassafram@e@eliminateextraneouswhite-spaceproducingparagraphs@em@ candצWׯW׳W׷W׸W׾WWWWWWWWW5W>W?WEWZW[W]WyW}W؄W؅W؈W؍WؑWandclasscfddhasfefalse]Vandsmoothed}Vand/orײWbclarifysentenceiftrueisbeingusedasabooleanvaluecaקVclarifyingWclarityW(Wclass=W׳Wt}רbmChange this sentence and following sentence to use something like "result of TRUE" in place of "true result".coA "true result" is a result that is really a result. Presumably the boolean value TRUE is what is desired here.d21 2003/10/23שEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_270`27a9.4.1bChange to: It is permissible to delay the processing of the per-byte activities, but no delay of more than 256 bytes shall be allowed. Add corresponding PICS entry.cThis last sentence implies that the number of bytes per chunk is the limitation. What is important is the amount of delay, not the size of the processing bundles.d167 2003/10/23תEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_271`27a9.4.1.3b0Move FairnessEligible() definition to Clause 6. cxSince FairnessEligible() is used in a few places in Clause 6, defining it here creates an unnecessary forward reference.d168 2003/10/23׫EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_260`36a9.1.3.14fcbchangethistothusגVchangethroughwhichringlettotransmittowhethertoprote,VשVchangetonon-italicstheand1characters VchangetoonthisandfollowinglineVchangetosomethinglikeVVchangetopodbmyinfoconservativemodetotopoentrymyringlet׮VchangetpframestatemachinetotpframesstatemachineVchangetptotcVchangetransmissionoftptotransmittpVchangetransmittpframestatemachinetotransmittpframesVchangeutomuׇVchangewhencomparedtotoincomparisontoVchangewithcontroltypetowithacontroltypeװVchangedPWchangesWSW׎WchangingWcharacterWWWWWcharacteristicsWcharactersWWW WchecklW֣W֩WֻWcheck3֜WcheckinguWvWchecksumeWSWWchoice=WchokeWchosenW9WclarificationֿWclarifyWWקWcanUWXWYWZW^W`WcWfWgWsWuWxW֣W֦W֨W֩WֺWWWWW"W;W?WFWXWאWתWWWWW/WhWsWtWwWanedgecannotexistbetweenonestationVaseprobablyshouldnotisVandSWUWYWZW]W^W`WbWdWeWfWgWjWkWlWpWrWsWvWxWzW}WրWցWւWքWօW։W֊W֐W֒W֜W֞W֠W֣W֤W֥W֩WְWֳWִWֵWֶWָWֺWֻWּWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W WWWWWW!W#W$W%W&W'W+W,W1W;W<W?WBWDWFWIWJWLWNWOWPWQWRWSWTWUWVWWWXWYW׃W׆WאWבWדWטWנWץWz׫bOChange all Clause 10 variable references to the new names, throughout Clause 9.cIncorrect variable references.d15203/10/21׬EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_284`13a9.4.5.4bDefine iAmTail.c>iAmTail is not defined anywhere. (See also page 292, line 34.) 2003/10/21׭EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_292`34a9.5b+Change "iAmTail[myRingletID]" to "iAmTail".cPrevious uses of iAmTail did not indicate needing to resolve it to the correct ringlet. Since other variables are being used within their ringlet context, this should be able to be used that way too. (See also page 284, line 13.) 2003/10/21׮EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_292`35a9.5bgChange "topoDB.myInfo.conservativeMode" to "topoEntry[myRingletID][hopsToCongestion].conservativeMode".cIn addition to not reflecting the current topology variable structures, this incorrectly checks to see if the tail station is conservative. 2003/10/21ׯEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_292~ׯ`38a9.5bAW?W@WAWQWXWYWZW[W\W]W^W_WaWbWcWeWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWpWrWsWtWuWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}W~WW؀W؁W؂W؃W؄W؅W؆W؇W؈W؏WؑWؒWؓWؔWؖWؘW~ײbIf this is felt useful, add appropriate text, possibly referring to Table-Row 6.30-7, and possibly noting that setting ttl to hopsToCongestion is preferred (but not required).cRIt might be useful to note the range of values and/or ideal value for the FDD ttl.d160 2003/10/23׳EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_293`5a9.5.1b4Change "class A and class C" to "classC and classA".c#Incorrect association and spelling.d204 2003/10/23״EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_293`27a9.5.2b-Change "2LRTT" to "2 * LRTT" in rows 2 and 3.cSyntax.d207 2003/10/23׵EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_293`38a9.5.2b1Remove the bold from the " T" in lines 38 and 41.cBold.d209 2003/10/23׶EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_302`26a10.1.1b)Change "protocol are" to "protocols are".cPlural.d216 2003/10/23׷EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_302`31a10.1.1bStrike "distinct".l3 lemon״׵׶׷׸׹׺׻׼׽׾׿ƒÃăŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃σЃу҃ӃԃՃփ׃؃كڃۃ܃݃ރ߃  !"#$%&'()*+,-./0123456789:;<=>?@ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYmorZ[\]parsons^_`abcdefgsultanhijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~takefman؀؁؂؃؄؅؆؇؈؉؊؋،young؍؎zhu؏ؘؐؑؒؓؔؕؖؗ9bincolumn1ofthetablejoinrows1118soallarethelengSVindescriptionofttlreplacetpwithtc֕Vintable10.4changewevalueto1֖Vintable10.5changewevalueto1֗Vinthedescriptionofrow10.28-9replacecheck3withstart֜Vintheferowchangefalsetotrueinthesecondcoulmnand֍Vinthelastelseline34sethopstocongestiontomaxstationָVincludecWjW}WրWW.WYW؁Wincludeadescriptiveexamplesimilartoexamplefigureinl}Vbincluderelevanttextsosomethingsurviveswhenourmemorie@includes@ increase@Ainformative@intervals@$into@Sitalics@jumbo@last@likewise@linerate@listed@macprotectionoptional@machine@machines@maxmax@mib@missing@movefairnesseligibledefinitiontoclause6@must@mytopoinfo@)non-boolean@non-null@notethiscommentcanbechangedfromtechnicaltoeditorial@oamflushreq@off@on@0one@other@page-line@passthrough@please@processing@protocol@quantify@real@refer@remove@ifastationitshallnotrespondatall@8replacerow7with@replacetopodbmyinfoconservativemodebymytopoinfoconserv@resetting@rewordlike@ri@ringlet0@*rxframe@Eseedvjcontributionfordetails@separate@|7_ÃA@֒Ã׺׻ÃAPTU׼ÃA`֓VW׽׾ÃApXY׿ÃA1ƒ؏ÃA֔ăŃÃăŃƃÃBȃɃʃ˃ÃB ̓΃σЃу҃ӃԃՃփÃB0ÃB@ÃBPڃÃB`߃ÃBpÃBÃBEPi3ÃE`jǃɃÃEpkּÃE4ÃEl)ÃFmÃF ÃF0ÃF`ֿÃFp֛ÃG0(ÃG@oÃGPnÃG`־ÃGÃGÃHPpÃH`qÃIֽÃI0ÃI@ֻÃIP56ÃI`r7ÃIp8ÃJ0sÃJPtuÃJ`{ÃJpvwxÃJyzÃJ֜ÃJ|֝ÃQ}aÃQ0֞ÃQ@ÃR0ÃR`ÃRpÃR:ÃRxÃR;ÃS@<ÃSPyÃS`=ÃS>ÃS?IÃT0bÃTPcÃTzÃU@ÃU {ÃU0ÃU@AÃUP~BÃUpdÃVPeÃV`ÃWÃW fÃW0ÃW@ÃW`|ÃX0gÃXÃYhe׷cNo need to specify that the ATD frames are distinct. And doing so implies others not specifying such may not be distinct. Also begs the question: distinct from what?d217 2003/10/23׸EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_302`22a10.1.1bRMerge the two sets of protocol descriptions into one set of protocol descriptions.c\Lines 22 through 36 are somewhat duplicative and repetitive of page 301 lines 29 through 38.d215 2003/10/23׹EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_302`51a10.1.1bW?WIWLWOWSWTWקW׮WWWWW_WsWwWxW~W؄WؒWؖWifastationisnotabletoresponditshallnotrespondat֝V,Ucisn't+WEWWWiso֫W֬Wissue֣WָWissuesSW3G ^editorial׿ƒÃăŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃σЃу҃Ӄԃփ׃؃كڃۃ܃߃  !#%&'()*/012349:;<=BCDEFGHIJKLMNOPRSTUVW`dfoq؉؊؋،؍؎ؐؕؗؗؗؗؗA$binformative֯WinitialWinitializedwWinlcude1WinsertW>WaWbWcWyWinsertanewparagraphatthebeginningof11.5.2.3similarcVinsertarowbetween5and6torejecttheinvalidoamreque>Vinsertdefinedin5.4.4asapproriateaVbVinsertsections9.4.9and9.4.10ofd26clause9raspdfremoveyVinsertedsWwWxWyWinsideWinsignificantWinstabilityYWinstanceYWאWinstancesWUWoWzWWinstead֤WWint}Winteger'Wintegrating{WintelligibleבWintentionYWinter-arrival_Winterface֘WWWW WFWKWinterfaces֯WWMWinternal֯W<WintervalCWKWLWOW chow׿WSmAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23rge ring".c9I see no reason why this would be limited to large rings.d236jAccept suggested remedy.mAccepted 2003/10/22nting configured holdoff time. Change this paragraph to a note.mAccepted-Modified 2003/10/22EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_307`17a10.1.8bStrike " on a large ring".c9I see no reason why this would be limited to large rings.d236jAccept suggested remedy.mAccepted 2003/10/22EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_309`12a10.1.11b?Strike "such as the Virtual Router Redundancy Protocol (VRRP)".c{I don't think we should be referring to higher layer protocols beyond those required to be supported by 802 compliant MACs. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_309`24a10.1.12b4Change "sent in subclassA0" to "sent as subclassA0".c2Frames are not in a class, but have a class value. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial5chigherWhighestW!Whistory%Whold֤WholdoffXWhopָWؖWhopnumؓWhopssW}W4WWhWhopstocongestionָWhowWWYW֏W֛W֣W.W9W=WSWTW>btoWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W W WWWWWWWWWWW W$W%W&W'W(W)W+W,W-W.W/W1W2W4W5W6W7W9W:W;W<W=W@WAWDWEWFWIWJWKWMWNWOWPWUWVWWWXWYW[W]WcWfWhWoWpWrWsWwWxWyW؀W؁W؂W؃W؆W؇W؈W؍W؎WlHcinadditiontonotreflectingthecurrenttopologyvariable׮V_309`31a10.2b9Change from 10.2 to 10.1.13 (similar in practice to 6.1).cThis is part of the intro.d242 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_309`43a10.2b@Consistently leave "state machine" out of the names in the list.cKSome times "state machine" is included in the name and some times it isn't.d245 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_309`51a10.2b_Change "starts again" to "starts again (at stage 2)" or "starts again (with the second stage)".cIt may not be clear to all readers that the DB update SM starts up not at the beginning, or where it left off in stage 1, but at stage 2. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_310`2a10.2bjChange "the preceding state machine" to "the preceding (topology database update, stage 1) state machine".cMIt may not be clear to all readers that the previous SM was the DB update SM. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_310`16a10.2b-Change "Transmission of TP" to "Transmit TP".27b10.1.6TW10.10eW10.12ּW10.13mW10.14|W10.14.2 W10.14.3W10.15W10.16W10.17W10.18kWnWoWּW10.19rW10.2W10.20rW10.21kW10.27 W10.28vWwW10.28-9֜W10.29 W!W10.3WWW100UW100msec֏W107WWW11SWְW<WW11-14֯W11.3.2@W11.4.2@W11.5.1.5XW11.5.5.1.4<W11.6<WIW12ְW12.2.3@W12.2.3.3@W12.3.1rW14ּW14/15oW149WWW15yWZW15-54֯W15/16֣W15:8֬W16mWPWZW16a֣16b֣W17SWW׽W18SWּW19nWsW1stSW2YWbWdWjWqWvW}W֣W֤W֥W֯WֻWּWֽWֿWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWW%W+W/W1WIWPW~WW״W׿WWbwithagranularitynolargerthan1tickVwithhandlingofthenexttpframe֔Vwithperiodicallythereafter֒VwithsourcestationdidnotstriptheframeasexpectedֈVwiththestationsthendirect֓Vwithin֋W֏WWWׯW-WyWbstatefinal֣Vstatetable10.21shouldbetheonlyplacethatsetsthevarkVstatedZWWstatementrWW+W8WvWstatementsrWrWstates־WstationֈW֋W֘W֛W֝W֞W֦WWW1W;WMWWWWWW&W,W.WiW~Wstations֓WָWWWWWSWTWVWWWYW׋WW&WstatisticsCWJWKWstatsLWstatusWWWWW W  WPW,citmaynotbecleartoallreadersthattheprevioussmwasVitmightbeusefultogiveacross-referencetol2formore׿Vitmightbeusefultonotetherangeofvaluesand/oridealײVitshallberinglet13VitshouldbestationmanagementaddressattinsteadstationؕVitalicizedqWitalicsWWWWWWW W׌W3Xc2Naming of function/SM is inconsistent with others.d248 2003/10/23hnFLemon^ Editorial_310`16a10.2b=Change "TP frame state machine" to "TP frames state machine".cMissing plural. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_310`22a10.2bStrike the last sentence.c;The last sentence appears to restate the previous sentence. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_310`31a10.2b[Change "LRTT frame state machine (see 10.14.3)." to "LRTT frame processing (see 10.14.3).".c>This function/SM should be named consistently with the others. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`1a10.2b~Using the FigureTextTick paragraph style, create a little white space before and after the text to separate it from the lines.cLThe words abut the arrowed lines, making the text less that perfectly clear. 2003/10/2110.6EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`1a10.2bPMove the bubble and text frame to the front to hide the end of the arrowed line.m NjohnɃʃ˃̃̓΃σЃу҃ӃԃՃփ׃؃كڃۃ܃݃ރ߃  !"#$%&'()*+,-./0123456789:;<=>?@ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYa10.3.7h10.3.810.4.110.4.1.310.4.1.3.110.4.1.3.4ؐ10.4.1.410.4.1.5d10.4.2֕10.4.3֖ؑ10.4.4֗10.4.510.4.5.210.5.1ؒ10.5.2.2.1ؓ10.5.3.210.5.3.4ؔ10.5.410.5.5ƃؕ10.5.6֘10.5.7.210.5.8֙10.5.8.2 10.6.1ef֚2 10.6.2c=The arrow coming from WTR SM should not overwrite the bubble.d253 2003/10/2310.6EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`1a10.2bAChange "protection state machines" to "protection state machine".c+There is only one protection state machine.d254 2003/10/2310.6EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`1a10.2bOChange "transmit TP frame state machine" to "transmit TP frames state machine".cmMultiple TP frames are transmitted by the state machine, and it is usually referred to with these pluralized.d255 2003/10/2310.6EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`1a10.2bIChange "TC frame state machines" to "TP frame processing state machines".c Name this consistently with ATD.d256 2003/10/2310.6EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`1a10.2bKChange "LRTT frame state machine" to "LRTT frame processing state machine".c Name this consistently with ATD.d257 2003/10/2310.6hnFLemon^ Editorial_311`1a10.22cbubbleWbullet7W8W:W@W.' Ѓу҃ӃԃՃփ׃؃كڃۃ܃݃ރ߃  !"#$%&'()*+,-./0123456789:;<=>?@ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~؀؁؂؃؄؅؆؇؈؉؊؋،؍؎؏ؘؐؑؒؓؔؕؖؗbmachinesjW֨WWWyWmacsWmadeYWPW׎Wmaintain֥WmakefWqW֋W֥WW4W:W<W=WWLWgWjWmakeapproriatechangehereandinmibgVmakeexamplevaluesmoreconsistentwithafunctionalringfVmakeloopterminatorringlet2forconsistencyqVmakethefollowingchangesinthelistofclause10variablejVmakingאWmanageableבWmandateWmandatory=WWmannerWWWmanualWmanyYWmapped֯Wmapping Wmappings֯WmarkWWmarksWmatch9WPW׈WדWWoWmaterialyWmaxָWֽWnWֿWmayWWkWWעW׻WmeansWWmeasurementSWeWmedia׼WmeetsXWmemories.WmergeֺW׸Wmergethetwosetsofprotocoldescriptionsintoonesetof׸VmessageWmessages֐WWmessagessֹWmeta-header WmethodxW,W7W@WW&cnamethisconsistentlywithatdVVnamedWnamesSWW)W#WEWmWnWqWnamingWnamingoffunction/smisinconsistentwithothersVnature(WnecessarilyWWneedyWW֥WWW)WPWQW׋WוW׷WWWWWWWWWLWRWVW\WfWؔWneedbackgroundforadmindownLVneedcommaforproperpause׋VneedpauseVVneedreasonforlastrowVneedrfcnumberfVneedspaceRVneededXWZW+W,W׏Wneeding׭WneedsXWoW֣W;W؈WneighboorָWneighborUWTWWWneighbortpframeswithincorrectrigetdroppedbyrow4ofUVneighborchecksumeWbfChange "ATD frame processing and secondary MAC state machine" to "ATD frame processing state machine".c0No need to call out one piece of ATD processing.d25803/10/2110.6EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`1a10.2baChange arrowed lines to same thickness and same size arrow head as other arrowed lines in figure.c6Arrows radiating out from Topo DB are unusually large. 2003/10/2110.6EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_311`37a10.3.1.1b+Change "are received" to "can be received".cAThese control frames are not necessarily received across an edge. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`38a10.3.1.1b4Change "from an edge span" to "across an edge span".cdThese control frames are not received from an edge, but from a station on the other side of an edge. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_311`42a10.3.1.1b Change "6.6.3.6.4" to "6.6.3.6".c!No need to point to such a depth. