[802SEC] 802.1Qbh PAR comments

["James P. K. Gilb" <gilb@ieee.org>]

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Section 5.2 Scope

The scope uses text that speaks of the future, yet the scope will go 
into the finished standard and so should be written as past tense. 
Accordingly, I suggest the following changes:

Change "is envisioned to support" to be "has been added to support"

Change "It is expected that this amendment will result in the definition 
of a new device (a Port Extender) and optional augmentation ..." to be 
"This amendment has defined a new device, a Port Extender, and optional 
augmentation ..."

Thanks

James Gilb
IEEE 802 LMSC Recording Secretary

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