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Re: [802SEC] +++ECM: IEEE Std 802.3bw-2015 100BASE-T1 approval press release



Hi Geoff,

Thank you for the suggestions. I've attached an updated draft which I hope captures your suggested changes correctly, along with a couple of changes staff requested to the contact information.

Best regards,
  David

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From: Geoff Thompson [mailto:thompsongeoff@rocketmail.com] 
Sent: 20 November 2015 01:58
To: Law, David <dlaw@hpe.com>
Cc: Geoff Thompson <thompsongeoff@rocketmail.com>; STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: Re: [802SEC] +++ECM: IEEE Std 802.3bw-2015 100BASE-T1 approval press release

David-

I would like to reword paragraph #2 which currently reads:
"Mainstream adoption of emerging in-car applications such as advanced driver assistance systems (ADAS) and infotainment has created the need for cost-effective, high-bandwidth connectivity. IEEE Std 802.3bw-2015 100BASE-T1 will provide 100 Mb/s Ethernet over a single twisted-pair and is intended to enable the consolidation of these new, as well as legacy, in-car applications on a homogenous network architecture."

To something more like:
"Mainstream adoption of emerging in-car applications such as advanced driver assistance systems (ADAS) and infotainment has created the need for cost-effective, high-bandwidth connectivity. 
Ethernet fills that need.
The first of several Ethernet standards especially tuned to the needs of the in-car automotive market, IEEE Std 802.3bw-2015 100BASE-T1 will provide 100 Mb/s Ethernet over a single twisted-pair.
It is intended to enable the consolidation of these new, as well as legacy, in-car applications on a homogenous network architecture."

(Feel free to remove the extra carriage returns.  They were only added for ease of comparison.)

I think that moving the brand "Ethernet" up in the paragraph and letting folks know that this is only the first of a series of releases is a worthwhile addition.

I hope this helps.

Best regards,

	Geoff Thompson


On Nov 19, 2015, at 6:15 AMPST, Law, David <dlaw@HPE.COM> wrote:

All,

I would like to now proceed to the EC electronic ballot on the attached updated draft IEEE Std 802.3bw-2015 100BASE-T1 approval press release I circulated on Monday 9th November for comment. I've also attached a diff to the draft I circulated then, my thanks to those that provided comments.

Best regards,
  David


Motion
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The EC supports the press release to announce the approval of the IEEE Std 802.3bw-2015 100BASE-T1 standard, to be released with editorial changes as deemed necessary.

Move:   David Law
Second: John D'Ambrosia

Start of ballot: Friday 20th November
Close of ballot: Sunday 29th November, 11:59PM AOE

Early close: As required in subclause 4.1.2 'Voting rules' of the IEEE 802 LAN/MAN Standards Committee (LMSC) Operations Manual, this is notice that, to ensure the release is provided in a timely manner, this ballot may close early once sufficient responses are received to clearly decide a matter. Sufficient responses to clearly decide this matter will be based on the required majority for a motion under subclause 7.1.1 'Actions requiring approval by a majority vote' item (h), 'Other motions brought to the floor by members (when deemed in order by the Sponsor Chair)' of the IEEE 802 LAN/MAN Standards Committee (LMSC) Policies and Procedures.

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