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_312`18 ocarrowsradiatingoutfromtopodbareunusuallylargeVasXWZW]W_WrW}W֐W֥WָWֺWֿWWWWWW&W'W(W-W9W:W=WBWDWIWOWPWQWSWVWXWYWץWצW׾WWWQWlWtWzWW؁W؏Wasspecifiedby3.2.60lrttislooproundtriptimenotlinkzVVy_ÃBhÃCÃC dؐÃC0֕ÃC@֖ؑÃCP֗ÃC`ÃCpÃCؒÃCؓÃCؔÃD֘ƃؕÃD ֙ ÃD0 ÃD@֚ ÃDPef2ÃD` ÃDgÃE0ؖÃEPi3ÃE`jǃɃ̓)ÃFmÃF ÃF0ÃF`ֿÃFp֛ÃG0(ÃG@oÃGPnÃG`־ÃGÃGÃHPpÃH`qÃIֽÃI0ÃI@ֻÃIP56ÃI`r7ÃIp8ÃJ0sÃJPtuÃJ`{ÃJpvwxÃJyzÃJ֜ÃJ|֝ÃQ}aÃQ0֞ÃQ@ÃR0ÃR`ÃRpÃR:ÃRxÃR;ÃS@<ÃSPyÃS`=ÃS>ÃS?IÃT0bÃTPcÃTzÃU@ÃU {ÃU0ÃU@AÃUP~BÃUpdÃVPeÃV`ÃWÃW fÃW0ÃW@ÃW`|ÃX0gÃXÃYha10.3.2bEChange "This is equal to 255" to "This is 255" or "Its value is 255".cUnnecessary to use "equal".d263 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_313`16a10.3.3bFill in ringlet0.cMissing part of ringlet0.d264 2003/10/2310.7EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_314`4a10.3.3bStrike extra period.cDuplicate period.d265 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_314`14a10.3.3bBAdd white space around else (":") portion of conditional operator.cWhite space missing.d266 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_288`41a9.4.7.3b-Remove extra indent from lines 41 through 49.c.Body of function is indented one extra indent.g_107`22a6.2.2b_Change "myTopoInfo" to "ringInfo". (See also comments on pages 149, 315/317, 329, and 390/392.)cNWe need to know if there are any users on the ring, not if we are such a user.d52 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_149`30a 6.6.3.7.4IcindextW֘WtWindicatefW׭WindicatesWWfWgW=W>WOW,WؐWindicating֣Windication?WaWbWindications&W'Wineligible֦WinetMWinfactUWinferWinfo>Winfoframeandopcodearenotdefined>VinformationրW֙WֺWSWVW׿WinformativeWinitialcW%WIWinitially֧WinitiatedXWinserted֦Winstability:WYWinstanceYW^WWאWדWinstances]WW׍WinsteadYWrW֣W!W5WؐWؑWؕWinstrumentedYWinsufficientWׯWintegerֳWִWֵWֶWinter-arrival_Winteresting*Winterface֘WFWHWintermediate,Winteroperability+WinteroperateWinterpolation#WinterpretedQWintervalWBWCWLWOWintervalsJWintoWWYWkWvW֣W֦WֺW?WPWQWבWsWwW؀WֵWֶWcbodyoffunctionisindentedoneextraindentVVbogus@WboldW׵booleanֳWִWֵWֶWIWקWרWWborderBWbordersCWGWbothYW^WxWւW֣W+W;WFWPWQWRWSWTWWؒWbottom^Wbound*WboundariesWWBWboundaryBWbox~WWWWAWTWbraceWbracketesWbrackets؃Wbracketsareinawrongplace؃Vbreak{WWbreakingXWbridges֥Wbridging֥WbroadcastTWWbroadcastdoesnotpreventstrippingframeisstillsourcesVbroadcastingTWbchangemytopoinfotoringinfoseealsocommentsonpages149Vchangenextstateentriesforrows36toreturnalsofortapVchangenofloodtofinone؂Verationindependent׹Vchangeothermediafailurestomediafailures׼VchangeotherwisetostationisconfiguredtorunaggressiveVchangepage252line36tos1tos4ands5tos6Vchangepage253line4toies1s4ands5s6Vchangepage253line5toratesofstationss5ands6VchangeparameterstoencodedparametersVchangeprotectionstatemachinestoprotectionstatemachineVchangeprotocolaretoprotocolsare׶Vchangerange1512thedefaultvalueisthenexthigherinte'VchangereportingofstationtoreportingstationVchangereservedsubclassa0toreservedsubclassa0hereandpVchangeresponsecontroltoprotectionmodeonthislineandth6Vchangerfcxxxxdraft-ietf-adslmib-htoappropriaterfcfVchangerfc2863torfc2863NV<bbChange "badFcsUser" to "!badFcsUser". (See also comments on pages 107, 315/317, 329, and 390/392.)c=Bad FCS frames can be deleted only if there is no badFcsUser.d83 2003/10/236.20EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_315`36a10.3.4b(Add ", respectively" to end of sentence.cGrammar.d26803/10/21EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_315`2a10.3.3bkChange "before reaching an edge" to "back to oneself or before reaching an edge", here and page 316 line 5.cChange "10.4.1.5" to "10.4.1.4.1". Make similar change for jp.cMThis is a subfield of prefs and should therefore be a subheading to 10.4.1.4.d290 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_321`42a10.4.1.5b6Remove italics from all but variables. Do same for jp.cdÃ"`@Ã3p׽ÃDiÃUcbÃfuCj224@after@any@ncheck@fast@idon'tbelievethereisanycheckpreventingabroadcaston@@milliseconds@7period@Nservice@suggested[that@Pto֕upgradedؑ/v1x226@6a@acceptSacceptsuggestedremedy@added1and@bf@commenter@crgzdefaults@do@Mfast@initiation@thus@~bjumboWjustuWW׃WeWkրWkeep֋Wkeep-alive֛WkeepaliveYWֿWOWl׿Wlabel[Wlabeled֤WlargeWlargerWQEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_322`28a10.4.2bChange "TP" to "TC".cBad copy/paste.d295jdup 294 2003/10/2310.3EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_325`29a10.4.5bChange "ATT" to "ATD".cWrong frame type.d302jupgraded from editorialvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/2310.6EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_325`8a10.4.5b,Change "parameters" to "encoded parameters".cVThe parameters are not TLV parameters any more than Ethernet frames are 8b/10b frames.d300 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_325`8a10.4.5bChange "is" to "as".cGrammar..4.5b,Change "parameters" to "encoded parameters".cVThe parameters are not TLV parameters any more than Ethernet frames are 8b/10b frames.d300 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_325`8a10.4.5bChange "is" to "as".cGrammar.a10.4.5bChange "is" to "as".cGrammar.tional station attributes" to "additional station attributes (ATTs)".ZcB"ATTs" is used in the next line without having been defined first.d303 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_326`22a10.4.5.2bChange "ATT_DEPENDENT" to "ATT_ORG_SPECIFIC", here and page 331, 28. Change "Nonstandard (possibly organization dependent) values" to "Nonstandard (organization specific) values".cKThe new name is not as descriptive as it could be, and slightly misleading.d305jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/2310.7EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_327`5a10.5.1bChange "distinctive type=ATT_WEIGHT and length field values" to "distinctive type == ATT_WEIGHT field value". Repeat analogous change for 10.5.2, 10.5.3, 10.5.6, and 10.5.7.c2The length field value is not a distinctive value.d306jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_326`7a10.4.5.2ZlEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_328`8a 10.5.2.2.1bStrike "as follows, ".cDuplicative phrases.d308value, otherwise optional)". Change support values for WEIGHT, BANDWIDTH, STATION_SET, and SECONDARY_MACS to C.c7Support column is not explained, and not fully correct.d304 2003/10/2110.7EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_328`8a 10.5.2.2.1bStrike "as follows, ".cDuplicative phrases.d30803/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_328`24a 10.5.2.2.1bMove begin brace to new following line with same indentation as the line on which it currently resides. Repeat for all begin braces throughout Clause 10.c!Begin brace is in wrong location. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_328`51a10.5.3.2b:Change 10.5.3.2 to bf, 10.5.3.3 to co, and 10.5.3.4 to mu.cGThe subfields should be described in the order they occur in the frame. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_329`10a10.5.3.4b=Change "myTopoInfo.badFcsUser" to NameItalic character style.cO@c @ @cD@b@@b"vI#@b%@)^-^3F4@e7b<bdA^`F@^LM@]N\S@V@XYb[@\^_c`@eahcjb@kp_sbA cB udvcAwcAxbAybAzbY{@}cA @c#؃@c%؆bA'؈c+؋@؎b-؏vA-ؐ@Oؓ@4ؔvAؕ@1Ã50Ã:0@8ÃC0@ÃE@@?@??? @>perseded@M @=l€k€26.6.3.10.4@9a€ZDj€]@_€SR€@]€T bforallstatetablesinthetwostatecolumnscolumn1and5ֺVforexample=Vforthestage2databaseupdatet10.13andprotectionstatejVforceWWforceanewpagebeforethisheadingVVformatփW֯WMWכWformats֯WformulaסWforwardedYWforwardingYWfourWfourtimesonthispageVfragmentssWframeXW}WֈW֔W֣W֯WַWֹWֻWWWWWWWWW'W1W;W<W=WIWPWTWVWאWׯWWWWWWWWW7W>W@WAWZW[WvW؀Wframefcscrc32frame[Vframeftftdata[Vframeparityparityframettlframebasecontrol؀Vframettl؀VFbmovefairnesseligibledefinitiontoclause6תVmovelastsentenceofparagraphtoimmediatelyfollowfirst׺VmovelistitemesothatitdirectlyfollowslistitembזVmoveringletselecttolastposition:Vmoverxframetolastposition9V;Vmovetable6.7rowsdescriptiontoappearafterthetableֆVmovetable6.9rowsdescriptiontoappearafterthetableևVmovethebubbleandtextframetothefronttohidetheendVmovethefigure-cell1.24-creferencetotheendofthephra׃VmovethesentenceoamframesarecontrolframesandassuchAVmovethetickmarkstothefrontVmoved֋WmsֿW}Wmsb֬Wmsec֝WmuׇWWmuch/WmultiW؀Wmulticell֤Wmultichoke؀WmultichokeuserWWWjWmultiplyW cinWWW#WEWWW^W`WgWhWkWsWtWwW؁W؃W؅W؆W؏WؐWؑWؒWؔWؗW%cWrong character style.d31303/10/21EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_329`39a10.5.4bStrike second sentence.c$No need to list details of RFC 3418. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_329`38a10.5.4bDStrike ", a zero to 127 character arbitrary printable ASCII string".cUsysName is up to 255 characters. And there is no need to describe its structure here. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_329`38a10.5.4bChange "follows" to "follow".cGrammar. 2003/10/21EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_331`18a10.5.7.2byChange "If the station does not have" to "If the station has only one secondary MAC address configured or does not have".c3Also set to zero if only one secondary MAC address. 2003/10/21 EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_331`49a10.5.8.2bChange "is" to "to be".cGrammar. 2003/10/21 EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_332`32a10.6.1bAdd period to end of sentence.cMissing period. 2003/10/21ObstringWstripֈW؈WstrippedֲWWstrippingWstrongly/WstuffWstyleWWWWWW׌WWW1WstylesWsub-50SWsubclassa0ׯWWWWWsubclauseהW+WsubclausesWsublayer֯WWWWאW7W@W _Yc256W26zW0W27W284׭W29׸W[W292׬W3bWkW֣W֯WIWPWSWׂWWsWvWwW3-10ֺW3-8ֺW3.2.60zWW3.2a֤W3.4jW֬WW3.4.1mWnW3.7.1וW301׸W32/33nW324ؑW3310W33:24֬W34uWָW׬W :csystem^WWHWt1.105.01-2000XWt1.231OWtableSWUWWWbWlWmWnWoWsWvWxWyWzW~WֆWևW֐W֑W֞WְWֺWּWֽW־WWWWWWW WWW:W<W=W>W@WDWHWIWLWPWQW?WBW]WdWpWrWsWwWxW؅WؘWtable10.13row7shouldincludetheactiontestwithinthelVtable10.29isconfusingandtherowsdescriptionisnoteno֞Vtable11.9.3.1Vtable11.9.3.2Vtable12.1hasafewproblems@VtableborderBVsrv6WG: The words "by a binary addition" shall be deleted.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23sEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_392`8a10.11.1b-Change the secMacAddress values to be unique.cAn example table showing a TP database probably should not include duplicate MAC addresses. secMacAddress1 for hops==1 and hops==2 are the same.d384jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/2310.27tEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_394`23a 10.13.1.3bExplain the use of index.cFIt is not obvious what "index" is, or is used for in ExceedsMaxSecMac.d385jAEditors will explain the use of index in the routine description.mAccepted-ModifiedvWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23uEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_394`28a 10.13.1.3b8a10.9.2.5c*In row 7, no definition for MatchToSecMAC.d376jCommenter will withdraw.m Withdrawn 2003/10/22ause 10.bchangefairnesstopicstablesforclause9ׁVchangefddsnumtosequencenumberױVchangefinishtoreturnthroughoutclause10Vchangefirstwordofsentencefromthistothus؎VchangefollowstofollowVchangefrom10.2to10.1.13similarinpracticeto6.1VchangefromanedgespantoacrossanedgespanVchangefunctionsbeginningwithlrtttolrttin10.14.2and Vchangeheadingofresponseringlettoresponseringlet4Vchangeheadingofringlettorxframeriorreceivedringlet2Vchangeiamtailmyringletidtoiamtail׭Vchangeifastationtoifadestinationstation.VchangeifthestationdoesnothavetoifthestationhasonVetolrttframeprocessingstaVchangelrttretimerexpiredtolrttretimer0repeatfornext$VchangemaybeasfollowstomaybeusedasfollowsעVchangeminustoVchangemytopoinfobadfcsusertonameitaliccharacterstyleVP/jto֕WּWW)W2W3WUWWW؏WؑWؒWtopologyW؏Wtp֕WUW؏WtpcontentchangeּWtraffic؏WtransmissionUWtransmittpframeּWtriggered؏WupdateWupgraded֕WW2W3WWWWWWؑWؒWupgradedtotechnical֕VV2V3V"VؑVؒVusepWtWWvaluefWvariablepWvariables"WwhichUWwillfWtW2W4W6W؏WwithfW֕WּWwithdraw4W6Wwrap)Wmacceptedeghilqrswրֻֽ֖֛֒֓֔֗־ֿÃăŃ̃΃σЃS׽Ճzؓؖaccepted-duplicatejkؘaccepted-modifiedfptּ֕ǃȃʃ˃)235U"؏ؑؒsupersededmnV׼withdrawn46v10.1.8؏W10.1.91W100UW12ؑW14ؑW224׼W_ÃEpkּÃE4ÃEl)ÃFmÃF ʃÃF0ÃF@ÃF`ֿÃFp֛ÃFÃGÃG0(ÃG@oÃGPnÃG`־ÃGÃGÃH0ÃHPpÃH`qÃIֽÃI0ÃI@ֻؗÃIP56ؘÃI`r7ÃIp8ÃJÃJ0sÃJPtuÃJ`{ÃJpvwxÃJyzÃJ֜ÃJ|֝ƒÃQ}a ÃQ0֞!"#$ÃQ@ÃR %^ÃR0&'(ÃR@)*9:ÃRP+,ÃR`-ÃRp./_ÃR:0`ÃRxÃR;12345ÃS6ÃS aÃS0;ÃS@<78ÃSPy<ÃS`=cÃSp=ÃSbÃS>>ÃS?I?@ÃTAÃT0bÃTPcBÃT`CÃTDEÃTzFÃU@GHIJÃU {KÃU0LMNOPQÃU@ARSdeÃUP~BTUVWXYfÃW`|ÃX0gÃXÃYhiTbchangebetweentoadjacenttoVchangebitobiיVchangebroadcastdestinationaddresspreventsstrippingtoaVchangebytes/sectobytes/secondapplysamesolutiontopage׆Vchangecellreferencestousefigure-cellstyle1Vchangeclassaandclassctoclasscandclassa׳Vchangeclause1.9to1.9preferablyalsoreworksentencetouVchangeclause12.3.1to12.3.1rVchangeclausetosubclauseהVchangecompletingtoenteringVchangecontroltypetocontroltypethroughoutclause10repeaVchangecurrentstateconditionto[V|xcanexampletableshowingatpdatabaseprobablyshouldnotisVandSWUWYWZW]W^W`WbWdWeWfWgWjWkWlWpWrWsWvWxWzW}WրWցWւWքWօW։W֊W֐W֒W֜W֞W֠W֣W֤W֥W֩WְWֳWִWֵWֶWָWֺWֻWּWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W W WWWWWW!W#W$W%W&W'W+W,W1W;W<W?WBWDWFWIWJWLWNWOWPWQWRWSWTWUWVWWWXWYW׃W׆WאWבWדWטWנWץWbchange10.4.1.5to10.4.1.4.1makesimilarchangeforjpVchange10.5.3.2tobf10.5.3.3tocoand10.5.3.4tomuVchange11.7to11.8.4andcorrectittouseaframemakercroYVEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_396`21a 10.13.1.4bRemove period.cExtraneous period.d388 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_399`18a10.14bRemove period.cExtraneous period.d396jdup 395 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_359`11a10.7.2.2b'Change "Equation " to "Equation 10.16".cMissing reference.d358jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accepted suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_359`19a10.7.2.2b,Change "Equation 10.15" to "Equation 10.17".cWrong reference.d359jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accepted suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23emon^Technical, Non-binding_359`19a10.7.2.2b,Change "Equation 10.15" to "Equation 10.17".cWrong reference.d359jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accepted suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/2210/21EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_399`23a10.14 bhereW8WgWIb4Change "sent in subclassA0" to "sent as subclassA0".c2Frames are not in a class, but have a class value.d397 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_400`11a10.14.2bReplace GetTimeStamp() definition with reference to currentTime variable. Replace invocations of GetTimeStamp() and getTimeStamp() (sic) with currentTime.cCNo need for a function that returns the value of a global variable.d400 2003/10/23 EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_400`30a10.14.2bLChange functions beginning with "LRTT" to "Lrtt" in 10.14.2 and Table 10.29.cCaps.d403 2003/10/23!EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_402`13a10.14.3b6Capitalize functions correctly throughout Table 10.29.cCaps.d405 2003/10/2310.29"EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_402`14a10.14.3bDAdd definitions of lrttRequest, lrttFrame, and lrttIncompleteDefect.c)Missing definitions of several variables.d406vWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23bgetting<WgiveWW׿W*Wgiveeachitsowndefinition*VgiveeditorslicensetoclarifythepurposeoftheserowsinVgiveeditorslicensetoclarifythisVgoWgoal^Wgoes؆Wgood/WgovernedAWgranularityWgratuitouslyWgratuitouslyunnecessarilyVgreaterֿWgreatlyבWgreatlyreducethesentencetosomethingmoremanageableandבVgrey~WTWgroupUWgroupsrWguaranteesWguidance_WguidingEWhandling֔Whappening8WhappensYW^WhardwareWhas^W֏WWWW9W@WPWWsWwWxWyWhave^WֹWW<WWyWhavingֺWhcperfcurrentcountBWhcperfintervalcountBWPWhcperftotalcountBWhead֐WW~WheadingWWWW׾W2W3W4Wheading4WheldֿWhelpSWhere֯WW!W%WWWWWWWWrbdefinitionsֻWW"Wdefs+WdegradationWdegradeWWdegradeconditionsdegradeVdelayW%W/W1WשWdelayedWdeleteWWWW}W~Wdeletethephraseiftheheadstationisimplementingconser~Vdeletethesentencethevalueisrecalculatedevery100msa}VdeletethesetwoblankpagesVdeleted؆WdependenciesWbandthevariablecolumnofpage4432ndcolumnvariableVandworkonconsistencythroughoutVVand/orIWW8WsWwWxWyWandrprspanerrorstatsLWRbadddefinitionsoflrttrequestlrttframeandlrttincompleted"Vaddexamplevaluesasameta-headerabovehops1etcrepeat Vaddfullstopafterinthetopology֚Vaddmoreexplanationand/oraddlistofvalueshereandpageVaddperiodtoendofsentenceׅV V V%Vaddperiodtoendofsentencerepeatforline43page-line4FVaddperiodstoendsofsentencesandsentencefragmentsonlsVaddrespectivelytoendofsentenceVaddringinfobadfcsuservariablecalculationsinsamemannerVaddrow5.9whichcheckstoseeiftheframeisamultichoke؀Vaddrowsbefore4thatcheckfortheseerrorconditionclone؅V#bCRemove space from conservativeRateAdjustment and lrttFrameReceived.cSpaces in variable names.d407 2003/10/2310.29$EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_402`21a10.14.3bHChange "lrttreTimer expired" to "lrttreTimer == 0"; Repeat for next row.cInvalid syntax.d408vCWG: This will be defined as a function for expiration of the timer.