[802SEC] Comments on 802.1Qcr PAR

["James P. K. Gilb" <gilb@ieee.org>]

Glenn

Here are my comments.

PAR comments:

5.6: Spell out the acronyms for IC and NIC as per Nescom conventions.

8.1: Per NesCom conventions, items in 8.1 require an item number to 
precede the text.  To what section number does this text refer?

CSD comments:

1.2.1: Spell out TSN here.

"Broad industrial network control systems, Mission critical systems as 
found in, but not limited to, current and next generation Automotive 
Systems require low and predictable latencies while utilizing reliable 
transport and avoiding common cause failure dependencies"

I can't quite parse this sentence and it has random capitalization.  I 
would suggest formatting this as a bulleted list.

1.2.2  While it is true that amending 802.1Q implies conformance to IEEE 
802.1Q, the group should specify:
 a) The modifications won't affect other 802 standards conformance to 
802.1Q
 b) If it conforms to 802.1AC and 802.

1.2.3: Spell out FQTSS

Thanks

James Gilb

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