Re: Revised version of Level 1 text (draft)
Looks really great -- I'm impressed. Here are some early comments; I have
to confess that I did not read the proof in the appendix in great detail.
Page 21, middle right: I think "collate" was supposed to be "collect"
Page 22, middle: suggest "and strength order (5)"
instead of "...the order..."
Page 25, middle: Whitespace control: too much before "where", too little
between the spec for Intersection and that for Union.
Also, for Union: Is f_df really ({},emp)
when BOTH dg and dh are "ill"?
Page 25, Typo, 4.9.: opoerations
Page 25, last paragraph: remove first "decorated interval" from 1st sentence.
I need to digest this more before I can offer more substantive comments;
in particular, to try to answer your (JDP's) questions.
Michel.
---Sent: 2011-01-17 03:47:50 UTC