Thanks for these, Edward. I have the following comments on the EDITOR2-A tab:
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CID |
Comment |
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1168 |
also at 1188.38 and "a MCCA" at 569.20 |
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1172 |
also at 1401.37 |
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1173 |
also at 629.50 |
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1121 |
there are 19 or so instances in other subclauses |
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1178 |
not 2860.26 or 2865.25, that's a field not a parameter |
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1186 |
also "a SU or MU MIMO |
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1118 |
I get about 35 hits for "successful rece" |
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1220 |
not a bracket but a close ceil operator |
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1568 |
note F11-22 also has "non-AP/non-PCP" that needs fixing, and also "AP/PCP" ditto. Also "PCP/AP" in 6.3.92.2.3, "HC/PCP" in 11.4.4.4 |
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1230 |
don't lose the article "the" (IEEE shouldn't mimic the WFA's illiteracy!) |
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1231 |
make sure it's a NBSP (not clear in proposed change) |
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1232 |
make sure it's a NBSP (not clear in proposed change) |
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1269 |
also dot11RSNConfigDLCGroup in 12.12.2.4.2 |
Thanks,
Mark
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Subject: [STDS-802-11-TGM] Updated EDITOR2 comment spreadsheet with two motion tabs (18/0619r4)
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Hi all,
I've uploaded revision 4 of the REVmd EDITOR2 ad-hoc comment spreadsheet at:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/18/11-18-0619-04-000m-revmd-editor2-lb232-comments.xlsx
Similar to the EDITOR ad-hoc comment spreadsheet prepared by Emily, I've created the following two tabs:
[1] "Motion-EDITOR2-A" includes proposed comment resolutions for obvious editorial comments in the EDITOR2 ad-hoc;
[2] "Motion-EDITOR2-B" includes proposed comment resolutions for 24 editorial comments in the EDITOR2 ad-hoc that were discussed in the April ad-hoc.
Please review and let me know if you have any comment.
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