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Re: [802.3_YANG] Minutes and updated draft CSD/Objectives uploaded



Yan-

Just took a look at your docs.
I have some suggested changes.

PAR

Project Title:
Currently: Standard for YANG data model definitions for Ethernet
Should be: Standard for YANG data model definitions for Ethernet station management

Your PAR date items 4.2 and 4.3 appear to be pretty aggressive for a new work.
There is no downside to giving yourself more time.

PAR  5.5 (Slide 8)
Currently: YANG is specified in Request For Comment (RFC) 6020 and amendments / corrigenda
Should be: YANG is specified in IETF Request For Comment (RFC) 6020 and amendments / corrigenda

CSD

Managed Objects slide
Currently: This project will develop YANG models from Clause 30 objects...
Should be: This project will develop YANG models of the definitions from Clause 30 objects...

Broad Market Potential
Currently: The proposed amendment will enable the use of YANG model for a wide variety...
Should be: The proposed standard will enable the use of YANG model of 802.3 managed objects for a wide variety...

Compatibility
Add a bullet: This work is fully aligned to and coordinated with equivalent work taking place in 802.1.
Add a bullet: This work will not be compatible with SNMP.  This is an obsolete requirement.

Technical Feasibility
Currently: Other SDOs (e.g., MEF and IETF) have already defined YANG data models and there is...
Should be: Other SDOs (e.g., MEF and IETF) have already defined YANG data models for managing and operating Ethernets and there is...

DRAFT OBJECTIVES

Page 2
Currently: Define a YANG module for Ethernet passive optical networks (EPON).
Should be: Define YANG modules for Ethernet passive optical networks (EPON) Optical Network Units (ONU) and Optical Network Terminals (ONT).

Best regards,

Geoff Thompson


On Apr 27, 2016, at 7:57 PMPDT, Zhuangyan (Yan) <zhuangyan.zhuang@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hi Folks,
 
Thank you for the good discussion during the call.
I have uploaded the draft meeting minutes and the revised CSD/Objectives documents per comments during the call, which can be found at:
 
Please review the draft minutes and updated CSD/Objectives documents to see if your points have been covered or anything missing. Draft PAR hasn’t been discussed yet but would also invite your review and comments.
 
Though the next ad hoc call will be on May 6th, please feel free to share your comments/corrections via the reflector before that to facilitate the work.
 
Thank you very much for your time and feedbacks.
 
Best Regards,
 
Yan