CommentID~CommenterName~CommenterEmail~CommenterPhone~CommenterFax~CommenterCo~Clause~Subclause~Page~Line~CommentType~Comment~SuggestedRemedy~Response~CommentStatus~ResponseStatus
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~00~~~~E~This draft is generally well written and ready for comment.~~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~01~1.1~2~7~E~In fact there are 2 Mbps simulations~Note that most of the analysis and simulations are for 1 and 11 Mbps.~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~03~3.1.8~3~37~E~'or the disturbance caused by the undesired power' seems redundant~remove 'or the disturbance caused by the undesired power'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~03~3.2~5~22~E~add symbols as in SIR and SNR~add (s/i)~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~04~4.1.4~8~15~E~channels is redundant~remove first channels~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~05~5.3.6.2~15~39~T~802.15.1 is wrong~replace with 802.11~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~05~5.3.6.3~16~5~E~differentiatedIn note 3 at bottom of page 'much likely that'~replace with differentialReplace with 'much more likely than'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~05~Table 7~17~34~E~BER missing in Table 7~add (BER=0) to Upper limit column and (BER=.5) to Lower limit column~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~05~5.3.6.8~18~3~E~-15 to +20dB appears to be wrong from Figure 4~change to -10 to +10dB~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~05~5.4.1.2~20~28~T~could not find an explicit expression for using td and Phid~Provide formula if possible~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~05~5.4.2~21~10~E~source. the~change to 'source. The'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~05~5.4.2.2~23~20~E~define ri~ri=received chip, i={1,7}~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~05~5.4.3~26~32~T~from figure 12 eb/no=7~8->7~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~10.1~41~~E~line 48 - And suchLine 51 - another, so~Line 48 - change to As suchLine 51 - another, in order~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~10.2.1~43~6~E~Reword sentence~Therefore the Medium is free of WLAN traffic when the Medium Free signal is True.~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~10.2.2.5.1~46~22~T~'agAWMAgrp' may be wrong (just my feeling)~Should the label be 'apAWMAgrp'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~Table 16&17~478~~TR~Order 11 is alrady spoken for I believe~Try order 19~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~10.2.2.6.3~48~10~E~change '9-15 to Table 20'~to '9-15 in Table 20'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~10.2.4~50~22~E~Change 'An optional ....addressed its.....' to~'As an optional ......addressed to its ......'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~10.3.1~51~38~E~change 'addition types'~to 'additional types'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~Table 25~55~~T~From Figure 37 since .15.1 is not transmitting it must be receiving  so should the table entry (and the decision block in Figure 37) read~802.15.1. Rx activity have greater [i.e., add the Rx; I am not sure of this one]~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~10.3.8~57~30~E~subclaueses should read~subclauses~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~10~10.4.1~60~38~E~Therefore, t the~Therefore, the~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~11~11.1.1~61~53~E~'Methods of adaptive packet selection' is not needed~remove phrase~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~11~11.1.2~62~4951~E~Line 49 - maintained. In this case, randomLine 51 - 'that uses more error protection will increase the performance of the SCO link.'~Line 49 - should read 'maintained, random bit..'Linr 51 - should read 'that uses more error protection the performance of the SCO link will be increased.'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~11~11.1.2~63~38~E~Line 3 - 'case, by increasing'Line 8 - 'to around 1..'~Line 3 - should read 'case, increasing'Line 3 - should read 'to less than 1...'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~11~Figure 47~67~~E~LMP not defined~add - 'LMP = Link Manager Protocol' to figure~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~12~12.1.2.2~72~20~E~'LMP format' and 'AFH clause' not referenced~add reference clauses for 'LMP format' and 'AFH clause'~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~12~12.1.2.3~73~1~E~Header interfers with formula~move formula down on page~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~12~12.2 and 12.2.1~756~~T~I am not familiar with this algorithm and could use a little informative text. This seems more complicated than necessary; I am sure it is me but don't we need to simply find the good (non interfered with) channels and use them to set up a sequence?Also, on page 76, lines5,7,10 what is K~Explain the overall goal of the algorithm. For example, why keep track of any of the bad channels (see line 31, page 75)Define K~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~12~12.2.1~77~6~E~Figure xxx needs definingTable 29 formulas run into boarder~xxx -> 53(?)move formulas down or enlarge table~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~12~12.2.1~78~24~T~WG(n+1) should be WB(n+1) I think~change to WB(n+1)~~X~O
0~Hillman, Garth~garth.hillman@amd.com~(512) 602-7869~(512) 415-8400~Advanced Micro Devices~12~12.3~82~11~TR~The LMP commands are not defined~Define the LMP commands and enter the op codes in Tables 34, 35, 37, 38~~X~O