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/2310.29&EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_412`3a11.1bChange "station" to "stations".cPlural. 2003/10/21'EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_412`24a11.2.1.2bChange "Range [1, 512], the default value is the next higher integer of 0.000001 * (lineRate * advertisementRatio)." to "The range is from 1 through 512; and the default value is the next higher integer of 0.000001 * (lineRate * advertisementRatio).".cNot a sentence. 2003/10/21(EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_412`23a11.2.1.2b(Change "as severely" to "as a severely".cGrammar. 2003/10/21)EJohnFLemonycinverted֍W؇WinvokingWipMWisUWWWXWYWZW]W^W_W`WaWbWfWgWjWkWlWrWtWuWvWxWyW{W}WրWցWֈW֋W֌W֏W֐W֑W֒W֔W֘W֙W֛W֜W֝W֞W֣W֤W֨W֩W֫W֬WֳWִWֵWֶWַWָWֹWֺWּWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!W#W$W%W)W+W-W.W/W0W9W:W;W=W>W?WBWEWGWIWMWOWSWTWUWVWXWYWׂW׃W׎WאWבWוWןWנWקWרWשWתW׬W׮W׺W׼W׾WWWWWWWWWWWW( baffectWWKWaffectedWafterքWֆWևW֚W֧WֽWWW1W׈WמWׯWW؆Wafter100֝WagainWagainst^WPWagecoef}Waggressive+WWagreeYWalarmWalign׉Waligntextrepeatforfigures6.14and6.16׉Valigns֬Walive֋WallSWkW֝W֤WֺWWWWWCWIWJWKWOWPWכWפW׫WWWWW0W5WoWyWzWWallowedשWallowedratecongestedמWallowing֙WallowsjWKWWalphabetic֤WalreadyZW+Walso^W֭W֮W'W<W@WTWuWWWWWW,WLWeWhWpWuWWamountWWanXWYWZW]W^WkW֦W֨W֩WWWWWWWWWWW W W WWW"W/W;W<WFWאWWWW7W=W@WAWDWz)^ Editorial_413`6a11.2.2.1b"Change "The control" to "Control".c%These are not the only opcode values.d41603/10/21*EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_413`39a11.2.2.3bGive each its own definition.c*These two functions should not be grouped. 2003/10/21+EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_414`12a11.2.3bRemove this subclause; replace the statement with a backward reference to the external defs, vars, and routines listed before; or replace the statement with a list of the external defs, vars, and routines already listed before.cOh yes it does. 2003/10/21,EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_414`49a11.3.1.2bAChange "through which ringlet to transmit" to "whether to protect". Add additional sentence that it uses the protection configuration method of the receiving station, and also sets mac_protection to this value if the configured protection method is wrapping.c&This does not indicates which ringlet. 2003/10/21-EJohnFLemona11.4.2:011.5x11.5.1.11234511.5.1.2;11.5.1.3611.5.1.4a11.5.1.6.1;11.5.1.6.4<7811.5.2y<11.5.2.2=11.5.2.3c11.5.3.1=11.5.3.3b11.5.4.4>>11.5.5.1.4?I?@11.7A11.9b11.9.3c11.9.3.1B11.9.3.2C12.2DE12.2.1.2zF12.2.3.2@GHI12.2.3.3J12.2.4.2{K12.312.3.1.1LM12.3.1.2NOP12.3.2Q12.3.3ARSde12.3.3.1~TU12.3.3.2BVWXYf12.4.3d2.1.6eW3֯W؃CW3.1ְW~WW3.1.5.2.2WhW3.1.5.3.2iW3.1.6fW3.11֬3.4.1ר3.7{W4|WW4.1.5W W WjW4.1.5.2.2kW4.1.5.3.2lW4.2WDWEWQWgW4.3׀W5݃ރ߃5.1.2FW5.1.3GWrWsWצW5.1.4W5.1.5 WmWnW5.2tW5.4ۃ{bchangetictotick׊VchangetoVVVVVשVchangetonon-italicstheand1characters VchangetoonthisandfollowinglineVchangetosendapassa0passa1sendd؃VchangetosomethinglikeVVchangetopodbmyinfoconservativemodetotopoentrymyringlet׮VchangetopodbringinfohopstotopodbringinfototalhopstxrhVchangetpframestatemachinetotpframesstatemachineVchangetptotcVchangetransitpathsadd/dropclientinterfacesandstopstoMVtoVchangewithcontroltypetowithacontroltypeװVchangedPWchangesWSW׎WchangingWcharacterWWWWWcharacteristicsWcharactersWWW WchecklW֣W֩WֻWcheck3֜WcheckinguWvWchecksumeWSWWchoice=WchokeWchosenW9WclarificationֿWclarifyWWקW5W8W-^Technical, Non-binding_415`17a11.3.1.3bZAdd ", by using the DefaultRinglet() routine within ringlet selection" to end of sentence.c'The responder does not have free reign.d42203/10/21.EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_416`15a11.3.3b4Change "If a station" to "If a destination station".c)Only the destination station may do this. 2003/10/21/EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_416`15a11.3.3bChange "drop" to "discard".cDrop is an overloaded term. 2003/10/210EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_417`42a11.4.2b&Get rid of the all caps for this list.cWhy are you screaming? 2003/10/211EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_419`4a11.5.1.1b0Change cell references to use Figure-Cell style.cNot using Figure-Cell style. 2003/10/212EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_419`29a11.5.1.1baChange heading of "ringlet" to "rxFrame.ri" or "Received ringlet" or "Ringlet on which received".c'Not unambiguous reference to "ringlet". 2003/10/2111.33EJohng^technicalnon-binding-V.V5V6V7V8V>V?V@VAVQVXVYVZV[V\V]V^V_VaVbVcVeVgVhViVjVkVlVmVnVpVrVsVtVuVvVwVxVyVzV{V|V}V~VV؀V؁V؂V؃V؄V؅V؆V؇V؈V؏VؑVؒVؓVؔVؖVؘVؘV"cfrequency-Wfresh%Wbdestination-stationցW؍WdestinationmacaddresWdestined֠WdetailedאWdetails,W-W.W/WdetectTWdetectedWdetectingWWdetectionֿWSWUWdetectsYWdeterminedsWwWxWyWdictatedEWdidֈW9WPWdifferentWdirect֓WdirectionWdirection/instanceWdirectlyזWdisappear+Wdiscard/Wdiscarded֏W֦W֨WֻWdiscoverySWdistinct׷WdistinctiveWdivide֞Wdividethetableintotwotablesoneforthestationgenerat֞VdokWֺWWWW+WWyWdocument_WsWwWxWyWdoesֹWKWףWWsWwWxW؀W؈WdomainiWdon't։W֊W<W؆WtbchangeistoareVchangeistoasVchangeistotobe VchangekeepalivetokeepaliveOVchangelisttolistKVchangeloopterminatorforringlettobeconsistentwiththehVchangelrttframestatemachinesee10.14.3tolrttframeprVchangelrttframestatemachinetolrttframeprocessingstaVchangelrttretimerexpiredtolrttretimer0repeatfornext$VchangemaccounterinstancestomaccounterinstancesandmaUVchangemaybeasfollowstomaybeusedasfollowsעVchangeminustoVchangemytopoinfobadfcsusertonameitaliccharacterstyleVngemytopoinfobadfcsusertonameitaliccharacterstyleVVwbchangemytopoinfotoringinfoseealsocommentsonpages149@changenotonotrepeatfortable10.3throughtable10.6@changesemanticsoftheserviceprimitiveformattotitleof@~changetexttoallowingthisinformationtobereported@achangethedotnotationformultiplytousethexsymbol@fchangethistothus@{changetictotick@changetransmissionoftptotransmittp@clarifyinthedefinitionand/orherewhatishappeningint@clarifysentenceiftrueisbeingusedasabooleanvalueca@yclassa@cleared@xcolumn@compliant@constants@correctbottomtableborder@correcttypoerrorasdescribedincoment@cr@database@day@;default@rdefinitions@dependent@destination-station@don'tcountfairnessandcontrolframesinrxmcastclassafram@e@eliminateextraneouswhite-spaceproducingparagraphs@em@e3FLemon^ Editorial_419`29a11.5.1.1b>Place heading "responseRinglet" in italics (using NameItalic).cItalics.d435 2003/10/2311.3hnFLemon^ Editorial_419`29a11.5.1.1b;Change heading of "response ringlet" to "Response ringlet".cCap. 2003/10/2111.35EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_419`31a11.5.1.1bChange descriptions (or indicate adjacent to table) to explain that the selected ringlet is selected, unless reversed due to protection; and all use ringlet selection. For row 3, clarify that it uses DefaultRinglet().cAll the descriptions are incorrect, or at least incomplete. (The description of ringlet_id on the next page is correct and complete.) 2003/10/2111.36EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_420`33a11.5.1.3bLChange "responseControl" to "protectionMode" on this line and the next line.c'All of responseControl is not set to 1. 2003/10/217EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_423`14a 11.5.1.6.4Sbtable-rowאWײWtablesvW֞WֺWLWׁWyWtailiWbprotocol&W/WVW׶W׸WW^Wprotocols%W(W/W׶WprovideWWEWHWprovideareferenceforgorotherwisespecifyHVprovideanillustrationthatshowstheseinterfacesastheyVprovided֭W֮W֯W)Wprovidedwheneverthedestinationaddressextendedparameter֮Vprs-10WprspanerrorxxxxxbaddPWprspanerrorxxxxxbaddandrprspanerrorxxxxxbadallversionofPVpse4Wpsw4WpurposeWpurposesYW֯Wput.W^Wputcurrent11.1into11.1.1^Vputcurrent11.4into11.1.2^Vq֣WWIWqrxadjustthequeueVqrxadjust--thequeueVquantified/We7bDefine functions in condition and action. Correct C syntax. Use a less obtuse method of accepting an echo frame passed to you by the datapath sublayer, coordinating with the Clause 6 editor, if needed.cRow 1 does not make sense.d443 2003/10/2311.48EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_423`36a 11.5.1.6.4bJClarify in the definition and/or here what is happening in this statement.c What is EchoResponseFrame doing?d445 2003/10/2311.49EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_413`22a11.2.2.2bMove rxFrame to last position.c"List is not sorted alphabetically.d417 2003/10/23:EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_413`43a11.2.2.2b&Move RingletSelect() to last position.c"List is not sorted alphabetically.d419 2003/10/23;EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_422`12a 11.5.1.6.1bMove rxFrame to last position.c"List is not sorted alphabetically.d441 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_428`19a11.5.4.4bDefine info, frame, and opcode.c(info, frame, and opcode are not defined. 2003/10/2111.5?EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_429`22a 11.5.5.1.4b=Combine completely, or partially (by calling 11.4 from 11.6).c%Why are Table 11.4 and 11.6 separate? 2003/10/2111.6@EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_429`29a 11.5.5.1.4bDefine functions in condition and action. Correct C syntax. Use a less obtuse method of accepting an OAM frame passed to you by the datapath sublayer, coordinating with the Clause 6 editor, if needed.cRow 1 does not make sense. 2003/10/2111.6AEJohnFLemon, bchange=WDWEWIWKWMWNWOWPWUWWWXWYW[W]fWgWhWpWsWwWxW؁W؂W؃W؄W؇W؍W؎W7b12ְW12.1EW12.2.3@W12.2.3.3@W12.3.1rW127W14ּW14/15oW149WWWW15yWZW15-54֯W15/16֣W15:8֬W16mWPWZW16a֣16b֣W17SWW׽W18SWּW19nWsW1stSW2YWbWdWjWqWvW}W֣W֤W֥W֯WֻWּWֽWֿWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWW%W+W/W1WIWPW~WW״W׿WW؆Wd`$A^Technical, Non-binding_430`7a11.7bMove the sentence "OAM frames are control frames, and as such the minimum length of an OAM frame is governed by the rules described in 8.3." to be the second sentence of 11.3. Remove the remainder of 11.7cThis subclause is of no use.d45803/10/21BEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_434`12a11.9.3.1bCorrect bottom table border.c Table border. 2003/10/21CEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_435`3a11.9.3.2bCorrect row borders.c Row borders. 2003/10/21DEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_438`21a12.2b(Change "a REQUEST" to "an MLME_REQUEST".cIncomplete name. 2003/10/21EEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_438`26a12.2bIf these names are not dictated by some other standard, change them to be consistent with the other primitive names. Otherwise, provide a reference to the guiding standard and change Figure 12.1.cjThese names are inconsistent with the primitive names used in Clause 5 and Clause 7, and with Figure 12.1. 2003/10/21 <banattributethattakesthevalueof V VVXbcorrectbottomtableborderBVcorrectlistsothatitdoesnotrestartatline45andcontףVcorrectrowbordersCVGVcorrectthenoteandtextonlines34/35ofthesamepageas^Vcorrectthenumberofbytesshownforthe3checksumvalueseVcorrectthisphrasetomatchthecorrectoperationorcorrecדV9>bifthesenamesarenotdictatedbysomeotherstandardchangEVifthisisfeltusefuladdappropriatetextpossiblyreferriײVifhighspeedGWifspeedGWignore֝WiiWillegal Willustrate֯Willustrated֠WillustrationWimmediatelyTWנW׺WimplementLW`^FEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_439`8a12.2.1.2bZAdd period to end of sentence. Repeat for line 43, page-line 440-20, and page-line 441-27.cMissing period.d46803/10/21GEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_440`30a12.2.3.2bCorrect row borders.c Row borders. 2003/10/2112.1HEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_440`37a12.2.3.2b0Provide a reference for G, or otherwise specify.cMissing reference. 2003/10/2112.1IEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_440`25a12.2.3.2b&Change "event value" to "Event value".cCap. 2003/10/2112.1JEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_440`48a12.2.3.3b0Add "the following:" to the end of the sentence.cMissing end of sentence. 2003/10/21KEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_441`18a12.2.4.2bChange "List" to "list".cCap. 2003/10/21LEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`1a12.3.1.1bvAssuming AdminDown is defined in RFC 2863, reference this before using it. (Also make sure capitalization is correct.)cNeed background for AdminDown.bpage-lineFWpages־WWWWWRWWWWWWparaSWparagraph֋WWW׍WלW׺W׽WWWcW؍WparagraphsdWWparallel֋Wparameter֭W֮WWparameters֯WWWWWWBWWparen׌WparensWparity؀WpartuW֋Wpartially?WparticularWpassa0؃Wpassa1؃Wpassed9WאW7W@WpassivelyאWpassseqֻW1blisted+WlittleWlocalWVWiWlocalfairrate*Wlocalfairratemin*Vlocalfairrateupperbo*Wlocalfairrateupperbolpaddrate*VlofWlogicWWlongWloophWqWzW{W|WWlossVWlotWlowւWlow-preferenceւWlowerWlpaddrate*WlrttbW}W֐W֝W֞W%WSW״WWW Wlrttcomplete}Wlrttframe"Wlrttframereceived#Wlrttincompletedefect"Wlrttrequest"Wlrttrequesthandle}Wlrttrequesttransmit}Wlrttresponsehandle}Wlrttretimer$Wluck/Wm֯Wma=WIWmacontrolrequest=VmacZW^WuWxW֯WWWW W WW;W=WFWJWKWPWׯWWW,WUW؍W^]L 2003/10/23hnFLemon^ Editorial_442`5a12.3.1.1bzChange "transit paths, add/drop client interfaces and stops" to "transit paths and add/drop client interfaces, and stops".cIncorrect punctuation. 