CommentID~CommenterName~CommenterEmail~CommenterPhone~CommenterFax~CommenterCo~Clause~Subclause~Page~Line~CommentType~Comment~SuggestedRemedy~Response~CommentStatus~ResponseStatus
0~Ecclesine, Peter~petere@ieee.org~408-527-0815~925-443-2406~Cisco Systems~05-09~~9-39~~E~These clauses belong in an informative annex to the Recommended Practice, as there is nothing within them to 'practice.'~SuggestedRemedy:Move clauses 6-9 to a first informative Annex and renumber the document.~~X~O
0~Ecclesine, Peter~petere@ieee.org~408-527-0815~925-443-2406~Cisco Systems~10~4.2~60~47~E~Simulation results for 1,2,5.5 and 11Mbps are necessary to form a recommendation to be practiced. The 1Mbps case is insufficient in practice.~add simulation results for 2, 5.5 and 11Mbps 802.11b radios.~~X~O
0~Ecclesine, Peter~petere@ieee.org~408-527-0815~925-443-2406~Cisco Systems~10~4~58~8~E~All of 10.4 is independent of 10.1-10.3, and should be presented as a separate clause.~Move clause 10.4 to be the clause that follows the collaborative scheduling clause, and create a figure like Figure 30, but including both Figures 39 and 40 as blocks within.~~X~O
0~Ecclesine, Peter~petere@ieee.org~408-527-0815~925-443-2406~Cisco Systems~12~12.1.1.1~70~54~T~In 802.11b, RSSI is defined to be valid: 15.4.5.10.3 When generated This primitive shall be generated by the PMD when the DSSS PHY is in the receive state. It shall be continuously available to the PLCP, which, in turn, provides the parameter to the MAC entity. but it represents the energy at the moment in time when a valid 802.11b header checksum is received, not just anytime. You have to use the Energy Detect apparatus: 15.4.5.13 PMD_ED.indicate 15.4.5.13.1 Function This optional primitive, which is generated by the PMD, shall indicate to the PLCP layer that the receiver has detected RF energy indicated by the PMD_RSSI primitive that is above a predefined threshold.  to measure as described in page 71 of the draft.~Rewrite 12.1.1.1 to use RSSI as specified in 802.11b 15.4.5.10~~X~O
0~Ecclesine, Peter~petere@ieee.org~408-527-0815~925-443-2406~Cisco Systems~12~12.1.1.2~71~10~T~RxQuality is a much better indicator of 802.11b channel reception than packet error rate(PER), and is available in all commercial 802.11b chipsets. It should be used instead of PER for this function.~Rewrite 12.1.1.2 to use RxQuality instead of or in addition to PER.~~X~O