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RE: [802SEC] +++Approve Response to FCC FNPRM

I approve


At 15:03 27/07/2001 -0700, Grow, Bob wrote:

>Approve with editorial comments.
>1.  3rd paragraph of letter, "support" -> "supports" similar verb agreement
>problems in: 1. "operate" -> "operates", last paragraph of 2.2.1 "propose"
>-> "proposes", 3. "welcome" -> "welcomes",
>2.  "Committee" is defined as LMSC, yet it is also used for 802.11.
>References to WGs should be "committee", two occurrences observed in 1.4.
>3.  2.1.1  First line -- space on wrong side of comma.
>4.  page 4 footnote, "3Comm" should be "3Com"
>5.  signatures "WirelessPersonal" -> "Wireless Personal"
>--Bob Grow
>-----Original Message-----
>From: Jim Carlo []
>Sent: Sunday, July 15, 2001 7:11 PM
>To: IEEE802
>Subject: [802SEC] +++Approve Response to FCC FNPRM
>Issue date: 15Jul2001Closing Date: 28Jul2001
>Moved By: Roger Marks
>Second By: Vic Hayes
>Move: to submit document RR-01-012 as Comments to FNPRM 99-231. Objects
>between square brackets are subject to change to reflect the reality.
>Document RR-01-012 r0 contains the items between square brackets, worked out
>according to the actions taken in the WGs and the SEC. It also has taken the
>effect of the dot15 amendment into consideration. Revision marks can be made
>visible.This is the version that will be submitted by Vic Hayes and I (note
>both Vic and I will send the document together - I will add my coordinates).
>The attached zip file contains document 11-01-391 r7. This is the version
>according to the motion to amend made in dot 15
>Wireless working group Chairs are expected to poll their groups on these
>comments within 10 days.
>  <<>>
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