2003/10/21NEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`13a12.3.1.2bChange "RFC2863" to "RFC 2863".cMissing space. 2003/10/21OEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`28a12.3.1.2b"Change "keepalive" to "Keepalive".cCap. 2003/10/21PEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`29a12.3.1.2bKChange "span Ringlet ID" to "Span ringlet ID" or "Span ringlet identifier".cCaps. 2003/10/21QEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_442`34a12.3.2b Remove or clarify this sentence.cAllowing disabling support for unspecified features could be interpreted as allowing something that would otherwise be a violation of the standard. 2003/10/21REJohnFLemon^ Editorial_443`1a12.3.3b-Add space between "addA", "addB", and "addC".c Need space. 2003/10/2112.2bchangetransmissionoftptotransmittpVchangetransmittpframestatemachinetotransmittpframesVchangeutomuׇVchangeunavailablesecondstounavailablesecondsXVchangewhencomparedtotoincomparisontoVchangewithcontroltypetowithacontroltypeװVchangedPWrWsWwWxWyWchangesWSW׎WjWchangingWcharacterWWWWWcharacteristicsWcharactersWWW WchecklW֣W֩WֻWfW؁W؅Wcheck3֜WcheckinguWvWchecks؀W؆W؈WchecksumeWSWWchoice=WchokeW؀WchosenW9WclarificationֿWclarifyWWקW5W8WQWIjasonֻּֽ־ֿƒÃăŃƃǃȃɃʃ˃̃̓΃σjim12345678johnZ[\]^_`abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz{|}~׀ׁׂ׃ׅׄ׆ׇ׈׉׊׋׌׍׎׏אבגדהוזחטיךכלםמןנסעףפץצקרשת׫׬׭׮ׯװױײ׳״׵׶׷׸׹׺׻׼׽׾׿ƒÃăŃƃǃ pbremovedsidofdswrapdefinition֑Vremoveexcessiveitalicsin2paragraphsnotedabovedVremoveextraindentfromlines3through11repeatforallfVremoveextraindentfromlines41through49Vremovefromrfe0andrfe1օVremovegreybox~VTVremoveitalicsfromallbutvariablesdosameforjpVremoveitemffrom10.6.2.1.2gVremovelastsentenceofparagraph׍Vremovelines3through17addasentenceaboutprotectionhi׽VremovenotelVremoveoccurrencesof48-bitfromthispointthroughtheendׂVremoveoptioncontrolfcsdeleandassumethat\VremoveorclarifythissentenceQVremovepages227and228RVremoveperiodVVVVSVremoverprspanerrorstatserrrprspanerrorstatssevandrprspaneLVremovespacefromconservativerateadjuandlrttframereceived#V}bremovedsidofdswrapdefinition@removethatfromframesthatdestinedto@ reorder@replacealloccurencesoffigure-cellwithfigure@Preplaceifastationitshallnotrespondatall@8replacerow7with@replacetopodbmyinfoconservativemodebymytopoinfoconserv@resetting@rewordlike@ri@ringlet0@*roll@ router@rxframe@Eseedvjcontributionfordetails@separate@|\X SEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_443`28a12.3.3bRemove period.cInconsistent period.d491 2003/10/2312.2TEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_444`4a12.3.3.1bRemove grey box.c Grey box.d493 2003/10/2312.3UEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_444`3a12.3.3.1bChange "MAC Counter Instances" to "MAC counter instances", and ""MAC Counter Names" to "MAC Counter names". Repeat idea for entries in the Group and Mac counter instances columns.cCaps.d492 2003/10/2312.3itorial_444`29a12.3.3.2bAdd comma before "and up to"c Need pause. 2003/10/21WEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_444`36a12.3.3.2b/Change "etc" to "and 45 minutes past the hour".c4No point in saying "etc" when only one more remains. 2003/10/21XEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_444`40a12.3.3.2b5Change "Unavailable Seconds" to "unavailableSeconds".cWrong name for variable. 2003/10/21YEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_444`41a12.3.3.2Lo_ÃUpdÃVPeÃV`ÃWÃW fÃW0ÃW@ÃW`|ÃX0gÃXÃYhXYbNChange "11.7" to "11.8.4", and correct it to use a FrameMaker cross-reference.cWrong reference.d499 2003/10/23ZEGalFMor^Technical, Non-binding_146`14a 6.6.3.7.2bO Indicate that optionDataFcsDeletion is for the receive frame and not transit. c I belive that optionDataFcsDeletion variable was defined for received frames and not for transit frames. It should be the destination station decision whether to drop the bad FCS frame or to forward it. d78 2003/10/23ical, Non-binding_149`29a 6.6.3.7.4b Change current state condition to: "frame.ft == FT_DATA && frame.fcs != Crc32(frame)" or to: "badFcsUser && frame.ft == FT_DATA"cA Row 29, to my opinion, badFcsFrames counter should count packets with bad FCS, regardless of the decision to drop or forward them. Also, According to the badFcsUser description (clause 10), it seems that "badFcsUser" and "frame.fcs != Crc32(frame)" are equivalent.  2003/10/216.20\EGalFMorJcwhichYWfWuW}W֐W֥W֦W֩WָWֺWWW+W/W=WIWSWWW׃WאWW,W}WwhileWWָWֺWSWwhiteWWWwhitespacemissingVwhoseWwhyXW:WW0W?W\WdWwhyaretable11.4and11.6separate?Vwhyareyouscreaming0Vwhydoweneedoptioncontrolfcsdelevariable\VwidthsWwillUWkWuW։W֊W֝WָW;WFWHWJWPWvW؏WؔWؘWwillclearallcurrentandpreviousintervalsJV cfound֤WfoureWfragmentפWfragmentedWframeXW`W֔W֥W֩WַWָWֹWW&W'W8W;W=W>W?WIWTWUWVWWWW>WZW[WvWyWؑWؔWؘWframemakerZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀WframersZWframers/physZWframesUWYW^W`WuW։W֊W֏W֖W֗W֟W֠W֣W֦W֧W֨W֩WֲWWW9W?WIWPWSWTWWW׍W׎WאW׷WWWWWWWWZW}W؁W؇W؏WframesarenotinaclassbuthaveaclassvalueVVframesinitiallytransmittedwithps1appeartohavebeens֧VfreeJW-W\^Technical, Non-binding_146`11a 6.6.3.7.2bb Remove optionControlFcsDeletion and assume that control packets with bad FCS are always dropped. ck Why do we need optionControlFcsDeletion variable ? shouldn't we always drop control packets with bad FCS ?d77 2003/10/23]EGalFMor^Technical, Non-binding_269`35a9.3.2b?Change: fe of classA FDD to FALSE, and fe of classC FDD to TRUEcLThe table requires that classA FDD has fe=TRUE, and classC FDD has fe=FALSEd162 2003/10/239.5^EGlennFParsons^Technical, Non-binding_411`27a11.1bRename clasues: 11.1 Overview 11.1.1 Scope 11.1.2 Protocol overview Move: put current 11.1 into 11.1.1 put current 11.4 into 11.1.2c]This section does not align with other sections that have be re-arranged in the last revisiond410 2003/10/23_EGlennFParsons^Technical, Non-binding_416`33a11.3.3.1b;Modify RPR document as required based on IEEE RAC guidance.&]PctruthvalueOWttl֕WֲWַWײWtwoָWWטW*W Pbreorder֬Wreorderfiguresuchthatda47:40alignswithmsbasfollows֬Vreordering/duplicatiSWrepeat׃W׉WכWWWWWWWW W$W<WFWUWreplace`WaWiWlWpWyWzWցWւWֈW֋W֒W֓W֔W֕W֜W֝W֠W֡W֢W֤W֧W֫W֭W֮W֯WֱWֲWֳWִWֵWֶWַWֽW־WWW#W$WW+WrWsWwWxW_caContact IEEE RAC for guidance if nothing received by start of meeting to resolve D2.5 comment 415d427 2003/10/23ennFParsons^ Editorial_417`43a11.4.1bFix capitalizationc Alarma should not be in capitals 2003/10/21aEGlennFParsons^Technical, Non-binding_421`3a11.5.1.4b'insert 'defined in 5.4.4' as approriatec0No reference to MA_CONTROL.indication definition 2003/10/21bEGlennFParsons^Technical, Non-binding_427`7a11.5.3.3b'insert 'defined in 5.4.4' as approriatec0No reference to MA_CONTROL.indication definition 2003/10/21cEGlennFParsons^Technical, Non-binding_425a11.5.2.3bOInsert a new paragraph at the beginning of 11.5.2.3 similar to that in 11.5.3.3cMissing introduction paragraph 2003/10/21dEGlennFParsons^ Editorial_443`5a12.3.3b Fix this :-)cGOoops, what happend to Figure 12.2? Why is it partially on Table 12.3? 2003/10/2112.2eEGlennFParsons^Technical, Non-binding_443`2ea12.3.3bNotably, it should be Fig 6.3 with just the addition of the ovals indicating the measurement points. Also a legend should be added noting that the oval is the measurement pointc4Figure 12.2 should be better aligned with Figure 6.3d487 2003/10/2312.2fEGlennFParsons^ Editorial_444`44a12.3.3.2bChange "RFC xxxx (draft-ietf-adslmib-hc-tc)" to appropriate RFC #. OAM Editor to check... modify editor's note if not yet available with expected timeline.cNeed RFC numberd500 2003/10/23gEGlennFParsons^Technical, Non-binding_516`20aD.4.2b&make approriate change here and in MIBc]variable has changed in clause 6 badDataFcsFrames & badCtrlFcsFrames are now badRxFcsFramesd543 2003/10/23hEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_256`47a9.1.3.14bqChange topoDB.ringInfo.hops to topoDB.ringInfo.totalHopsTx[ri]. (also page 260, line 36 and page 291, line 29).hctopoDB.ringInfo.hops is no longer defined by clause 10. topoDB.ringInfo.totalHopsTx[ri]) is now defined. totalHopsTx[ri]: Hops in the transmit direction on ringlet ri before reaching an edge.d151 2003/10/23iEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_284`13a9.4.5.4bDefine iAmTail as follows: iAmTail: A boolean value indicating whether or not the local station is the tail of a congestion domain. TRUEThe local station is the tail. FALSE(Otherwise.)ciAmTail is not defined.d186 2003/10/23jEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_266`45a9.2.2.2bA7Make the following changes in the list of Clause 10 variables referenced by Clause 9: add topoDB.myInfo.conservativeMode topoDB.ringInfo.hops ==> topoDB.ringInfo.totalHopsTx[ri] topoDB.ringInfo.multichokeUser ==> topoDB.ringInfo.multichokeUser[ri] topoDB.ringInfo.ringTopologyType ==> topoDB.ringInfo.topoType 7 33 33 33 33  jbc:Clause 10 variables referenced by Clause 9 have changed. d155 2003/10/23kEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_263`36a9.2.2.2b4Remove definition of conservativeMode from Clause 9.c(conservativeMode is defined in Clause 10d154BobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_266`51a9.2.2.2bRemove 'Note:'cc'Note:' is no longer relevent as references are now explicitly associated with a specific ringlet. 2003/10/21mEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_272`30a9.4.1.4bindexMac(...) ==> IndexMac(..)c#Routine names should be upper-case. 2003/10/219.6nEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_275`35a9.4.2.4bmax(...) ==> Max(...)cRoutine names are upper-case. 2003/10/219.7oEBobFSultan^ Editorial_277`16a9.4.3.4bZReduce font size of SingleChokeInd( ) to match rest of table. Fix all instances in table.c)Font size of SingleChokeInd( ) too large. 2003/10/219.8pEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding jbf wjb@Af 33 33 33 33 33_+Ic9.1.2.2OW9.1.3.14ָW9.14bW֐W֑W9.14-2֐WHcremainsWWremedies}Wremove\WgW֯WWWWWWremoveitemffrom10.6.2.1.2itconflictsandisincorrectgVremovematerialcoveredin802.17afromclausee3֯VremoveredundanttextinthecaseofanyambiguitybetweentVremovespuriousperiodinclause10.14titleVremovethesentenceincaseofanyambiguitythissentenceiVscringlet0Wringlet0hopsDWringlet1hopsDWringletsTWringsWringtopologytypeuWroundSWzWWzWWWmbmaxmaxnVmax-accessPWmaximumֿWmayWWkWWעW׻WmeansWWmeasurementSWeWmedia׼WmeetsXWmemories.WmergeֺW׸Wmergethetwosetsofprotocoldescriptionsintoonesetof׸VmessageWmessages֐WWmessagessֹWmeta-header WmethodxW,W7W@W (p_277`16a9.4.3.4bUChange next state entries for rows 3 - 6 to 'RETURN'. Also for table 9.9 rows 3 - 8.c-Called state table should 'return' to caller.d178 2003/10/239.8qEBobFSultan^ Editorial_274`45a9.4.2.3b$Italicize rprFairnessResetWaterMarkscVariable names italicized.d172 2003/10/239.8rEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_275`4a9.4.2.4bReplace related groups of statements with a routine. Note: this comment can be changed from technical to editorial if accepted.cThe readability of this table would be improved by replacing related groups of statements with a routine, thus avoiding statements split across multiple lines.d173 2003/10/239.7sEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_280`4a9.4.4.4b~bchangenotonotrepeatfortable10.3throughtable10.6Vchangeoperationindependentlytooperationindependent׹Vchangeothermediafailurestomediafailures׼VchangeotherwisetostationisconfiguredtorunaggressiveVchangepage252line36tos1tos4ands5tos6Vchangepage253line4toies1s4ands5s6Vchangepage253line5toratesofstationss5ands6VchangeparameterstoencodedparametersVchangeprotectionstatemachinestoprotectionstatemachineVchangeprotocolaretoprotocolsare׶Vchangerange1512thedefaultvalueisthenexthigherinte'VchangereportingofstationtoreportingstationVchangereservedsubclassa0toreservedsubclassa0hereandpVchangeresponsecontroltoprotectionmodeonthislineandth6Vchangerfcxxxxdraft-ietf-adslmib-htoappropriaterfcfVchangerfc2863torfc2863NVchangerow1toincludeapassthrucheck؁VSbitalicsdWWWW WסWW3Witalicsshouldonlybeusedforvariablenames VitemgWזWits֐WWWWןWW*Witself;WjoinSWjpWW2cinSWWWXWYWZW]W^W_W`WbWdWjWkWmWnWoWpWqWrWtWuWvWzW}WւWօW։W֊W֋W֌W֐W֑W֓W֕W֛W֜W֠W֡W֤W֦W֩W֫W֬W֯WַWָWֺWֻWּWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW%W*W.W1W2W4W5W6W7W8W:W;W=W@WBWDWEWGWHWIWLWPWQWSWUWVWXWYWׂWׇW׉W׍WוWזWטWתW׮WWWWWWW sbAReplace table 9.9 with version contained in D26Clause9ras.pdf This replacement shall not be done until the clause 9 technical editor has determined by simulation and/or examination that the replacement version does not represent any technical change. Specifically the replacement table shall not be inserted in the next version of the document if it has not yet been validated. Note: this comment can be changed from technical to editorial if accepted.cAState machines should conform to the following conventions: 1. conditions in the 'conditions' column of the state table should not contain an 'OR' operation. Conditions containing an OR can be decomposed into multiple rows. 2) The 'action' column of the state table should not contain a condition (if...else...). Any such action can be rewritten with a distinct row representing a condition. 