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Colleagues,
Rebuttal comments on the PAR for P802.1ABcu - Amendment: LLDP YANG Data Model were received from 802.11.
While we are not aware of a rule describing the process for rebuttal comments, 802.1 WG has prepared additional responses to the comments in this document:
http://www.ieee802.org/1/
files/public/docs2017/admin- farkas-11-rebuttal-responses- 0717-v2.pdf
The PAR has been updated:
http://ieee802.org/1/files/
public/docs2017/cu-draft-PAR- 0517-v03.pdf
The CSD is unchanged:
http://ieee802.org/1/files/
public/docs2017/cu-draft-CSD- 0517-v02.pdf
Cheers,
Glenn.
From: Jon Rosdahl [mailto:jrosdahl@ieee.org]
Sent: Thursday, July 13, 2017 6:57 AM
To: Glenn Parsons <glenn.parsons@ericsson.com>
Cc: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: Re: [802SEC] Updated P802.1ABcu PAR & CSD with 802.1 comment responses
Greetings,
The 802.11 PAR Review Committee has the following Rebuttal comment on the comment response received:
1.PAR 5.2.b (project scope)
– the addition of the “Additionally, this amendment will address errors or omissions to existing features related to the aforementioned clauses as approved by the 802.1 maintenance process.”
The “IEEE 802.1 maintenance process” does not have a PAR, so it is not an authorized Activity. The purpose each of the 802.1 maintenance PARs should authorize the specific activity that is proposed.
Delete the “as approved by the 802.1 maintenance process”.
2. PAR – 6.1b – “The YANG Data Model will be assigned a URN based on the RA URN tutorial and IEEE Std 802d.”
a)The acronyms need to be expanded “URN”, “RA”
b)The RA URN tutorial should include a reference.
c)IEEE Std 802d should be fully cited in 8.1
Respectfully Submitted,
Jon
802.11 PAR Review SC Chair
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On Wed, Jul 12, 2017 at 8:53 AM, Glenn Parsons <glenn.parsons@ericsson.com> wrote:
Colleagues,
Comments on the PAR for P802.1ABcu - Amendment: LLDP YANG Data Model were received from 802.11 and 802.3.
The responses to the comment are here:
http://ieee802.org/1/files/
public/docs2017/cu-PAR-CSD- comments-0717-v01.pdf
The PAR has been updated:
http://ieee802.org/1/files/
public/docs2017/cu-draft-PAR- 0517-v02.pdf
The updated CSD:
http://ieee802.org/1/files/
public/docs2017/cu-draft-CSD- 0517-v02.pdf
Cheers,
Glenn.
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