CommentID~CommenterName~CommenterEmail~CommenterPhone~CommenterFax~CommenterCo~Clause~Subclause~Page~Line~CommentType~Comment~SuggestedRemedy~Response~CommentStatus~ResponseStatus
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~01~1.2~2~21~E~IEEE 802.119 WLAN ~802.11b-1999~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~04~4.3.1,2~89~E~Subtitle for 4.3.1 and 4.3.2 Non-Collaborative and Collaborative "proposals"~Non-Collaborative "techniques" or "mechanisms"~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~05~5.1~9~50~E~ Figure 1--- (remove/fix the long dash) applies throughout document.~~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~05~Figure 9~25~~E~Figure text smaller that that allowed in IEEE Style Guide (applies throughout) Figures 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15~Scale to match that of Figure 2.~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~06~~29~8~E~Reference {Blue99} not clear/correct.~~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~10~~40~22~E~802.15-2001 should be 802.15-2002~~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~10~~40~32~E~The two MAC layer techniques both involve.... (reword)~Both MAC layer techniques involve ......~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~10~10.2~42~17~E~TWPAN ...(WPAN should be sub-scripted). The combined duration of these two subintervals must equal... (must is a depricated IEEE word)~use shall or should instead of must~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~10~10.2.2~43~28~E~...values must be sent to each... (search on the word "must" and replace with appropriate(either shall or should) especially in Clause 10...~~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~10~Figure 43~63~~E~Figure not readable (also applies to Figure 45 pg 65)~redraw ~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~11~11.2.1~64~25~E~In the example below, the first pair..... (refer to example in Figure 44 by name, not location)~~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~11~11.3.1~69~7~E~...average the schedulaing policy yields to a delay increase....~...policy leads to a delay...?~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~12~12.1~70~18~E~Strike the word "two" in the first sentence.~~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~12~12.1.2.2~72~~E~Refer to "Master" as "The Master" throughout subclause. ~~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~12~12.1.2.5~74~9~E~Instead of sending packet...~Instead of sending a packet...~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~12~12.2.1~77~5~E~Figure citation needs fixing....(Figure XXX)~~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~12~12.2.1~78~19~E~An ACL only connection implies that only data...~...implies that only asynchronous data....~~X~O
0~Thrasher, Jerry~thrasher@lexmark.com~859-825-4056~~Lexmark International Inc~12~12.3.3~84~41~E~Bad grammer in first sentence of 4th paragraph.~~~X~O