3) related groups of statements should be replaced with a routine, when this allows statements not   tscB"to be split across multiple lines.d179 2003/10/239.9tEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_103`27a6.2.1.2bmyRingletID ==> myRicThe variable name 'myRingletID' is inconsistent with the name 'otherRi' defined in clause 10. myRingletID is a lengthy name that impairs readability of clause 9, as it is often used an an index.d48 2003/10/23uEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_283`30a9.4.5.2bfringTopologyType ==> topoType (also in row 4 of table 9.10, page 290, line 6, and twice in table 9.14.c8topoDB.ringTopologyType has been renamed topoDB.topoType 2003/10/21vEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_285`20a9.4.5.4bAiAmTail = (frame.fairRate != rcvdRate); ==> iAmTail = TRUE; Similarly, the statement iAmTail = (frame.fairRate != rcvdRate) should be removed from line 40 of row 4 and replaced by a combination of (1) iAmTail = (frame.fairRate != rcvdRate) on line 32 and iAmTail = TRUE on line 38.c*brollBWroundWSWzW{W|WWround-trip{W|Wround-triproundtripforconsistencywiththetermlooprou{V|VmWnWoWyWzW֍W֜W֣WּWֽWWW WW)W9W>W$W5WCWGWuWvWrowsSWUWֆWևW֐W֣WֱWּWWWWGW״WpWrprZW֯WFWJWKW_WrprfairnessresetwateqWrprifstatscontrolcomCWrprifstatscontrolcouJWrprifstatscontrolcoutoclearwestforexampleJVrprifstatscontrolperJWrprifstatscontroltabCWrprspanerrorcountersLWPWrprspanerrorintervalPWrprspanerrorstatserrLWrprspanerrorstatssevLWrprspanerrorxxxxxbadPWrprtopoimageinetaddrMWrrWrrttW1WrsZWWW W WWrsp}WrulesVWׯWAWrunwW֪WWrunningKWrx֣W֩WWrxerror W<balternatively.Walways\W؆WamongWamountWWanXWYWZW]W^WkW֦W֨W֩WWWWWWWWWWW W W WWW"W/W;W<WFWאWWWW7W=W@WAWDWyW )btableuWwWxW؅W؆W vcA'The row 3 action is performed only when the condition normLocalFairRate W?WIW@WAWfWuccontainedוWcontainingsWwWcontainmentWSWYWcontainmentactiveWcontainsMWcontentsWcontextWSWYW׭WcontinueYWֲWcontradictדWcontrolUWXW։W֊W֥WWWWW9W=W?WAWNWPWQWVWWW\WaWbWcontrolmessagesandthetotallinkcapacityNVcontrolframereceivedIWcontrolled+WXWcontrolsCWcontroltype?WIWؑWcontrolversionؑWcontroversialKWY ybAInsert sections 9.4.9 and 9.4.10 of D26Clause9ras.pdf. Remove section 9.5, as all of this material has been included in 9.4.9 and 9.4.10. The state tables shall not be inserted until the clause 9 technical editor has determined by simulation and/or examination that the state machines do correctly represent the technical content of the current section 9.5. Specifically the tables shall not be inserted in the next version of the document if they have not yet been validated. It is suggestBed that the section editor enclose the text of the state machines within an editors' note until the tables have been validated. Note: this comment can be changed from technical to editorial if accepted.cSection 9.4 is missing subsections specifying the FDD Frame send state machine and the FRTT computation state machine (including FDD receive)d193 2003/10/23zEBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_301`30a10.1.10aboffֿWoften-WokWWW WokotherwiseV VoldWb9-4֤W9-pointW9.1YWנWסW9.1.3.2טW9.1.3.3טW9.1.3.4טW9.10uWwW9.13xW9.14$WuW9.14-2֐W9.14-3֐W9.2]WW9.3]WחW؆W9.3.1חW9.3.2.1֎W9.4֤W؆W9.4.10yW9.4.9yW9.5cW֏WyW؆W9.6W؆W9.7؆W9.8#W؆W9.9pWsW900OWaZW[W^WcWfWjWrWuW}W֏W֒W֘W֝W֤W֨W֯WֳWֶWֹWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWW1W9W;W<W>W?W@WIWPWTWVWWWuWאWםWסWקWװW׳W׽W׾W׿WWWWWWW WW(W+W.W7W=W@WDWEWHWYWcWeWiWrWvWwWxW؀W؁W؆W؈WbsumWsummary֯Wsupport֯WW+WSWWsupportedWsupporting֯WsupposedֻWsureLWsurvives.Wswap֐WWswaptheadjustedlrttvaluebetweenrows9.14-2and9.14-3֐VswaptheorderofregularandjumboVswitchUWswitchedXWswitchingSWUWsymbolWsyntaxPW7W@Wt֫WW׵WWt1.105.01-2000XWt10.13jWt10.18jWtabWtableSWUWWW[WeWkWmWnWoWuWvW|WֆWևW֖W֗W֞W֣W֯WּWWWW#W$W4W9W:W<W=W@WDWIWPWWWW W W!W5WBWoWpWsW)<CcstatemachinesshouldconformtotheconventionthattheactxVstatemachinesshouldconformtothefollowingconventionssVwVstatedrWׂWstatement֨WWWWWBW}WstatementsrWsWwWstatesSWYWZWfWstation^WցW֏W֓W֘W֛W֝W֟W֡W֣W֦W֩WָWWWWW+W;WMWSWVWWWטW׮WWW.WZW~W؍W؏WؐWؒWؕWstations]WuW֋WָWWWW%W:WSWTWVWWWYWstatisticsCWKWstatsBWLWstatus֤WHWOWPWstatuscurrentHVstead֕WsteeredWsteeringW1WVW׾Wstem}Wstill}WWstop֚WstopsjWstoreWWstoring}Wucsections^Wsee^WcWuWWփW֖W֗W֢WָW<W=WBW׬W׭W׮W׽WWseemhWzWLWseemsYWZWhW|W}W֒W,WLWSWTW[Wselectcontrolframe<WIWselectionWW=W>Wselects=Wselet֓WselffW}Wself-sourced؈WsemanticsփWsematics؊Wsematicsoftheserviceprimitiveshouldbeaheading؊VsemicolonסWsemszWsendYWָW;WWWyWsenda؃WsendcָW,Wsendcc,Wsendd؃WsendingWsendsYW~WsensexW=WIWױW׻W7W@W؇WsensibleֈWsentYW^W`W֝W֧WָW;WTW׎WןW}WsentenceւWփW֏W֒W֠W֪WָWWWWWWW;WׄW׍W׎WבWפWשW׺WW'WJW؏WؐWؒWY a{EBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_722`34aI.3.7bQround-trip ==> round trip (for consistency with the term 'loop round trip time').cConsistent terminology.d580 2003/10/23|EBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_42`16a1.11.1bQround-trip ==> round trip (for consistency with the term 'loop round trip time').cConsistent terminology.d15 2003/10/23}EBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_292`18a9.5bDelete the sentence 'The value is recalculated every 100 ms, and smoothed over the last ageCoef results.' The FRTT calculation is described in can^Technical, Non-binding_292`18a9.5bDelete the sentence 'The value is recalculated every 100 ms, and smoothed over the last ageCoef results.' The FRTT calculation is described in c EbrouterWroutineֻW-WrWroutinesIW+Wrow[WbWkWlWmWnWoWyWzW֍W֜W֣WּWֽWWW WW)W9W>W$W5WCWGWuWvW؀W؁W؆W؈WrowsSWUWֆWևW֐W֣WֱWּWWWWGW״WpW؅W؆WrprZW֯WFWJWKW_WrprfairnessresetwateqWrprifstatscontrolcomCWrprifstatscontrolcouJWrprifstatscontrolcoutoclearwestforexampleJVrprifstatscontrolperJWrprifstatscontroltabCWrprspanerrorcountersLWPWrprspanerrorintervalPWrprspanerrorstatserrLWrprspanerrorstatssevLWrprspanerrorxxxxxbadPWrprtopoimageinetaddrMWrrWrrttW1WrsZWWW W WWrsp}WrulesVWׯWAWrunwW֪WWrunningKWrx֣W֩WWrxerror W m}cAThe statement 'The value is recalculated every 100 ms, 19 and smoothed over the last ageCoef results.' is incorrect. The FRTT is computed on receipt of a valid pair of FDD frames (immediately following the FDD computation). The frames are sent by the tail with a default period of 100 ms., but this period is configurable, and may differ slightly from the period of FDD computation which is driven by the receipt of the FDD pair. It is the FDD value, and not the FRTT that is smoothed.d195 2003/10/23~EBobFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_292`49a9.5bIDelete the phrase 'if the head station is implementing conservative mode'cThe phrase 'if the head station is implementing conservative mode' is confusing since the tail sends the original FDD pair only if the head deploys the conservative mode.d203 2003/10/23bFSultan^Technical, Non-binding_292`24a9.5bHlink round trip time ==> loop round trip time (all instances in clause).Bcoverthelastagecoefresultsisincorrectthefrttis}Voverlapping~Woverloaded/WoverlyWWWW W W WW$WoverlyverboseandinconsistentnotationVoverridingxWoverwriteWp510DWYcdifferentXWָWֺWdiffersWdifficultֺWdirect֓WdirectionhWdirectlyYW֩WdisablingQWdisagreeBWdiscarded֦W֩W?WdiscardingWdiscardingofthetpframerefersonlytothetpframebeingVdiscoverySWdiscussion֋WBWdistantuWdistinct׷WsWwWxWdistinctiveWdistractingWdistributed*Wdithering%WdoXWbWcW֋W֨WָWWWW9WLWSWTWטWW.W\WdocumentֺWWdocuments֤WdoeslWxWyW֓W֣WָWWW/W1W?WUWXWZW[W\W]W^W_W`WaWbWcWdWeWfWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqWtWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}WW׀WׄWאWהWטW׻WWW+W,W-W7W@W^W؀W؄WcRAs specified by 3.2.60, LRTT is 'loop round trip time' not 'link round trip time'.d196 2003/10/23؀EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_158`13a 6.6.3.10.4badd row 5.9 which checks to see if the frame is a multichoke fairness frame and if so does if frame.ft==FT_FAIRNESS && frame.ffType==MULTI_CHOKE then frame.ttl --; frame.parity = PARITY(frame.ttl,frame.basecontrol)c`This line does not take into account updating of the parity bit for multichoke fairness packets.d86 2003/10/236.23؁EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_160`7a 6.6.3.11.4b)change row 1 to include a !Passthru checkcLThe state machine as currently defined accepts frames when in passthru mode.d88 2003/10/236.24؂EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_115`29a6.4.4.3bchange NO_FLOOD to FI_NONEcNO_FLOOD is no longer valid - d60 2003/10/23_125`16a6.5.5.4b.change to sendA = passA0 || (passA1 && sendD)!8a9.5.1׳9.5.2b֐֑״׵9.7׆9.8.3ׁbeWfW|Wb2.1.6eVb3.1.6fVb4|VcWW W W  W WgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWoWpWqW}WWc1.4.3gVc3.1.5.2.2VhVc3.1.5.3.2iVc4.1.5V V VjVc4.1.5.2.2kVc4.1.5.3.2lVc5.1.4Vc5.1.5 VmVnVc6.1.5VoVc6.1.5.1.2pVc6.1.5.3.2qVc7}VdWCWDWEWFWGWHWJWKWLWMWNWOWPWQWrWsWtWצWgWd3CVd4.2VDVEVQVgVd5.1.2FVd5.1.3GVrVsVצVd5.2tVd6HVJVKVLVMVNVOVPV'B؃cNBrackets are in a wrong place. Should be sendA= passA0 || (passA1 && sendD). d67 2003/10/236.9؄EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_142a6.6.3bNONE - no changecSecond diamond of a) (transiting) does not consider protection packet from EDGE. I Not sure if it should given that this is not a detailed fig just wanted it noted and let people decide.d73 2003/10/236.10؅EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_144a 6.6.3.6.4bXadd rows before 4 that check for these error condition - clone from later receive table.cRows 4 and 5. There are none of the error checks that exist in the full table. HEC errors could occur, runts, multicast SRC addressd74 2003/10/236.19؆EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_148`7a 6.6.3.7.4bctransiting؄Wtransitted֣WtransmissionYW֣W֥WUWׯWtransmissions֥WtransmitXWkW֣W֨W8WhWtransmits֣Wtransmitted^W}W֟W֣W֦W֧W֨WW;W=WWtransmittingYWtransmittpframeּWtreshold،Wtried֤Wtrigger7WtriggeredUW؏WtriggersּWVWtripSWzWWtrue`WfWkWּW0WץWצWקWרW]WvW%+ ؆bAapossible remedies 1) don't count any errors on idles - idles are always deleted anyway 2) adjust table so that in passthru the counts don't occur - this would involve either a) cloning rows 3 through 8 after 9 (9.3, 9.4, 9.5, 9.6, 9.7, 9.8) adding row 2.9 that checks for !passthru and goes to tow 9.3 removing increments on rows 3 through 8ac2We should not be counting errors in passthru mode.d79 2003/10/236.20؇EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_149`29a 6.6.3.7.4b change badFcsUser to !badFcsUsercmBadFcsUser should be inverted since the sense of badFcsUser is that the user wants to get frames with bad FCSd82 2003/10/236.20؈EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_160`17a 6.6.3.11.4bsplit up the row into a second row. The first one checks for flooded frames and does not count. The second causes a source strip count to be incremented.Geb3adoptthestyleoffigure1.4V3sameappliestopage648line26V30WsWcweshouldnotbecountingerrorsinpassthrumode؆Vwe4+WweightؒWweightings!Wweights*WweirdWwereZWW9WPWwestFWJWؐW{zctheSWUWWWXWYWZW]W^W`WbWcWeWfWgWhWjWkWlWmWnWpWrWsWuWvWxWzW{W|W}WWրWցWւWփW։W֊W֋W֌W֏W֐W֒W֓W֔W֕W֘W֛W֜W֝W֞W֟W֣W֤W֥W֦W֧W֨W֩W֫W֭W֮WֳWֶWַWָWֺWֻWּW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWWWW'؈cStripped self-sourced packets are not counted. It is minor. The row needs to be split to flooded and not flooded packets. The latter should cause the count.d90 2003/10/236.24؉EMichaelFTakefman^ Editorial_83`30a5.4.1.2c#spelling "source address extended" d28 2003/10/23؊EMichaelFTakefman^ Editorial_87`44a5.4.4.1c5Sematics of the service primitive should be a headingd33 2003/10/23an^ Editorial_101`3a6.2.1csubclase missing any text 2003/10/21،EMichaelFTakefman^ Editorial_104`28a6.2c%Spelling Treshold should be Threshold 2003/10/21؍EGeorgeFYoung^ Editorial_37`7a1.9.1bpChange the ending of the last sentence in the first paragraph to read: " ... at the destination-station S7 MAC."cfFigure 1.13 has been changed from D2.5 and the destination station no longer is S9, but rather S7 now.d13 2003/10/211.13؎EGeorgeFYoung^ Editorial_249`20a9.1vbcclWcell֡WW1WcellsֺWcenter֣WWWWchangeUW_WhWmWnWsWփW֍W֖W֗W֙WWW׃ڃۃ܃WWWWWWWWWWWW W!W*9W=WrWuW~WׁWׄW׆WׇW׈W׊W׋W׌W׏WגWהWחWיWכWםWנWעWפWרWשW׫W׭W׮WׯWװWױW׳W״W׶W׹W׼WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W WWWWWWWWW W$W&W'W(W)W,W.W/W1W2W4W5W6W<W-؎b6Change first word of sentence from "This," to "Thus,".cGrammard128 2003/10/23؏EDanielFZhu^Technical, Non-binding_307`9a10.1.8cA%The following sentence is not correct: "As a result, TP frames are not triggered by a station as a result of detecting a passthrough event elsewhere in the ring." During last meeting in Las Vegas, it was agreed that TP frames will be triggered upon detection of passthrough event in the ring.%d235jAEditors will modify 10.1.8 to indicate that TP frames are triggered as a result of detecting a passthrough event elsewhere on the ring to facilitate fast rediscovery of topology after a passthrough event, and thus faster restoration of strict mode traffic.mAccepted-Modifiedv2003/10/22Technical, Non-binding_323`10a10.4.3ontrolVersion) instead of 12 bytes? It is the case for LRTT response frame on page 324 line 5 in section 10.4.4. 2003/10/21ؒEDanielFZhu^ Editorial_327`22a10.5.1B;^non-binding؏WؑWؒWؓWؔWؖWؘWؘWcthefollowingtextisspecifictosteeringandshouldhavea׾VtheformatofthestatetablesmakesitdifficulttoextractֺVthefunctionexceedsmaxsecmacshouldnotberecalculatingop{VthefunctionnameshouldbechangedfrompassseqtoaccepttpؗVthefunkysettingoftheconservativeupperboundcanyield*VtheitalicsareusedinconsistentlyVthelastsentenceappearstorestatetheprevioussentenceVthelengthfieldvalueisnotadistinctivevalueVthelistandnoteisunclearVthelocationoftheringletselectionmistakenlyimpliesthiVVthemaccontrolshadedboxhasslippedontothenextpageAV^technical2W3W4W5W6W7W8W9W;W<W=W>W?W@WBWDWIWJWKWLWOWPWQWSWTWUWVWXW׊W׍W׎WאWדWןWשW׫W׬W׮WׯW24a 10.5.2.2.1cThe following line of code should be changed from: for (hopNum = 1; hopNum <= ringInfo.totalHopsTx[ringlet^1]) { to: for (hopNum = 1; hopNum <= ringInfo.totalHopsTx[ringlet^1]; hopNum += 1) { 2003/10/21ؔEDanielFZhu^Technical, Non-binding_329`4a10.5.3.4cAThe following questions need to be addressed in this section regarding the "bf" bit: - What is the "bf" bit used for? - When will the "bf" bit be set? Is it when a single data frame with invalid fcs field is received or when fcs error rate exceeds certain threshold? - When will the "bf" bit be cleared? Is it when a single data frame with valid fcs field is received or when no data frame with invalid fcs field is received during certain period of time? ؕEDanielFZhu^ Editorial_330`34a10.5.5cIIt should be "station management address ATT" instead "station name ATT".d319jdup 318 2003/10/23ؖEDanielFZhu^Technical, Non-binding_342`25a10.6.3.2c{The following line of code should be changed from: if (topoEntry[ri][hop].valid) to: if (!topoEntry[ri][hop].valid)d336jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23ؗEDanielFZhu^ Editorial_383`17a10.9.2.4caThe function name should be changed from: "PassSeq" to "AcceptTpFrame" in order to be consistent.d374jsup 373 2003/10/23ؘEDanielFZhu^Technical, Non-binding_384`18a10.9.2.5cAccording to the current definition of the Receive TP frame state table, the "SEC" state will never be entered, i.e., no "Next state" is pointing to "SEC".d377jdup 375mAccepted-DuplicatevWG: Duplicate of #375.wAccepted-Duplicate 2003/10/2310.22 Mcaccount؀Waccuracy%Waccurately!WachieveslWacronymWacross^WrW֨WWBWHWאWWrWsWwWactionlWֺW?WVWsWvWwWxWactionszWVWvWactivatedWactual։W֊Wactually֔WWadd2W7WGWOWaddacrossreferenceto12.3.3.1likethereisinifspeedpGVaddreversionmodeinmytopolnfo2VaddtexttothisandallsimilarxxxvaliddataattributestoOVaddedָWLWaddinguWxWadditionrWָW7WYW׍W׮Wg! QEz\iP{jT|nP}T~TyP!1"#0!1FJ#L53C$1F7VUHU2 3IC dd5BDe5BfOؓEDanielFZhu^Technical, Non-binding_328`24a 10.5.2.2.1cThe following line of code should be changed from: for (hopNum = 1; hopNum <= ringInfo.totalHopsTx[ringlet^1]) { to: for (hopNum = 1; hopNum <= ringInfo.totalHopsTx[ringlet^1]; hopNum += 1) {d310jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23ؔEDanielFZhu^Technical, Non-binding_329`4a10.5.3.4cAThe following questions need to be addressed in this section regarding the "bf" bit: - What is the "bf" bit used for? - When will the "bf" bit be set? Is it when a single data frame with invalid fcs field is received or when fcs error rate exceeds certain threshold? - When will the "bf" bit be cleared? Is it when a single data frame with valid fcs field is received or when no data frame with invalid fcs field is received during certain period of time? d312vemedy.mAccepted 2003/10/22֝LS€Q0€vVb1) Change the character style NamePlain to assert a regular style. 