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Updated draft UPAMD_P1823Draft_201209251200.pdf



UPAMD,

 

An updated draft is now on the UPAMD website.  There is  a marked up and a clean version on the site along with the previous version. I would propose moving this updated draft forward to the MSC for Sponsor Ballot at the meeting later today.

 

The changes to the draft:

1.    Fixed to overlooked changes from the spread sheet comments by Alex Schneider, 2 text changes for grammar purposes.

2.    Add common mode chokes to devices IO drawing, to be used as necessary to handle EMI, EMC, if not handled properly with shield connection tied to Vneg at the connector. 

3.    Added section to Definitions to define Shall/Should/May.  Overlooked in previous versions.

4.    Added abstract to draft;  A copy of the Scope.

5.    Readjusted pagination to keep figures and labels together and unbroken.

 

Let’s advance this draft to the MSC this evening.  Need 2/3 majority of voting members to accomplish this.  If you will not be able to attend, would you please send you vote to forward this draft, of if modified by the committee tonight, to the MSC by email to upamd-vote@xxxxxxxx

 

Next steps are to submit the draft to MEC, Mandatory Editorial Coordination, and then to respond to MSC Sponsor ballot comments as we did with the working group.

 

Respectfully;

 

Bob Davis

Chair UPAMD/P1823

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