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Where is option 2.
It looks that both emails are option 1.
Please find a couple of options for 33.3.6 PD Class attached. (Spread over two emails due to size constraints)
1) Rewrite for clarity
2) Put sentences back into correct sections
3) Fix definition of requested Class
It became clear that my quest to make the standard "better" is at odds with our desire to get the standard to completion in a timely manner. As such I offer two choices
Narrowest set of changes to meet goals
Improved flow, definitions, partitioning and grammar.