2) In the reference pages for TOC, LOF, LOT: insert before the page number.c(can be deferred) The page numbers are italics for entries ending with italics text, in the TOC, LOF, and LOT. They should be plain. Page 9, line 11d3 2003/10/23|߃||_||σ||||~B|A|σ|@|_||_?I|o>|=|<|_;|:|||σ||σ֞|}|_|֝|o֜|yz|vwx|{|tu|σs|8|r7|56|ֻ|σ|ֽ|q|p|_||־|n|o|σ(|֛|ֿ|σ|߃|m|_l)|4|kּ|jǃɃ|i3|g|ef2|֚|߃֙0#oEDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_71`52a3b^Provide an illustration that shows these interfaces as they are used throughout this standard.cVThe ringlet orientation conventions are hard to understand in their descriptive form. d24 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_70`44a3bR(can be deferred) Apply the NameItalic character style to "destinationMacAddress".cKey value is not italics. d22 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ EditorialDRSW59.1]59.1^֋W`7 9.1.3.15_`)iCFjRkYZ79.3.2֏9.3.3.1`Z%'!)5EFIRSZ:09.5a׮F`47l'"T#C #10.4.1.5/6d"T$ &4%DP%10.6.1e$4&10.6.1f$'5(D(10.6.2.1.2g'5)*B*@NKjmillisecondsUWmode؏Wmodify؏WؑWmodify12bytesto14bytesؑVmsUWneighborfW֕Wnot֕W)WUWoftWּWUW؏WonTWUWW؏WoneselfWonlyּWorּWWotherripWotherwiseWpageWparameterpWpassthroughUW؏W؏W؏W؏W؏WUW؏W؏WzWrename)Wreplace֕WrequirementsWresolutionXWrestorationUWresult؏WrewordUWWrewordlikeUVrewordthisparagraphasVringWserviceUWsettingUWsfTWsignalingWsimilarWslowUWso)Wsonet/sdhWspanTWspeedUWstates)Wstation֕Wstations֕Wsuggested֒W֓WWSW׽WzWsupVWXW׼WؗWsup224׼Vsup226VVsup232proposedresolutionXVsup373ؗVswitchedWswitchingUWt1.105.01-2000Wtechnical֕WW2W3W"WؑWؒWjÃ:0dÃ:@Ã:`Ã:ÃAÃA ÃA@ÃAÃAÃB ÃB@ÃBpÃBÃBؕÃUp<ÃUyÃUcÃU=ÃV=ÃV bÃV0>ÃV@>ÃVP?ÃV`IÃVp@ÃV?ÃVAÃVbÃWcÃW ÃW0BÃW@CÃWPDÃW`EÃWpzÃWÃWFÃW@ÃXIÃX ÃX0ÃX@ÃXPGÃX`HÃXpJÃXKÃX{ÃXLÃYMÃY NÃY0OÃY@PÃYPQÃY`ÃYpRÃYeÃYÃYdÃZAÃZ SÃZ0UÃZ@TÃZP~ÃZ`VÃZpWÃZXÃZBÃZYÃafÃa dÃa0Ãa@eÃaPÃa`ÃapfÃaÃaÃa|ÃbgÃb Ãb0Ãb@hÃbPÃb`iÃbpjÃb ÃbÃbkÃc Ãc lÃc0 Ãc@ÃcPmÃc` ÃcpnÃc ÃcÃcÃdoÃd pÃd0Ãd@qÃIÃI 8ÃI0ÃI@ÃIPsÃI`tÃIpuÃI{ÃIXVK-ցELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_37`4a1.9.1bwReplace: "source-station S3" with: "source-station S1" Replace: "destination-station S9" with: "destination-station S7"cTThe source station is S1 (and not S3) and the destination station is S7 (and not S9)d12 2003/10/23[ ֺcBrext state START, row 8 leads to next state FINAL and row 10 leads to next state LENGTH. When copying from the pdf file the copied text is missing a clear structure state machine elemenents row start, end, condition start and action end are hard to find while state machine elemenents condition end and action start are easily detected by the presence of the row number.`d1 2003/10/23ֻEJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_383`11a10.9.2.4bA"1. Correct the TRUE/FALSE definitions. 2. Correct the title of the routine (currently PassSeq). 3. The routine currently returns TRUE if the TP frame should be discarded, which is the opposite of what it is supposed to return. Modify the line of the routine return(check) to return(!check)."cPThere are a number of errors in the description and definition of AcceptTpFrame.d373jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvWG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23-binding_346a10.6.3.3b ֿ@gb@kV@ncpcf@cs^h@tcAwvb5@@6_o@cFp@a@Ecq@bAbAb@^<@@lbxc@bAdWcbAy @ bc@M@MMc@MM7^ Editorial_416`22a11.3.3b3(can be deferred) Update based on DVJ contribution.cThe OAM specifier should be defined in terms of the OUI, not the company_id, now that the IEEE/RAC has accepted the hex representation of these bits. Also, a typical example is required. d426 2003/10/23 uvDrmation is written into the topology database and is marked not in use. b. Secondary MAC address validation is performed, taking into account all secondary addresses (whether or not in use). c. If validation passes, all secondary MAC addresses within the reachable topology are marked in use. d. If validation fails, up to the maximum number of secondary MAC addresses supported by the station are marked in use. The algorithm by which this is done is implementation dependent. If a given seEcondary MAC address is advertised by more than one station, it will not be marked in use. 9. When topology becomes unstable or invalid: No effect on secondary MAC addresses in the topology database. 10. If new secondary MAC address information is received and topology is not valid: New secondary MAC address information is added to database, and is marked not in use. 11. When TP frame is received that duplicates a secondary MAC address of the local station: The duplicated secondary MAC a2m S֕vA WG: Replace "Allows TP frames to propagate through all stations" with "Ensures TC frames do not propagate beyond neighbor station". CRG: Replace "Allows TP frames to propagate through all stations" with "Ensures TP frames do not propagate beyond neighbor station".  wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/2310.3‚y֧‚z׋‚ֈ‚ֱ‚ֲ‚؄‚؅‚։‚֩‚\‚Z‚؆‚S‚[‚؇‚‚֊‚ַ‚؀֣Ã!ZÃ! Ã!0כÃ!@Ã!PÃ!`Ã!p[Ã!Ã!Ã!Ã"]Ã" ^Ã"0\Ã"@RÃ"PÃ"`Ã"p׌Ã"Ã"!Ã"׍Ã#]Ã# ׎Ã#0׏Ã#@אÃ#P^Ã#`֋Ã#pבÃ#גÃ#דÃ$הÃ$ וÃ$0זÃ$@חÃ$PÃ$`Ã$pטÃ$ Ã$Ã$יÃ%ךÃ% Ã%0לÃ%@םÃ%PמÃ%`ןÃ%pwÃ%נÃ%סÃ%עÃ&ףÃ& hÃ&0׫Ã&@_Ã&PkÃ&`jÃ&p_Ã&lAÃE@jÃEPּÃE`kÃEp4ÃEÃElÃFmÃF ÃF0ÃF@ÃFPÃFpֿÃF֛ÃFÃFÃG@nÃGPÃG`־ÃGpÃGÃGÃGpÃHqÃH ֽÃH0ÃH@ֻÃH`5ÃHp6ÃHؘÃH7ÃHrÃI 8ÃI@ÃIPsÃI`tÃIpuÃI{ÃIvÃJwÃJ xÃJ0yÃJ@zÃJP֜ÃJ֝ÃJ|ÃQ0}ÃQP֞ÃQp"ÃQ$ÃQÃi րtechnicalnon-bindingÃE)ÃG (technicalbinding ^dÃBؕÃC0֙ÃC@ ÃCP ÃC`֚ÃCp ÃC ÃC2ÃD ÃD0ÃD@ÃDPÃD37jidon'tbelievethereisanycheckpreventingabroadcastonTVidentifierpWinpWtWּWTWindextWindicate؏WisfWּWTWUWitpWknownfWlastfWWlastneighbormacaddrefWlastneighbormacaddre1willbesetto00-10-a4-97-a8-bdsotfVlicense)WlikeUWlineWlinesּWlistedfWmachinesWmarkreachableorinvalpWmediaUWUWediaUWUWWWWSW׽WzWrename)Wreplace֕WrestorationUWrewordUWWrewordlikeUVrewordthisparagraphasVringWserviceUWsettingUWsfTWsignalingWsimilarWslowUWso)Wsonet/sdhWspanTWspeedUWstates)Wstation֕Wstations֕Wsuggested֒W֓WWSW׽WzWsupVW׼WؗWsup224׼Vsup226VVsup373ؗVswitchedWswitchingUWtechnical֕WW2W3W"WؑWؒW0EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_0`0a0bbUpgrade this description with dvjRacText.pdf, to improve the text while waiting for the IEEE/RAC. czThe description of the EUI-64 should more clearly specify is mapping. Same thing is true for Clause 11. Page 331, line 26d5 2003/10/231EJimFKao^Technical, Non-binding_307`32a10.1.9bAPlease inlcude the followings 1. Add the description the protection time for strict mode traffic. 2. As for relax traffic a. Steering station will steer traffic after receiving a TP frame reported a span failed. The protection time will be x * fast TP timer + RRTT at worst case assumed x copy of TP fame is missed. b. Wrap protection will wrap traffic at the edge station, it might add additional RRTT delay for wrapped traffic traveling at wrap span.ckThe description of protection time for steering and wrapping does not quite match the behevior in Clause 10d237v1.^non-bindingWWWWWWWWWWWWW"W$W+W,W-W.W5W6W7W8W>W?W@WAWQWXWYWZW[W\W]W^W_WaWbWcWeWgWhWiWjWkWlWmWnWpWrWsWtWuWvWwWxWyWzW{W|W}W~WW؀W؁W؂W؃W؄W؅W؆W؇W؈W2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-‚-2‚-2‚-2‚-‚-‚-A.R ‚.11.1%-A‚/11.1&b dÃfuÃg֟Ãg Ãg0֠Ãg@֡ÃgPÃg`Ãgp֢ÃgÃg֯Ãg~ÃhְÃh Ãh0Ãh@׀ÃhP/Ãh`ׇÃhp.ÃhÃhÃhÃi{Ãi րÃi0j00-10-a4-97-a8-bdfW1fWpWּW1changertoringletinmarkreachableorinvalpV1removetpcontentchangefalseinrows14and18oftable10ּV10pW10.1.8؏W10.12ּW10.18ּW10.21ּW100UW12ؑW14ּWؑW18ּW2pWּWWּWּWiW֒W֓W֔W֖W֗WWWWWW2W3WSW׽WWWWWWWWWWWWzWؒWؓWؖWacceptcommentV3VؒVacceptcommenteditorswillensureconsistencyacrossclause2VacceptsuggestedremedyeVgVhViV֒V֓V֔V֖V֗VVVVVSV׽VVVVVVVVVVVVzVؓVؖVc;Last state is supposed to be RETURN, according to Clause 3.d342jFor the protection and topology database update state machines, change the last state to RETURN. Otherwise use FINAL as the last state.mAccepted-ModifiedvCRG: For the protection and topology database update state machines, change the last state to RETURN. Otherwise use FINAL as the last state.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_351`49a10.7.1.1b"Change "between" to "adjacent to".c*An edge can not exist between one station.d353jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23e last known east neighbor. For checksumValid, could the commenter provide the editors with the value of the topology checksum?mAccepted-Modified 2003/10/2210.10gEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_337`24a 10.6.2.1.2b Remove item (f) from 10.6.2.1.2.cQUuEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_642`38aE.1.3b^Change "Clause 1.9" to "1.9". Preferably also rework sentence to avoid starting with a number.cIncorrect reference style.d559 2003/10/23vEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_32`4a1.5.3bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex H" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d10 2003/10/23wEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_255`53a9.1.3.7bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex J" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d146 2003/10/23xEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_418`26a11.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.FH֥ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding_639`1aE.1b1. Add normative specifications in Annex E for client transmission requirements to maintain 802.1D and 802.1Q compatibility. 2. Make Annex E Normative 3. Add appropriate PICS.cAtThe current RPR MAC allows transmissions on the ring which are incompatible with 802.1D and 802.1Q bridging as required by the 802.17 Five Criteria. The RPR MAC allows the client to control frame transmission on the ring without specifying the client rules which ensure compatibility with 802.1D and 802.1Q bridges. These rules need to be normative specifications. td558 2003/10/23֦ERobertF Castellano^Technical, Binding'+IREPeterFJones^ Editorial_227`0a7bremove pages 227 and 228 EvtheּW1W2W7WSWTWUWWWW"W$W؏WؔWthedefinitionofreversionmodewillbemovedto10.3.32VthereferencedsentencewillberewordedasTVthereferencedtextwillberewordedasUVtherowdescriptionswillbeexpandedtoclarifytable10.29֞VthespeedofpassthroughdetectiondependsonthesettingofUVthewordsbyabinaryadditionshallbedeletedrVthen֘WtheseuWtheyxWthispWuWxWրW֖W֗W֘W֛W֝W$Wthrough֕WthroughoutpWrface index#‚E11.5.2<d`‚FGSp‚G11.5.3.1=F‚H11.5.4.4>*‚I11.5.5.1.4?3‚J11.5.5.1.4@:‚KLT‚L11.7AK‚M@NT`‚N11.9.3.2CM@‚O2P7QT‚P12.2DO2‚Q12.2EO7‚R12.2.1.2F‚S12.2.3.2HH‚T12.2.3.3JY‚U12.2.4.2"vWG: Accept suggested remedy. In addition, the editors will ensure that global variables, routines, etc. have definitions or references listed with each state machine.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/2310.29V9.3.3.1ץYd5.1.3צ$SE1.7.1קSTw3.4.1רT889.4.1ש888 9.4.1.3ת8G79.1.3.14׫GP$9P9.4.5.4׬i9.5׭E9.5ׯI9.5װR9.5ױS9.3.2ײC9.5.1׳`9.5.2״89.5.2׵I37BbA010.1.1׶710.1.1׷B10.1.1׸310.1.1׹b10.1.2׺oY10.1.5׼,V10.1.6׽q@10.1.6׾q210.1.6.1׿1810.1.6.1:= XcAvThis text may lead people to think we use BLSR signaling and has lots of words. D2.6 Text The ring wrap is controlled through SONET bidirectional line switched ring (BLSR) style protection switch signaling. It is an objective to perform the wrapping at least as fast as specified for BLSR in ANSI T1.105.01-2000. This objective does not include any configured holdoff time.vd233vCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/23R*AAA +10.1.1S*:,E-T.VAP-10.1.5T,E.10.1.5U,T/10.1.6Vqp010.1.6Wq*18IJ2V3Ap210.1.6.1X1J310.1.7Y1V4&5851.1Z4&6`7U71.12.1[6`8S995.6.5.4\8S:0;3P;7.5]:0<R=3`=7.5.4^<R>Vrb?7p?9.2.2.2_93ւELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_45`50a1.139`9: 3:0:@:Pm:`|:vA .A0A@oAP0A`qAp5AAsBB B0B@BPB`BpBBB)CC "C0uC@wCPyC`CpCCCD{D }D0D@DP$D`D'E0EP+E`-Ep/EAE1F3F MF0OF@F`?FpF#GG0G@7GP5G`=GSGUH0HP9H`;I;I0WI@8IPI`=IpJJ0?JPAJ`JJpDJGJJLQNQ0Q@CR 1R0R@6RP9R`RpRRfRSAS nS0GS@SPhS`SpJSpS S TOT0GTPT`QTSTUU kU0U@UPPUpJVPV`WW MW0W@W`mX0OX]C 2003/10/23DEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_510`12aD.4.2b1fix table entry to refer to ringInfo.numStations cThe MIB cross ref table refers to "ringlet0Hops" and "ringlet1Hops" to determine rprIfStationsOnRing (p510 l12). should refer to ringInfo.numStations as calculated in done in row 13 of Table 10.20. d539 2003/10/23D.2EEPeterFJones^ Editorial_510`32aD.4.2bFix the cross referencescM10.3.1.2 cross reference is wrong in quite a few rows. These isn't a 10.3.1.2d540 2003/10/23D.2FEPeterFJones^ EditorialwEDavidFJames^ Editorial_0`0a0bV(this can be deferred) 1) Decide on a uniform line convention. 2) Do this everywhere. cWe need a standard convention for footnote boundaries under tables. I prefer to have no surrounding box, since this looks too much like another row. Page 497, line 10d4 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_498`22aC7jperiodUWplaceּWpreventingTWpropagate֕WprotchangedּWprotectionUWWrpWratherpWreachingWrediscovery؏WremedyeWgWhWiWlWqWrWsWwWրW֒W֓W֔W֖W֗WֻWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWWWSW׽WWWWWWWWWWWWWWzWؓWؖWremoveּWrename)Wreplace֕WrestorationUW؏Wresult؏WreturnWrewordUWrewordlikeUVrewriteּWriּWring؏WringletpWroutinepWtWrowּWrowsּWsavedּWּWּWWrowsּWּWּWּWWrowּWrowsּWּWּWrowsּWּWowsּWּW)WstationfW֕Wstations֕Wstrict؏WsuggestedeWgWhWiW֒W֓W֔W֖W֗WWWWWSW׽WWWWWWWWa-4ؐEDanielFZhu^ Editorial_321`12a 10.4.1.3.4cIn the sentence "... indicates the protection state on the west span of the station,", it should be east span instead of west span.d287 2003/10/23ؑEDanielFZhu^Technical, Non-binding_323`10a10.4.3cShouldn't the payload of the LRTT request frame be 14 bytes (including controlType and controlVersion) instead of 12 bytes? It is the case for LRTT response frame on page 324 line 5 in section 10.4.4.d296j2upgraded to technical Modify 12 bytes to 14 bytes.mAccepted-Modifiedv!CRG: Modify 12 bytes to 14 bytes.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23ؒEDanielFZhu^Technical, Non-binding_327`22a10.5.1cIn the sentence "If a station has weight equal to 1 on either ringlet, it may advertise the weight via the weight ATT.", the word "either" should be replaced by "both".d307j%upgraded to technical Accept comment.mAccepted-ModifiedvCRG: Accept comment.wAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23_[jthatfWpWּW)WUW؏WthefWtWּWUWW؏WthespeedofpassthroughdetectiondependsonthesettingofUVthereTWthey)WthispWthrough֕WthroughoutpWthus؏WtofWpWpWWpWpWpWpWWWW"W؏WؑWؒWtopologyfWW؏Wtp֕WUW؏WtpcontentchangeּWtraffic؏WtransmissionUWtransmittpframeּWtriggered؏Wtwo"WupdateWupgraded֕WW2W3W"WؑWؒWupgradedtotechnical֕VV2V3V"VؑVؒVuseWusesWvaluefWvariables"WwhichUWwillfW2W؏WwithfW֕WּWwrap)WWmacceptedeghil֖֒֓֔֗־ֿÃăŃ̃΃σS׽Ճzؓؖaccepted-modifiedfּ֕ǃȃʃ˃)23U"؏ؑؒbChange "Broadcast destination address (prevents stripping)" to "Allows TP frames to propagate through all stations". Repeat for Table 10.3 and Table 10.6 (changing frame type to TC and ATD, respectively).cEBroadcast does not prevent stripping. Frame is still source stripped.d284jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/2310.1"6.5.1׊P6.6.2׋cp9.1׌C9.1׍F9.1׎D9.1׏R9.1אS$18FG59.1ב$9.1ג؎19.1ד89.1הF9.1וG9.1.2ז[$9.1.2ח[(9.1.3.2ט 9.1.3.3י]#9.1.3.3ך]&7.2.1.4כV9.1.3.5לd*9.1.3.5םd49.1.3.6מdE9.1.3.7ןda!6pzEDavidFJames^ Editorial_502`47aCb<(this can be deferred) Force a new page before this heading.c'Keep heading with the following table. d536 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_504`31aCb<(this can be deferred) Force a new page before this heading.c-Keep heading the complete table on one page. d537 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_512`3aD.4.2b(this can be deferred) Eliminate this dark underline below the Row heading, on pages: 511, 512, 514 This can be done by selecting before&after text, then applying very thin to Row inside Borders.c4The dark line below the Row heading is distracting. d541 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_644`1aE.1.4.1OQoEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_498`26aC.6.1.