Re: Common interval literals
Dima,
On 2015-03-05 08:37:44 -0800, Dmitry Nadezhin wrote:
> Here is the subsection on Common interval literals with most of your
> comments applied. Thank you for them.
>
> Additions and changes are in red color.
> Deletions are in red color in square brackets.
Some comments concerning the beginning:
In the first paragraph of §9.4, I would change ", that" to ", which".
See:
http://web.ku.edu/~edit/which.html
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/English_relative_clauses#That_or_which
Lines 10-11:
* "A bare interval literals" -> remove the "s".
* I wouldn't say "called" as it isn't a naming, the validity is just
a property. So, I would say:
A bare interval literal is either /valid/ or /invalid/.
or
A bare interval literal can be /valid/ or /invalid/.
* Add "a" between "has" and "bare".
* Missing space between "interval" and "value".
* "an invalid interval literals" -> remove the "s".
There's a spurious black dot between line 28 and line 29.
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