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Re: An error in Section 14.4 of the final draft



On Sat, 5 Jul 2014 13:02:46 +0200, Vincent Lefèvre replied back:
> Then it should be rephrased to avoid the ambiguous "for ... for ...".

This is about the new 5th paragraph of 14.4 -- so how about:

    The interchange Level 4 encoding of a compressed interval
    (when supported) is as follows: a non-empty compressed interval
    is represented as described above for bare intervals, and a
    decoration is represented as a pair of floating-point datums...

> > >  - Replace "no payload information" by "ignoring the payload"?
> > No -- I'm elaborating on what I mean by "generic NaN".
>
> This should really be clarified because at Level 4, a NaN has a
> payload, so that this seems contradictory.

I did not say "no payload" -- I said "no payload information".  Perhaps
we should simply say "NaN"?  But I wanted to stress that the interchange
format explicitly avoids using the NaN payload to convey information.

> > >   - "There is therefore a need to" -> "It is therefore needed to"?
> > To me, "it is needed to" is pretty awkward.
>
> Well, "it is needed to" has 1 billion occurrences on Google.

With "it" as a dummy subject?  The expression is perfectly fine when "it"
refers to an actual subject.

In any case, these stylistic fixes are not urgent -- we should keep track
of them and deal with them at a later stage.  I don't think we need to hold
up presenting what we have to the MSC.  Baker, George, John, Christian?

(Of course, if the next three days bring a flood of reversed votes...)

Michel.
---Sent: 2014-07-05 16:34:29 UTC