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d530 2003/10/23pEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_499`3a C.6.1.5.1.2b2Use FrameMaker cross-references on lines 3 and 34.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d531 2003/10/23qEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_500`3a C.6.1.5.3.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d533 2003/10/23rEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_517`38aD.5.1.3b#Change "Clause 12.3.1" to "12.3.1".cIncorrect reference style.d546 2003/10/23D.3sEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_517`29aD.5.1.3vsent֘WsentenceրW֘W1WTWserviceUWsetfWsettingUWsettingsWؔWsf֛WTWshallrWuW֝WsignalTWsimilar֘WsingleuWslowUWsofW7Wsource֘Wspan֛Wspans֛Wspecifying֛WspeedUWstarting1Wstate֝W7WW"WstatedxWstatement֘WstationfWuW֕W֘W֛W֝W7WWؔWstations֕WTWsteering1WstilluWstoredxWstrict1W؏Wstring֘WsubstituteduWsubstitutionuWsufficiently}WsuggestedeWgWhWiWlWqWsWtWvWwWzW{W|W}W֒W֓W֔W֖W֗W֜WֻWֽW־WֿWWWWWWWWW)WSWXW׽WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW"WzWؓWؖWsumWsupercededmWnW֖W֗WfWKO lEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_488`16a C.4.1.5.3.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d521 2003/10/23mEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_493`4aC.5.1.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.kn 2003/10/23l, Non-binding_309`38a10.2cvReplace "Depending on the configured reversion mode, the state machine may provide" with "The state machine provides".d243jAccept suggested remedy.mAccepted 2003/10/22al, Non-binding_309`38a10.2cvReplace "Depending on the configured reversion mode, the state machine may provide" with "The state machine provides".d243jAccept suggested remedy.mAccepted 2003/10/22:P::(P:P::(P:P::(P:P:P:(P:P::P:P:.1.2;U11.5.1.6.4<#PS`11.5.2.2=P6S11.5.4.4>69Z S 11.5.5.1.4?Z 12.2.3.2@6 12.3.3Ap 12.3.3.2BPR (ad3C (#Cbd4.2D#d4.2EC%d508 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_479`9aCb(this can be deferred) 1) Change the characters after T to non italics: RDAT[7:0] 2) Search for italics '[', ']', 0-9, ':' italics characters, and convert to plain. (VEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_444`29a12.3.3.2bAdd comma before "and up to"c Need pause.d495 2003/10/23WEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_444`36a12.3.3.2b/Change "etc" to "and 45 minutes past the hour".c4No point in saying "etc" when only one more remains.d496 2003/10/23XEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_444`40a12.3.3.2b5Change "Unavailable Seconds" to "unavailableSeconds".cWrong name for variable.d497 2003/10/23YEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_444`41a12.3.3.2zbHlink round trip time ==> loop round trip time (all instances in clause).cRAs specified by 3.2.60, LRTT is 'loop round trip time' not 'link round trip time'.d214jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/233gKPMc3.1.5.2.2hdNc3.1.5.3.2i4OVPY`Pc4.1.5jOVQc4.1.5.2.2kVRc4.1.5.3.2l'SPTZ@Tc5.1.5mSPUc5.1.5n*Vc6.1.5o7Wc6.1.5.1.2p@Xc6.1.5.3.2q@Yd5.1.3rIZd5.1.3s:[d5.2tQ\I]u0]e1.3u\I^P_C_1.5.3v^P`*P`*`*da6`a9.1.3.7w`db7cRc11.5xb7d5eSPe11.5.2yd5f12.2.1.2zPg6hU h12.2.4.2{bAdd a legend to explain "O: optional, C: conditional (mandatory if value is different from default value, otherwise optional)". Change support values for WEIGHT, BANDWIDTH, STATION_SET, and SECONDARY_MACS to C.c7Support column is not explained, and not fully correct.d304jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accept suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/2310.7 €e1.4.1.2)€e1.46€u€e€ @€h € `€i €1p€l1€CF5p€9.1F€ 0@6 €9.1.3@€9.1ZD€9.1.3 0€1F5€9.1!1€Pz$Fv8`€9.4.2.4"$€'w8€9.4#€9.5$4€@@€%7€9'%€PjsuggestedWWWWWWWzWؓWؖWsupmWnWVW׼WؗWsup224׼Vsup226VVsup342mVnVsup373ؗVswitchingUWtableּWtakespWtechnical֕WW2W3WؑWؒWthanpWpWWthanpWpWhanpWpW"WؑWؒWthanpWpWpW]N 2003/10/23OEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`28a12.3.1.2b"Change "keepalive" to "Keepalive".cCap.d482 2003/10/23PEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`29a12.3.1.2bKChange "span Ringlet ID" to "Span ringlet ID" or "Span ringlet identifier".cCaps.d483 2003/10/23QEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_442`34a12.3.2b Remove or clarify this sentence.cAllowing disabling support for unspecified features could be interpreted as allowing something that would otherwise be a violation of the standard.d484 2003/10/23REJohnFLemon^ Editorial_443`1a12.3.3b-Add space between "addA", "addB", and "addC".c Need space.d486 2003/10/2312.2\SMEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`5a12.3.1.1bzChange "transit paths, add/drop client interfaces and stops" to "transit paths and add/drop client interfaces, and stops".cIncorrect punctuation.d480 2003/10/23NEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`13a12.3.1.2bChange "RFC2863" to "RFC 2863".cMissing space.d48103/10/21OEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`28a12.3.1.2b"Change "keepalive" to "Keepalive".cCap. 2003/10/21PEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`29a12.3.1.2bKChange "span Ringlet ID" to "Span ringlet ID" or "Span ringlet identifier".cCaps. 2003/10/21QEJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_442`34a12.3.2b Remove or clarify this sentence.cAllowing disabling support for unspecified features could be interpreted as allowing something that would otherwise be a violation of the standard. 2003/10/21REJohnFLemon^ Editorial_443`1a12.3.3b-Add space between "addA", "addB", and "addC".c Need space. 2003/10/2112.2F 2003/10/23GEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_440`30a12.2.3.2bCorrect row borders.c Row borders.d474 2003/10/2312.1HEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_440`37a12.2.3.2b0Provide a reference for G, or otherwise specify.cMissing reference.d475 2003/10/2312.1IEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_440`25a12.2.3.2b&Change "event value" to "Event value".cCap.d470 2003/10/2312.1JEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_440`48a12.2.3.3b0Add "the following:" to the end of the sentence.cMissing end of sentence.d476 2003/10/23KEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_441`18a12.2.4.2bChange "List" to "list".cCap.d477 2003/10/23LEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_442`1a12.3.1.1bvAssuming AdminDown is defined in RFC 2863, reference this before using it. (Also make sure capitalization is correct.)cNeed background for AdminDown.d479IKcEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_434`1a11.9.3bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.cAReference to "Clause 11" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d460 2003/10/23dEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_446`25a12.4.3b3Use FrameMaker cross-references on lines 25 and 38.cAReference to "Clause 12" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d501 2003/10/23eEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_454`53aB.2.1.6bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d503 2003/10/23fEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_461`24aB.3.1.6bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d506 2003/10/23gEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_472`4aC.1.4.3bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d510A 2003/10/23BEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_434`12a11.9.3.1bCorrect bottom table border.c Table border.d462 2003/10/23CEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_435`3a11.9.3.2bCorrect row borders.c Row borders.d463 2003/10/23DEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_438`21a12.2b(Change "a REQUEST" to "an MLME_REQUEST".cIncomplete name.d464 2003/10/23EEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_438`26a12.2bIf these names are not dictated by some other standard, change them to be consistent with the other primitive names. Otherwise, provide a reference to the guiding standard and change Figure 12.1.cjThese names are inconsistent with the primitive names used in Clause 5 and Clause 7, and with Figure 12.1.d465 2003/10/23  @EPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_440`25a12.2.3.2bResolve apparent overlap between clause 11.4.2 and 12.2.3, e.g. only specify severity in 11.4.2 Fix values in table. remove bullet point list in 12.2.3.3 (which also has a broken cross reference to 11.3.2, should be 11.4.2).cTable 12.1 has a few problems: 1) appears to be duplicate of bullet list in 11.4.2 (page 417) 2) event value column looks bogus (values of A to J)d469 2003/10/2312.1AEPeterFJonesC dÃUcÃU=ÃV=ÃV bÃV0>ÃV@>ÃVP?ÃV`IÃVp@ÃV?ÃVAÃVbÃWcÃW ÃW0BÃW@CÃWPDÃW`EÃWpzÃWÃWFÃW@ÃXIÃX ÃX0ÃX@ÃXPGÃX`HÃXpJÃXKÃX{ÃXLÃYMÃY NÃY0OÃY@PÃYPQÃY`ÃYpRÃYeÃYÃYdÃZAÃZ SÃZ0UÃZ@TÃZP~ÃZ`VÃZpWÃZXÃZBÃZYÃafÃa dÃa0Ãa@eÃaPÃa`ÃapfÃaÃaÃa|ÃbgÃb Ãb0Ãb@hÃbPÃb`iÃbpjÃb ÃbÃbkÃc Ãc lÃc0 Ãc@ÃcPmÃc` ÃcpnÃc ÃcÃcÃdoÃd pÃd0Ãd@qÃdPÃd`}ÃdpÃdÃdCÃdDÃeEÃe Ãe0QÃe@gÃePFÃe`sÃeprÃeGÃeצÃetÃfJÃf KÃf0HÃf@MÃfPNÃf`OÃfpPÃfLÃf֥Ãf @ @ba‚^e‚9.4.8.4@lk @9 @< 2003/10/23=EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_426`8a11.5.3.1b-Change "a organization" to "an organization".cGrammar.d450 2003/10/23>EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_428`19a11.5.4.4bDefine info, frame, and opcode.c(info, frame, and opcode are not defined.d452 2003/10/2311.5?EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_429`22a 11.5.5.1.4b=Combine completely, or partially (by calling 11.4 from 11.6).c%Why are Table 11.4 and 11.6 separate?d454 2003/10/2311.6@EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_429`29a 11.5.5.1.4bDefine functions in condition and action. Correct C syntax. Use a less obtuse method of accepting an OAM frame passed to you by the datapath sublayer, coordinating with the Clause 6 editor, if needed.cRow 1 does not make sense.d456 2003/10/2311.6AEJohnFLemon4EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_419`29a11.5.1.1b;Change heading of "response ringlet" to "Response ringlet".cCap.d436 2003/10/2311.35EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_419`31a11.5.1.1bChange descriptions (or indicate adjacent to table) to explain that the selected ringlet is selected, unless reversed due to protection; and all use ringlet selection. For row 3, clarify that it uses DefaultRinglet().cAll the descriptions are incorrect, or at least incomplete. (The description of ringlet_id on the next page is correct and complete.)d437 2003/10/2311.36EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_420`33a11.5.1.3bLChange "responseControl" to "protectionMode" on this line and the next line.c'All of responseControl is not set to 1.d439 2003/10/237EJohnFLemon^Technical, Non-binding_423`14a 11.5.1.6.4p7cReplace "may" with "could" in the sentence: "Note that when an FS is cleared (at the local station or elsewhere on the ring), there may be a pending SF or SD condition that is now visible."d364jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvCRG: Accepted suggested remedy.wAccepted 2003/10/237.2.4cReplace "may" with "could" in the sentence: "Note that when an FS is cleared (at the local station or elsewhere on the ring), there may be a pending SF or SD condition that is now visible."^technicalnon-bindingVVVVVVVVVVVVV"V$V+V,V.7.4A6B`666߂I666߂I666߂I66߂I66߂I666߂I66߂I66߂I66߂I66߂I66߂I66߂I666߂I666߂I666߂I6߂6߂I66߂I6߂66߂I6߂66߂I6߂66߂I6߂6I6߂6I6߂6I6߂6I6߁6I6߁6߂I66߂I66߂I6Bp10.3.56$C10.5.3.4$@Eu[d16 2003/10/23\EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_95`42a5.6.5.4bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.RQ)W9.1.3.8@VU$j10.2@[ZJ^10.3.5@]\‚3m‚10.6.1@`_‚63d‚83 UvADCRG: The referenced text will be reworded as: The speed of passthrough detection depends on the setting of the slow TP frame transmission period, which defaults to 100 milliseconds. Passthrough detection is not covered by the 50 ms protection switching and service restoration that is applicable to media failures, e.g. ...DwAccepted-Modified 2003/10/23VEPeterFJones^Technical, Non-binding_305`6a10.1.6bAreword The protection protocol defines the following: a) A protection hierarchy (10.7.1.3) where stations act on requests and report protection state to the rest of the ring. b) Local actions taken by stations on the ring to prevent traffic loss, i.e. steering or wrapping as per the rules in 10.7.1.1. c) Reporting of local protection state to the rest of the ring using the TP frame. d) The state machine (10.7) to define local protection actions and reported protection state. c defaults to 100 milliseconds. c8~cW׃b\ׄd}ׇ]׍cbאbAgג@bhד@חkכboנbqפbtרbz׫b}ׯ`~ײb׷c׺@׾@m@_dc@c@badbv@c@v@c@@bbQ@dUWyEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_424`24a11.5.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex L" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d447 2003/10/23zEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_439`4a12.2.1.2b2Use FrameMaker cross-references on lines 4 and 39.c?Reference to "Annex E" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d466 2003/10/23{EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_441`25a12.2.4.