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Re: [802SEC] Updated 802.11 LC PAR and CSD, and response to review comments


Thanks for the consideration of my comments. I have a few comments regarding the responses:

The correct title for IEEE Std 802.15.7 is:
IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks—Part 15.7: Short-Range Wireless Optical Communication Using Visible Light

The correct title for IEEE P802.15.3 is:
IEEE Draft Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks—
Part 15.13: Multi Giga bit/sec Optical Wireless Communications

The response for 1.2.4 a) is insufficient. The answer is to be put in the CSD, not as a reference to an external document. Please put the required information in the CSD.

I will be opposed to this PAR on the basis that the CSD is incomplete until 1.2.4 a) has an answer.

James Gilb

On 03/07/2018 12:09 PM, Adrian Stephens wrote:
Dear EC,

Having received comments on the LC PAR and CSD,  the WG approved updated versions of the PAR and CSD documents,  and approved a response to the comments.

The updated PAR is:

The updated CSD is:

The response to comments document is:

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