CommentID~CommenterName~CommenterEmail~CommenterPhone~CommenterFax~CommenterCo~Clause~Subclause~Page~Line~CommentType~Comment~SuggestedRemedy~Response~CommentStatus~ResponseStatus
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~00~~~43~E~"Committee of the IEEE Society", and "Abstract" are in incorrect position.~Fix.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~01~2~2~21~E~802.119 WLAN~802.11 WLAN~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~03~1.3~3~21~E~Missing period at the end of the sentence.~Add it.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~03~3~5~49~E~Refers to Bluetooth 1.1 hop kernel~Replace with 802.15.1 hop kernel~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~04~~6~4~E~Two periods at the end of the line~Remove one of them~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~04~1~6~23~E~Remove this one line paragraph.~Remove it.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~04~1.4~8~~E~This paragraph is poorly written.~Please rewrite this section using better English and a more coherent flow of ideas.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~3.3~13~9~E~Table numbers should not include the em-dashes.~Remove the em-dashes.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~3.5~14~3~E~Table number shouldn't include em-dash.~Remove the em-dash.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~3.6.2~15~39~E~Should be 802.11 instead of 802.15.1.~Replace.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~3.6.2~15~44~E~Missing parentheses in equation.~Add parentheses.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~3.6.3~16~20~E~The word "required" doesn't make sense here.~Remove the word "required".~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~Figure 4~18~28~E~I don't see the curve for 802.15.1.~Add the 802.15.1 curve.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~4.1~19~1~E~Why is there (23)?~Remove this or add explanation.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~4.2.1~21~52~E~This sentence doesn't make sense.~Replace with "The power spectrum of the Barker codes is: Lee [B11]"~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~05~4.2.1~22~6~TR~It's not clear to me why a narrowband interferer will be attenuated more at the middle of the spectrum than at 1 MHz away.~Provide an explanation of this reasoning.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~06~~29~8~E~Bad citation of Bluetooth spec.~Clean up the reference to Bluetooth (802.15.1?)~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~09~Figure 17~33~~E~Figure shows Bluetooth devices instead of 802.15.1 devices.~Replace Bluetooth with 802.15.1.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~09~Table 10~33~~E~BT is used instead of 802.15.1~Replace BT with 802.15.1.~~X~O
0~Seals, Michael~mseals@intersil.com~321-724-7172~~Intersil~02~2.1~77~5~E~Reference to Figure xxx~Replace with reference to Figure 53~~X~O
