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The updated CSD is also uploaded:
Regards,
Pat
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Subject: [802.1 - 11145] Local address protocol PAR
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The PAR for Local Address assignment edited on the basis of Tuesday's discussion has been uploaded to:
I made some modifications. The Purpose section is optional based on whether the standard will have a purpose clause. We generally don't have a purpose clause in 802.1 standards and the content was pretty redundant with Scope. Therefore, I answered no and
edited Scope to cover the info that was in Purpose.
You gave me editorial latitude on getting Need to be less repetitive. The suggestion was to combine the last two sentences into one. When I made the edit to the first sentence, there was a lack of connection between how the need mentioned in the first
sentence was addressed by the protocol so I added "To provide a usable alternative to global addresses for such devices" to the sentence describing the protocol. It still ended up being 3 sentences, but I think is better constructed, less repetitive, and more
focused on describing the relationship between the need and what we intend to do now.
Feedback is welcome.
Regards,
Pat
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