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex E" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d478 2003/10/23|EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_465`2aB.4bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex B" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d509 2003/10/23}EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_501`2aC.7bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c?Reference to "Annex C" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d535 2003/10/23~EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_652`12aE.3.1bChange "Annex F.2" to "F.2".xEDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_423`23a 11.5.1.6.4bPChange: rc == RR_DEFAULT ==> rc.responseRinglet == RR_DEFAULT or (em dash)cIncorrect code. d444 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_434`12a11.9b/Use very thin in the center, thin on the edges.c,֖ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_323`33a10.4.3b%In table 10.4, change "we" value to 1c2LRTT request frames must be wrap eligible, see 9.5d297jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvWG: Superceded by #193. LRTT request frames do not wrap. CRG Accept suggested remedy. In addition, the description must be changed to correspond to this. w Superseded 2003/10/2310.4֗ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_324`29a10.4.4b%In table 10.5, change "we" value to 1c3LRTT response frames must be wrap eligible, see 9.5d298jAccept suggested remedy.mAcceptedvWG: Superceded by #193. LRTT response frames do not wrap. CRG Accept suggested remedy. In addition, the description must be changed to correspond to this.w Superseded 2003/10/2310.5alnon-binding׼׽Ճ$lemon  sultan ^%janyTWapplicableUWare؏WasfWpWW؏WbefWּWbeforeWbeginningּWbelieveTWbeyond֕WbroadcastTWbyUWbytesؑWcanּWchangepWWWchangebeforereachinganedgetobeforereachingoneselforVVVVeselforVVVWdefaultsUWdefinition"Wdefinitions"WdependsUWdetecting؏WdetectionUWdo֕W)Wdon'tTWdupdWW WWؕWdup291dVdup294Vdup318ؕVdup325 Vdup395VeUWedgeWeditors)W2W؏Weditorswillmodify10.1.8toindicatethattpframesaretr؏Velsewhere؏Wensure2Wensures֕Wevent؏Wfacilitate؏WfailuresUWfast؏Wfaster؏WforWframeUWframes֕W؏WgUWgive)Wgiveeditorslicensetorenamestatessothattheydonotwr)VhereWholdoffWiTW6_83`30a5.4.1.2bQ(can be deferred) Change: source_address_extende ==> source_address_extended cMissing character. d27 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_84`30a5.4bC(can be deferred) Change: "\\" ==> "//" four times on this page. cBad comment characters d30 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_87`11a5.4b@(can be deferred) Change: opcode (italics) ==> opcode (plain) cIncorrect use of italics. d31 2003/10/23FJames^ Editorial_101`46a6.2b(can be deferred) Change: Default: ... ==> (There is no default value; a value is typically chosen by the hardware designer.) Where the "--" characters represent an em dash. c}The meaning of a default "TICK" time is somewhat questionable, since this is oftentimes a design decision and never changes. d46 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_103`28a6.2.1.2b(can be deferred) Change to something like: The ringlet identifier associated with this datapath entity. (The enumerated values are the same as those for the ri field, see xx). cPThis statement is unclear: "This uses the same values as used by the ri field." d49 2003/10/23cThis note is insufficient. NOTETo the extent that an implementation does not present the highest priority control traffic at the head of the addMac queue, the MAC could experience adverse head-of-line blocking of its control traffic.d58 2003/10/23'cThe fairness instances should be associated with the ringlet they monitor, as illustrated in Figure 9.8. This is more intuitive, monitor one ringlet and signal through the other. d117 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_251`3a9.1.3bWithin Figure 9.6, next to the arrows, change subscript numbers to following numbers. Similar changes needed on page 252, for wi. cyThe change from subscript to adjacent numbers is OK, but not properly changed bar'd. Also, some other parts were missed. d138 2003/10/23 +cAIf we4 are going to expect any sort of interoperability, commonality of response-to-congestion is needed. Thus, both conservative and aggressive should support ramp-up, or neither should. Ramp-up isn't really needed, since this can be controlled by the downstream congested station dynamics. But, the worst case is when a congested station gets unpredictable response when reporting a congested condition upstream, which happend when ramp-up is a conservative/aggressive dependency.d181 2003/10/23!@$cv%@&@'b*bu+@cAs,@.@/bA0@A1vA4`6c8c9@bA A^ BcA CbF_HcAIcAJbKcLcAMcA"OcA#PbA%cA&C'Rc+ScA,C-TcA0UcA3VbA6cB7WcA:XcA=YcA@[dh\cE]@bEIgKmcOsbQxcU~cW׃b\ׄd}ׇ]׍cbאbAgגbhחkכboנbqפbtרbz׫b}ׯ`~ײb׷c׼bb_ccbabccbbc}*bChange: if ((stqDepth ... else localFairRateUpperBound= lpAddRate; localFairRate- Min(...); } ==> localFairRateUpperBound= lpAddRate; localFairRate- Min(...); cThe funky setting of the conservative upper bound can yield undesirable results, forcing a _very_ low upper bound if weights are distributed in interesting ways.d182 2003/10/23$cpThe state machine conditions are overly redundant, the multiply symbol is missing, and the top row is too light.d205 2003/10/23`dֽ10.21hnical, Non-binding_380`32a10.9.1.4bA1. In row 1, add tpContentChange = FALSE after the line if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber ... 2. In row 8, replace if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNum += 1 with: if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber = ((myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber += 1) % MAX_SEQNUM);write the lines beginning with transmitTpFrame and tpContentChange in the action of row 31 in Table 10.18 to: transmitTpFrame ||= (edgeChange || ProtChanged(ri, saved)); tpContentChange ||= transmitTpFrame; mAccepted-Modified 2003/10/22ֽEJasonFFan^Technical, Non-binding_380`32a10.9.1.4bA1. In row 1, add tpContentChange = FALSE after the line if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber ... 2. In row 8, replace if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNum += 1 with: if (tpContentChange) myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber = ((myTopoInfo.sequenceNumber += 1) % MAX_SEQNUM);lb+Use real names or values, not just letters.cIThe meaning of "event value" is unclear. What do these letters refer to? d471 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_440`26a12.2.3.2bTUse a separate column for critical severity, with a yes/no row line for all options.c@The critical severity text is merged with the descriptive text. d472 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_440`30a12.2.3.2bA(can be deferred) Use very thin in the center, thin on the edges.c%The table line widths are incorrect. d473 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_442`52a12.3b(can be deferred) Use same italics convention for page 442, line 52: ... and the Variable column of page 443, 2nd column "Variable"c%The italics are used inconsistently. d485 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_443`5a12.3.3b_1) Delete the shaded rectangle on page 444. 2) Redraw the shaded rectangle missing on page 443. bAX(this can be deferred) Change to: STATUS Identifies frames that are receive with error indications from the PHY, for example, due to assertion of a error signal on the PHY electrical interface. ERRORThe PHY signaled an error during frame transmission to the reconciliation sublayer. OK(Otherwise.)Xc!Inconsistent and overly verbose. d518 2003/10/23Rb(Replace with text from DVJ contribution.cThis comment refers to: Page 644, line 1 through Page 645, line 47 This text is valuable, but the message is lost in the excessive text and redundant illustrations. d561 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_646`18a E.1.4.1.2b6Eliminate extraneous white-space producing paragraphs.cEliminate the unnecessary white spaces. This helps fill out the page (currently), but such manual means fail when the length of text changes.d564 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_646`25aE.1.4bs(can be deferred) gratuitously ==> unnecessarily is never able ==> is not able is never learned ==> is not learnedcDWords are a bit too extreme, invoking emotion rather than knowledge.d565 2003/10/23aeuW~WWe1֥Ve1.3uVe1.4Ve1.4.1֟VVe1.4.1.2֠V֡VVe1.4.2.1֢Ve3֯Ve3.1ְV~VVfW׀Wf4Vf4.3׀Vg./ׇWg1.1ׇVhi{Wi3.7{Vkրlb0}WքW$W0-9W0.000001'W000 W001W0x1a[W1SWYWiWpW}WքW֖W֗W֣W֤W֥W֫W֯WַWֺWֻWּWֽWֿWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW W%W&W'W(W)W+W/W1WIWPWׂW׃WW W'WvW؁W؆W1addanotetoclassbtrafficdescriptionb2clarifyingthV1addnormativespecificationsinannexeforclienttransmi֥V1addthefollowingrowsbetweenrow15/16oftable6.36֣V1changethecharacterstylenameplaintoassertaregularsVLւ 2003/10/23փELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_87`44a5.4.4.1bJChange "Semantics of the service primitive" format to title of new clause.cbThe sentence "Semantics of the service primitive" should be a title for a new clause (see 5.4.3.2)d32 2003/10/23քELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_103`30a6.2.1.2b%Add "-" after RINGLET_0 and RINGLET_1c)Missing "-" after RINGLET_0 and RINGLET_1d50 2003/10/23օELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_116`25a6.4.4.5bRemove " from "rfe0 and "rfe1c%Strange character in "rfe0 and "rfe1d63 2003/10/23ֆELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_121`50a6.5.3.4b:Move Table 6.7 rows description to appear after the table.c*Rows description should appear after tabled65 2003/10/23ևELeonFBruckman^ Editorial_124\]ׄd20 2003/10/23ׅEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_101`30a6.2.1.1bAdd period to end of sentence.cMissing period.d45 2003/10/23׆EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_295`53a9.7bOChange "bytes/sec" to "bytes/second". Apply same solution to page 296, line 23.c8Incorrect and inconsistent abbreviation of unit of time.d211 2003/10/23ׇEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_676`1aG.1.1bChange 'u' to mu.cIncorrect letter in time unit.d575AAzHHddE(HH(d'`zA'duvAWG: The editors will ensure that D2.7 is consistent with the following: 1. A pre-condition for performing any validation on secondary MAC addresses shall be that the topology is valid. 2. Secondary MAC addresses received in ATD frames or configured at a station shall still be written into the topology database if the maximum number of secondary MAC addresses that can be substituted by a station is exceeded. 3. If secondary MAC address substitution (defined in 6.7.1.5) is supported by a sta ring A-B-C-D-E-F-A where A is SELF, and the order listed is for topoEntry [R0][hops]. LRTT Tx Request: For (C) LRTT of topoEntry[R0][2], Tx LRTT_REQ on R1 LRTT Tx Response: For (C), response would be transmitted back on R0.NUEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_160`12a 6.6.3.11.4bGThe simplest change would be to table 6.19. Simply switch rows 3 and 4.cANeighbor TP frames with incorrect RI get dropped by Row 4 of Table 6.24 when they should progress to the TP control packet reception logic where a defect will be triggered. This is only a problem when the defect first occurs (infact this will block the defect from occuring) since once there is a defect, an edge will be declared and the TP packets will be received through Table 6.19, Row 4.d89 2003/10/236.24VEMichaelFAllen^ Editorial_167`28a6.6.4.4b*Correct typo error as described in coment.c>Typo on Row 6.27-7 description..."worst-cast" -> "worst-case".d92 2003/10/236.27WEMichaelFAllen^Technical, Non-binding_166`35+-G؋EMichaelFTakefman^ Editorial_101`3a6.2.1csubclase missing any textd41 2003/10/23،EMichaelFTakefman^ Editorial_104`28a6.2c%Spelling Treshold should be Thresholdd51 2003/10/23؍EGeorgeFYoung^ Editorial_37`7a1.9.1bpChange the ending of the last sentence in the first paragraph to read: " ... at the destination-station S7 MAC."cfFigure 1.13 has been changed from D2.5 and the destination station no longer is S9, but rather S7 now.d13 2003/10/231.13؎EGeorgeFYoung^ Editorial_249`20a9.1p 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_90`36a5b{(can be deferred) One of the following: 1) Refer to Figure 1.4. 2) Replicate Figure 1.4. 3) Adopt the style of Figure 1.4. caThe location of the "ringlet selection" mistakenly implies this is part of the control sublayer. d37 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_91`24a5be(can be deferred) Adopt the style of Figure 1.4, where ringlet selection of lower thatn MAC control. cThe location of the "ringlet selection" mistakenly implies this is part of the control sublayer. This applies to Figure 5.5 and 5.6. d38 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_101`16a6.2.1.1b(can be deferred) Change: Q_RX_ADJUST: The queue... ==> Q_RX_ADJUST--The queue... Where the "--" characters represent an em dash. cWThe style of these items differs from other variables/values defined in this document. d44 2003/10/23EDavidEI]EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_224`2a7.5bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d110 2003/10/23^EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_225`41a7.5.4bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 7" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d111 2003/10/23_EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_266`51a9.2.2.2bTUse FrameMaker cross-reference for "Clause 10" on line 51 and "Clause 9" on line 52.cAReference to "Clause 10" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d156 2003/10/23`EJohnFLemon^ Editorial_273`22a9.4.1.4bBUse FrameMaker cross-references for "Clause 9" on lines 22 and 28.c@Reference to "Clause 9" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d171 2003/10/23aEJohnFLemon^ Editorial_400`12a10.14.2bUse FrameMaker cross-reference.c@Reference to "Clause 6" does not use FrameMaker cross-reference.d401 2003/10/23bN"֪d40 2003/10/23KEDavidFJames^Technical, Binding_109`24a6b1) Use the fairness message to communicate queue-depth levels, as per DVJ contribution. 2) Update this equation accordingly, eliminating the dependencies on number and size of others STQs. cA"This equation is unacceptable, as the levels of supportable classB traffic are unacceptable. 1) It implies a single-queue design has no levels of supportable classB traffic. 2) It implies that 256 stations with 16x larger STQs limit the cumulative (classA1+B) traffic to less than .05%"d54 2003/10/23EDavidFJames^ Editorial_109`41a6b(can be deferred) 1) Expand the term on first usage, such as: "ring round trip time (RRTT)..." 2) Include the RRTT acronym in Clause 4. c$Expand the term RTT, on first usage.d55 2003/10/23#%x؃EMichaelFTakefman^Technical, Non-binding_125`16a6.5.5.4b.change to sendA = passA0 || (passA1 && sendD)VYִERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_172`17a6.7.1.4b,Replace !FI_NONE with the correct expressioncFI_NONE is not a boolean value therefore !FI_NONE is incorrect Draft D2.4 introduced more strict typing nomenclature precluding casual switching between boolean and integer values.d94 2003/10/236.28ֵERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_172`17a6.7.1.4b1Replace !myMacAddress with the correct expressioncmyMacAddress is not a boolean value therefore !myMacAddress is incorrect Draft D2.4 introduced more strict typing nomenclature precluding casual switching between boolean and integer values.d95RVֱd71 2003/10/23ֲERobertF Castellano^Technical, Non-binding_140`4a6.6.3.2breplace "flooded frames continue beyond their da-specified destination" with "Flooded frames are not stripped until their TTL expires."cReword "flooded frames continue beyond their da-specified destination" with "Flooded frames are not stripped until their TTL expires."d72 2003/10/23ֳERobertJ֩d76 2003/10/236.19֪ERobertF Castellano^ Editorial_100`20a6.1bFix the run on.cRun on sentence[EGalFMor^Technical, Non-binding_149`29a 6.6.3.7.4b Change current state condition to: "frame.ft == FT_DATA && frame.fcs != Crc32(frame)" or to: "badFcsUser && frame.ft == FT_DATA"cA Row 29, to my opinion, badFcsFrames counter should count packets with bad FCS, regardless of the decision to drop or forward them. Also, According to the badFcsUser description (clause 10), it seems that "badFcsUser" and "frame.fcs != Crc32(frame)" are equivalent. d81 2003/10/236.20\EGalFMor֋ELeonFBruckman^Technical, Non-binding_248`46a9.1bAThe first part of this note (The fairness...within this clause) must be moved to Page 247 line 39 because it will make reading of the paragraph clearer. Regarding the rest of the note replace it wiyh: "In the case of and edge station deploying edge-wrapped data path the SCFF is sent to the wrapped path and in parallel to the edge to be used as keep alive." and move it to line 36. c9tj;9;bA