CommentID~CommenterName~CommenterEmail~CommenterPhone~CommenterFax~CommenterCo~Clause~Subclause~Page~Line~CommentType~Comment~SuggestedRemedy~Response~CommentStatus~ResponseStatus
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~05~5.2~10~3154~TR~Where is the per-packet random nature of multipath fading considered?  AWGN BER with d^3.3 empirical path loss is over simplified.  This model is insufficient to justify the coexistence mechanisms.~Improve 5.2/5.3 with multipath model taking into account BT/11b differences in frequency selectivity and antenna diversity.~~X~O
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~05~5.3.2~11~43~TR~BER calculation should also be in equation form.~Use equations.~~X~O
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~05~5.3.3~13~146~TR~Figures and the specific equations used are required to adequately present the Spectrum Factor information in tables 3-5.  The reader should be able to easily identify what input data was used for the table and verify the calculations.  ~Supply a diagram of the spectral effects and calculations and input data used to derive these tables.~~X~O
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~05~5.3.3~13~110~TR~The paragraph says Spectral Factor includes coding gain, but what about other real world effects?  Exclusion of implementation specific limitations such as RF and baseband dynamic range should be clarified so the reader can gauge the limitations of this model.~Clarify the limitations of the model regarding implementation specific issues such as intermodulation, quantization and aliasing.~~X~O
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~05~Table 3~13~12~TR~Tables 3, 4, 5 should be in decibels.~Use decibels.~~X~O
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~05~Table 6~14~23~~How was the receive mask for 802.11b derived?  802.11b has no receive mask.  The 802.11b adjacent channel specification only addresses another 802.11b signal in the adjacent channel.  Converting this specification to a mask for narrowband interferers is a very uncertain extrapolation~Clarify the limitations of this model in addressing implementation issues which are out of the scope of 802.11 and 802.15.~~X~O
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~06~6.2~30~5~TR~802.11b defines 14 channels. ~Correct sentence.~~X~O
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~06~6.3~30~27~TR~Not all 802.11 frame exchanges have an ACK.~Clarify.~~X~O
0~Gahler, Marcus~mgahler@nextcomm.com~425-603-0900 x117~~NextComm~09~9~32~~T~WLANs operate over larger ranges than the AP distance of 15 m used in Clause 9 and 11 PER and delay plots.  ~Include some examples with a larger AP distance.~~X~O
