Re: [8023-10GEPON] Draft D1.8022 is uploaded - your action is required
Duane, Marek,
I found a few errors with the implementation of comment #1404 resolution.
Issue 1: In Figure 92-18, in transition from state Laser_Is_Off to On, the comment resolution said to add apostrophes. Apostrophes were added, but for some reason the sync header has changed from control (01) to data (10). The correct condition is
FIFO_DD[N].SyncHeader = '01'
Issue 2: In transition from state Transmit_Burst_Preamble to Transmit_Burst_Delimiter, in the condition 'SynBlockCount=SYNC_LENGTH' the variable name had a typo. It should be 'SyncBlockCount'. While the variable name was fixed, the second part of the condition has disappeared.
Also, all the text in this state diagram has changed from typeface Arial to Times New Roman except the 'SynBlockCount=' condition. This is a newly introduced problem. Please, make the font is consistent.
Regards,
Glen
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Glen Kramer [mailto:glen.kramer@TEKNOVUS.COM]
> Sent: Friday, June 06, 2008 12:56 PM
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> Dear Colleagues,
>
> I am glad to announce that our editors once again have demonstrated
> remarkable endurance and perseverance whereby through long hours and many
> iterations they produced the draft D1.8022 on time.
>
> The draft is now uploaded to our website. You may access it at
> http://www.ieee802.org/3/av/private/drafts.html
>
> Please, note that D1.8022 is a preliminary draft. As we discussed at the
> May meeting, the P802.3av draft will be submitted by July 3rd for working
> group review in anticipation of starting the working group ballot in July.
> Since the 802.3av task force will not have a chance to meet before our
> draft is submitted, we are taking an additional step this time to verify
> that all the changes in D1.8022 were implemented precisely according to
> the comment resolutions recorded in
> http://www.ieee802.org/3/av/public/2008_05/3av_0805_comments_d1_3_accepted
> .pdf.
>
> Please, review the posted documents (marked-up version) and, if you find
> any material not consistent with an approved comment resolution, or a
> newly-introduced error, sent a message to editors and to the reflector.
> Remember that at this stage we should only focus on latest changes made by
> editors. Do not submit new comments to fix remaining issues or make
> improvements. We will have till Wednesday, June 11th to review the
> preliminary draft. (It will be editor's discretion how to address your
> feedback.)
>
> On Friday, June 13th, the editors will publish the final version (D1.8023)
> of the draft. This version will be submitted to WG for preview. At that
> time we will start our normal commenting cycle against the D1.8023. We
> will resolve these new comments at the July meeting.
>
> Please, let me know if you have any questions about the process or
> schedule ahead of us.
>
>
> Thank you,
> Glen
>
> _______________________
> Glen Kramer
> Chair, IEEE P802.3av "10GEPON" Task Force
> glen.kramer@ieee.org